[WK17] 13. Area51. 2-0 v. 14. Lay Fear 2-0 (Vote!)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  2. Lay Fear

    Lay Fear don't try.

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    check, goin 14.
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  3. Area51.

    Area51. New Member

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  4. Area51.

    Area51. New Member

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    lol cut that shit down

    bullshit ranks'll make me leave this whore hurtin
    movin from Played Punches to Wack Concepts 'N Poor Wordin
    ya know it's true, all ya shit's dumb stretched
    with lines enough of a drag to finish a cig in one breath
    'n I aint gotta try to anhialate this whore's stuff
    cuz even if I am rushin, then this dude's Georgia
    'n ya steez is cookie cutter, ya drops not deadly
    you just the bootleg version of a knock-off Hensley
    you creative? pft. comes to ya verses I been a hater
    cuz you brainstormin just involves refreshin a cliche genorator
    so we got new mods? ayo User ban this trash please
    cuz competition-wise, you a step down that's rivalin Nasty's

    went 12
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  5. Lay Fear

    Lay Fear don't try.

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    Fuck you say?


    Just when I'm lookin forward to battlin Veterans, n its got me burnin idol.
    Well, speak of the devil.. sell your soul to him an MAYBE you'd earn the title.
    I'll have you terrified, so you'll prolly change ya stance or posture for an hour.
    n his Fetal Posistion themselves so he even appears like more of a coward.
    your headin for last bitch, dog you'll still get left dead in just practice.
    an I'm assuming an Area code..is just numerous text embedded as whackness.
    stop complainin bout mods, your styles jus cramped with strenuous braggin.
    I'll thank Nasty for a bye week,.. for putting me up against a genuine faggot.
    truth is ya whore of a girls fat as fuck, an it appears her styles timid.
    she's got a big enough Cockpit between her legs to ACTUALLY fit a Pilot in it.
    I'm vile admit it..actin like ya verse is good pretending like anyones felt it.
    but his style is multi-cultural,.. jus by mixing his with a bit of everyone elses.



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  6. Nick Rainey

    Nick Rainey When it RAINES it Pours!

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    .v.

    Overall I'd give this to Area by a slight margin or advantage cause he kept it simple, yet effective, while LF was far too wordie along with a lack of creativity, Area wasn't much better, but he still was better ..Vote - Area51.
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  7. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    opener-pretty good
    next line-ok
    next line-solid

    after that i wasnt feeling the rest of the verse from area51 too much. still ok showing.

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    opener-coo
    next line-aiight

    overall your verse didnt strike me in a good way. not much of it was appealing.
    maybe its how u worded some of the lines in the verse it came off kinda funny at times.


    v. area cuz he was a bit more consistent and a bit more direct with his approach.
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  8. Discreet

    Discreet New Member

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    Area51. -
    bullshit ranks'll make me leave this whore hurtin
    movin from Played Punches to Wack Concepts 'N Poor Wordin
    ya know it's true, all ya shit's dumb stretched
    with lines enough of a drag to finish a cig in one breath


    Lay Fear -
    Just when I'm lookin forward to battlin Veterans, n its got me burnin idol.
    Well, speak of the devil.. sell your soul to him an MAYBE you'd earn the title.


    Lay's lines really are stretched. He has some decent concepts but needs to work on the wording. The opener was his best line. Area had a more polished verse with more hard hitting punches.


    vote=Area51.
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  9. Wordp1ay

    Wordp1ay the realest right

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    Vote Lay Fear


    I Vote On Punchlines Not On Consistency Of Verses.....that Pilot Line Was Hot.....

    Other Dude Area Was Cool Too..but Make Me Chuckle Or So Ohhhh And U Got Ma Vote Thx!
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  10. KempoMRK

    KempoMRK The Don Corleone

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    Area started off good with the wack concepts 'n poor wordin line. Hard hitting punch, I liked it. Drag was ok, simple but effective. Georgia was alright. Hensley I didn't like as it wasn't all that true. Cliche was ok. Competition wise was fairly bland.

    Lay's opener was an ok concept, though I thought it was worded really weird. The setup had no real relevance to the punch. Fetal was a good concept that was again worded weird. Area code was ok. Bye week lines have been done a lot before. Cockpit was funny, I liked that. Multi-cultural was alright.

