[WK13] CONTENDER: 3. kungfugrip 5-0 v. 4. Light Saber 5-2 (Vote!)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  2. kungfugrip

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  3. Light Saber

    Light Saber I LoVe AsiaN ChicKs

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    sounds coo' good luck and madd respects...

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  4. kungfugrip

    kungfugrip New Member

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    let's go


    first of all, fuck ur contender achievement
    beat me? HA. u'd need 4 LightSabers like General Grievous
    see he was sick, but u must be slower holmes
    if Luke pulled u out, he better pray Storm Troopers are homophobes
    with that name winnin's somethin u don't have a chance at
    i can name myself somethin' fictional too
    ..& show up next week as 'YouInAChampMatch'
    cuz ur verses are trash. can't lie on the fact son
    kid's sorry display could knock a murder one to bylaw infractions
    most improved? ha. u can't spit with the best
    just cuz u went from 'he sucks' to 'he sucks a little bit less'
    u need waaaaay more improvement. ur open to start
    even when Lights On his shit looks like it was wrote in the dark
    dude's homo. but i shouldn't mention that part, right
    LightSaber's pokin so many guys he's comin close to the Dark Side
    u ain't dope, ain't sick, ain't the scariest or good
    & if i Shed some Light, then the rest getting buried in the woods
    ur whole style is trash & ur lines won't be felt
    shit, heads Shrug off ur shit til it starts defining their Delts
    u emulate me, but cats don't feel it or get it
    ur such a Fake Grip ur shit advances the field of prosthetics
    u can't match my swagger, cuz ur a sucker dude
    and let's just say talentwise.. cuz it would never fuck with you

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  5. Light Saber

    Light Saber I LoVe AsiaN ChicKs

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    damn, i didnt have much time this week... good luck tho

    Sorry dawg, your road to the top is over
    im breakin' this 'Grip like a game of red rover
    Kungfu got a Grip for dicks he's tastin'
    shit..this dude Strokes more than heart failure patients
    your movie scripts are horrible, the grammer errors dont stop
    we tried translatin' Kungs lines, but the english versions still off
    you aint a Grip, more like a mere grasp with a pen
    i would say your top ten, but OneDuh signed back in
    this fag aint legend status, i bury your rhymes
    till the point Fu' has more dead-lines than thursday nights
    you've made it this far, all for nothin' its sad..
    i'll put an end to your Run like a checkered flag
    you aint competition, i'll bring this queer to an end
    KungFu's a Breeze, so i break wind while shittin' on him
    nothin' you drop is special, yet you been gettin lucky
    plus, you aint touchin' MetaSin like Ex prescribtion junkies
    and if i go out, im goin out swingin' knockin' domes loose
    when I tap you in the head more than duck, duck, goose
    yea i switched it up, bringin' new shit to the plate
    nah, i dont know any Pete, but i'll win for Petes sake

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  6. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    first of all, fuck ur contender achievement
    beat me? HA. u'd need 4 LightSabers like General Grievous
    (lol)
    see he was sick, but u must be slower holmes
    if Luke pulled u out, he better pray Storm Troopers are homophobes
    (haha)
    with that name winnin's somethin u don't have a chance at
    i can name myself somethin' fictional too
    ..& show up next week as 'YouInAChampMatch'
    (hilarious)
    cuz ur verses are trash. can't lie on the fact son
    kid's sorry display could knock a murder one to bylaw infractions
    (hmm creative as fuck..worded wierd to me tho)
    most improved? ha. u can't spit with the best
    just cuz u went from 'he sucks' to 'he sucks a little bit less'
    (lol)
    u need waaaaay more improvement. ur open to start
    even when Lights On his shit looks like it was wrote in the dark
    (hah)
    dude's homo. but i shouldn't mention that part, right
    LightSaber's pokin so many guys he's comin close to the Dark Side
    (hahahahah)
    u ain't dope, ain't sick, ain't the scariest or good
    & if i Shed some Light, then the rest getting buried in the woods
    (ok)
    ur whole style is trash & ur lines won't be felt
    shit, heads Shrug off ur shit til it starts defining their Delts
    (HUH?)
    u emulate me, but cats don't feel it or get it
    ur such a Fake Grip ur shit advances the field of prosthetics
    (heh)
    u can't match my swagger, cuz ur a sucker dude
    and let's just say talentwise.. cuz it would never fuck with you
    (damn..clever)


