[WK/6] 3 Sur. 3-0 v. 4 William 2-0 (Sur. wins)

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  1. Xquisite

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    OFFICIAL RULES & REGULATIONS​



    DEADLINES​


    The deadline for verses is Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Saturday @ 11:59pm EST.
    The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59pm EST.​


    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
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    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - The second competitor must match or post less than the first competitor, but in no case can the second competitor exceed the first competitor.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​
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  2. Sur*5*ILL

    Sur*5*ILL Kangs

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  3. William

    William William Mufucka!!

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  4. Sur*5*ILL

    Sur*5*ILL Kangs

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    Dear William/Bill/Billy/Faggot



    Um.....gay?



    This fag traveled to Boston to convince me to try an orgy..
    Haven’t heard of such a Bean stalk since Jack and the Giant story;
    Nah, that ain’t me.. Will likes S&M heightened and naughty..
    Nig’s so desperate, if momentum ‘swings’.. he invites it to parties;
    I’m a loose cannon.. and shots extend in gays..
    Hence, I’ll fire at Will like aliens in Independence Day;
    Might not faze dude.. he’s past an amateur..
    Since he’s routinely staring down a barrel.. removing trash as a janitor;
    I sold Quentin Tarantino a script ‘bout a fag, coward groupie..
    Now what I do in this battle is in two volumes of two-hour movies;
    Nig won’t admit he’s awful.. but this bitch has a sure tell..
    In denial ‘bout being washed up & downplays it as dripping in Purell;
    I throttle muhfuckas.. although a few less wimps..
    And I’ve ripped many Bills.. you’re just the first not from the US mint;
    Your hard work as a gymnast came true from an actual dream..
    All that flipping on uneven bars.. you should try out for the National Team;
    Your return’s getting tarnished.. against Sur you get demolished..
    Under pressure, Bill folds like alternatives to wallets;
    I’m trying to correct all these lies about you cuz sorry..
    If you’re Will da Beast.. I’m in a Jeep hunting out on Safari;



    Fuck outta here you mediocre piece of shit.

    DIE
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  5. Will-Hova

    Will-Hova New Member

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    little less swagger in ya step after that verse...

    if you read this bitch's verse you'd believe he's hating gays
    tried to reach his status, but his facebook page status says he's dating dave
    this guys been a hasbeen... it was once said that Sur was good at rappin
    so i searched the league archives for dope 5 verses and look what happened
    I'm bout to turn the heat up so you'll either burn or melt
    no need to look for shade since youre in the shadow of your former self
    couldnt hack it wit the best then, why try n fuck wit me now?
    smack you off the board so hard, niggaz'll fight for the rebound
    check the stats, rooks in awe, vets be like "thats great"
    survival? nope. forced wordplay? yup. peep ya name for fuck sake
    this bum nigga good as me? confess, surely the child does jest
    Will, fucka, I Am Legend... and this rat? 5-ill Goes West
    Enemy of States... do the comparison, im epic with the literature
    even sur pays homage to me just look at his signature
    i injure nerds, u never been champ, u in a wretched state
    sad part is youve been in the league a fuckin decade straight
    lets be real, the league needs sur like earthworms need the salt
    im postin earth shaking lines, but you losing, well thats your fault
    make one wrong move... trust, ya swallowed to the core
    and it aint the recession but 5 dont give u what it did before


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  6. ShadofDarkness

    ShadofDarkness New Member

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    Ummm .. not a bad battle man.

    Will,

    I liked ya decade straight line, earthquake was pretty dope too and one or two other bars were nice, but the beginning of ya verse was a tad average man.

    Sur,

    Think the overall verse was pretty solid, few good bars, consistent though and a tad more polished than my mans. Janitor and Swing lines were dope.

    Vote goes to Sur, based on a smoother approach and more consistency. Will had some dope shit, then had some kinda garbage in there too.


    Adios.


    S.O.D
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  7. Nevik Mik

    Nevik Mik New Member

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    Will:

    Dope...the 5ill Goes West line...the recession line...forced wordplay line...it was personal..I liked it

    Sur:

    Fairly consistent with the punches..dug the Independence day line..bean stalk..all the Bill references.

    This was tough and real close.

