[WK/70] 5 Pain 4-1 v. 6 Yung Troy 7-4 (Vote!)

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  1. Xquisite

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    OFFICIAL RULES & REGULATIONS


    DEADLINES​


    The deadline for verses is Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Saturday @ 11:59pm EST.
    The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59pm EST.​


    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
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    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.​


    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - The second competitor must match or post less than the first competitor, but in no case can the second competitor exceed the first competitor.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​
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  2. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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  3. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-...1-karisma-12-7-v-2-pain-3-0-karisma-wins.html

    ^sad

    why am I predicted to lose to this tramp?
    when he lost to a guy who wasn't worthy of being fill in champ
    c'mon fam, damn, you got your ass dismantled
    we were hoping Kargo...but shit, he just became baggage you couldn't handle
    And don't bother dropping text because the shit will suck balls
    you'd need beef, turkey, and lots of other seasonings to say it's hot dog
    Cos everything you write is stretched and flawed
    Your words such a force, voters think their reading Newton's law
    You better build some stronger walls around those punch combinations
    cos damn, my words are wrecking balls tearing down their foundation
    my back hurts from smashing ya moms, she was easy
    ^But fuck a Pain Metasin< and you'll need that guy to tag team just to beat me

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  4. .:Pain:.

    .:Pain:. Futurely J. Keeper

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    Yung Troy, ain't I already throttle you son?
    When my sick punches left your body riddled with sick ole cells, like prodigy's blood?
    I already dominated you in BOTH leagues you fuckin' bitch,
    So apparently the only thing you can beat me at is suckin' dick,
    I only lost once to a champ, I shoulda beat 'em that week,
    You lost four times as much, and all to people I beat,
    Call me Achilles, invincible, I'll burn him to ashes with the flow son,
    Just to make Yung Troy look a lot more like the old one,
    So I finally get your name, before, it went by me,
    Cuz everytime you battle, you lose, and cats ask, Why, T?
    But I'll flip you around a bit, for you, it may seem nice,
    Cuz I'll walk away with another victory, and just say ty...
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  5. Wordp1ay

    Wordp1ay the realest right

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    I already dominated you in BOTH leagues you fuckin' bitch,
    So apparently the only thing you can beat me at is suckin' dick,

    Yo this line make it look as if you suck dick too but he just better at it....

    yung: it seems as if you rushed the verse to get iter done...didnt really flow well and none of the lines were thorough

    pain: had a cool verse flowed much better then yungs


    I only lost once to a champ, I shoulda beat 'em that week,
    You lost four times as much, and all to people I beat,

    best line of the match


    vote pain
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  6. Betty*Beretta

    Betty*Beretta New Member

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    TROY:

    I thought your opener was a pretty nice dig, I saw were you were going with Kargo line as well. The other lines were ok but not very hard hitting. Didn't really like the hot dog line and the closer was badly worded.

    PAIN:

    I didn't really think you came with many hard punches either. You had two lines that stuck out to me. The opener and closer were a little ehhh.

    In the end, it came down to:

    why am I predicted to lose to this tramp?
    when he lost to a guy who wasn't worthy of being fill in champ
    my back hurts from smashing ya moms, she was easy
    ^But fuck a Pain Metasin< and you'll need that guy to tag team just to beat me

    vs

    I only lost once to a champ, I shoulda beat 'em that week,
    You lost four times as much, and all to people I beat,
    So I finally get your name, before, it went by me,
    Cuz everytime you battle, you lose, and cats ask, Why, T?

    In the end VOTE= PAIN





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  7. Xquisite

    Xquisite Guest

    up 2-0 Pain
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  8. Link Gash

    Link Gash that ninja

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    Pain got this, feeling the dominating both leagues and the old Troy lines most. Nice and personal. Closer was clever wordplay off his name too. I've seen Troy come significantly better than he did here, it did seemed like you rushed this together this week as the end of your verse suffered the brunt of that.

    Ive got Pain winning.
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  9. Ivy League

    Ivy League A League of his Own......

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    pain won this....its was newton and foundation vs Why T and Achilles
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  10. 3rdeye

    3rdeye is open

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    yeah.. pain won.. gotta agree here, he just hit harder

    these won it for me

    I already dominated you in BOTH leagues you fuckin' bitch,
    So apparently the only thing you can beat me at is suckin' dick,
    I only lost once to a champ, I shoulda beat 'em that week,
    You lost four times as much, and all to people I beat,
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  11. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    YT

    c'mon fam, damn, you got your ass dismantled
    we were hoping Kargo...but shit, he just became baggage you couldn't handle
    And don't bother dropping text because the shit will suck balls
    you'd need beef, turkey, and lots of other seasonings to say it's hot dog
    Cos everything you write is stretched and flawed
    Your words such a force, voters think their reading Newton's law

    I thought the kargo line was cool..the hot dog was okay and the newtown law was good IMO

    Pain

    I only lost once to a champ, I shoulda beat 'em that week,
    You lost four times as much, and all to people I beat,
    Call me Achilles, invincible, I'll burn him to ashes with the flow son,
    Just to make Yung Troy look a lot more like the old one,
    So I finally get your name, before, it went by me,
    Cuz everytime you battle, you lose, and cats ask, Why, T?
    But I'll flip you around a bit, for you, it may seem nice,
    Cuz I'll walk away with another victory, and just say ty...

    the personals seemed good..name flips were cool...they seemed basic but still flipped well

    my vote Pain but not by much....troy came with some good lines..the kargo line was nice but pain had a bit more..
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