Wk-6 19. Magus via The Dark 1-0 -vs- 20. Charles 1-0

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  1. King Grimet

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  2. Katharsis

    Katharsis Fly......Plane and Simple

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    IN, 30 posting after work.
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  3. Charles

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    Katharsis Fly......Plane and Simple

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    Charles aint legend for nothin', fahreal theres reasons
    like lettin u delete ur verse, read mine, write another one, and STILL get beaten - Charles



    Ok i got the formula, i think im on it..
    i write a line, make sure theyre no punches, as long as it's long enough to beat my opponent..
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    but last week was a bore..this one will get live..
    cuz dannyc is wack as fuck..and you barely slid by..
    i find you wack...a fag with no time for snatch..
    last time he looked up a broad way..he got showtimes for cats..
    then you called yourself a legend..i bet not our kind..
    all lies...a legend to who?...even OZ got in the archives..
    youre played as fuck..that's why you lose a bunch..
    punchline?..more like you stood in a line to use that punch..
    ^^that's no lie.. plus you flip ..WITH the same words..
    so odds are..if i recycle..we might post the same verse..
    pick at ya style?..there isn't enough hardly to poke..
    hope?...No. i know 'nam vets that think charlie's a joke..
    he's non social...so girls?...he dont see those hoes..
    he only opens up to posters like the [ hide] vb code..
    no wonder..his grill is fucked, his teeth looking layers..
    hell.....even his head game's got a few crooked players..
    not even worried about charles..im ready to win..
    dan was a close match..i shutout somebody better than him..
    and you'll go from top 20..to the upper crust of failing..
    cuz most of the kwelity of his verses,...lies in the spelling..
    and you know what that means..his verse is ousted..
    chuck taylor doesn't make shoes...just skirts and blouses..
    i get read period..everytime im mentioned..
    charles has to wait 4 weeks to get that kinda attention..


    26..ive had a long day just match me​
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  5. Charles

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    Ayo.

    Ya'll KNOW where the sun dont shine.. down deep in a hole
    N its clear Magus got his screenname to show where he like the penis to go
    Plus ya other names meanful hoe, cuz ya girl choosin the bank..
    .. not for money but cuz Replica's always known for shootin blanks
    Aura was ill as champ, and you already admitted u not him
    But i stomped that dude too so at least now u got SOMETHIN in common
    U musta have a problem cuz these days ya crew is not so tight..
    Cuz everyone of them dudes 'cept you grew up and got a life

    Fucka,

    Ya the first to open ya legs to queers, this pervert is sick to me
    .. Magus the only bitch runnin for Bush-position worse than Hilary
    Murk you lyrically, i dont gotta count on my fame to be hot
    Cuz in this box ima household name.. ur household gotta name on the box
    Them dots in that verse show dudes mouth gotta speech problem
    & ima give so many stutter steps u'd think Jordan had trained on him
    This lame can't get laid, so he go sit and stare at the park..
    & now i dont think monsters are why kids say they scared of The Dark
    And Magus you wont win this back .. it's time to get served
    Only time you got a trick up ya sleeve is when ya moms iron ya shirt
    I bring fire to verse, while everything you write is weak
    Yeah u got the X-factor.. cuz ur lines are followed by Ys?.. Then Zs
    I read your stupid shit, and my man it's a fucking disgrace
    But i know u 'posed after work'.. for the guy who just bust on ya face
    And remember i get respect for the stuff stuff i've dropped for years
    Got love from my peers since the jump-off.. urs wud love u to jump off a pier

    I'm DONE with this queer. Murda is how im puttin it..
    You'd think im a journalist way i'll have a Magus seen with a bulletin

    Sleep.
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  6. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    Magus

    Ok i got the formula, i think im on it..
    i write a line, make sure theyre no punches, as long as it's long enough to beat my opponent..

    Funny opener, nothing too great but funny..

    youre played as fuck..that's why you lose a bunch..
    punchline?..more like you stood in a line to use that punch..
    ^^that's no lie.. plus you flip ..WITH the same words..
    so odds are..if i recycle..we might post the same verse..


