[WK13] 9. Mic-illaH 3-0 v. 10. Muffffy 3-2 (Vote!)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  2. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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  3. Mic-illaH

    Mic-illaH aka paisano

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  4. Mic-illaH

    Mic-illaH aka paisano

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    Went 20.



    Ya have no following, an artist with no stage
    Shit, Muff couldn’t get fan’s to throw up their hands if he started the wave
    Heard ya audio’s too kid, trippin if this queer’s tough
    And dead summer aint the only reason kids aint lendin you an earMuff
    Every week, ya waitin on the Herald – ya scopin so fast
    But ya never see Muff in One Mag….they won’t even let you vote in that match!
    But I beg to differ……Muff stays in the Mag, keep peekin bro
    It’ll take a couple of weeks for him to digest you from that match a couple of weeks ago
    But me and you go way back, it’s an honor feelin so loyal
    But I try to stay diggin Muff, but environmentalists thought I was drillin for oil
    And speakin of politics, he loves Obama….so fresh but look B
    We knew you would vote for him ^^……Cause ya known never to elect for pussy
    You’re a true vet, and shit – you been Mic’s main rider
    But ya flew so far under the radar, air traffic control through you were a hang glider
    That’s right, you’re a fudgepacker – stop ya bitching
    Cuz Muff’s been throwin his shit at Poo-holes more than National League Pitching
    Flippin and Bitin, now you reggae and messin with dreads
    That’s just a proven fact that you dressin up those Island concepts fresh on ya head
    Have you end up in a casket, after ya mumbling stops
    I get these kids callin me Little Debbie, the way I can put Muffin a box
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  5. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    style switch
    U battlin muff..so the winner is evident
    Its funny how u been here since 01 and im still considered the veteran.
    Listen. This homo clowns really fake
    Coz drawing flowers and meadows..only time Illah-straight.
    Im predicted. Idont see how he believe he winninthis.
    Ya lines aren’t Unique..they just receive inDifference.
    This little simple bitch. This sucker is sinning.
    Switchin agenda’to him is just tuckin his dick in
    Im nuts when im rippin..tear off all ya fuckin features mayne
    10,000 B.C aint a movie
    Its how many powder packs youll need to relieve the pain
    [​IMG]*

    ^so take one..dude must be fakin his merit
    Coz you was born from wackness..way to make it apparent’.
    Im takin ya spirit…make u see god like the pantheon
    This is text bitch..u aint seein A Mic-Champion.
    Look at his user title…it doesnt seem sumbody told dude
    Dat U cant be AKA nething..if nobody knows you.
    N uh..i don’t mean to offend with these scripts.
    But the way u write
    . sportsfan’ll have a worthy case of Identity Theft
    Tryin to fight’ with me? just Boo @ this shrimp
    Although My record sure appreciates the futile’ attempt (feudal)




    Umm yea futile is not pronounced few-tile

    For those lil pronounciation mongers out there.…go look for yourself. Fyoot-l


    Dictionary.com


    gl peepz
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  6. Aloe

    Aloe www.myspace.com/aloemusic

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    aighttttttttttt

    Mic-illah: aight man, to first of all, i liked your verse, but i wanted to like it a lot more than i did- if that makes sense. a lot of your lines were worded REALLY akwardly... which just killed it for me.

    Ya have no following, an artist with no stage
    Shit, Muff couldn’t get fan’s to throw up their hands if he started the wave
    right off the bat lol

    That’s right, you’re a fudgepacker – stop ya bitching
    Cuz Muff’s been throwin his shit at Poo-holes more than National League Pitching

    lmao.. funny... but no lol

    Have you end up in a casket, after ya mumbling stops
    I get these kids callin me Little Debbie, the way I can put Muffin a box


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    Mufffffy: ill come right out and say it- im not digging the style switch. yes your verse flowed well, but you hardly had any hard hitting lines. plus you put a picture in the middle of your verse... AND you had to explain a rhyme.. that seems kinda amatureish to me. dont get me wrong, i think you're an awesome battler.... but i think this style switch stuff didnt work out for you here.

