[WK17] 10.5. Wash. 4-2 v. 11. Trombley 4-2 (Vote!)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  2. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    lets go..
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  3. Wash.

    Wash. Registered Bruiser

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    werd, 16.
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  4. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    Lets clear this up...

    I keep plenty shells in the gun, there's enough to claim ya future
    so watch me start spray n' wash like he's a muthafuckin stain remover
    My record doesnt suck, but it sure as fuck isnt celebrated
    infact Tro with two L's looks like every ugly bitch you've ever dated
    Wash left n' returned cuz talent slid, so bitch quit avoidin the truth
    cuz see Cal's key to success aint openinng ANY championship doors for you
    So boy just move, we seen ya feeble skills and noones scared of the act
    against Trom, Washintons of trouble like D.C. under terror attack
    Its apparent ya wack, remember how Medichi came n' ate dude?
    Wash verse got an automated crash response On Star even tried to upgrade to
    So take two, cuz aint no way I'm thinkin this man is wreckless
    when ya notepad housing enough soft sheets to open up a bed n' breakfast


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    in a rush..
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  5. Wash.

    Wash. Registered Bruiser

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    i smoke inside, so i gotta scrub my walls to erase dirt & fumes
    thats funny, cuz ya mother did the same after she gave birth to u
    you fat fuck, you always overexaggerate and say your good
    id say roll over n die, but theres no need to flatten a neighborhood
    people don't like u, don't call me a liar, it's true
    look, we have the same record and i'm still ranked higher than you
    this kid is mad gay, n ya know he aint doin shit with the ladies
    i told 'em to hop on the ShortBus, and he started hittin on Hades
    Deon, Trombley, HDVM - yea, im probably missin' a bunch
    but shit, changing his name wont make anyone forget that he sucks
    speakin of names, don't ever mention mine-please
    truth is there ain't been good Deon in any league since the 90's
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  6. Wordp1ay

    Wordp1ay the realest right

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    Vote Wash.....harder Lines...but It Was Close,,, Good For A Short Battle Respect To Both Of U.....wash Berely Cuts The Win...thx Guys
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  7. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    elaborate...
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  8. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    I gotta break this one down..

    I keep plenty shells in the gun, there's enough to claim ya future
    so watch me start spray n' wash like he's a muthafuckin stain remover
    aight..
    My record doesnt suck, but it sure as fuck isnt celebrated
    infact Tro with two L's looks like every ugly bitch you've ever dated
    damn..Lol
    Wash left n' returned cuz talent slid, so bitch quit avoidin the truth
    cuz see Cal's key to success aint openinng ANY championship doors for you
    didn't excite me much..
    So boy just move, we seen ya feeble skills and noones scared of the act
    against Trom, Washintons of trouble like D.C. under terror attack
    coo..
    Its apparent ya wack, remember how Medichi came n' ate dude?
    Wash verse got an automated crash response On Star even tried to upgrade to
    not feeling so much..
    So take two, cuz aint no way I'm thinkin this man is wreckless
    when ya notepad housing enough soft sheets to open up a bed n' breakfast
    aight..

    Wash,
    i smoke inside, so i gotta scrub my walls to erase dirt & fumes
    thats funny, cuz ya mother did the same after she gave birth to u
    Ha..kinda simple
    you fat fuck, you always overexaggerate and say your good
    id say roll over n die, but theres no need to flatten a neighborhood
    pretty simple too..but ok cuz its on tha comedic tip
    people don't like u, don't call me a liar, it's true
    look, we have the same record and i'm still ranked higher than you
    simple..
    this kid is mad gay, n ya know he aint doin shit with the ladies
    i told 'em to hop on the ShortBus, and he started hittin on Hades
    cool..
    Deon, Trombley, HDVM - yea, im probably missin' a bunch
    but shit, changing his name wont make anyone forget that he sucks
    aight..
    speakin of names, don't ever mention mine-please
    truth is there ain't been good Deon in any league since the 90's
    aight..

    i gotta go wit Trom on this one cuz his punches hit harder and Wash's verse seemed like it was keyed off the dome because of the simple stuff he was saying..overall trom came more consistent in this battle so respect my opinion when I vote

    Trombley
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  9. Aloe

    Aloe www.myspace.com/aloemusic

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    ^^^^^ lmao are you kidding me?? anyways....

    trom:

    I keep plenty shells in the gun, there's enough to claim ya future
    so watch me start spray n' wash like he's a muthafuckin stain remover
    --wash name plays are pretty much all played at this point

    My record doesnt suck, but it sure as fuck isnt celebrated
    infact Tro with two L's looks like every ugly bitch you've ever dated
    --the punch is good, but are you dissing urself in the setup? what?

