[WK13] 17. D.LOKE 1-1 v. 18. _KDP_ 1-0 (Vote!)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  2. D.LOKE

    D.LOKE New Member

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    12 Lines alright?
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  3. _KDP_

    _KDP_ Active Member

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    12 works
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  4. _KDP_

    _KDP_ Active Member

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  5. D.LOKE

    D.LOKE New Member

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    Ok Whatever^ ^


    I’ll murk and body bag ya metaphors I’ll destroy son
    You’ll DIGEST tryna eat me up, After I meta morph into poison
    Bring the noise in, but nameplay please be half horse
    Especially when your bitch ass name..sounds like it’s a Police task force
    I heard your Audio “Yall Just don’t Understand” it’s a herbs case
    We really don’t understand..
    ……..putting that terrible crap on sound click in the first place
    Rap shouldn’t be your workplace, don’t resurface after this business
    Please just disappear like a Keith Lettuce verse when that fag gets Offended
    Your style resembles Joanna Shari’s butt cheeks I knew it and grinned
    Only except for E tha Real atleast her cheeks we’d wanna view it again
    Be the CHICK’EN this domestic violence you tramp cat!
    So you can lay an egg bigger than Defcon did last week in the champ Match
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  6. _KDP_

    _KDP_ Active Member

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    12 lines…lmao…

    Bullshit + faggot shit, bitch shit + wack shit mixed into rhymes
    that arsenal might win for ya after all, I’ll be DQ’d for flippin ya lines
    procrastinating cuz this is easy work for voters, I’m holdin back fury
    check back Sunday, noone picture 12 unless their day jobs to photograph juries
    why wait til Thursday? ya known for dropping that garbage…
    your offensive lines’s flagged for holding the D, back no positive yardage
    couldn’t get love in a open mic forum, much less round ya way
    D’Loke’ll act much better than this hopefully, we gotta have faith
    Indian u ought to call your style Snake Charmer Ah-D’biwack
    flip my own punches cuz… shit, yours are whats holdin D-back
    your potently wack- look how rapidly rap music’s dying
    fuck, I’m worried bout catchin a deadly infection just by replying



    :dead:
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  7. Mic-illaH

    Mic-illaH aka paisano

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    I’ll murk and body bag ya metaphors I’ll destroy son
    You’ll DIGEST tryna eat me up, After I meta morph into poison
    ok
    Bring the noise in, but nameplay please be half horse
    Especially when your bitch ass name..sounds like it’s a Police task force
    ok
    I heard your Audio “Yall Just don’t Understand” it’s a herbs case
    We really don’t understand..
    ……..putting that terrible crap on sound click in the first place
    funny
    Rap shouldn’t be your workplace, don’t resurface after this business
    Please just disappear like a Keith Lettuce verse when that fag gets Offended
    ehh and didn't rhyme
    Your style resembles Joanna Shari’s butt cheeks I knew it and grinned
    Only except for E tha Real atleast her cheeks we’d wanna view it again
    ehh
    Be the CHICK’EN this domestic violence you tramp cat!
    So you can lay an egg bigger than Defcon did last week in the champ Match
    ehh



    Bullshit + faggot shit, bitch shit + wack shit mixed into rhymes
    that arsenal might win for ya after all, I’ll be DQ’d for flippin ya lines
    ok
    procrastinating cuz this is easy work for voters, I’m holdin back fury
    check back Sunday, noone picture 12 unless their day jobs to photograph juries
    ok
    why wait til Thursday? ya known for dropping that garbage…
    your offensive lines’s flagged for holding the D, back no positive yardage
    nice but could be worded better
    couldn’t get love in a open mic forum, much less round ya way
    D’Loke’ll act much better than this hopefully, we gotta have faith
    ok
    Indian u ought to call your style Snake Charmer Ah-D’biwack
    flip my own punches cuz… shit, yours are whats holdin D-back
    decent
    your potently wack- look how rapidly rap music’s dying
    fuck, I’m worried bout catchin a deadly infection just by replying
    ehhhh