    Liked these, the waiting in line to use that punch was dope.

    not even worried about charles..im ready to win..
    dan was a close match..i shutout somebody better than him..
    and you'll go from top 20..to the upper crust of failing..
    cuz most of the kwelity of his verses,...lies in the spelling..

    Dopppppe

    Charles

    U musta have a problem cuz these days ya crew is not so tight..
    Cuz everyone of them dudes 'cept you grew up and got a life

    Out of the first 8 lines, this was the only one i liked.. but this was nasty.
    great personal.

    I bring fire to verse, while everything you write is weak
    Yeah u got the X-factor.. cuz ur lines are followed by Ys?.. Then Zs

    Good concept.


    Vote - Magus..

    To be honest magus had quite a few played concepts & so did Charles, out of anyone in the league I would definitely expect you 2 veterans not to use too many played concepts.

    Magus had some funny lines, some missed but for the most part.. the verse got real dope towards the middle.

    Charles, seemed like a lot of filler, a few good personals really hit hard but I didn't like all the lines in between your few dope ones.

    Pretty close battle, Ima go with magus tho.

    good stuff.
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  7. Everest

    Everest E=MC Eat my Shorts

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    Aight let's see...

    Charles--
    [First 8 lines..] - I like em, well written, flow dragged a bit...one nice multi i saw...
    [Next 4] Hated the hillary line, was worded well..name on box line was kinda funny.
    [Next 4]ehh, Jordan line was ok , clever, stare at park, dark stuff was :(
    [Next] Nices.. Yand Z's.. I liked that.. ironing line pretty funny.
    [Last 6] Nothing amazing really here, bullentin, peer pier wordplay..
    alright lemme read magnus now.

    Magnus- Don't love the way you started out with the quote and stuff,, just don't love it.
    [First 4]ehh.. Danny C diss , fair personal. showtime for cats was fair play on words (broadway yeah i caught it)
    [Next 4] Ehh, nothing explosive here less i'm missing some personals. which i could be.
    [Next 4]same verse line was nice, so was nam vets, good 2 bars
    [Next 4]another good group. i don't know that code but it sounded funny, and the head games line was clever.
    [Next 4]not your best stuff here . "better than him? "
    [Next 4]again not your best in my opinion..

    Alright let me read both again and decide.. ok .. I'm defintley not saying this wasn't close. but after a second read ,i'm just go with my favorite..

    Vote=Charles
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  8. Flying Mariachi

    Flying Mariachi calamity!!

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    Ok i got the formula, i think im on it..
    i write a line, make sure theyre no punches, as long as it's long enough to beat my opponent..
    but last week was a bore..this one will get live..
    cuz dannyc is wack as fuck..and you barely slid by..
    i find you wack...a fag with no time for snatch..
    last time he looked up a broad way..he got showtimes for cats..
    then you called yourself a legend..i bet not our kind..
    all lies...a legend to who?...even OZ got in the archives..
    ^^that's no lie.. plus you flip ..WITH the same words..
    so odds are..if i recycle..we might post the same verse..
    pick at ya style?..there isn't enough hardly to poke..
    hope?...No. i know 'nam vets that think charlie's a joke..
    he's non social...so girls?...he dont see those hoes..
    he only opens up to posters like the [ hide] vb code..
    not even worried about charles..im ready to win..
    dan was a close match..i shutout somebody better than him..

    heat...from start to finish...really really digging magus' style here


    charles



    U musta have a problem cuz these days ya crew is not so tight..
    Cuz everyone of them dudes 'cept you grew up and got a life
    Murk you lyrically, i dont gotta count on my fame to be hot
    Cuz in this box ima household name.. ur household gotta name on the box
    And Magus you wont win this back .. it's time to get served
    Only time you got a trick up ya sleeve is when ya moms iron ya shirt
    And remember i get respect for the stuff stuff i've dropped for years
    Got love from my peers since the jump-off.. urs wud love u to jump off a pier


    shit son...this battle was dope as all hell

    charles tried to go the personal route and some were tight, but some were kinda lame

    magus just went hard from start to finish

    on punchlines and consistency

    i vote for magus
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  9. -=Blazin-Armor=-

    -=Blazin-Armor=- New Member

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  10. MIC'ed Up

    MIC'ed Up Don't talk Just Spit

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    Magus:
    and you know what that means..his verse is ousted..
    chuck taylor doesn't make shoes...just skirts and blouses..