    Wash left n' returned cuz talent slid, so bitch quit avoidin the truth
    cuz see Cal's key to success aint openinng ANY championship doors for you
    --not feeling it at all

    So boy just move, we seen ya feeble skills and noones scared of the act
    against Trom, Washintons of trouble like D.C. under terror attack
    --sorry man but this was a stretch and pretty much terrible

    Its apparent ya wack, remember how Medichi came n' ate dude?
    Wash verse got an automated crash response On Star even tried to upgrade to
    --ehhhh more stretchy stretchy

    So take two, cuz aint no way I'm thinkin this man is wreckless
    when ya notepad housing enough soft sheets to open up a bed n' breakfast
    --my fav line of your verse.... altho "soft sheets" is still kind of a week diss


    wash:

    i smoke inside, so i gotta scrub my walls to erase dirt & fumes
    thats funny, cuz ya mother did the same after she gave birth to u
    --lol thats just nasty

    you fat fuck, you always overexaggerate and say your good
    id say roll over n die, but theres no need to flatten a neighborhood
    --lol again

    people don't like u, don't call me a liar, it's true
    look, we have the same record and i'm still ranked higher than you
    --decent

    this kid is mad gay, n ya know he aint doin shit with the ladies
    i told 'em to hop on the ShortBus, and he started hittin on Hades
    --lol nice

    Deon, Trombley, HDVM - yea, im probably missin' a bunch
    but shit, changing his name wont make anyone forget that he sucks
    --probably my least fav line of the verse

    speakin of names, don't ever mention mine-please
    truth is there ain't been good Deon in any league since the 90's
    --hahaha really feelin this


    honestly i feel like this wasn't even that close. i like trom, but it really came off like he rushed and just kind of threw this verse together. it had a lot of the makings of a good verse there, but it was mad rough... like it wasnt polished at all. wash had all the makings for a good verse as well, good punches, flow and also had a much more polished verse. also, he had the comedic factor on his side, which is huge to me. his verse made me roflz at some points.

    so vote = wash fairly easily
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  10. Area51.

    Area51. New Member

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    I keep plenty shells in the gun, there's enough to claim ya future
    so watch me start spray n' wash like he's a muthafuckin stain remover
    -eh alright
    My record doesnt suck, but it sure as fuck isnt celebrated
    infact Tro with two L's looks like every ugly bitch you've ever dated
    -cool
    Wash left n' returned cuz talent slid, so bitch quit avoidin the truth
    cuz see Cal's key to success aint openinng ANY championship doors for you
    -not feelin this so much
    So boy just move, we seen ya feeble skills and noones scared of the act
    against Trom, Washintons of trouble like D.C. under terror attack
    -nahh
    Its apparent ya wack, remember how Medichi came n' ate dude?
    Wash verse got an automated crash response On Star even tried to upgrade to
    -good concept I thought, probably coulda been done better, this was just ight
    So take two, cuz aint no way I'm thinkin this man is wreckless
    when ya notepad housing enough soft sheets to open up a bed n' breakfast
    -ight

    i smoke inside, so i gotta scrub my walls to erase dirt & fumes
    thats funny, cuz ya mother did the same after she gave birth to u
    -lmfao
    you fat fuck, you always overexaggerate and say your good
    id say roll over n die, but theres no need to flatten a neighborhood
    -cool
    people don't like u, don't call me a liar, it's true
    look, we have the same record and i'm still ranked higher than you
    -nah
    this kid is mad gay, n ya know he aint doin shit with the ladies
    i told 'em to hop on the ShortBus, and he started hittin on Hades
    -cool
    Deon, Trombley, HDVM - yea, im probably missin' a bunch
    but shit, changing his name wont make anyone forget that he sucks
    -eh
    speakin of names, don't ever mention mine-please
    truth is there ain't been good Deon in any league since the 90's
    -not sure if Im missin somethin here?


    both had about the same number of lines I liked but the ones from Wash I liked alot more

    v/ Wash
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  11. Eusich

    Eusich the incredible.