    Area was more polished 'n just generally better I thought. Lay had some good, creative concepts, 'n with better wording he could be pretty ill. Right now though, Area took this cleanly.

    v/ Area51
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  11. D.LOKE

    D.LOKE New Member

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    VOTE: AREA 51
    I thought his hits and misses were a lil more agressive than lay's hits and misses.
    the Russian /Georgia line I liked cause I was just seeing that the other day on the news
    people that don't know about that might not get that line.The opener was preety good
    and the cliche line made me chuckle a lil bit. Lay's problem was his opener and the 2 bars after wasn't really hard disses, not personal e-nuff or something. the Nasty line was too simple and the closer coulda been something nice had it had better wording but since it didn't it kinda re-enforced Area's opener and made that line hit harder.



    AREA 51

    bullshit ranks'll make me leave this whore hurtin
    movin from Played Punches to Wack Concepts 'N Poor Wordin
    'n I aint gotta try to anhialate this whore's stuff
    cuz even if I am rushin, then this dude's Georgia
    you creative? pft. comes to ya verses I been a hater
    cuz you brainstormin just involves refreshin a cliche genorator

    VS

    LAY FEAR


    your headin for last bitch, dog you'll still get left dead in just practice.
    an I'm assuming an Area code..is just numerous text embedded as whackness.
    truth is ya whore of a girls fat as fuck, an it appears her styles timid.
    she's got a big enough Cockpit between her legs to ACTUALLY fit a Pilot in it.
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  12. Eusich

    Eusich the incredible.

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    area51, this was straight, started good then kind've fell off and slightly picked up with the closer, the first two bars were nice, the hensley dis wasn't fitting for me though, i would never compare lay fear to hensley, you dissed hens worse than lay fear, i didn't like the Georgia or generator lines, the closer was okay, overall short with a few good disses

    lay fear, first of all i expected much from such a confident start with the commentary, gave a nice swag, now on to the verse.. the opener was a bit eh, kind of disappointing after the swag you exhibited, fetal position was a great concept i think and i could do much with it in about a year or so when its safe to flip it (lol) but here i think your wording was horribly stretched and gave such a good idea no justice, the punch even was weak and could've been much different, area code and closer were decent, everything in between were decent to borderline i just wasn't feeling it, the cockpit was just too wordy and stretched and i'm not a fan of the diss his fictional girlfriend lines and i don't think you did enough here to win me over

    overall, close match really, but i think lay fear's ideas were actually better than his verses which shouldn't merit many props whereas area had a few that i liked and was more consistent though he also had 2 that i definitely didn't like

    area51 gets the nod
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  13. DaTrusHurtz

    DaTrusHurtz Member

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    bullshit ranks'll make me leave this whore hurtin
    movin from Played Punches to Wack Concepts 'N Poor Wordin
    that quote was kinda embarassin, good personal
    ya know it's true, all ya shit's dumb stretched
    with lines enough of a drag to finish a cig in one breath
    nahhh played
    'n I aint gotta try to anhialate this whore's stuff
    cuz even if I am rushin, then this dude's Georgia
    good concept, its cool, but ya didn't do enough with it
    'n ya steez is cookie cutter, ya drops not deadly
    you just the bootleg version of a knock-off Hensley
    [Bi dunnno... i kinda see it, but its a bit of a stretch[/B]
    you creative? pft. comes to ya verses I been a hater
    cuz you brainstormin just involves refreshin a cliche genorator
    haha, good raw humor to this, funny shit
    so we got new mods? ayo User ban this trash please
    cuz competition-wise, you a step down that's rivalin Nasty's
    ehhh its not that strong a cloer

    vs.

    Just when I'm lookin forward to battlin Veterans, n its got me burnin idol.
    Well, speak of the devil.. sell your soul to him an MAYBE you'd earn the title.
    with a cliche like this, u gotta do something real original to make it work, this just wasn't really harsh
    I'll have you terrified, so you'll prolly change ya stance or posture for an hour.
    n his Fetal Posistion themselves so he even appears like more of a coward.
    cool shit, tho ya should check ya stuff for spellin' before ya post it
    your headin for last bitch, dog you'll still get left dead in just practice.
    an I'm assuming an Area code..is just numerous text embedded as whackness.
    nah, area code lines are played, ya gotta assume the obvious nameplays have been done on guys who aren't new, even if ya haven't seen them urself
    stop complainin bout mods, your styles jus cramped with strenuous braggin.
    I'll thank Nasty for a bye week,.. for putting me up against a genuine faggot.
    too simple to really hit very hard
    truth is ya whore of a girls fat as fuck, an it appears her styles timid.
    she's got a big enough Cockpit between her legs to ACTUALLY fit a Pilot in it.
    haha, there u go, witty concept and good execution
    I'm vile admit it..actin like ya verse is good pretending like anyones felt it.
    but his style is multi-cultural,.. jus by mixing his with a bit of everyone elses.
    its just kinda too simple of a closer

