[WK13] 13. Trombley 2-0 v. 14. -=Kolli$ion=- 2-2 (Vote!)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  2. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    posting wednesday.
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  3. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    ayo

    where u at?

    fuck it

    Kolls a beast n' a problem. he'll make ya best shit seem worse
    ^ & that fabricated image comes as a set w/ his rest in peace shirt
    cuz ima muuurder this fool. straight clappem on the streets
    trust One-Mag'll hitcha face hard enough to win battle of the week
    I'll choke the life outta this faggot. he better back down
    cuz Trom will never Koll it quits, but he will when I makem tap out
    when I vacation, I get the tightest hoes to freak black
    & the weeds premiere, but ur poor ass needs cable to see that
    while u trickin dough at the club, i wouldnt invest in the matter
    its clear kolliflower's bitchs wit gifts if they dip like a vegetable platter
    cuz his wifeys huge as fuck, he lifts her fat to find the chin
    his motto's 'if she got wave pool thighs, i dont mind diving in'
    I can predict his verse, it begins with filler and ends blatantly weak
    we're just hoping the middles worth a good read like the rankings this week
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  4. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    Besides looks it's obviously clear that skill is what your missin
    Niggas are disgusted wit cha verse like when they see you and Def kissin
    You stay on nut sacks...your rainbow logo is not a surprise
    Your tru homo, Trombly known to keep his queer eye on str8 guys
    I murder clowns weekly and you aint no exception
    To off me...you'll need more than some fictional weapons
    Inet thugs need love, prolly come wit a purse and a blouse
    You so dangerous....that gun that you're clickin's a mouse
    Fuck a minimum I'll finish this nigga early and send em home wit a L
    And retire his ass like Dough to the RSTL
    Take the no-show....you barely got enough heat to burn me
    But I'm sure you'll be in hookups beggin for votes like Serge and the tag tourny
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  5. Wash.

    Wash. Registered Bruiser

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    v - trombley


    just an all around better verse, honestly. kollision came pretty straight forward with his disses, nothing too creative. honestly, the brightest spot in his verse was probably the kissin' def line, but even that was kinda ehhhh. i dunno man it just seemed rushed to me.

    trombley on the other hand had some pretty cool shit with the Koll it quits line and the kolliflower line. as you may know im a huge fan of nameplays and most cats suck with em these days but those were pretty damn good.

    like i said, just an overall better verse. sorry koll.
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  6. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    over no-shows.
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  7. The Night

    The Night Richard McBeef

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    Kolls a beast n' a problem. he'll make ya best shit seem worse
    ^ & that fabricated image comes as a set w/ his rest in peace shirt

    That was cool, I was fucking with the vegetable line too but it wasn't really a quoteworthy jawn. But Deon got this pretty easy.

    Koll, try to be a little fuckin wittier doofus. That was boring.

    V/Deon
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  8. Eusich

    Eusich the incredible.

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    trom, some notable ideas but i think mostly all could have been done better, just came off as forced to me, all in all you were consistently above average bet never actually GOOD GOOD if that makes any sense at all, i'm sure it's what you were going for anyway so there shouldn't be any beef with me saying that, nevertheless there were 3 lines/ideas almost worth quoting (opener, tap out, platter) but all could have been better, oh and the one-mag was nice wordplay but really had no effect here and the closer was one of the better lines about the mag, pretty good stuff

    koll, nothing quotable here, seemed very fillerish with a lot of blah lines, i wasn't really feeling it, i mean it was hardly a diss at all, seemed very rushed on your part and i think you knew what the outcome would be here, conceptually this weak with played lines like the mouse shit and then personals or other punches that just didn't connect like the dough/def/serge lines

    trom wins
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  9. Beyond..

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    Kolls a beast n' a problem. he'll make ya best shit seem worse
    ^ & that fabricated image comes as a set w/ his rest in peace shirt
    Good.
    cuz ima muuurder this fool. straight clappem on the streets
    trust One-Mag'll hitcha face hard enough to win battle of the week
    Good.
    I'll choke the life outta this faggot. he better back down
    cuz Trom will never Koll it quits, but he will when I makem tap out
    Good.
    when I vacation, I get the tightest hoes to freak black
    & the weeds premiere, but ur poor ass needs cable to see that
    Good.
    while u trickin dough at the club, i wouldnt invest in the matter
    its clear kolliflower's bitchs wit gifts if they dip like a vegetable platter
    Good.
    cuz his wifeys huge as fuck, he lifts her fat to find the chin
    his motto's 'if she got wave pool thighs, i dont mind diving in'
    Good.
    I can predict his verse, it begins with filler and ends blatantly weak
    we're just hoping the middles worth a good read like the rankings this week
    Not feeling.