    V: Sur because of consistency. Both had some weak lines but Will's weak ones were well..weaker. This was a tough vote, battle was real close, almost could've gone either way..
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  8. *NativeTongue*

    *NativeTongue* New Member

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    good battle, i got sur takin' it though.

    ill will had more than a few nice bars but some weren't hittin at all and that's what broke it for him

    sur had a consistent verse with only a few duds, that janitor line was probably the best of the battle

    good shit fellas
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  9. Xquisite

    Xquisite Guest

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  10. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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    Nah, that ain’t me.. Will likes S&M heightened and naughty..
    Nig’s so desperate, if momentum ‘swings’.. he invites it to parties;
    ^clever

    I throttle muhfuckas.. although a few less wimps..
    And I’ve ripped many Bills.. you’re just the first not from the US mint;
    ^ the first line read like "im forcing it but just wait"
    and I did too find out the second was refreshing

    vs.

    make one wrong move... trust, ya swallowed to the core
    and it aint the recession but 5 dont give u what it did before
    ^cool



    Sur's verse read very fluently and had a few nice jabs here and
    there. I think Will conceptually knew he threw more punches
    and he did, they just didn't land as hard. A close match which is
    good because I hate voting on blow-outs, unless I really need to
    vote then their appealing. lol Anyways fun times, goodluck to both of
    you next week.

    vote- Sur
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  11. T.a.C

    T.a.C Guest

    pretty nice battle. both dudes came hard, no homo. i liked sur's swinger line and the uneven bar line. william had the word play line, the one with the rat pic, the one about being in the league for a decade, and the closer which was line of the battle, in my opinion. very tight one, but i gotta give it to william
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  12. Xquisite

    Xquisite Guest

    Sur.

    This fag traveled to Boston to convince me to try an orgy..
    Haven’t heard of such a Bean stalk since Jack and the Giant story;
    - meh, I was expecting some clownish type shit with this opener and it fell flat
    Nah, that ain’t me.. Will likes S&M heightened and naughty..
    Nig’s so desperate, if momentum ‘swings’.. he invites it to parties;
    - k...nothing too hard hitting
    I’m a loose cannon.. and shots extend in gays..
    Hence, I’ll fire at Will like aliens in Independence Day;
    -.....................C'MON MAN
    Might not faze dude.. he’s past an amateur..
    Since he’s routinely staring down a barrel.. removing trash as a janitor;
    -- coo I dig
    I sold Quentin Tarantino a script ‘bout a fag, coward groupie..
    Now what I do in this battle is in two volumes of two-hour movies;
    -- lol, nah fam
    Nig won’t admit he’s awful.. but this bitch has a sure tell..
    In denial ‘bout being washed up & downplays it as dripping in Purell;
    - aight
    I throttle muhfuckas.. although a few less wimps..
    And I’ve ripped many Bills.. you’re just the first not from the US mint;
    - swag was there...nothing hard hitting though
    Your hard work as a gymnast came true from an actual dream..
    All that flipping on uneven bars.. you should try out for the National Team;
    -- coo
    Your return’s getting tarnished.. against Sur you get demolished..
    Under pressure, Bill folds like alternatives to wallets;
    -- k
    I’m trying to correct all these lies about you cuz sorry..
    If you’re Will da Beast.. I’m in a Jeep hunting out on Safari;
    -- nice

    vs.

    Will,

    if you read this bitch's verse you'd believe he's hating gays
    tried to reach his status, but his facebook page status says he's dating dave
    -- jesus christ......"if you read this bitch's verse you'd believe he's hating gays" his verse is dissing you, therefore you are calling yourself gay...smh.....you tried to reach his status of dating dave? you fucked up big time.....I thought that quote from sur was a joke until I read this opener...you need to think about wtf you are saying.
    this guys been a hasbeen... it was once said that Sur was good at rappin
    so i searched the league archives for dope 5 verses and look what happened
    -- k
    I'm bout to turn the heat up so you'll either burn or melt
    no need to look for shade since youre in the shadow of your former self
    -- eh ok...he's not as good as he used to be
    couldnt hack it wit the best then, why try n fuck wit me now?
    smack you off the board so hard, niggaz'll fight for the rebound
    -- k
    check the stats, rooks in awe, vets be like "thats great"
    survival? nope. forced wordplay? yup. peep ya name for fuck sake
    -- coo
    this bum nigga good as me? confess, surely the child does jest
    Will, fucka, I Am Legend... and this rat? 5-ill Goes West
    -- no the fuck you didnt
    Enemy of States... do the comparison, im epic with the literature
    even sur pays homage to me just look at his signature
    -- weak swag, no punch
    i injure nerds, u never been champ, u in a wretched state
    sad part is youve been in the league a fuckin decade straight
    - k
    lets be real, the league needs sur like earthworms need the salt
    im postin earth shaking lines, but you losing, well thats your fault
    - nope
    make one wrong move... trust, ya swallowed to the core
    and it aint the recession but 5 dont give u what it did before
    -- saying the same thing as u did before...but this one was better.

    Sur got this....he had some cool ideas...consistency was an issue, but some shit was slick....William, I should kick you out the fuckin league for that opener...lol...nah, but you also had some decent ideas and just like Sur you were inconsistent...except, your missses were worse

    vote = Sur.
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