    LOl u had some fucking funny shit in there..that closer was a clever concept on a seemingly simple wordplay



    Sorry dawg, your road to the top is over
    im breakin' this 'Grip like a game of red rover
    (uhh ok)
    Kungfu got a Grip for dicks he's tastin'
    shit..this dude Strokes more than heart failure patients
    (eww played concept)
    your movie scripts are horrible, the grammer errors dont stop
    we tried translatin' Kungs lines, but the english versions still off
    (uhh ok)
    you aint a Grip, more like a mere grasp with a pen
    i would say your top ten, but OneDuh signed back in
    (hah)
    this fag aint legend status, i bury your rhymes
    till the point Fu' has more dead-lines than thursday nights
    (ok)
    you've made it this far, all for nothin' its sad..
    i'll put an end to your Run like a checkered flag
    (eh ok)
    you aint competition, i'll bring this queer to an end
    KungFu's a Breeze, so i break wind while shittin' on him
    (nah)

    nothin' you drop is special, yet you been gettin lucky
    plus, you aint touchin' MetaSin like Ex prescribtion junkies
    (man metasin lines are gettin old)
    and if i go out, im goin out swingin' knockin' domes loose
    when I tap you in the head more than duck, duck, goose
    (concept had legs..but just didnt hit much.. tapping him on the head isnt much of a punch)
    yea i switched it up, bringin' new shit to the plate
    nah, i dont know any Pete, but i'll win for Petes sake
    (lol came off funny to me..nice way to close)


    aight showing by u..but seemed rushed..

    v/kung for making me laugh the majority of that shit
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  7. Beyond..

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    first of all, fuck ur contender achievement
    beat me? HA. u'd need 4 LightSabers like General Grievous
    Cool nameplay opener.
    see he was sick, but u must be slower holmes
    if Luke pulled u out, he better pray Storm Troopers are homophobes
    Good nameplay.
    with that name winnin's somethin u don't have a chance at
    i can name myself somethin' fictional too
    ..& show up next week as 'YouInAChampMatch'
    Good.
    cuz ur verses are trash. can't lie on the fact son
    kid's sorry display could knock a murder one to bylaw infractions
    Cool.
    most improved? ha. u can't spit with the best
    just cuz u went from 'he sucks' to 'he sucks a little bit less'
    Good personal.
    u need waaaaay more improvement. ur open to start
    even when Lights On his shit looks like it was wrote in the dark
    Good nameplay.
    dude's homo. but i shouldn't mention that part, right
    LightSaber's pokin so many guys he's comin close to the Dark Side
    Not feeling.
    u ain't dope, ain't sick, ain't the scariest or good
    & if i Shed some Light, then the rest getting buried in the woods
    Decent.
    ur whole style is trash & ur lines won't be felt
    shit, heads Shrug off ur shit til it starts defining their Delts
    Not feeling.
    u emulate me, but cats don't feel it or get it
    ur such a Fake Grip ur shit advances the field of prosthetics
    Alright.
    u can't match my swagger, cuz ur a sucker dude
    and let's just say talentwise.. cuz it would never fuck with you
    Good closer.

    Overall: Started off strong and ran out of steam towards the end, but finished strong as well at the last second. Felt there were too many nameplays on someone who's had their name for a long time, but I can't say I've personally seen any of them, so.

    vs

    Sorry dawg, your road to the top is over
    im breakin' this 'Grip like a game of red rover
    Okay opener.
    Kungfu got a Grip for dicks he's tastin'
    shit..this dude Strokes more than heart failure patients
    Played.
    your movie scripts are horrible, the grammer errors dont stop
    we tried translatin' Kungs lines, but the english versions still off
    Decent.
    you aint a Grip, more like a mere grasp with a pen
    i would say your top ten, but OneDuh signed back in
    Weak.
    this fag aint legend status, i bury your rhymes
    till the point Fu' has more dead-lines than thursday nights
    Played.
    you've made it this far, all for nothin' its sad..
    i'll put an end to your Run like a checkered flag
    Played.
    you aint competition, i'll bring this queer to an end
    KungFu's a Breeze, so i break wind while shittin' on him
    Humorous.
    nothin' you drop is special, yet you been gettin lucky
    plus, you aint touchin' MetaSin like Ex prescribtion junkies
    Cool.
    and if i go out, im goin out swingin' knockin' domes loose
    when I tap you in the head more than duck, duck, goose
    Played.
    yea i switched it up, bringin' new shit to the plate
    nah, i dont know any Pete, but i'll win for Petes sake
    Corny.

