[WK/61] 13 Dark-Vybe 3-3 v. 14 tbone 1-1 (Dark Vybe Wins)

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  1. Xquisite

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    [01] - The deadline for verses is Friday @ 10:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Saturday @ 10:59pm EST.
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    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
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  2. Dark-Vybe

    Dark-Vybe Active Member

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    16

    dont take all week
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  3. Dark-Vybe

    Dark-Vybe Active Member

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    we all heard ya mom took a shit thru her cervix
    u were it!
    but the fucked part is she was 11- fugly n still a virgin!!!//
    still a whore.. Vybe a carnavor, wit TBone i cant go wrong?
    but he dont hold weight, im better off orderin a $5 footlong//
    i met the bitch behind Barny when i was 5, an whoa!
    did u know its the same fag- asshole ginst the glory hole- known as TBone!!!//
    seems he likes ta play dressup.. so i decked him out
    he woke up excited ta find i dressed him inna hospital gown//
    last week Chase was a bitch, but now that W u own it?
    thats funny cus now dudes livin in his 1 RBL defining moment!//
    TBones fruity.. nah, more like a peice of cake!
    my research was readin his last 2 verses.. now i gotta fuckin toothache!//
    dude you played n dumbed out, far from a major score
    beatin Vybe, ur better off tryina run a couch outta revolving door//
    14, ill give ya 2 more, undress in the Dark Room
    ill let ya keep the cred for Developing halloweens next scariest costume!!//
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  4. tbone

    tbone Well-Known Member

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    Aight....


    Ya Dark Vybe don't touch or reach
    ya structure incomplete ya Shyt weak
    not speak'n airbag when i say, that i got this win in the bag
    ya Should watch how ya brag
    cause the Ammo ya spit never seen'n the mag
    ya get ignore like ratings in the vibe
    heard he was nasif so what ya try'n hide
    ya life 1 big question mark like guests
    do ya like xquisite wit records, leave ya like the rest
    I'll close caption ya luck in this winning feud
    than take ya heart like a pup thru this picture tube
    after this ya lay stiff wit chills sweating like a ice cube
    have ya like Arsenal after a lost worrying bout views
    he don't spell he type #s' out think'n its unique
    it'll probably gotten a pass, if you wasn't ass in the league
    BUT!
    Ya record do show & prove, that only No shows tolerate you
    so wit this and^ that heres my opinion like 2cents, FUCK YOU
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  5. guywithanaxe

    guywithanaxe fuck off

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    last week Chase was a bitch, but now that W u own it?
    thats funny cus now dudes livin in his 1 RBL defining moment!//
    TBones fruity.. nah, more like a peice of cake!
    my research was readin his last 2 verses.. now i gotta fuckin toothache!//

    vs nothin.

    the 2 lines of DV I quoted were his best... he had many more good concepts than tbone. a lot of which kinda trailed off, but all in all the 2 bars landed nicely in comparison to nothing really doing any damage at all in Tbones verse...

    t bone seemed a bit basic with some of his meta4s(ie: "sweating like an ice cube" lol) and well multi's weren't his strong suit either...

    vote - dark vybe
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  6. trichomes

    trichomes 76

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    last week Chase was a bitch, but now that W u own it?
    thats funny cus now dudes livin in his 1 RBL defining moment!//
    TBones fruity.. nah, more like a peice of cake!
    my research was readin his last 2 verses.. now i gotta fuckin toothache!//

    vs

    not speak'n airbag when i say, that i got this win in the bag


    lol I tried. I just think Dark took this easy with a better structure and punches. Flow was decent and his verse was just better overall. Good battle and nice win dark.
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  7. RAWz

    RAWz *******

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    last week Chase was a bitch, but now that W u own it?
    thats funny cus now dudes livin in his 1 RBL defining moment!//
    TBones fruity.. nah, more like a peice of cake!
    my research was readin his last 2 verses.. now i gotta fuckin toothache!//

    vs

    not speak'n airbag when i say, that i got this win in the bag
    ya Should watch how ya brag
    cause the Ammo ya spit never seen'n the mag

    Not really what I was anticipating when matches when up this week. Not very entertaining. tbone didnt' have any real hard hitting punches, Vybe was more consistant.