    Well structure again was ya strong point but diss wise it was a lot of stuff I heard variations of. The old ya verse sucks approach and not having an ill twist on most of the material. After the joke about his teeth is where you picked it up but that 1st half of the verse was a little too old school and basic.

    Charles:
    Them dots in that verse show dudes mouth gotta speech problem
    & ima give so many stutter steps u'd think Jordan had trained on him

    I bring fire to verse, while everything you write is weak
    Yeah u got the X-factor.. cuz ur lines are followed by Ys?.. Then Zs

    The few personals you had hit harder even though they still weren't done impressively. Actually you used slightly more lyricism to ya verse while most of the time Magus was just saying statements. The kids scared of the dark line and moms ironing the shirt thing was the weak shit. Ya flow was on pace not better than his what carried you through this was lyricism & personals.

    Vote: Charles
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  11. DannyC

    DannyC Stay golden, pony boy.

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    one sided


    U musta have a problem cuz these days ya crew is not so tight..
    Cuz everyone of them dudes 'cept you grew up and got a life

    Murk you lyrically, i dont gotta count on my fame to be hot
    Cuz in this box ima household name.. ur household gotta name on the box

    I bring fire to verse, while everything you write is weak
    Yeah u got the X-factor.. cuz ur lines are followed by Ys?.. Then Zs




    vote = charles
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  12. Accoustics

    Accoustics New Member

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    vote magus. dope battle by the way, wasnt much to choose between you both, in the end it came down to what i found funnier and that was definately magus. the opener on magus was hilarious. nam vets, same verse, hide code, closer was good aswell. nice verse. the got a life line, ill. the real reason kids are afraid of the dark is funny, the x factor was cool and the bulletin line. good verse, i just feel magus was funnier.
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  13. Veeyo

    Veeyo V for Vendetta

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    Magus:

    Ok i got the formula, i think im on it..
    i write a line, make sure theyre no punches, as long as it's long enough to beat my opponent..
    .
    .
    .
    but last week was a bore..this one will get live..
    cuz dannyc is wack as fuck..and you barely slid by..
    i find you wack...a fag with no time for snatch..
    last time he looked up a broad way..he got showtimes for cats..
    then you called yourself a legend..i bet not our kind..
    all lies...a legend to who?...even OZ got in the archives..
    youre played as fuck..that's why you lose a bunch..
    punchline?..more like you stood in a line to use that punch..

    i think i seen that last line b4 but regardless all of that was pretty dope u was snappin on slim...there were others but i felt like u slowed down towards tha end

    Charles:

    U musta have a problem cuz these days ya crew is not so tight..
    Cuz everyone of them dudes 'cept you grew up and got a life

    nice

    Ya the first to open ya legs to queers, this pervert is sick to me
    .. Magus the only bitch runnin for Bush-position worse than Hilary
    Murk you lyrically, i dont gotta count on my fame to be hot
    Cuz in this box ima household name.. ur household gotta name on the box


    Both of those was pretty hott

    And Magus you wont win this back .. it's time to get served
    Only time you got a trick up ya sleeve is when ya moms iron ya shirt
    I bring fire to verse, while everything you write is weak
    Yeah u got the X-factor.. cuz ur lines are followed by Ys?.. Then Zs

    nice

    nice battle here fellas 4 real ya'll niggaz was snappin on each other wit some nice lines... can go either way as the votes already showin but ima have 2 go wit...
    vote:Magus
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  14. -=Blazin-Armor=-