    ^so take one..dude must be fakin his merit
    Coz you was born from wackness..way to make it apparent’.

    nice


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    good battle. both verses had their good parts and both had their flaws. in the end i think muffys style switch didnt work out for him and Mic illaH had enough "punch" to take him. vote = Mic illaH
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  7. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    u wouldnt know a hardhitting line if it smacked u in the face.

    1-0 upping
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  8. Dope Chris

    Dope Chris Blunt Slide 5-0

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    im too lazy ta break down entire battles like other cats...

    but i think Mic "barely" edged this one out. I wasnt feelin really either verse. neither had any hard hittin punches. Mics hang glidin line was iight. Muffs veteran line was "iight" but like i said, neither struck home.

    Vote: Mic-illah

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  9. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    lemme drop a vote



    Ya have no following, an artist with no stage
    Shit, Muff couldn’t get fan’s to throw up their hands if he started the wave

    pretty cool flow, the punch lacked freshness though.

    Heard ya audio’s too kid, trippin if this queer’s tough
    And dead summer aint the only reason kids aint lendin you an earMuff

    played nameplay, but flipped decently. woulda liked to seen this worded a bit better.


    Every week, ya waitin on the Herald – ya scopin so fast
    But ya never see Muff in One Mag….they won’t even let you vote in that match!

    lol, i like this. i have a one-mag concept for my battle this week. this was cool though. may not use mines now.


    But I beg to differ……Muff stays in the Mag, keep peekin bro
    It’ll take a couple of weeks for him to digest you from that match a couple of weeks ago

    wordy punch. coulda been more direct. still not bad.

    But me and you go way back, it’s an honor feelin so loyal
    But I try to stay diggin Muff, but environmentalists thought I was drillin for oil

    naaaaaah.


    And speakin of politics, he loves Obama….so fresh but look B
    We knew you would vote for him ^^……Cause ya known never to elect for pussy

    eh, pretty bad.

    You’re a true vet, and shit – you been Mic’s main rider
    But ya flew so far under the radar, air traffic control through you were a hang glider

    concept needed more development. wasnt really feeling as is.

    That’s right, you’re a fudgepacker – stop ya bitching
    Cuz Muff’s been throwin his shit at Poo-holes more than National League Pitching

    seen a pujals line before, this was straight.

    Flippin and Bitin, now you reggae and messin with dreads
    That’s just a proven fact that you dressin up those Island concepts fresh on ya head

    lol, i like this. its pretty funny, not true, but funny.


    Have you end up in a casket, after ya mumbling stops
    I get these kids callin me Little Debbie, the way I can put Muffin a box

    naaah didnt like this one. pretty played idea on muff.

    overall, kinda inconsistent. i liked a few concepts and a few others just coulda been left out to make the verse more impactful. still not too shabby. i think the one-mag and the island concepts was ur best shit in here.


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    U battlin muff..so the winner is evident
    Its funny how u been here since 01 and im still considered the veteran.

    decent personal.

    Listen. This homo clowns really fake
    Coz drawing flowers and meadows..only time Illah-straight.

    nah, not feeling this one. i've seen this concept for people with ill in they name a looooot.

    ill a straight artist, but not in the picture of the best..etc.


    Im predicted. Idont see how he believe he winninthis.
    Ya lines aren’t Unique..they just receive inDifference.

    lol, i like this idea. coulda expanded it slightly

    This little simple bitch. This sucker is sinning.
    Switchin agenda’to him is just tuckin his dick in

    same as above..kinda comes of corny as read. setup woulda made this much doper.



    Im nuts when im rippin..tear off all ya fuckin features mayne
    10,000 B.C aint a movie
    Its how many powder packs youll need to relieve the pain

    lol, cool shit. i know what bc's are so i woulda got this 1 w/o the pic.