    Overall: Had a lot of unoriginal stuff in your verse that I've seen before and didn't have the creative flips to make them passable because everything was worded pretty cut-and-dry. The rhyming was a let down and led to the delivery and execution being that as well.


    Vote: Kungfugrip - More original, more standouts, better execution and delivery.
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  8. Aloe

    Aloe www.myspace.com/aloemusic

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    kung:

    with that name winnin's somethin u don't have a chance at
    i can name myself somethin' fictional too
    ..& show up next week as 'YouInAChampMatch'
    oh shit... lmaooooooo nice shit yo

    most improved? ha. u can't spit with the best
    just cuz u went from 'he sucks' to 'he sucks a little bit less'
    comedy.. nice

    u ain't dope, ain't sick, ain't the scariest or good
    & if i Shed some Light, then the rest getting buried in the woods
    cool.

    u can't match my swagger, cuz ur a sucker dude
    and let's just say talentwise.. cuz it would never fuck with you
    lol nice

    damn man, that was a hot verse.

    Light:

    Kungfu got a Grip for dicks he's tastin'
    shit..this dude Strokes more than heart failure patients
    note bad..

    you've made it this far, all for nothin' its sad..
    i'll put an end to your Run like a checkered flag
    i dug this. nice line.

    nothin' you drop is special, yet you been gettin lucky
    plus, you aint touchin' MetaSin like Ex prescribtion junkies
    cool.
    overall, pretty decent verse.

    okay, not that this battle was lopsided, but i think there was a pretty clear cut winner. i was feelin kungs verse more, but thats not to say you didnt drop a nice verse Light.

    vote = kung
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  9. Eusich

    Eusich the incredible.

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    kung, you started nicer than you finished, some good shit still though nonetheless with some strong punches/disses in the beginning both clever and effective, but i think conceptually you lagged in the end.. for me at least, still never below okayish/decent, first 3 bars were nice as well as the little bit less line, just simple and effective disses

    saber, first 3 and i could tell you lost this, that and you spelled grammar wrong while dissing someone's grammar, lol, the rest were all borderline decent and leaning towards no, just really didn't feel this much, the few lines that were on the line were very played concepts and only almost decent as memory refreshers, conceptually this was weak, i really can't quote anything or say anything too nice, i mean it wasn't wack mechanically i suppose but your concepts were real bad, red rover, duck duck goose, pete's sake, ex junkies... most of these were played or just bad (red rover) or both, oh.. and the grip lines were bad too, you really seemed as if you had no material whatsoever

    grip wins, easily
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  10. The Night

    The Night Richard McBeef

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    with that name winnin's somethin u don't have a chance at
    i can name myself somethin' fictional too
    ..& show up next week as 'YouInAChampMatch'
    u ain't dope, ain't sick, ain't the scariest or good
    & if i Shed some Light, then the rest getting buried in the woods
    ur whole style is trash & ur lines won't be felt
    shit, heads Shrug off ur shit til it starts defining their Delts

    vs

    not too fuckin much. Light had the break wind line which I thought was kinda funny but not a very hard hitting verse. Nothing quote worthy.

    kung came pretty nice. i was fuckin with those 3 and the rest was solid.

    v/FU
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  11. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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    most improved? ha. u can't spit with the best
    just cuz u went from 'he sucks' to 'he sucks a little bit less'
    ^funny

    dude's homo. but i shouldn't mention that part, right
    LightSaber's pokin so many guys he's comin close to the Dark Side
    ^giggle worthy.


    vs.

