[WK13] 11. Sir. Ebral 3-2 v. 12. Pablo BaZooka 2-0 (Vote!)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  2. Lotty

    Lotty Young Amazin'

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    12. We'll make it easier on the reader.
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  3. Pablo BaZooka

    Pablo BaZooka Ka-BOOM Beoutchess!!

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  4. Pablo BaZooka

    Pablo BaZooka Ka-BOOM Beoutchess!!

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    Shut me outta win? LOL, maybe not victim
    cuzz I’ll take ya thin subject matters & pick da lock wit’em
    U’ll neva be a success, ya too lame & faggoty
    so go head, take ya shot, u’ll misfortune n aim fa tragedy
    suggest u quit dreamin, cuzz ya average at best
    Yes, even sleepwalking u won’t stand out from tha Rest
    what r u like 7-20 lifetime, dat’s a shame punk
    how da fuck u a threat with a rec. resembling a X-Games stunt
    treat punches like bar-hoppin as dey land & hit’em
    so call dis anotha Knight out, when I give Sir Ebral a aneurism
    a ready shotty left “Lotty Dotty” with his mug bless’d
    ...so trust dat dis slugfest gotcha grave Doug Fresh.
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  5. Sir. Ebral

    Sir. Ebral Sir. Ebral Bright

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    I guess this is a step up from facin' a muppet
    But look at his avatar, dudes a rapist or somethin
    Need some help not lookin so gay to the public?
    Next time you get raped, dont look like you blatently loved it
    Congratz on undefeat, but please, don't open ya mouth
    Ya got Lotus this bout
    An you wouldnt beat sportsfan if half his votes didnt count
    Jokin me clown? Hes got to be, I got this lock an keyed
    2 wins an you Rocky? Please.
    Do you like they shoulda did Rocky, get stopped in three
    New rank system, you bout drop fourty through the floor, fam
    Least it aint a shut out, youll always have TorrMup an SportsFan
    But no more, man. No bark, no bite, ya not at all ferocious
    12 lines best fa all tha votas
    ^I meant that ya almost tollerable in smaller doses
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  6. Dope Chris

    Dope Chris Blunt Slide 5-0

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    I wasnt really feelin either verse ta be honest with ya..

    but I think Sir. Ebral locked in this win. His verse just flowed smoother, and his wordplay was alot cleaner.

    that bar alone was enough ta beat Pablo...but then you kinda fell off

    Pablo stop usin so much slang in your keys. Texting is slightly different than spitting in real life. Its gotta flow with the readers eyes and not so much the ears. You gotta be careful. NEWAYS bitches

    Vote: Sir Ebral
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  7. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    Shut me outta win? LOL, maybe not victim
    cuzz I’ll take ya thin subject matters & pick da lock wit’em
    (ok)
    U’ll neva be a success, ya too lame & faggoty
    so go head, take ya shot, u’ll misfortune n aim fa tragedy
    (hah..miss fortune and aim ..nice)
    suggest u quit dreamin, cuzz ya average at best
    Yes, even sleepwalking u won’t stand out from tha Rest
    (stand out from the Rest as in sleeping..pretty good)
    what r u like 7-20 lifetime, dat’s a shame punk
    how da fuck u a threat with a rec. resembling a X-Games stunt
    (lol this applies to me too but i like this)
    treat punches like bar-hoppin as dey land & hit’em
    so call dis anotha Knight out, when I give Sir Ebral a aneurism
    (hah ok)
    a ready shotty left “Lotty Dotty” with his mug bless’d
    ...so trust dat dis slugfest gotcha grave Doug Fresh.
    (nah)


    I guess this is a step up from facin' a muppet
    But look at his avatar, dudes a rapist or somethin
    Need some help not lookin so gay to the public?
    Next time you get raped, dont look like you blatently loved it
    (this segment flowed nice and was moderatly effective)
    Congratz on undefeat, but please, don't open ya mouth
    Ya got Lotus this bout
    An you wouldnt beat sportsfan if half his votes didnt count
    (u can only vote once...so eh)
    Jokin me clown? Hes got to be, I got this lock an keyed
    2 wins an you Rocky? Please.
    Do you like they shoulda did Rocky, get stopped in three
    (ok swag..not much of a hit )
    New rank system, you bout drop fourty through the floor, fam
    Least it aint a shut out, youll always have TorrMup an SportsFan
    (lol ok)
    But no more, man. No bark, no bite, ya not at all ferocious
    12 lines best fa all tha votas
    ^I meant that ya almost tollerable in smaller doses
    (nah coz)

    this was close..

    pablo u shud make your shit more clearer fam...coz i had to read several lines several times to get the hit

    like that stand out from the rest was doppppppe

    but the way u wrote it was ugly as fuck.


    v/pablo on consistency..just look at my breakdown


    ebral had swag..but the rocky shit was just flow and a weak hit
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  8. Lotty

    Lotty Young Amazin'

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    Just to clear it up, so the rest of the voters don't think that, that was a personal, I was talkin' about his match last week he faced sportsfan and half the votes for sportsfan were disreguarded as invalid.