    ^so take one..dude must be fakin his merit
    Coz you was born from wackness..way to make it apparent’.

    ok

    Im takin ya spirit…make u see god like the pantheon
    This is text bitch..u aint seein A Mic-Champion.

    ok

    Look at his user title…it doesnt seem sumbody told dude
    Dat U cant be AKA nething..if nobody knows you.

    mean n' direct, i like it

    N uh..i don’t mean to offend with these scripts.
    But the way u write
    . sportsfan’ll have a worthy case of Identity Theft

    nah, not feelin this

    Tryin to fight’ with me? just Boo @ this shrimp
    Although My record sure appreciates the futile’ attempt

    not feelin this either.


    overall i see the new steez. not bad but needs some work. i feel like some of the disses came off a bit simple when they coulda been worded to have a better impact. some of the lines however came off like u didnt really care n threw the first thing that came to mind down.

    i feel like mic had more powerful lines while muff was more consistently average this battle. its kinda close. ima have to edit in a vote. this could go either way. lemme re-read it.


    i feel like after reading this again. muff took this with consistency. i feel like aside from the illastraight and his last 2 lines the verse overall was relatively creative, some of the lines werent developed good enough for a harsh impact tho, but i also feel like mic had a few more misses that hurt his verse, ie his opener/digggin/muffinbox/obama concept. some nice shots tho ntl.

    v.muff
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  10. Lettuce Balls

    Lettuce Balls Droppin the stink

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    style switch
    U battlin muff..so the winner is evident
    Its funny how u been here since 01 and im still considered the veteran.
    Listen. This homo clowns really fake
    Coz drawing flowers and meadows..only time Illah-straight.
    Im predicted. Idont see how he believe he winninthis.
    Ya lines aren’t Unique..they just receive inDifference.
    This little simple bitch. This sucker is sinning.
    Switchin agenda’to him is just tuckin his dick in
    Im nuts when im rippin..tear off all ya fuckin features mayne
    10,000 B.C aint a movie
    Its how many powder packs youll need to relieve the pain
    *

    ^so take one..dude must be fakin his merit
    Coz you was born from wackness..way to make it apparent’.
    Im takin ya spirit…make u see god like the pantheon
    This is text bitch..u aint seein A Mic-Champion.
    Look at his user title…it doesnt seem sumbody told dude
    Dat U cant be AKA nething..if nobody knows you.
    N uh..i don’t mean to offend with these scripts.
    But the way u write
    . sportsfan’ll have a worthy case of Identity Theft
    Tryin to fight’ with me? just Boo @ this shrimp
    Although My record sure appreciates the futile’ attempt (feudal)

    Ya have no following, an artist with no stage
    Shit, Muff couldn’t get fan’s to throw up their hands if he started the wave
    Heard ya audio’s too kid, trippin if this queer’s tough
    And dead summer aint the only reason kids aint lendin you an earMuff
    Every week, ya waitin on the Herald – ya scopin so fast
    But ya never see Muff in One Mag….they won’t even let you vote in that match!
    But I beg to differ……Muff stays in the Mag, keep peekin bro
    It’ll take a couple of weeks for him to digest you from that match a couple of weeks ago
    But me and you go way back, it’s an honor feelin so loyal
    But I try to stay diggin Muff, but environmentalists thought I was drillin for oil
    And speakin of politics, he loves Obama….so fresh but look B
    We knew you would vote for him ^^……Cause ya known never to elect for pussy
    You’re a true vet, and shit – you been Mic’s main rider
    But ya flew so far under the radar, air traffic control through you were a hang glider
    That’s right, you’re a fudgepacker – stop ya bitching
    Cuz Muff’s been throwin his shit at Poo-holes more than National League Pitching
    Flippin and Bitin, now you reggae and messin with dreads
    That’s just a proven fact that you dressin up those Island concepts fresh on ya head
    Have you end up in a casket, after ya mumbling stops
    I get these kids callin me Little Debbie, the way I can put Muffin a box

    I have to got with Mufff on this one. Muffff wins.
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  11. John_Dough