    Kungfu got a Grip for dicks he's tastin'
    shit..this dude Strokes more than heart failure patients
    ^original

    you aint competition, i'll bring this queer to an end
    KungFu's a Breeze, so i break wind while shittin' on him
    ^funny

    Kungs verse fell off toward the end and he had a lot of nameplays, but
    really I know whole-heartedly he wasn't going to waste to many lines
    against LightSaber, No offense you were out-matched here. Kung had
    way to many funny lines, I mean you read that whole verse and even if
    you didn't like the line-> it wasn't bad; you just weren't feeling it. As oppose
    to lights, a lot of lines I was just like nope doesn't work ex. oneduh signed
    back in- weak insult, or met/medicine is played. either way good battle ladies.

    vote- kungfu
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  12. Light Saber

    Light Saber I LoVe AsiaN ChicKs

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    yea, my shiit was maaddd rushed... i almost no-showed, but i felt i owed kungfu the respect to at least post something...dope verse kungfu, the best i've heard against me. and good luck in the champ match

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  13. DaTrusHurtz

    DaTrusHurtz Member

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    first of all, fuck ur contender achievement
    beat me? HA. u'd need 4 LightSabers like General Grievous
    see he was sick, but u must be slower holmes
    if Luke pulled u out, he better pray Storm Troopers are homophobes
    most improved? ha. u can't spit with the best
    just cuz u went from 'he sucks' to 'he sucks a little bit less'
    dude's homo. but i shouldn't mention that part, right
    LightSaber's pokin so many guys he's comin close to the Dark Side

    vs.

    and if i go out, im goin out swingin' knockin' domes loose
    when I tap you in the head more than duck, duck, goose

    Yea Grip pretty much killed this... kinda over did it a little on the nameplays, but they were all pretty hilarious disses on his name. Light Saber its a shame ya rushed this or maybe this coulda been a good match, but as it is...

    Vote - Grip
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  14. Chrit

    Chrit The Prodigy

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    first of all, fuck ur contender achievement
    beat me? HA. u'd need 4 LightSabers like General Grievous
    see he was sick, but u must be slower holmes
    if Luke pulled u out, he better pray Storm Troopers are homophobes
    dude's homo. but i shouldn't mention that part, right
    LightSaber's pokin so many guys he's comin close to the Dark Side

    vs.

    and if i go out, im goin out swingin' knockin' domes loose
    when I tap you in the head more than duck, duck, goose


    Grip totally outshined Saber here... very witty verse. Saber didnt really have much I liked.

    v/Grip
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  15. _KDP_

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    wow - next weeks champ match will be a good one. much impressed by KFG's shit here.

    first of all, fuck ur contender achievement
    beat me? HA. u'd need 4 LightSabers like General Grievous
    see he was sick, but u must be slower holmes
    if Luke pulled u out, he better pray Storm Troopers are homophobes
    with that name winnin's somethin u don't have a chance at
    i can name myself somethin' fictional too
    ..& show up next week as 'YouInAChampMatch'

    verse tailed off after that, but it seemed like he was writing and said, well thats enough to win, let me cruise from here.



    LS - i've read u before, must say this wasn't your best effort. as you said you rushed it so cant fault you for that.

    vote-kungfu grip
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  16. Medichi.

    Medichi. New Member

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    i didn't get the opening couplets, of kungs shit, coz i've never watched star wars. but i get the jest of them.everything was pretty nice and above average. saber fell off a few times and fell below decent in a couple bars. started off sketchy with a weak opener imo. the dead line and put an end to ur run concepts are both really played. kungs youinachampmatch and sorry display lines were nice and pretty much outshined saber. i got kung taking this ish. nicely
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  17. Silentt L

    Silentt L Registered Deity

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    Kung was funny.

    i think most people forgot the point of a battle......to clown people. he did it and was creative. lightsaber put up the effort. but this was just a battle on 2 different tiers, no disrespect.

    vote - kung
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  18. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    with that name winnin's somethin u don't have a chance at
    i can name myself somethin' fictional too
    ..& show up next week as 'YouInAChampMatch'

    ^ ouch!

    v/kung

    lightsaber put up a good fight. but nothing was really messing with what kung came with. on a consistent level. general grev's line was ill also.

    saber had.

    you've made it this far, all for nothin' its sad..
    i'll put an end to your Run like a checkered flag

    & the breakwind line.

    but like i said, kung pretty much had the humor and wit this match.

    v/ kung
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  19. Sir. Ebral

    Sir. Ebral Sir. Ebral Bright

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    with that name winnin's somethin u don't have a chance at
    i can name myself somethin' fictional too
    ..& show up next week as 'YouInAChampMatch'

    u need waaaaay more improvement. ur open to start
    even when Lights On his shit looks like it was wrote in the dark

    u ain't dope, ain't sick, ain't the scariest or good
    & if i Shed some Light, then the rest getting buried in the woods

    u emulate me, but cats don't feel it or get it
    ur such a Fake Grip ur shit advances the field of prosthetics
    u can't match my swagger, cuz ur a sucker dude
    and let's just say talentwise.. cuz it would never fuck with you

    Vs.