    Area u gotta come consistent week in and week out regardless of the competition, tho u had a few cool lines like the opener and cliche generator line. Lay had the fetal and cockpit lines to pretty much even it up. Two very different styles goin' at it, felt u both didn't have ur best stuff. I think Area mighta slightly got it, the lines he had which weren't quotable were mostly still aight, but Lay had a few lines that I felt brought him down.

    Vote - Area
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  14. criticize

    criticize New Member

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    ya know it's true, all ya shit's dumb stretched
    with lines enough of a drag to finish a cig in one breath
    _+________________________________
    ust when I'm lookin forward to battlin Veterans, n its got me burnin idol.
    Well, speak of the devil.. sell your soul to him an MAYBE you'd earn the title.

    your headin for last bitch, dog you'll still get left dead in just practice.
    an I'm assuming an Area code..is just numerous text embedded as whackness.

    truth is ya whore of a girls fat as fuck, an it appears her styles timid.
    she's got a big enough Cockpit between her legs to ACTUALLY fit a Pilot in it.
    I'm vile admit it..actin like ya verse is good pretending like anyones felt it.
    but his style is multi-cultural,.. jus by mixing his with a bit of everyone elses.
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    vote-lay fear.

    area your verse was ok only 1 line i thought was decent, you just need to work on making your punches harder/more creative.
    lay fear i quoted a few of your lines some of them where just ok. but you had a cpl of nice ones too, first half of your verse wasnt doing much but you picked it up very well at the end and had enough to win this easy.

    vote- lay fear.
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  15. Caveat1

    Caveat1 New Member

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    bullshit ranks'll make me leave this whore hurtin
    movin from Played Punches to Wack Concepts 'N Poor Wordin
    NICE
    ya know it's true, all ya shit's dumb stretched
    with lines enough of a drag to finish a cig in one breath
    ILLNESS
    'n I aint gotta try to anhialate this whore's stuff
    cuz even if I am rushin, then this dude's Georgia
    OK
    'n ya steez is cookie cutter, ya drops not deadly
    you just the bootleg version of a knock-off Hensley
    NICE
    you creative? pft. comes to ya verses I been a hater
    cuz you brainstormin just involves refreshin a cliche genorator
    NICE
    so we got new mods? ayo User ban this trash please
    cuz competition-wise, you a step down that's rivalin Nasty's
    LOL GOOD


    ust when I'm lookin forward to battlin Veterans, n its got me burnin idol.
    Well, speak of the devil.. sell your soul to him an MAYBE you'd earn the title.
    NICE
    I'll have you terrified, so you'll prolly change ya stance or posture for an hour.
    n his Fetal Posistion themselves so he even appears like more of a coward.
    EHHH
    your headin for last bitch, dog you'll still get left dead in just practice.
    an I'm assuming an Area code..is just numerous text embedded as whackness.
    OK
    stop complainin bout mods, your styles jus cramped with strenuous braggin.
    I'll thank Nasty for a bye week,.. for putting me up against a genuine faggot.
    OK
    truth is ya whore of a girls fat as fuck, an it appears her styles timid.
    she's got a big enough Cockpit between her legs to ACTUALLY fit a Pilot in it.
    NICE
    I'm vile admit it..actin like ya verse is good pretending like anyones felt it.
    but his style is multi-cultural,.. jus by mixing his with a bit of everyone elses.
    ILL

    V-AREA
    HE TOOK THIS FOR BEING MORE CONSISTENT AND HAVING A FEW BETTER LINES. BOTH WERE GOOD BUT LAY FEAR HAD LESS QUOTES FROM WHAT I SAW SO AREA GOT THIS
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  16. Light Saber

    Light Saber I LoVe AsiaN ChicKs

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    4- Very Nice
    3- Average/Decent
    2- Could Be Better
    1- Ehhhh Sorry