    John_Dough New Member

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    Mic

    Ya have no following, an artist with no stage
    Shit, Muff couldn’t get fan’s to throw up their hands if he started the wave
    Nice start
    Heard ya audio’s too kid, trippin if this queer’s tough
    And dead summer aint the only reason kids aint lendin you an earMuff
    nice name flip
    Every week, ya waitin on the Herald – ya scopin so fast
    But ya never see Muff in One Mag….they won’t even let you vote in that match!
    creative for this week only...
    But I beg to differ……Muff stays in the Mag, keep peekin bro
    It’ll take a couple of weeks for him to digest you from that match a couple of weeks ago
    nice again
    But me and you go way back, it’s an honor feelin so loyal
    But I try to stay diggin Muff, but environmentalists thought I was drillin for oil
    wack
    And speakin of politics, he loves Obama….so fresh but look B
    We knew you would vote for him ^^……Cause ya known never to elect for pussy
    isnt it just mccain and obama now? what pussy...nah dated reference
    You’re a true vet, and shit – you been Mic’s main rider
    But ya flew so far under the radar, air traffic control through you were a hang glider
    That’s right, you’re a fudgepacker – stop ya bitching
    Cuz Muff’s been throwin his shit at Poo-holes more than National League Pitching
    good wordplay but kind of juvenile/not really hard hitting
    Flippin and Bitin, now you reggae and messin with dreads
    That’s just a proven fact that you dressin up those Island concepts fresh on ya head
    ok
    Have you end up in a casket, after ya mumbling stops
    I get these kids callin me Little Debbie, the way I can put Muffin a box
    yeah pretty good closer, wouldve KILLED in a live battle

    Muff

    style switch
    U battlin muff..so the winner is evident
    Its funny how u been here since 01 and im still considered the veteran.
    nice start/personal
    Listen. This homo clowns really fake
    Coz drawing flowers and meadows..only time Illah-straight.
    pretty funny
    Im predicted. Idont see how he believe he winninthis.
    Ya lines aren’t Unique..they just receive inDifference.
    clever
    This little simple bitch. This sucker is sinning.
    Switchin agenda’to him is just tuckin his dick in
    hahaha clever again
    Im nuts when im rippin..tear off all ya fuckin features mayne
    10,000 B.C aint a movie
    Its how many powder packs youll need to relieve the pain
    HAHAHAHA nice, visual aid was cool here too
    *

    ^so take one..dude must be fakin his merit
    Coz you was born from wackness..way to make it apparent’.
    heard apparent flips before but this was dope
    Im takin ya spirit…make u see god like the pantheon
    This is text bitch..u aint seein A Mic-Champion.
    wow nice
    Look at his user title…it doesnt seem sumbody told dude
    Dat U cant be AKA nething..if nobody knows you.
    WHOA that wouldve ended him in a live joint, good here too
    N uh..i don’t mean to offend with these scripts.
    But the way u write
    . sportsfan’ll have a worthy case of Identity Theft
    nice
    Tryin to fight’ with me? just Boo @ this shrimp
    Although My record sure appreciates the futile’ attempt (feudal)
    decent closer

    Read this 3 times in total and I'm not sure if readers are catching all of muffs shit, hes VERY clever and prolly over some heads. Real wordplay oriented, I liked it for sure. Mic had better punchlines, Muff had a better overall verse with a mix of wordplay, disses, and punches. Very close battle and muff, plz dont use a visual aid again or footnote cuz thats what u dissed dizthachosen1 for in the past remember, treating us like idiots. But then again, some of the votes in here may be in need of footnotes so just cuz folks like me and trombley dont need em doesnt mean others couldnt benefit. Very, very close but I think muff edged this off creativity

    Vote=Muff
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  12. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    wow thx for breaking it down.
    the pic was more visual aid than tryin to explain.. glad u could see that
    im done posting in this thread

    just upped it coz alot of ppl are viewing the league
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  13. Wash.

    Wash. Registered Bruiser

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    v - muffy


    feelin the new style, while not really new as in groundbreaking im sure u mean ur just trying out some new shit to keep text refreshing for you. but like i said, i dig it.

    as to the content, it could use a little more work the way you incorporate it INTO the style, cuz sometimes the way it reads now is really awkward as fuck. but not to the point its a huge negative in the overall presentation. favorite lines were basically the entire first half, picture line was dope to me - refreshing as well. kinda drifted in the second half but i thought ur best line was in there too with the identity theft line. overall cool verse, dug the new style but its definitely not perfected yet. keep it up tho.

    mic i liked pretty much the first half of your verse too, dope nameplays with the ear muff and muff in the mag, but then u kinda drifted and didnt pick back up til the Island line to me. cool verse just wasnt as creative as hard hitting as muffs was to me. i felt he was more direct while u kinda just kept doing the opposite. cool verse tho man and i can definitely see why the votes are going back and forth - but i got muff in this one
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  14. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    over no-shows.
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  15. Eusich

    Eusich the incredible.