    Overall: Pretty consistent verse with above average lines and only one bar I wasn't feeling. I wasn't feeling that one bar because they rarely go into detail for the middle-of-the-pack. It's usually 1-20, if that. You had a lot of humorous lines in this verse though.

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    Besides looks it's obviously clear that skill is what your missin
    Niggas are disgusted wit cha verse like when they see you and Def kissin
    Connection is weak.
    You stay on nut sacks...your rainbow logo is not a surprise
    Your tru homo, Trombly known to keep his queer eye on str8 guys
    Nah.
    I murder clowns weekly and you aint no exception
    To off me...you'll need more than some fictional weapons
    Weak.
    Inet thugs need love, prolly come wit a purse and a blouse
    You so dangerous....that gun that you're clickin's a mouse
    ?
    Fuck a minimum I'll finish this nigga early and send em home wit a L
    And retire his ass like Dough to the RSTL
    Okay.
    Take the no-show....you barely got enough heat to burn me
    But I'm sure you'll be in hookups beggin for votes like Serge and the tag tourny
    Alright, lol.

    Overall: Pretty weak verse. No standouts or above average lines. The best in the verse were a couple of average lines at the end, the rest was below average. The main thing that was lacking in this verse was creativity. That and better connections go a long way.


    Vote: Trombley - More consistent, more standouts, better creativity.
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  10. Area51.

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    Kollision didn't have much this week, the only line he had I even sorta liked was his closer, overall he just didn't come off lookin like he even tried I thought cuz I'm pretty sure I've seen better shit from him, nothing was really creative or hit this week.
    Trombley had the OneMag line I thought was pretty dope, and I also thought the kolliflower line was good, overall his verse was just more creative and better worded so it all hit harder, he had a very consistant verse.

    cuz ima muuurder this fool. straight clappem on the streets
    trust One-Mag'll hitcha face hard enough to win battle of the week
    while u trickin dough at the club, i wouldnt invest in the matter
    its clear kolliflower's bitchs wit gifts if they dip like a vegetable platter


    vs


    Take the no-show....you barely got enough heat to burn me
    But I'm sure you'll be in hookups beggin for votes like Serge and the tag tourny

    v/ Trombley
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  11. DaTrusHurtz

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    Kolls a beast n' a problem. he'll make ya best shit seem worse
    ^ & that fabricated image comes as a set w/ his rest in peace shirt
    lol nice start
    cuz ima muuurder this fool. straight clappem on the streets
    trust One-Mag'll hitcha face hard enough to win battle of the week
    i feel like i just saw a line like this so it didn't do much for me
    I'll choke the life outta this faggot. he better back down
    cuz Trom will never Koll it quits, but he will when I makem tap out
    cool nameplay, not bad
    when I vacation, I get the tightest hoes to freak black
    & the weeds premiere, but ur poor ass needs cable to see that
    decent again
    while u trickin dough at the club, i wouldnt invest in the matter
    its clear kolliflower's bitchs wit gifts if they dip like a vegetable platter
    haha, nice nameplay
    cuz his wifeys huge as fuck, he lifts her fat to find the chin
    his motto's 'if she got wave pool thighs, i dont mind diving in'
    haha, i liked this as well
    I can predict his verse, it begins with filler and ends blatantly weak
    we're just hoping the middles worth a good read like the rankings this week
    nah didn't think this was a strong closer

    vs.

    Besides looks it's obviously clear that skill is what your missin
    Niggas are disgusted wit cha verse like when they see you and Def kissin
    uhh, they never kissed? ewww lol
    You stay on nut sacks...your rainbow logo is not a surprise
    Your tru homo, Trombly known to keep his queer eye on str8 guys
    nah, kinda too simple to really hit
    I murder clowns weekly and you aint no exception
    To off me...you'll need more than some fictional weapons
    ehhh just didn't think this was a harsh diss
    Inet thugs need love, prolly come wit a purse and a blouse
    You so dangerous....that gun that you're clickin's a mouse
    again, this just really isn't harsh, its too simple
    Fuck a minimum I'll finish this nigga early and send em home wit a L
    And retire his ass like Dough to the RSTL
    seems like more of a statement than a diss
    Take the no-show....you barely got enough heat to burn me
    But I'm sure you'll be in hookups beggin for votes like Serge and the tag tourny
    again its kinda too simple

    Well this was pretty much murder. Trombley came with a pretty consistently nice verse, the nameplays were good and there were other solid concepts in there. Kollision u just came too basic here and didn't have any wit in ur verse.