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    Trombley.. your opener was unworthy, not only is the concept played but the wording here was bad (though it rolled off the tongue well) and made for a pretty stupid line, not much sense behind it other than the correlation between spray'n wash and stain remover but the wordplay wasn't utilized thoroughly nor should it have been utilized at all, moving on the troll line was creative and dope at the same time, good wordplay here and good spin on your record and whatnot, Cal line was okay, good filler but nothing more, the 'Washinton' line again was forced wordplay and a stupid name play, its obviously forced when you have to delete a letter in order for it to make sense when spoken, Washington has never been pronounced Washinton, ever, so this just came off as a well written punch but conceptually stupid imo, on star was pretty decent wordplay, clever in concept and done fairly well, also i noticed someone said that it was stretched and i think here it was rightfully so, soft sheets was forced wordplay, good in concept but really who says 'soft sheet' when referring to bad raps, overall this was decent, the troll line was the best imo, you should've stayed away from the name plays and stuck with more clever wordplay and hard disses, i thought the opener and Washington lines were wack but everything else was decent to good with more decent than good

    wash.. opener was simple but good, i liked the swag, a raw diss that was clever but came off as simple with good wording and just a direct jab, next line was in the same fashion, clever concepts done in good ol simple fashion for more impact, nicely done with good wording, the rest were decent, closer was forced, the Hades line was eh, overall i think you had the edge here due to swag and the level at which you came, much more personal with better quick disses, a different kind of wordplay here that comes off as less clever but more effective which is really a good touch, it was also a quicker read with more consistent hits but a good rhythm to it, the closer was probably my least favorite with everything else being decent to good but the difference here was that there were more good than decent as opposed to Trom's shit, good stuff

    vote - Wash
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  12. KempoMRK

    KempoMRK The Don Corleone

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    Deon started off well. The opener had some cool swagger to it 'n it hit nicely. Troll line was dope. Nicely worded, 'n a clever concept. Championship doors was weird, I didn't really like it. Washintons was good. I've seen Washington concepts before, but the line was worded well 'n it was a good nameplay. On Star was forced, I didn't like it. Soft sheets was quite cool, it hit well.

    lol, Wash's opener was naaasty. It was an okish line, not much direction to it though. Haha, roll over 'n die was good. Really funny line, I liked it. I've seen a lot of ranked higher lines like that, 'n I've never liked them, 'n I didn't like Wash's version either really. Hades I didn't like too much. Changin his name was bland 'n blunt, it hit alright. I didn't get the closer.

    I thought Deon got this. He had a consistent verse. Most of his lines were solid. I really liked the roll over 'n die line from Wash. I just don't think he had the consistency that Deon had.

    v/ Trombley
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  13. D.LOKE

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    VOTE: Wash

    I have a quote tie but from looking at the strenght of the quotes, Trom tried to get more creative with his hits with the wordplay here and there but it's something about the way wash worded those punchlines, it just felt like his had more of a personals type of edge and it felt like his lines were slightly harder hits. I think when he rounded up all the Deon aliases that was LOTB to me. Good battle to both tho. probably battle of the week type of stuff, it was very close to me.

    DEON

    I keep plenty shells in the gun, there's enough to claim ya future
    so watch me start spray n' wash like he's a muthafuckin stain remover
    My record doesnt suck, but it sure as fuck isnt celebrated
    infact Tro with two L's looks like every ugly bitch you've ever dated
    Wash left n' returned cuz talent slid, so bitch quit avoidin the truth
    cuz see Cal's key to success aint openinng ANY championship doors for you
    So boy just move, we seen ya feeble skills and noones scared of the act
    against Trom, Washintons of trouble like D.C. under terror attack

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    WASH

    i smoke inside, so i gotta scrub my walls to erase dirt & fumes
    thats funny, cuz ya mother did the same after she gave birth to u
    you fat fuck, you always overexaggerate and say your good
    id say roll over n die, but theres no need to flatten a neighborhood
    people don't like u, don't call me a liar, it's true
    look, we have the same record and i'm still ranked higher than you
    Deon, Trombley, HDVM - yea, im probably missin' a bunch
    but shit, changing his name wont make anyone forget that he sucks
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  14. Wash.

