[WK13] 41. Agnidira 0-0 v. 42. Ben Blayzin 0-0 (Vote!)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  2. Ben Blazyn

    Ben Blazyn fuck you.

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    i like the new layout fa sho.

    goin 16.
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  3. Basic Wun

    Basic Wun New Member

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    yo can you spell my name right lol..its not blayzin its BLAZYN..
    or at least jsut use TeckNeek...



    (Agnidira? who the fuck is this guy? guess there wont be any personals then)

    yo-
    I bust holes through dumb tards, your gonna hurt in all angles
    Imma ring ya bell so hard, ya name gets praise in xmas jangels
    Not much of a lifeguard, But Agni ill pull you under by the ankels
    you remind me of Nasif kinda, 'cept without all the potential
    ...you being champ is laughter, I put that on the SYN
    Not even ya best shit can be doctor'd, wit lines dosed from MetaSin
    Tecks knwn for wreckin holmes, I fuck ya bitch while you at work
    if you wasnt slavin like a mexican ...
    then ya gurl wouldnt be gettin the chimichanga down her skirt
    Im a true vet from the days, ASK around punk i bullly newbies
    Ive beaten dudes better then you, so youll get finished pretty easily
    Listen to me you dumb shit, getting pussies hard to steal..
    thats why your tackling "tight ends" on & off the field
    you better ask for an extention gonna take WEEKS to write ya verse
    ...But ill make sure you meet the deadline
    Only took me a day prep your hearse..

    FATALITY!


    LINKS
    [WK13] 37. TonyB 2-2 v. 38. Keith Lettuce 1-1 (Vote!)
    [WK13] 11. Sir. Ebral 3-2 v. 12. Pablo BaZooka 2-0 (Vote!)
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  4. Agnindra

    Agnindra New Member

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  5. Agnindra

    Agnindra New Member

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    interesting how he said all those heads would vouch for the kid...
    but it was even more interesting when none of em did/
    ^ that was an indecent proposal, the faggotry had em shaken...
    Ben Blazyn? I guess 'Fred the Flamer' was taken/
    u needed a voucher to get in? clearly u lack fire...
    coulda convinced us with a verse, but the Teck backfired/
    speakin of backfire, u knew Indra would leave ya face checkered...
    that's why the nigga tried to sign in wit a fake record/
    whatever you choose to throw up, to me it's nothin but neck speak...
    cuz Rakim already told us not to sweat the TeckNeek/
    shit, the mods already know there's no savin you, guy...
    look at the thread title, I've already been given an 'aye'/
    so there's 16 in this clip and you're one in the hole...
    apparently you're a vet,
    but as for clout we're still wonderin though/
    don't be sad about losin, really u should say thanks...
    cuz wit the way shit's set up, you'll still move up in the ranks/
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  6. Dope Chris

    Dope Chris Blunt Slide 5-0

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    in tha words of Flava Flav...Woooooooooooow

    this was a good ass battle. I had ta peep it a few times over and over. But after thorough examination....lol my vote goes to Agnindra. His shit just hit harder ta me. Ben had some nice punches like tha Tight-end line & X-Mas Jangels. But it somewhat fell off from time to time.

    Ags thoughs flow was smooth throughout. Goodmixture of punches and Wordplay (which I'ma sucker for)

    so,
    Vote: Agnindra

    (and write in bigger letters next time yo, shit had me squintin)
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  7. Ben Blazyn

    Ben Blazyn fuck you.

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    0-1 uppin 4 votes.

    LINKS
    [WK13] 37. TonyB 2-2 v. 38. Keith Lettuce 1-1 (Vote!)
    [WK13] 11. Sir. Ebral 3-2 v. 12. Pablo BaZooka 2-0 (Vote!)
    [WK13] 31. T.a.C 3-6 v. 32. Caveat1 1-1 (Vote!)
    [WK13] Dope Chris vs. EkimMC (vote)
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  8. D.LOKE

    D.LOKE New Member

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    VOTE: AGNIDIRA

    REASON: I think Tek had some ups like the ones i quoted and some corny downs like the chimichunga crap and the played deadline closer. Agnidira(wtf @ the name tho) had some heaters in there and the opener was stong e-nuff to do most the damage, very well executed quote but then the fake record made me laff tooo. just better insults than Ben had.



    I bust holes through dumb tards, your gonna hurt in all angles
    Imma ring ya bell so hard, ya name gets praise in xmas jangels
    ...you being champ is laughter, I put that on the SYN
    Not even ya best shit can be doctor'd, wit lines dosed from MetaSin


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    interesting how he said all those heads would vouch for the kid...
    but it was even more interesting when none of em did/
    ^ that was an indecent proposal, the faggotry had em shaken...
    Ben Blazyn? I guess 'Fred the Flamer' was taken/
    speakin of backfire, u knew Indra would leave ya face checkered...
    that's why the nigga tried to sign in wit a fake record/
    whatever you choose to throw up, to me it's nothin but neck speak...
    cuz Rakim already told us not to sweat the TeckNeek/
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  9. Don Dotta