    Vote~ Dark-Vybe
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  8. -Fac3-

    -Fac3- Will punch the shit out u

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    Dark
    we all heard ya mom took a shit thru her cervix
    u were it!
    but the fucked part is she was 11- fugly n still a virgin!!!//
    ^^Thought the set up hit harder than the punch here...

    still a whore.. Vybe a carnavor, wit TBone i cant go wrong?
    but he dont hold weight, im better off orderin a $5 footlong//
    ^^didn't like it.

    i met the bitch behind Barny when i was 5, an whoa!
    did u know its the same fag- asshole ginst the glory hole- known as TBone!!!//
    ^^Nope

    seems he likes ta play dressup.. so i decked him out
    he woke up excited ta find i dressed him inna hospital gown//
    ^^lol, how you worded it made this come off retarded

    last week Chase was a bitch, but now that W u own it?
    thats funny cus now dudes livin in his 1 RBL defining moment!//
    ^^Ehhh, best so far though

    TBones fruity.. nah, more like a peice of cake!
    my research was readin his last 2 verses.. now i gotta fuckin toothache!//
    ^^Worded wrong, nah

    dude you played n dumbed out, far from a major score
    beatin Vybe, ur better off tryina run a couch outta revolving door//
    ^^Haha, ok

    14, ill give ya 2 more, undress in the Dark Room
    ill let ya keep the cred for Developing halloweens next scariest costume!!//
    ^^Nah

    Overall, and I hate to be so brutally honest, but that was terrible. Some ok ideas here and there, but worded so horribly...it didn't even matter, sorry man, keep elevating..

    T bone
    Ya Dark Vybe don't touch or reach
    ya structure incomplete ya Shyt weak
    ^^Here we go....again

    not speak'n airbag when i say, that i got this win in the bag
    ya Should watch how ya brag
    cause the Ammo ya spit never seen'n the mag
    ^^If you meant the Rbl mag, then ehhh

    ya get ignore like ratings in the vibe
    heard he was nasif so what ya try'n hide
    ^^zzzzzz

    ya life 1 big question mark like guests
    do ya like xquisite wit records, leave ya like the rest
    ^^.......

    I'll close caption ya luck in this winning feud
    than take ya heart like a pup thru this picture tube
    ^^Chase, is that you???

    after this ya lay stiff wit chills sweating like a ice cube
    have ya like Arsenal after a lost worrying bout views
    ^^Miss

    he don't spell he type #s' out think'n its unique
    it'll probably gotten a pass, if you wasn't ass in the league
    ^^umm...

    BUT!
    Ya record do show & prove, that only No shows tolerate you
    so wit this and^ that heres my opinion like 2cents, FUCK YOU
    ^^I sorta liked^that,lol but the actual punch of it missed for me...

    NOt any better than DV's verse and it was probably worse.

    Not a very good read here, you both need quite a bit of work...Keep on it though.

    Vote - DV for having two punches, kind of.
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  9. Dark-Vybe

    Dark-Vybe Active Member

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    no fac3, looool


    drunk
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  10. -Fac3-

    -Fac3- Will punch the shit out u

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    lmfao....
    Did I just read that you are .... nevermind..
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  11. Scales

    Scales I hold weight here

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    tbone you seem to have decent concepts but you be leaving out wording or something so sometimes i dont sound right

    dark vibe you have some good tools but i think u need to have better concepts. you have the format down good though and i think you won off the strength of your flow and structure minus the ///// and !!!! all over....but anyway im gonna have to go with...

    vote- Dark Vibe
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  12. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    Dv,

    seems he likes ta play dressup.. so i decked him out
    he woke up excited ta find i dressed him inna hospital gown
    last week Chase was a bitch, but now that W u own it?
    thats funny cus now dudes livin in his 1 RBL defining moment
    dude you played n dumbed out, far from a major score
    beatin Vybe, ur better off tryina run a couch outta revolving door

    tbone,

    nothin

    man you really need to work on putting punches in your verse cos all I'm seeing is flow..this was like some stuff someone would freestyle off the dome but in text form...DV punches were aight for what this match was worth but he needs to step it up also

    v-DV
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  13. Xquisite

    Xquisite Guest

    Dark Vybe wins 6-0 KO
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