    Kungfu got a Grip for dicks he's tastin'
    shit..this dude Strokes more than heart failure patients

    you aint competition, i'll bring this queer to an end
    KungFu's a Breeze, so i break wind while shittin' on him
    nothin' you drop is special, yet you been gettin lucky
    plus, you aint touchin' MetaSin like Ex prescribtion junkies


    I say Saber gave a real strong serious attempt wit some pretty hard punches worded in some pretty nice lines, but it wasn't enough to get through Kung in my book, he had too many hard punches, too many creative wordplays. Nice match, but I say Kung got it pretty comfortably
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  20. criticize

    criticize New Member

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    first of all, fuck ur contender achievement
    beat me? HA. u'd need 4 LightSabers like General Grievous good
    see he was sick, but u must be slower holmes
    if Luke pulled u out, he better pray Storm Troopers are homophobes ok
    with that name winnin's somethin u don't have a chance at
    i can name myself somethin' fictional too
    ..& show up next week as 'YouInAChampMatch' pretty cool
    cuz ur verses are trash. can't lie on the fact son
    kid's sorry display could knock a murder one to bylaw infractions eh
    most improved? ha. u can't spit with the best
    just cuz u went from 'he sucks' to 'he sucks a little bit less'decent
    u need waaaaay more improvement. ur open to start
    even when Lights On his shit looks like it was wrote in the darknot good
    dude's homo. but i shouldn't mention that part, right
    LightSaber's pokin so many guys he's comin close to the Dark Sideeh
    u ain't dope, ain't sick, ain't the scariest or good
    & if i Shed some Light, then the rest getting buried in the woodsnice
    ur whole style is trash & ur lines won't be felt
    shit, heads Shrug off ur shit til it starts defining their Delts eh
    u emulate me, but cats don't feel it or get it
    ur such a Fake Grip ur shit advances the field of prosthetics ok
    u can't match my swagger, cuz ur a sucker dude
    and let's just say talentwise.. cuz it would never fuck with you ok
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    Sorry dawg, your road to the top is over
    im breakin' this 'Grip like a game of red rover eh
    Kungfu got a Grip for dicks he's tastin'
    shit..this dude Strokes more than heart failure patients ok i guess
    your movie scripts are horrible, the grammer errors dont stop
    we tried translatin' Kungs lines, but the english versions still off ?
    you aint a Grip, more like a mere grasp with a pen
    i would say your top ten, but OneDuh signed back in so what hes now 11? this is not hardhitting needed more of a flip
    this fag aint legend status, i bury your rhymes
    till the point Fu' has more dead-lines than thursday nights simple but ok
    you've made it this far, all for nothin' its sad..
    i'll put an end to your Run like a checkered flag crap
    you aint competition, i'll bring this queer to an end
    KungFu's a Breeze, so i break wind while shittin' on him eh
    nothin' you drop is special, yet you been gettin lucky
    plus, you aint touchin' MetaSin like Ex prescribtion junkies medicine and metasin is horrible wordplay, even if the wordplay worked the flip their is not creative or good. its a bad bar overall
    and if i go out, im goin out swingin' knockin' domes loose
    when I tap you in the head more than duck, duck, goose ok i guess
    yea i switched it up, bringin' new shit to the plate
    nah, i dont know any Pete, but i'll win for Petes sake i dont really like this, its not bad though.




    kung wins this shit handsdown, your verse was nice. some good nameplays but a few of them got stale, repeating the starwars too much etc. the shed some light was def the best bar of the battle, and your verse was way to powerful for light.
    light i thought your verse was very poor, at lot of old concepts, a lot of bad concepts, and a few ok lines scattered throughout, to be honest it was dissapointing for a contender match. but it is what it is.

    kung wins with ease.


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