    Don Dotta New Member

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    I bust holes through dumb tards, your gonna hurt in all angles
    Imma ring ya bell so hard, ya name gets praise in xmas jangels
    wack
    Not much of a lifeguard, But Agni ill pull you under by the ankels
    you remind me of Nasif kinda, 'cept without all the potential
    no rhyme
    ...you being champ is laughter, I put that on the SYN
    Not even ya best shit can be doctor'd, wit lines dosed from MetaSin
    Seein alot of these now and i used one last week
    Tecks knwn for wreckin holmes, I fuck ya bitch while you at work
    if you wasnt slavin like a mexican ...
    then ya gurl wouldnt be gettin the chimichanga down her skirt
    No
    Im a true vet from the days, ASK around punk i bullly newbies
    Ive beaten dudes better then you, so youll get finished pretty easily
    no rhyme
    Listen to me you dumb shit, getting pussies hard to steal..
    thats why your tackling "tight ends" on & off the field
    decent
    you better ask for an extention gonna take WEEKS to write ya verse
    ...But ill make sure you meet the deadline
    Only took me a day prep your hearse..
    No


    overall verse was just bad..no hate at all but i didnt feel any of this..the user name flips are wack and i used one last week and got no props for it..obviously those are played..alot of shit didnt rhyme..the closer was weird as fuck..only bar i liked a bit was the tight end...




    interesting how he said all those heads would vouch for the kid...
    but it was even more interesting when none of em did/
    lmao
    ^ that was an indecent proposal, the faggotry had em shaken...
    Ben Blazyn? I guess 'Fred the Flamer' was taken/
    ahaha
    u needed a voucher to get in? clearly u lack fire...
    coulda convinced us with a verse, but the Teck backfired/
    ehh
    speakin of backfire, u knew Indra would leave ya face checkered...
    that's why the nigga tried to sign in wit a fake record/
    Lol
    whatever you choose to throw up, to me it's nothin but neck speak...
    cuz Rakim already told us not to sweat the TeckNeek/
    Werd
    shit, the mods already know there's no savin you, guy...
    look at the thread title, I've already been given an 'aye'/
    nah
    so there's 16 in this clip and you're one in the hole...
    apparently you're a vet,
    but as for clout we're still wonderin though/
    weak
    don't be sad about losin, really u should say thanks...
    cuz wit the way shit's set up, you'll still move up in the ranks/
    Lol


    hands down the better verse,not to many hard punchs but a buncha lines that had me fuckin crackin up..better flow and structure and just a better overall verse in general..



    Vote:Ag
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  10. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    over no-shows.
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  11. Aloe

    Aloe www.myspace.com/aloemusic

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    Ben:

    I bust holes through dumb tards, your gonna hurt in all angles
    Imma ring ya bell so hard, ya name gets praise in xmas jangels
    right off the bat.. nice

    Not much of a lifeguard, But Agni ill pull you under by the ankels
    you remind me of Nasif kinda, 'cept without all the potential
    didn't rhyme and wasnt really a hard hitter.. but you mentioned nasif.. so LOL


    Listen to me you dumb shit, getting pussies hard to steal..
    thats why your tackling "tight ends" on & off the field
    played, but lol.

    cool verse.... a lot of filler, but overall it was pretty good.

    agnidira:

    interesting how he said all those heads would vouch for the kid...
    but it was even more interesting when none of em did/
    ^ that was an indecent proposal, the faggotry had em shaken...
    Ben Blazyn? I guess 'Fred the Flamer' was taken/
    nice opening

    u needed a voucher to get in? clearly u lack fire...
    coulda convinced us with a verse, but the Teck backfired/
    nice

    whatever you choose to throw up, to me it's nothin but neck speak...
    cuz Rakim already told us not to sweat the TeckNeek/
    nice again

    wow i was actually pretty impressed. i thought you were gonna be noob with this small ass text.

    aight..... this was actually a real good battle... ben you were impressive... but i think agnidira gets the nod here.... he had more hard hitters, and while i have no fucking clue how to say his name and i hate the small text... vote = ag
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  12. Eusich

    Eusich the incredible.

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    im confused with these other opinions, i see why voting is viewed as a problem now as this battle warrants no 'wows'

    ben, this was bad, just bad, i mean like 3 out 12 bars didn't even rhyme, and another 3 out of 12 were hardly even punches, the only line even close to being almost halfway semi not completely wack was the chimichanga because it was slightly funny and even that was a NO, the only other line worth mention is the xmas thing which was terribly worded and played as well, i usually break it down a little better or review some lines but there's no point here, i just wasn't feeling this, welcome back though i guess

    agnidira, you were MUCH better but still not close to good, a few lines were just wack like the 'aye' line to be more specific, fred the flamer was semi-funny but should have been more ruthless, like 'fred the fuckin faggot' or something, i don't know.. still liked it though, the rest were either decent hits on some personal type shit like the opener and backfired lines, or they were just fillerish, oh and the closer was used way too much this week so that had no impact, either way you still came much better than ben but this still wasn't worth a wow by any means

    ag wins
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  13. _KDP_

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    i cant read that little ass font
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  14. DaTrusHurtz