    Vote - Trombley
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  12. Caveat1

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    Kolls a beast n' a problem. he'll make ya best shit seem worse
    ^ & that fabricated image comes as a set w/ his rest in peace shirt
    ILL LINE
    cuz ima muuurder this fool. straight clappem on the streets
    trust One-Mag'll hitcha face hard enough to win battle of the week
    NICE
    I'll choke the life outta this faggot. he better back down
    cuz Trom will never Koll it quits, but he will when I makem tap out
    ILLNESS
    when I vacation, I get the tightest hoes to freak black
    & the weeds premiere, but ur poor ass needs cable to see that
    ILLNESS AGAIN
    while u trickin dough at the club, i wouldnt invest in the matter
    its clear kolliflower's bitchs wit gifts if they dip like a vegetable platter
    NICE
    cuz his wifeys huge as fuck, he lifts her fat to find the chin
    his motto's 'if she got wave pool thighs, i dont mind diving in'
    OK
    I can predict his verse, it begins with filler and ends blatantly weak
    we're just hoping the middles worth a good read like the rankings this week
    OK


    Besides looks it's obviously clear that skill is what your missin
    Niggas are disgusted wit cha verse like when they see you and Def kissin
    OK
    You stay on nut sacks...your rainbow logo is not a surprise
    Your tru homo, Trombly known to keep his queer eye on str8 guys
    OK
    I murder clowns weekly and you aint no exception
    To off me...you'll need more than some fictional weapons
    NICE
    Inet thugs need love, prolly come wit a purse and a blouse
    You so dangerous....that gun that you're clickin's a mouse
    KIND OF ILL
    Fuck a minimum I'll finish this nigga early and send em home wit a L
    And retire his ass like Dough to the RSTL
    NICE
    Take the no-show....you barely got enough heat to burn me
    But I'm sure you'll be in hookups beggin for votes like Serge and the tag tourny
    LIKED THIS ALSO
    AS THE BREAKDOWN SHOWIN I WAS IMPRESSED WITH THE BOI TROM ALOT MORE THEN THE KID KOLL THIS TIME AROUND

    V-TROM FOR CLEVER LINES AND BETTER DISSES AND ILLER QUOTES.
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  13. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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  14. Silentt L

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    I've got trombley pretty easy. Kollision had a pisspoor verse, with played lines, that weren't good when they were new. Nothing in Kolls verse was better than....below average.



    vote - trombley.
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  15. criticize

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    I'll choke the life outta this faggot. he better back down
    cuz Trom will never Koll it quits, but he will when I makem tap out
    while u trickin dough at the club, i wouldnt invest in the matter
    its clear kolliflower's bitchs wit gifts if they dip like a vegetable platter

    I can predict his verse, it begins with filler and ends blatantly weak
    we're just hoping the middles worth a good read like the rankings this week

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    koll i liked none of your lines, your under the impression that member punches are good, let me tell you they are not they take little skill, have no real impact on your oppenant and are basicaly just simple bad meta's. your lucky you were up against me last week, when i was sparking hate, dont get fooled. you need to improve.

    tomm you had 3 lines i quoted, dont get me wrong, they are only ok. some of them need some work still like the kolliflower line could have been dope, but only ended up being ok, i think the flip was just average had alot more potential though.

    you won this easily.

    vote-tomm
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  16. Pablo BaZooka

    Pablo BaZooka Ka-BOOM Beoutchess!!

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    yeah mane HDVM or Deon or Trombley or whateva da fuck ya name is? He clearly and decisively won dis shit mane. Kollie didn't say nuthin original, too creative or very hard hittin, ya verse didn't suck, but it didn't impress either mane. Trom had some hitters in there tho: da Weeds premiere, wavepool thighs & veggie platter line. Overall Trom smashed the other guy, vote = Trombley.

    ^^^hope dat vote's good enuff Q, cuzz I don't feel like typin more mane.
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  17. -=Kolli$ion=-

    -=Kolli$ion=- God's Favorite

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    Yea....I really rushed this verse...my fault Trom....but good ass verse kid.

    One
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  18. Quriosity

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    Trombley wins, 10-0 in votes
    Magus and Night's votes are DQ'd
    Koll fails to post links
    Trombley still wins 8-(-5)
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