    Wash. Registered Bruiser

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  15. criticize

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    keep plenty shells in the gun, there's enough to claim ya future
    so watch me start spray n' wash like he's a muthafuckin stain remover
    My record doesnt suck, but it sure as fuck isnt celebrated
    infact Tro with two L's looks like every ugly bitch you've ever dated

    So take two, cuz aint no way I'm thinkin this man is wreckless
    when ya notepad housing enough soft sheets to open up a bed n' breakfast

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    i smoke inside, so i gotta scrub my walls to erase dirt & fumes
    thats funny, cuz ya mother did the same after she gave birth to u
    you fat fuck, you always overexaggerate and say your good
    id say roll over n die, but theres no need to flatten a neighborhood

    Deon, Trombley, HDVM - yea, im probably missin' a bunch
    but shit, changing his name wont make anyone forget that he sucks
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    cool battle. short. maybe too short, would have enjoyed you both spitting like double your lines. i give this to wash though. you had a cool verse trom and i thought after reading your verse you were in with a very good shot but wash just ran over the top of you with 1 or 2 extra couple of good lines. and hes lines just seemed to hit a bit stronger. but yea good shit guys.

    vote- wash
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  16. Constrikta of CVI

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    Sick lil battle.. both brought heat. Lemme break em' on down.

    Trombley

    I keep plenty shells in the gun, there's enough to claim ya future
    so watch me start spray n' wash like he's a muthafuckin stain remover
    ...ok open, good wash flip
    My record doesnt suck, but it sure as fuck isnt celebrated
    infact Tro with two L's looks like every ugly bitch you've ever dated
    ...ok
    Wash left n' returned cuz talent slid, so bitch quit avoidin the truth
    cuz see Cal's key to success aint openinng ANY championship doors for you
    ...ok
    So boy just move, we seen ya feeble skills and noones scared of the act
    against Trom, Washintons of trouble like D.C. under terror attack
    ...this was alright
    Its apparent ya wack, remember how Medichi came n' ate dude?
    Wash verse got an automated crash response On Star even tried to upgrade to
    ...lol
    So take two, cuz aint no way I'm thinkin this man is wreckless
    when ya notepad housing enough soft sheets to open up a bed n' breakfast
    ...nice close

    Wash

    i smoke inside, so i gotta scrub my walls to erase dirt & fumes
    thats funny, cuz ya mother did the same after she gave birth to u
    ...haha, damn
    you fat fuck, you always overexaggerate and say your good
    id say roll over n die, but theres no need to flatten a neighborhood
    ...nice
    people don't like u, don't call me a liar, it's true
    look, we have the same record and i'm still ranked higher than you
    ...ok
    this kid is mad gay, n ya know he aint doin shit with the ladies
    i told 'em to hop on the ShortBus, and he started hittin on Hades
    ...lol
    Deon, Trombley, HDVM - yea, im probably missin' a bunch
    but shit, changing his name wont make anyone forget that he sucks
    ...ok
    speakin of names, don't ever mention mine-please
    truth is there ain't been good Deon in any league since the 90's
    ...nice close

    After going through both verses I have to give it to Wash. Trombley you came nice here, but I think you kinda rushed this or didn't put a whole lot of effort in trying to get the win. Wash came out with fire and didn't really let up. His consistency wins this. Good battle guys.

    Vote- Wash
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  17. Proof

    Proof Jamaicans do errything

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    i haven't read the other breakdowns, but this match is closer than what the vote tally is saying. actually my vote changed when i read through the verses a 2nd time...


    i think trombley took this one.

    stain remover
    Tro wit LL's +5 lmao
    on star

    over

    roll over and die
    name change


    trombley came with more lines that still had residual value on a second read.

    vote-trombley
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  18. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    nice lil battle here..closer than i thought it would be..deon had like 3 lines i liked opener,cal's key and dc whilewash had 4 i like those bein the ones besides the same recor and short bus..they hit harder than deons lines and there were more so that's y he gets my vote..still a close match no matter how the votes look
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  19. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    Wash Wins.
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