    V/ KDP
    D.Loke seemed like his verse wasn't even aimed at KDP - seemed like he was throwin little jabs at other dudes in the league like Defcon and E the Real more than his opponent. Plus he didn't really have anything good. KDP had the photograph juries line and the offensive lines line ....they were good but could have been flipped better. But those lines won it for him...
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  8. Chrit

    Chrit The Prodigy

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    procrastinating cuz this is easy work for voters, I’m holdin back fury
    check back Sunday, noone picture 12 unless their day jobs to photograph juries

    vs

    nothing


    both came very simplistic with undeveloped ideas
    Dloke didnt even come at KDP for alot of his verse. Why throw punches at Defcon, Keith, and E instead of your opponent?
    KDP came pretty weak but atleast was direct at his opponent and wins for that.

    v/KDP
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  9. Lettuce Balls

    Lettuce Balls Droppin the stink

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    Hi guys, this was great. Fucking hard hitting, epic lines and damn near flawless deliveries. Great showing by both but I felt that D.Loke edged this out. He hit just a little harder. Great stuff though by both participants.

    v/ D. Loke

    P.S.
    Wow, this fucking battle really sucked.
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  10. DaTrusHurtz

    DaTrusHurtz Member

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    I’ll murk and body bag ya metaphors I’ll destroy son
    You’ll DIGEST tryna eat me up, After I meta morph into poison
    i thought of this concept awhile ago but didnt use it cuz i thought it was a lil forced.. and it still is, lol. its aight tho
    Bring the noise in, but nameplay please be half horse
    Especially when your bitch ass name..sounds like it’s a Police task force
    i guess it does in a way, aight, but its a bit of a stretch
    I heard your Audio “Yall Just don’t Understand” it’s a herbs case
    We really don’t understand..
    ……..putting that terrible crap on sound click in the first place
    decent personal, u coulda worded it better, but not bad
    Rap shouldn’t be your workplace, don’t resurface after this business
    Please just disappear like a Keith Lettuce verse when that fag gets Offended
    keith lettuce shits gettin' a lil old, so nah
    Your style resembles Joanna Shari’s butt cheeks I knew it and grinned
    Only except for E tha Real atleast her cheeks we’d wanna view it again
    i dunno, the wordin just seems a lil awkward
    Be the CHICK’EN this domestic violence you tramp cat!
    So you can lay an egg bigger than Defcon did last week in the champ Match
    nah, stop mentionin' other battlers lol

    vs.

    Bullshit + faggot shit, bitch shit + wack shit mixed into rhymes
    that arsenal might win for ya after all, I’ll be DQ’d for flippin ya lines
    decent opener, good stuff
    procrastinating cuz this is easy work for voters, I’m holdin back fury
    check back Sunday, noone picture 12 unless their day jobs to photograph juries
    feel like it coulda been worded better but its a good idea, not bad
    why wait til Thursday? ya known for dropping that garbage…
    your offensive lines’s flagged for holding the D, back no positive yardage
    it'd be good but its kinda played
    couldn’t get love in a open mic forum, much less round ya way
    D’Loke’ll act much better than this hopefully, we gotta have faith
    kinda too simple to be too effective
    Indian u ought to call your style Snake Charmer Ah-D’biwack
    flip my own punches cuz… shit, yours are whats holdin D-back
    i kinda liked this, its simple but not bad.. good stuff
    your potently wack- look how rapidly rap music’s dying
    fuck, I’m worried bout catchin a deadly infection just by replying
    nahh this is just kinda too simple

    D.Loke, I felt like ur wording killed ya in this one. Line about his audio was good, but not too much else i was feelin' unfortunately. KDP, u had some stuff that was too simple, but u had a few lines i liked like the opener, juries thing, and holdin back stuff. Felt u had more that stood out so u got this.