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    I bust holes through dumb tards, your gonna hurt in all angles
    Imma ring ya bell so hard, ya name gets praise in xmas jangels
    nah its kinda played
    Not much of a lifeguard, But Agni ill pull you under by the ankels
    you remind me of Nasif kinda, 'cept without all the potential
    also kinda played.. haven't seen it with nasif, but seen a lotta lines like "u remind me of x without the skill/potential/talent" etc
    ...you being champ is laughter, I put that on the SYN
    Not even ya best shit can be doctor'd, wit lines dosed from MetaSin
    i used a doctor'd line awhile ago n' seen a few others... cool flip with adding the metasin in there, but its still kinda played
    Tecks knwn for wreckin holmes, I fuck ya bitch while you at work
    if you wasnt slavin like a mexican ...
    then ya gurl wouldnt be gettin the chimichanga down her skirt
    lol, more creative than ur other lines, not bad
    Im a true vet from the days, ASK around punk i bullly newbies
    Ive beaten dudes better then you, so youll get finished pretty easily
    aight but its kinda too simple to hit too hard
    Listen to me you dumb shit, getting pussies hard to steal..
    thats why your tackling "tight ends" on & off the field
    tight ends concept was cool, but i feel u coulda used it better
    you better ask for an extention gonna take WEEKS to write ya verse
    ...But ill make sure you meet the deadline
    Only took me a day prep your hearse..
    nah deadline stuff is played

    vs.

    interesting how he said all those heads would vouch for the kid...
    but it was even more interesting when none of em did/
    good personal, u coulda made this much better with more complex wording and incorporating some sort of wordplay with this, but okay
    ^ that was an indecent proposal, the faggotry had em shaken...
    Ben Blazyn? I guess 'Fred the Flamer' was taken/
    haha, kinda corny but it made me laugh
    u needed a voucher to get in? clearly u lack fire...
    coulda convinced us with a verse, but the Teck backfired/
    average nameplay i guess
    speakin of backfire, u knew Indra would leave ya face checkered...
    that's why the nigga tried to sign in wit a fake record/
    he signed in with an old record, not a fake one, but i see where u were goin' with this, but i just feel like u coulda done more with it
    whatever you choose to throw up, to me it's nothin but neck speak...
    cuz Rakim already told us not to sweat the TeckNeek/
    not bad i guess
    shit, the mods already know there's no savin you, guy...
    look at the thread title, I've already been given an 'aye'/
    nah, this didn't work
    so there's 16 in this clip and you're one in the hole...
    apparently you're a vet,
    but as for clout we're still wonderin though/
    this was just wayy too simple
    don't be sad about losin, really u should say thanks...
    cuz wit the way shit's set up, you'll still move up in the ranks/
    thats more of a diss on the mods than him

    Ben, most of ur lines were played, see if u can be a little more creative next week and use concepts which aren't as likely to have been done before. Only shit which was okay was the tight ends thing, tho ya didn't use it well and the mexican thing was aight i guess. Agnidira, first things first, u gotta scrap that small font and get rid of those / at ur bars, they ain't needed. Besides that, wasn't too impressed. A few nameplays which weren't too bad, but mostly ya came too simple and lacked complexity. U had a few personals in there though so that helped, the opener wasn't too bad. Overall, I didn't like either verse, but I'm gonna give it to Agnidira, Teckneek's wording was better, but Agnidira had the better concepts and personals.

    Vote - Agnidira
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  15. T.a.C

    T.a.C Guest

    I bust holes through dumb tards, your gonna hurt in all angles
    Imma ring ya bell so hard, ya name gets praise in xmas jangels

    ...you being champ is laughter, I put that on the SYN
    Not even ya best shit can be doctor'd, wit lines dosed from MetaSin

    you better ask for an extention gonna take WEEKS to write ya verse
    ...But ill make sure you meet the deadline
    Only took me a day prep your hearse..


    vs

    interesting how he said all those heads would vouch for the kid...
    but it was even more interesting when none of em did/

    ^ that was an indecent proposal, the faggotry had em shaken...
    Ben Blazyn? I guess 'Fred the Flamer' was taken/

    u needed a voucher to get in? clearly u lack fire...
    coulda convinced us with a verse, but the Teck backfired/

    vote- agnidira
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  16. Allegory

    Allegory Grimy.

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    if you wasnt slavin like a mexican ...
    then ya gurl wouldnt be gettin the chimichanga down her skirt
    wtf.noo.


    nteresting how he said all those heads would vouch for the kid...
    but it was even more interesting when none of em did/
    haha.found it funny.
    ^ that was an indecent proposal, the faggotry had em shaken...
    Ben Blazyn? I guess 'Fred the Flamer' was taken/
    wtf.

    this battle wasnt too good..shit had me rolling tho...both were pretty weak.agni was a lil less.
    vot-agni
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  17. Quriosity

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    Agnindra wins, 8-0 in votes
    Agnindra fails to post 2 links (champ/contender)
    Ben fails to post 3 links
    Agnindra still wins, 6-(-3)
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