    Good shit, tho, famo.

    1-1

    \/Word@Mufffy, I thought it was more swaggerfull then if I say didnt or couldnt.
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  9. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    ok..my bad

    the way it is worded makes me see otherwise at first glance
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  10. Basic Wun

    Basic Wun New Member

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    Shut me outta win? LOL, maybe not victim
    cuzz I’ll take ya thin subject matters & pick da lock wit’em
    (ehhh)
    U’ll neva be a success, ya too lame & faggoty
    so go head, take ya shot, u’ll misfortune n aim fa tragedy
    (ok)
    suggest u quit dreamin, cuzz ya average at best
    Yes, even sleepwalking u won’t stand out from tha Rest
    (good)
    what r u like 7-20 lifetime, dat’s a shame punk
    how da fuck u a threat with a rec. resembling a X-Games stunt
    (ehhhhh)
    treat punches like bar-hoppin as dey land & hit’em
    so call dis anotha Knight out, when I give Sir Ebral a aneurism
    ( ok)
    a ready shotty left “Lotty Dotty” with his mug bless’d
    ...so trust dat dis slugfest gotcha grave Doug Fresh.
    (it was akright i guesss..)


    I guess this is a step up from facin' a muppet
    But look at his avatar, dudes a rapist or somethin
    Need some help not lookin so gay to the public?
    Next time you get raped, dont look like you blatently loved it
    (hahaha damn.,)
    Congratz on undefeat, but please, don't open ya mouth
    Ya got Lotus this bout
    An you wouldnt beat sportsfan if half his votes didnt count
    (ehhh)
    Jokin me clown? Hes got to be, I got this lock an keyed
    2 wins an you Rocky? Please.
    Do you like they shoulda did Rocky, get stopped in three
    (this was alright, )
    New rank system, you bout drop fourty through the floor, fam
    Least it aint a shut out, youll always have TorrMup an SportsFan
    (lol ok)
    But no more, man. No bark, no bite, ya not at all ferocious
    12 lines best fa all tha votas
    ^I meant that ya almost tollerable in smaller doses
    (ehhh)


    hmmmmm pablo came alright..the verse lacked alot ... but there was sum ok lines.
    Sir did alright as well but sme of the lines could have been better...

    but yeah jsut because of my breakdown..

    v/Sir
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  11. Pablo BaZooka

    Pablo BaZooka Ka-BOOM Beoutchess!!

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    Whut'd I tell ya Lotty, I must talk in subliminal messages or sum shit mane..lmao.
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  12. D.LOKE

    D.LOKE New Member

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    VOTE: PABLO not by much
    REASON: I thought this was a fairly good battle for both posting way early. I thought it was kinda evenly matched and I thought Pablo had it easy till I started reading some of Sir's lines. Sir made a run at him spitting strong the first 6 lines but I feel like he came up a lil bit short with the second half of his verse by a rhyme or two. The rocky thing coulda been worded a lil better(GET STOPPED IN 3?), I wasn't really feeling the second sportsfan insult as much as the first an the closer wasn't nothing that stood out.


    Shut me outta win? LOL, maybe not victim
    cuzz I’ll take ya thin subject matters & pick da lock wit’em
    ^ ^ I LIKED THAT
    suggest u quit dreamin, cuzz ya average at best
    Yes, even sleepwalking u won’t stand out from tha Rest
    ^ ^GOOD
    what r u like 7-20 lifetime, dat’s a shame punk
    how da fuck u a threat with a rec. resembling a X-Games stunt
    ^ ^LOL THAT MADE ME CHUCKLE
    treat punches like bar-hoppin as dey land & hit’em
    so call dis anotha Knight out, when I give Sir Ebral a aneurism
    ^ ^I'MA GIVE THIS ONE A PASS AND QUOTE IT EVEN THO I THOUGHT YOU
    COULDA SET THE SECOND LINE UP ALOT BETTER