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    mic, earmuff was semi-clever assuming one has never read a battle against muff, nevertheless both of the first two concepts could have left a stronger impact with better flips, some bad concepts throughout, most notably that Obama stint, seems as though you tried to pull out all the "tricks" or the popular stuff that good battlers do, like the referring to a name in the set up which in this case was redundant, also the structure of your lines didn't help but only made the flow seemed stretched at times, the idea is for a quick setup and for the second line to leave a BANG, but there were no bangs here and the setups weren't quick either, i missed the mag battle so that line was puzzling, the hang glider was a nice flip but the whole "under the radar" concepts are played, and the closer here was good but i'm sure muff gets it a lot, overall this was consistently border line decent but no lines to draw me in, just a lot of flipped concepts and whatnot and a few eh lines (obama/mag), plus you said BUT like a million times to the point where it was annoying

    muffffy, first two were good, didn't like the third though, but the "tucking his dick" line was funny, lol.. never heard it before, not overly effective but still funny as far as entertainment goes, BC was straight but the pic was kind of corny, apparent was straight as well but the idea is somewhat played, the AKA was funny and sportsfan was eh, the rest were borderline decent for me, more fillerish than actual power punches but never "wack" so to speak, overall there was just more to like about it than mic's, also the structure was better for me and it didn't just feel like you were reaching for something that you're not

    muffffy wins
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  16. Beyond..

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    Ya have no following, an artist with no stage
    Shit, Muff couldn’t get fan’s to throw up their hands if he started the wave
    Good.
    Heard ya audio’s too kid, trippin if this queer’s tough
    And dead summer aint the only reason kids aint lendin you an earMuff
    Played.
    Every week, ya waitin on the Herald – ya scopin so fast
    But ya never see Muff in One Mag….they won’t even let you vote in that match!
    Good.
    But I beg to differ……Muff stays in the Mag, keep peekin bro
    It’ll take a couple of weeks for him to digest you from that match a couple of weeks ago
    Good.
    But me and you go way back, it’s an honor feelin so loyal
    But I try to stay diggin Muff, but environmentalists thought I was drillin for oil
    Good.
    And speakin of politics, he loves Obama….so fresh but look B
    We knew you would vote for him ^^……Cause ya known never to elect for pussy
    Good.
    You’re a true vet, and shit – you been Mic’s main rider
    But ya flew so far under the radar, air traffic control through you were a hang glider
    Good.
    That’s right, you’re a fudgepacker – stop ya bitching
    Cuz Muff’s been throwin his shit at Poo-holes more than National League Pitching
    Not feeling.
    Flippin and Bitin, now you reggae and messin with dreads
    That’s just a proven fact that you dressin up those Island concepts fresh on ya head
    Good.
    Have you end up in a casket, after ya mumbling stops
    I get these kids callin me Little Debbie, the way I can put Muffin a box
    Forced.

    Overall: You came with a pretty consistently above average verse with few let downs. Didn't feel that the last bar was technically sound with the Muffin a box aspect of the wordplay. It has to be able to work both ways for the most part.

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    U battlin muff..so the winner is evident
    Its funny how u been here since 01 and im still considered the veteran.
    Good.
    Listen. This homo clowns really fake
    Coz drawing flowers and meadows..only time Illah-straight.
    Good.
    Im predicted. Idont see how he believe he winninthis.
    Ya lines aren’t Unique..they just receive inDifference.
    Good.
    This little simple bitch. This sucker is sinning.
    Switchin agenda’to him is just tuckin his dick in
    Good.
    Im nuts when im rippin..tear off all ya fuckin features mayne
    10,000 B.C aint a movie
    Its how many powder packs youll need to relieve the pain
    Good.
    ^so take one..dude must be fakin his merit
    Coz you was born from wackness..way to make it apparent’.
    Played.
    Im takin ya spirit…make u see god like the pantheon
    This is text bitch..u aint seein A Mic-Champion.
    Good.
    Look at his user title…it doesnt seem sumbody told dude
    Dat U cant be AKA nething..if nobody knows you.
    Good.
    N uh..i don’t mean to offend with these scripts.
    But the way u write
    . sportsfan’ll have a worthy case of Identity Theft
    Good.
    Tryin to fight’ with me? just Boo @ this shrimp
    Although My record sure appreciates the futile’ attempt
    Forced.