    Vote - KDP
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  11. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    Ok Whatever^ ^

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    I’ll murk and body bag ya metaphors I’ll destroy son
    You’ll DIGEST tryna eat me up, After I meta morph into poison
    (nice wordplay)
    Bring the noise in, but nameplay please be half horse
    Especially when your bitch ass name..sounds like it’s a Police task force
    (hah)
    I heard your Audio “Yall Just don’t Understand” it’s a herbs case
    We really don’t understand..
    ……..putting that terrible crap on sound click in the first place
    (ok)
    Rap shouldn’t be your workplace, don’t resurface after this business
    Please just disappear like a Keith Lettuce verse when that fag gets Offended
    (eh ok)
    Your style resembles Joanna Shari’s butt cheeks I knew it and grinned
    Only except for E tha Real atleast her cheeks we’d wanna view it again
    (ok)
    Be the CHICK’EN this domestic violence you tramp cat!
    So you can lay an egg bigger than Defcon did last week in the champ Match
    (nah)

    Bullshit + faggot shit, bitch shit + wack shit mixed into rhymes
    that arsenal might win for ya after all, I’ll be DQ’d for flippin ya lines
    (ok)
    procrastinating cuz this is easy work for voters, I’m holdin back fury
    check back Sunday, noone picture 12 unless their day jobs to photograph juries
    (oo nice)
    why wait til Thursday? ya known for dropping that garbage…
    your offensive lines’s flagged for holding the D, back no positive yardage
    (hmm ok)
    couldn’t get love in a open mic forum, much less round ya way
    D’Loke’ll act much better than this hopefully, we gotta have faith
    (nah)
    Indian u ought to call your style Snake Charmer Ah-D’biwack
    flip my own punches cuz… shit, yours are whats holdin D-back
    (no)
    your potently wack- look how rapidly rap music’s dying
    fuck, I’m worried bout catchin a deadly infection just by replying
    (ehhh )


    close here..i got dloke for his first two lines

    but kdp had line of the battle with that picked ur 12 shit

    kdp fell off towards the end to me


    v/d.loke
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  12. D.LOKE

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    As for Trus and Crit, I'm not really dissin Def and E Real so much my last 4 bars as it's more about Tryna give my opponent an excuse to have a let down VS me and make fun of that as well as spit something current. Just metphores that's all.

    don't think I'm tryna sway KDP good lookin out for finally droppin, just thinking some people are confusing my motives for a couple of lines and I can tell in the votes.
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  13. _KDP_

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    i didnt want to write until u posted to be honest. my opponent last week checked in on two different threads then never showed up.

    i guess if u feel the need to explain your shit then u gotta. people dont get what i'm tryin to put across i just try to word my shit better.



    dont wanna clog up the thread, i won't be posting in here again.
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  14. Eusich

    Eusich the incredible.

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    loke - i wasn't feeling this at all, the lines were corny and the setups were terrible, half of the setups didn't even make sense but the ending rhymed with the ending of the following line, overall you need A LOT of help mechanically, the opener and joanna shari lines were damn near unbearable, the closer was almost decent and the police line was a good concept i suppose but its not really a sufficient diss and the set up was just terrible, try again

    kdp - from jump the opener was nicer than loke's entire drop, the juries line was decent but it was a stretch on wordplay, almost too much and lessened the impact for me, the rest were blah, too many D-back lines and bad concepts, but you still did better than the opposition

    vote = kdp
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  15. D.LOKE

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    ^ ^Laffin @ me needin help mechanically. Not sure what your talking about when 5 outta my 6 set-ups ARE directly relating to the follow up line and the one that didn't was cause I was keepin a multi going. Maybe those set-ups coulda been worded better but whatever homeboy.
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  16. D.LOKE

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  17. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    KDP wins, 4-2 in votes
    Keith's vote is DQ'd
    D.LOKE fails to post 2 links (champ/contender)
    KDP still wins, 4-(-1)
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