[WK17] 23. Played Punches 2-1 v. 24. tbone 1-2 (Vote!)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  2. tbone

    tbone Well-Known Member

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    lost a few but you played bout to be son
    ya bars stretched like mascara how they run

    you pussy to the T something amazing Yes?
    So no homo you'll choke how bone in necks

    ya name alone should debit me some votes
    so before ya drop he better Pm for quotes

    I got this shyt sold up, you so shook
    cause ya never get sign like his yearbook

    ya name alone is ya life appendix
    well that sums up the special Olympics

    notice that ya bit to flip, and worded different
    so look keep half step'n even hoes pack weapons
    who ya kiddin, ya style isn't seen as a preference


    I keep the lime like the box to hold down the nine
    flow so ya could keep the punch swag jack the line
    how ya suck as much in text, than ya aliases combine

    so he cop out and consider me as a hate-ter
    well i guess that make sense, since I spit fever

    he accumulate a lost like periods every month
    how ya name in order for attendance so much
    played couldn't quench a thirst wit a fruit punch



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  3. Light Saber

    Light Saber I LoVe AsiaN ChicKs

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    lmao


    you from Bad News VA? well I never heard of the place
    i guess VA turned Bad News once you showed your face
    I aint Tiger, nor do i even like golf lets leave it to Woods
    but i'll swing a golf club across 'T' like a professional would
    fuck this gay geek, why try? Tbone is dead meat
    next time dont show, like half the competitors last week
    and ill keep it simple, call a medic for the diagnoisis
    cuz after this battle, Bone-loss like Osteoporosis
    its safe to say i won already, its actually pretty sad
    the Mods be givin me an easier run to the title than Calibre had
    yup yup, this is all half assed, consider it a joke
    cuz i thought the same thing when i saw tbone and his posts


    maybe next week i'll have to give an effort

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  4. Played Punches

    Played Punches Punches Sooo Well Played

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  5. Wordp1ay

    Wordp1ay the realest right

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    im confused, this guy has two accts.....i mean nothing wrong wit that...but ur usin both of em.....i changed my name aswell but not usin both lol..iono..but

    lightsaber won----------

    chuckled at the osteo line golf line was cool too......nothin much to say for the other guy thx have a good day!

    p.s. i didnt think it was fair for bone though....he thinks he battlin played punches and u show up wit a diff alias.....i mean thats takin away from ur opponent...cuz im sure he coulda said certain stuff bout light sabers...
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  6. Worst Enemy

    Worst Enemy ex-rbl champ, so?

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    tbone fix your structure stop putting spaces in between your couplets it takes away from it being a verse & seems like just a couple lines. reminds me of niggas who cant freestyle just spit out 4 bars then go silent. Saber golf club line you was homo. You know this. Honestly you should of just posted the Bone loss line and that's it. Simple yet dope, looking forward to seeing how you write against some actual competition.

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  7. Discreet

    Discreet New Member

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    tbone-
    I didn't like anything in your verse. Nothing stood out and last I checked hater and fever do not rhyme.

    Played Punches-
    I aint Tiger, nor do i even like golf lets leave it to Woods
    but i'll swing a golf club across 'T' like a professional would
    and ill keep it simple, call a medic for the diagnoisis
    cuz after this battle, Bone-loss like Osteoporosis

    I enjoyed those 2 punches above. I am too new to understand the Calibre line but get what you were going for. Overall a much better verse.


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  8. Area51.

    Area51. New Member

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    and ill keep it simple, call a medic for the diagnoisis
    cuz after this battle, Bone-loss like Osteoporosis

    that was the only line I liked in this battle, pretty nice tho
    anyway Punches got this easy, better battle verse, looks like T Bones experimenting w/ his style n doesnt really got it down yet. but yea Punches was more creative overall even tho he had a couple played lines like that golf one, shits been done alot

    v/ Played Punches
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  9. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    bone loss line won this. everything else was meh. anyways. tbone needs to work on his punchs and creating something more witty than what he came up with.

    how do you rhyme 3 lines then another different 3 lines like that?
    if anything make it 4 and 4, but still it needs some work.

    anyways. not really close style and structure wise.

    v/played-saber
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  10. Caveat1

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    lost a few but you played bout to be son
    ya bars stretched like mascara how they run
    OK
    you pussy to the T something amazing Yes?
    So no homo you'll choke how bone in necks
    EHHH
    ya name alone should debit me some votes
    so before ya drop he better Pm for quotes
    NOPE
    I got this shyt sold up, you so shook
    cause ya never get sign like his yearbook
    LOL COOL
    ya name alone is ya life appendix
    well that sums up the special Olympics
    OK
    notice that ya bit to flip, and worded different
    so look keep half step'n even hoes pack weapons
    who ya kiddin, ya style isn't seen as a preference
    OK

    I keep the lime like the box to hold down the nine
    flow so ya could keep the punch swag jack the line
    how ya suck as much in text, than ya aliases combine
    NICE
    so he cop out and consider me as a hate-ter
    well i guess that make sense, since I spit fever
    EHHH
    he accumulate a lost like periods every month
    how ya name in order for attendance so much
    played couldn't quench a thirst wit a fruit punch
    LOL OK PRETTY GOOD


    you from Bad News VA? well I never heard of the place
    i guess VA turned Bad News once you showed your face
    LOL
    I aint Tiger, nor do i even like golf lets leave it to Woods
    but i'll swing a golf club across 'T' like a professional would
    NICE
    fuck this gay geek, why try? Tbone is dead meat
    next time dont show, like half the competitors last week
    OK
    and ill keep it simple, call a medic for the diagnoisis
    cuz after this battle, Bone-loss like Osteoporosis
    NICE
    its safe to say i won already, its actually pretty sad
    the Mods be givin me an easier run to the title than Calibre had
    OK
    yup yup, this is all half assed, consider it a joke
    cuz i thought the same thing when i saw tbone and his posts
    PRETTY SOLID

    V-PLAYED PUNCHES
    HE HAD A MORE POLISHED VERSE AND CONTENT BUT THIS BATTLE WAS CLOSER THEN VOTES INDICATE. BOTH HAD UPS AND DOWNS AND TBONE HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL, I GUESS SABER DIDNT PUT FORTH MUCH EFFORT BECAUSE THATS NOT HIS USUAL SHOWING. QUOTES FROM BOTH AND LAME LINES FROM BOTH. PLAYED GOT THIS IN THE END THO..NICE SHOWING FELLAS
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  11. Light Saber

    Light Saber I LoVe AsiaN ChicKs

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  12. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    Saber plz just post the links man. its much easier for us.


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