    Area51:

    bullshit ranks'll make me leave this whore hurtin
    movin from Played Punches to Wack Concepts 'N Poor Wordin
    4
    ya know it's true, all ya shit's dumb stretched
    with lines enough of a drag to finish a cig in one breath
    4
    'n I aint gotta try to anhialate this whore's stuff
    cuz even if I am rushin, then this dude's Georgia
    3
    'n ya steez is cookie cutter, ya drops not deadly
    you just the bootleg version of a knock-off Hensley
    3
    you creative? pft. comes to ya verses I been a hater
    cuz you brainstormin just involves refreshin a cliche genorator
    3
    so we got new mods? ayo User ban this trash please
    cuz competition-wise, you a step down that's rivalin Nasty's
    2

    TOTAL: 19


    Lay Fear:

    Just when I'm lookin forward to battlin Veterans, n its got me burnin idol.
    Well, speak of the devil.. sell your soul to him an MAYBE you'd earn the title.
    3
    I'll have you terrified, so you'll prolly change ya stance or posture for an hour.
    n his Fetal Posistion themselves so he even appears like more of a coward.
    2
    your headin for last bitch, dog you'll still get left dead in just practice.
    an I'm assuming an Area code..is just numerous text embedded as whackness.
    3
    stop complainin bout mods, your styles jus cramped with strenuous braggin.
    I'll thank Nasty for a bye week,.. for putting me up against a genuine faggot.
    2
    truth is ya whore of a girls fat as fuck, an it appears her styles timid.
    she's got a big enough Cockpit between her legs to ACTUALLY fit a Pilot in it.
    4
    I'm vile admit it..actin like ya verse is good pretending like anyones felt it.
    but his style is multi-cultural,.. jus by mixing his with a bit of everyone elses.
    3

    TOTAL: 17

    Area51 i've seen better from you, but it was still a solid verse, i liked that cig line
    and of course i felt the opener haha. Lay fear that was a good showing but a tiny bit
    more creativity and you would have had this battle

    VOTE: AREA51
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  17. Constrikta of CVI

    Constrikta of CVI Member

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    Ok battle... lemme break it down.

    Area51

    bullshit ranks'll make me leave this whore hurtin
    movin from Played Punches to Wack Concepts 'N Poor Wordin
    ...lol nice
    ya know it's true, all ya shit's dumb stretched
    with lines enough of a drag to finish a cig in one breath
    ...nah, this is played
    'n I aint gotta try to anhialate this whore's stuff
    cuz even if I am rushin, then this dude's Georgia
    ...ok
    'n ya steez is cookie cutter, ya drops not deadly
    you just the bootleg version of a knock-off Hensley
    ...eh
    you creative? pft. comes to ya verses I been a hater
    cuz you brainstormin just involves refreshin a cliche genorator
    ...lol
    so we got new mods? ayo User ban this trash please
    cuz competition-wise, you a step down that's rivalin Nasty's
    ...decent close

    Lay Fear

    Just when I'm lookin forward to battlin Veterans, n its got me burnin idol.
    Well, speak of the devil.. sell your soul to him an MAYBE you'd earn the title.
    ...ok open
    I'll have you terrified, so you'll prolly change ya stance or posture for an hour.
    n his Fetal Posistion themselves so he even appears like more of a coward.
    ...eh
    your headin for last bitch, dog you'll still get left dead in just practice.
    an I'm assuming an Area code..is just numerous text embedded as whackness.
    ...nice
    stop complainin bout mods, your styles jus cramped with strenuous braggin.
    I'll thank Nasty for a bye week,.. for putting me up against a genuine faggot.
    ...ok
    truth is ya whore of a girls fat as fuck, an it appears her styles timid.
    she's got a big enough Cockpit between her legs to ACTUALLY fit a Pilot in it.
    ...ok
    I'm vile admit it..actin like ya verse is good pretending like anyones felt it.
    but his style is multi-cultural,.. jus by mixing his with a bit of everyone elses.
    ...decent at best closer

    I have to give Area the nod here.. Lay Fear you came decent but your flow was a little off at times, and your punches didn't hit really too hard. Area came with a little more originality and a cleaner flow. His verse just appealed to me a little more. Good battle though.

    Vote- Area51
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  18. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    nice match here..area is steppin it up..lay came nice but i got area takingit here..had a more consitent verse..only 1 lines i didn't like while lay had 2 and in a short match like tis 2 bad lines can really hurt u

    vote=area
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  19. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    Area51 Wins.
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