    Overall: Pretty consistent verse as well with the above average lines and standouts. You had that really played a parent wordplay though that I've seen a million times. The futile/feudal wordplay I'm calling forced because of the t/d soundings.


    Vote: Muffffy - He was slightly more consistent and had slightly more standouts.
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  17. DaTrusHurtz

    DaTrusHurtz Member

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    Ya have no following, an artist with no stage
    Shit, Muff couldn’t get fan’s to throw up their hands if he started the wave
    alright opener
    Heard ya audio’s too kid, trippin if this queer’s tough
    And dead summer aint the only reason kids aint lendin you an earMuff
    aight but its prolly been done on him
    Every week, ya waitin on the Herald – ya scopin so fast
    But ya never see Muff in One Mag….they won’t even let you vote in that match!
    well, yes they do, so this came off as kinda fake
    But I beg to differ……Muff stays in the Mag, keep peekin bro
    It’ll take a couple of weeks for him to digest you from that match a couple of weeks ago
    felt like u didn't word this personal well enough, it coulda been good but not like this
    But me and you go way back, it’s an honor feelin so loyal
    But I try to stay diggin Muff, but environmentalists thought I was drillin for oil
    nah, the wordin' on it was just a little off
    And speakin of politics, he loves Obama….so fresh but look B
    We knew you would vote for him ^^……Cause ya known never to elect for pussy
    elect for pussy, sick concept man, but i'm not a fan of how ya used it. still not bad tho
    You’re a true vet, and shit – you been Mic’s main rider
    But ya flew so far under the radar, air traffic control through you were a hang glider
    not bad, doesn't really stand out, but its a cool line
    That’s right, you’re a fudgepacker – stop ya bitching
    Cuz Muff’s been throwin his shit at Poo-holes more than National League Pitching
    haha, this shit was kinda corny but made me laugh
    Flippin and Bitin, now you reggae and messin with dreads
    That’s just a proven fact that you dressin up those Island concepts fresh on ya head
    nah, it just didn't hit to me
    Have you end up in a casket, after ya mumbling stops
    I get these kids callin me Little Debbie, the way I can put Muffin a box
    prolly been done on him but not bad

    vs.

    U battlin muff..so the winner is evident
    Its funny how u been here since 01 and im still considered the veteran.
    decent personal
    Listen. This homo clowns really fake
    Coz drawing flowers and meadows..only time Illah-straight.
    nah, concepts good but didn't like the wording of it
    Im predicted. Idont see how he believe he winninthis.
    Ya lines aren’t Unique..they just receive inDifference.
    hmmm, nah, just wasn't feelin it
    This little simple bitch. This sucker is sinning.
    Switchin agenda’to him is just tuckin his dick in
    lol, this is a little played but i liked the way ya used it, nice stuff
    Im nuts when im rippin..tear off all ya fuckin features mayne
    10,000 B.C aint a movie
    Its how many powder packs youll need to relieve the pain
    lol @ at usin' a pic in ur verse, original shit, but didnt think it was a hard punch
    ^so take one..dude must be fakin his merit
    Coz you was born from wackness..way to make it apparent’.
    nah, it just came off as more corny than really harsh
    Im takin ya spirit…make u see god like the pantheon
    This is text bitch..u aint seein A Mic-Champion.
    okay nameplay, not bad
    Look at his user title…it doesnt seem sumbody told dude
    Dat U cant be AKA nething..if nobody knows you.
    alright, not bad, tho its kinda simple
    N uh..i don’t mean to offend with these scripts.
    But the way u write
    . sportsfan’ll have a worthy case of Identity Theft
    alright, also tho kinda simple
    Tryin to fight’ with me? just Boo @ this shrimp
    Although My record sure appreciates the futile’ attempt (feudal)
    nah the wording just seemed off

