Wk-6 5. As Seen On Tv 3-0 -vs- 6. Gundam 4-1

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  1. King Grimet

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  2. 12 im in this mothafucka
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  3. This Leagues Ready For a Takeover, Even Tho Dude's Not Ether
    He's On Top, Until I Throw Gun To the Ground like Surrender Proceedures
    Watch Niggas Get Injured For Leisure, He Suffers From Feminen Bleedin
    I Promise You a Loss,...Lyrical Gentlemens Agreement
    I'll Crack His Teeth With the Cement, If I Catch Dun in the Street
    Call him Shawn Marion, They Just Don't Trust Son With the Heat
    I Shape My Cattle, I'm Runnin This Beef Just for the Fun Man
    He Thought It Was a Fist Fight, Too Bad King(Grimlet) Left Me With a Gun Damn(...)
    Yea My Verses' Main Focus is Firearms, I Don't Have Enuff Time To Say What Ya Bars is Lackin
    But That's My Job, So Ima Fire Gun like a Target Practice
    And Wifey Said You Comin Up Short, When She Outta Them Vic Panties
    Matter Of Fact, On Their Honeymoon She Rented, Why Did I Get Married?
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  4. Gundam

    Gundam that G..

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    sorry about not checking in, i'm here though.
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  5. Gundam

    Gundam that G..

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    its Gundam, not GUNDAMN lol....


    you add an N ? spell my name right queer
    seriously ...
    your at an end, cause your winning streak stops here
    you throwing punches, but i can grapple and lock better
    so if we mash out, bet you'll tap out like brock lesnar
    so quit the gun talk, noone believing you, please
    your faker then mostly everything thats seen on tv
    and your names ridiculous, fuck what this fag brings
    i'll throw punches till his head resembles a flat screen
    you got fan support ? its funny you have some
    we all bet you were nice ...
    and we all lost money on that one
    son you ugly as fuck, wonder why your girl put up with you, nigga
    i guess she looks beneath the surface, sorta like gza


    yup.
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  6. upppn 4 votes

    and its called wordplay...u shud try it
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  7. Moe Green

    Moe Green brokeback molehill

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    I'll Crack His Teeth With the Cement, If I Catch Dun in the Street
    Call him Shawn Marion, They Just Don't Trust Son With the Heat

    only line of ASOT i liked



    you got fan support ? its funny you have some
    we all bet you were nice ...
    and we all lost money on that one

    only line i liked from gundam


    real weak battle here

    but of the lines i didnt like, gundams were less bad


    V/ Gundam
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  8. Everest

    Everest E=MC Eat my Shorts

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    Vote-- Tv

    Really don't need to explain.. if you force me i will, but i don't think i should have too.......


    Fine---
    Gundam-- write your lines right,, what's with you dudes try to accent your punches by putting the end one line down,, it's stupid and makes the flow feel fucked up..His name leaves so much room.. and your flat screen line was your best effort.. NOT GOOD...you open with "spell my name right"? dude...Grade= D-

    As seen on TV-- really focused on wordplay,, and focused on spinnin his name.. wASN'T THE BEST READ OF MY LIFE, but you did above average and plenty enough to win in my opinon. Grade= B
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  9. 1-1 uppn 4 votes
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  10. MIC'ed Up

    MIC'ed Up Don't talk Just Spit

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    T.V.:
    I'll Crack His Teeth With the Cement, If I Catch Dun in the Street
    Call him Shawn Marion, They Just Don't Trust Son With the Heat

    that line did the job

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    Gundam:
    and your names ridiculous, fuck what this fag brings
    i'll throw punches till his head resembles a flat screen

    More lines like this please

    T.V. was a bit more focused even though he had generic gun talk wit nice vocab good word placement and aight flow. Gundam complaining about wordplay isn't a diss but you had some okay lines nothing outstanding. Besides that one quotable your other lines weren't direct kinda mediocre ya know.

    Vote:T.V.
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  12. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    Up over closed threads
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  13. Schadenfreude

    Schadenfreude da nigga, Sha-Fue-Diggidy

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    versus

    Overall one-sided, Gun iced A.S.on.T.V. fairly easy, no hate, but Vote - Gundam.
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  14. Name play.

    Name play. Abuser title.

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    people, youre in the rbl top 20. cmon.

    i read both verses (in a matter of seconds). none of the concepts slowed me down where i was like "woah that was nice i need to read that again.

    im gonna say as seen on tv impressed me a lil more. just gave me the impression of bein a little more of an educated verse.

    v - as seen on tv
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  15. 4Matt

    4Matt On the money

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    Wow, both were weak.

    I didn't know what to expect from ASOT, but i seen Gun drop way harder than this before.

    ASOT, you tried too hard with the nameplays, some worked well and some didn't.

    Gun, you just didnt try at all really, well atleast thats what it looked like but your verse was more smoother and connected a little better to me so...

    Vote goes to Gun.
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  16. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    This was an even matched battle to be honest here. Both came with some okay lines, some filler lines from both of you as well.

    As Seen On TV - Okay verse at best. You maintained a decent flow throughout with some good structure to your lines. I kinda liked the target practice line the best.. But that GunDamn... lines was garbo. Sorry.

    Gundam - That flat screen line was funny. Not really HARD, but made me laugh. Kind of witty, too. With a better setup would have made for a nice, hard hitting bar. The gamble line was cool, too. You also maintained a better flow as well. I don't think you should do that 3 line combo though - it does nothing when you don't have a good setup that requires that extra 2 syllables.

    Vote - Gundam
    Better structure of Verse. Flow was better the whole verse.

    pz.
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  17. Gundam

    Gundam that G..

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  18. King Grimet

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    4-3 Gundam Wins
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