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    I guess this is a step up from facin' a muppet
    But look at his avatar, dudes a rapist or somethin
    Need some help not lookin so gay to the public?
    Next time you get raped, dont look like you blatently loved it
    ^ ^THAT WAS A NICE ASS 4 LINE MULTI RIGHT THERE
    Congratz on undefeat, but please, don't open ya mouth
    Ya got Lotus this bout
    An you wouldnt beat sportsfan if half his votes didnt count
    ^ ^GOOD PERSONAL EVEN THO I PERSONALLY THO PABLO WON THAT
    OTHER VOTERS WAS TRIPPIN IN THAT THREAD. GOOD JAB N.E WAYZ
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  13. Sir. Ebral

    Sir. Ebral Sir. Ebral Bright

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    Word, Pab, I think we all speak in subliminals

    ^Lol, my bad homie, his record is 2-0 so this is his third week battling and I said he thinks he's Rocky off no losses, I'ma do him like the Rocky movies shoulda got done and he get's stopped at three.
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  14. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    over no-shows.
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  15. Eusich

    Eusich the incredible.

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    pablo, consistently decent for the most part, a few lines were pushing it like the x-games but you actually had some good concepts stuck in there like the Doug Fresh line, overall this was better than most other bottom feeders, definitely opposite of what i expected from a pablo bazooka

    sir, the rocky was a bit played, stretched, and corny, everything above it was a waste of time, nothing really hit and no concepts were notable, everything below it was the same, i just didn't dig this too much, i mean it wasn't wack mechanically but conceptually this was low

    vote.. pablo
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  16. Pablo BaZooka

    Pablo BaZooka Ka-BOOM Beoutchess!!

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    4 or 5 votes, dat's gay.
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  17. T.a.C

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    damn pablo its almost like you went easy on me when we battled. lol.

    yo, pablo came with some serious heat. i thought he was gonna win,then i read sir's verse. goddamn. that made this battle tough. all in all i think sir ebral won this. good job to both of you

    some of my favorite lines were:

    pablo:

    what r u like 7-20 lifetime, dat’s a shame punk
    how da fuck u a threat with a rec. resembling a X-Games stunt


    sir:

    Need some help not lookin so gay to the public?
    Next time you get raped, dont look like you blatently loved it

    Congratz on undefeat, but please, don't open ya mouth
    Ya got Lotus this bout
    An you wouldnt beat sportsfan if half his votes didnt count

    New rank system, you bout drop fourty through the floor, fam
    Least it aint a shut out, youll always have TorrMup an SportsFan


    vote-sir
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  18. _KDP_

    _KDP_ Active Member

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    Shut me outta win? LOL, maybe not victim
    cuzz I’ll take ya thin subject matters & pick da lock wit’em
    ok
    U’ll neva be a success, ya too lame & faggoty
    so go head, take ya shot, u’ll misfortune n aim fa tragedy
    eh
    suggest u quit dreamin, cuzz ya average at best
    Yes, even sleepwalking u won’t stand out from tha Rest
    ok
    what r u like 7-20 lifetime, dat’s a shame punk
    how da fuck u a threat with a rec. resembling a X-Games stunt
    lmao
    treat punches like bar-hoppin as dey land & hit’em
    so call dis anotha Knight out, when I give Sir Ebral a aneurism
    good
    a ready shotty left “Lotty Dotty” with his mug bless’d
    ...so trust dat dis slugfest gotcha grave Doug Fresh.
    nah




    I guess this is a step up from facin' a muppet
    But look at his avatar, dudes a rapist or somethin
    lol
    Need some help not lookin so gay to the public?
    Next time you get raped, dont look like you blatently loved it
    eh
    Congratz on undefeat, but please, don't open ya mouth
    Ya got Lotus this bout
    An you wouldnt beat sportsfan if half his votes didnt count
    lol
    Jokin me clown? Hes got to be, I got this lock an keyed
    2 wins an you Rocky? Please.
    Do you like they shoulda did Rocky, get stopped in three
    ok
    New rank system, you bout drop fourty through the floor, fam
    Least it aint a shut out, youll always have TorrMup an SportsFan
    lol
    But no more, man. No bark, no bite, ya not at all ferocious
    12 lines best fa all tha votas
    ^I meant that ya almost tollerable in smaller doses
    cool

    pablo had the best and worst line of the match- sir ebral had the consistency. nice work on 'short' notice by both of yall.

    vote-sir ebral
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  19. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    Sir. Ebral wins, 4-3 in votes
    Sir fails to post links
    Pablo BaZooka wins, 3-(-1)
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