    Felt this battle was pretty lackluster. Mic, I feel like u got the ideas, but ur wording is pretty awkward. Throw up hands and under the radar were worded fine, but the rest just seemed kinda off. Nothin' too bad in ur verse, just not much stood out. Muffffy, I'm not feelin' the style switch at all, I thought this was by far the worst verse I've seen from u. U gotta do what u like. If u like this new style better, than do your thing, but if ur only doing it cuz u didn't like some of the criticism, I'd rethink it cuz I liked ur old style mucchhhh better. This was kinda close, really not much in this battle I liked, but I felt Mufffy had a few slightly harder hitters in there like his opener and agenda thing.

    Vote - Muffffy
    test
  18. D.LOKE

    D.LOKE New Member

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    VOTE: MUFFFY

    REASON: I thought this was a very close battle. both seem to fall off at the middle of they verses in this battle. I don’t think either did as well as I’ve seen them do. Paisano had some misses like the obama line (even tho I knew why you went for that) the environmentalist line, and the played out Albert Pooholes wordplay but I thought the name play he use on muff like the closer was his best punch and very effective. Muff I think the other style you had was slightly more effective but I still see what you tried to do. Still you had misses too. The Indifference one seem a lil forced and I seen what you tried to do with the B.C thing but as a punch I wasn’t really feeling it. I thought it was interesting that 2 weeks ago you told me in a vote to not put the lil adlib things in the middle of my verse but then you put a pic you didn’t really need. N.e way the lines that did hit ho were funny or harsh like the opener so I think muff just got this one by a hair in terms of quote strength.

    Heard ya audio’s too kid, trippin if this queer’s tough
    And dead summer aint the only reason kids aint lendin you an earmuff
    You’re a true vet, and shit – you been Mic’s main rider
    But ya flew so far under the radar, air traffic control through you were a hang glider
    Have you end up in a casket, after ya mumbling stops
    I get these kids callin me Little Debbie, the way I can put Muffin a box

    VS

    U battlin muff..so the winner is evident
    Its funny how u been here since 01 and im still considered the veteran.
    ^ ^OUCH
    Listen. This homo clowns really fake
    Coz drawing flowers and meadows..only time Illah-straight.
    This little simple bitch. This sucker is sinning.
    Switchin agenda’to him is just tuckin his dick in
    Look at his user title…it doesnt seem sumbody told dude
    Dat U cant be AKA nething..if nobody knows you.
    test
  19. Sir. Ebral

    Sir. Ebral Sir. Ebral Bright

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    Every week, ya waitin on the Herald – ya scopin so fast
    But ya never see Muff in One Mag….they won’t even let you vote in that match!
    But I beg to differ……Muff stays in the Mag, keep peekin bro
    It’ll take a couple of weeks for him to digest you from that match a couple of weeks ago


    VS

    Im predicted. Idont see how he believe he winninthis.
    Ya lines aren’t Unique..they just receive inDifference.
    This little simple bitch. This sucker is sinning.
    Switchin agenda’to him is just tuckin his dick in

    Mics finisher was fire, too. Muffs 10,000 BC line was nice, too, but I felt it was a little stretched. Illah-Straight line was nice. Drillin for oil and obama lines was slick. Shit was pretty close, lot of nasty personals and nicely worded punches, but I think the four highlighted lines gave Illah the advantage.

    Vote - Mic Illah
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  20. Medichi.

    Medichi. New Member

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    mic was nice in the first half of his verse. pretty consistant & creative. fell off at the end. muff seemed basic the whole way through. nothing stood out to me as being worded or executed that effective.

    Its funny how u been here since 01 and im still considered the veteran.
    Switchin agenda’to him is just tuckin his dick in
    Coz you was born from wackness..way to make it apparent’.
    Dat U cant be AKA nething..if nobody knows you
    ^all those are mad play'd


    mic had the mag line, under the radar and island concepts that were decent and executed to my liking. the opener was a played concept, but you picked up after that. i got mic taking this for fresher concepts over all.
    test
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