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    danny forgot to quote this line..because it's the real reason he voted the way he did
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  15. Schadenfreude

    Schadenfreude da nigga, Sha-Fue-Diggidy

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    versus

    Overall Mag went hard in my humble opinion, Charles had some sick haymakers too, but was too inconsistant to match-up with Mag's back to back punches and with that said, Vote - Magus via The Dark.
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  16. battle line:

    I'm DONE with this queer. Murda is how im puttin it..
    You'd think im a journalist way i'll have a Magus seen with a bulletin

    ^^killer

    mag had a decent verse wit some nice personals to ride along but nothing really hit hard to take away from wat charles did

    charles on the other hand had some line lines to go along wit some not so nice ones, but i just think he came just harder overall to take this hands down

    vote-charles
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  17. Name play.

    Name play. Abuser title.

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    that nigga would murder you, son, thats why he didnt vote for you. not that lousy little cheap shot. this was so one sided it hurt readin it. your verse's rhyme scheme was nowhere near complex, not creative, no punches hit that hard except for this:

    "then you called yourself a legend..i bet not our kind..
    all lies...a legend to who?...even OZ got in the archives.."

    but that was a little off because youre not a legend. charles isnt either but his verse was way more creative.

    "I bring fire to verse, while everything you write is weak
    Yeah u got the X-factor.. cuz ur lines are followed by Ys?.. Then Zs"

    are u kidding?


    not even close.


    v- charles.
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  18. Name play.

    Name play. Abuser title.

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    and smh@ peoples on here bitchin about votes before the battles over.
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  19. Minfinity

    Minfinity aka bobbyfischerman

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    line by line

    magus
    Ok i got the formula, i think im on it..
    i write a line, make sure theyre no punches, as long as it's long enough to beat my opponent..
    haha you are good at clowning folks, this worked.


    but last week was a bore..this one will get live..
    cuz dannyc is wack as fuck..and you barely slid by..
    nice personal
    i find you wack...a fag with no time for snatch..
    last time he looked up a broad way..he got showtimes for cats..
    haha ok
    then you called yourself a legend..i bet not our kind..
    all lies...a legend to who?...even OZ got in the archives..
    haha ok
    youre played as fuck..that's why you lose a bunch..
    punchline?..more like you stood in a line to use that punch..
    played, but ok
    ^^that's no lie.. plus you flip ..WITH the same words..
    so odds are..if i recycle..we might post the same verse..
    fire
    pick at ya style?..there isn't enough hardly to poke..
    hope?...No. i know 'nam vets that think charlie's a joke..
    niceee
    he's non social...so girls?...he dont see those hoes..
    he only opens up to posters like the [ hide] vb code..
    no
    no wonder..his grill is fucked, his teeth looking layers..
    hell.....even his head game's got a few crooked players..
    ok
    not even worried about charles..im ready to win..
    dan was a close match..i shutout somebody better than him..
    haha
    and you'll go from top 20..to the upper crust of failing..
    cuz most of the kwelity of his verses,...lies in the spelling..
    eh
    and you know what that means..his verse is ousted..
    chuck taylor doesn't make shoes...just skirts and blouses..
    no
    i get read period..everytime im mentioned..
    charles has to wait 4 weeks to get that kinda attention..
    ok, ok

    i liked the verse, good at clowning your opponents, some lines were hot.. a few played lines and a few fillers.. but overall pretty good verse

    charles[/b]
    Ya'll KNOW where the sun dont shine.. down deep in a hole
    N its clear Magus got his screenname to show where he like the penis to go
    forced
    Plus ya other names meanful hoe, cuz ya girl choosin the bank..
    .. not for money but cuz Replica's always known for shootin blanks
    no
    Aura was ill as champ, and you already admitted u not him
    But i stomped that dude too so at least now u got SOMETHIN in common
    ok nice personal
    U musta have a problem cuz these days ya crew is not so tight..
    Cuz everyone of them dudes 'cept you grew up and got a life
    hahhaha hot

    Fucka,
    Ya the first to open ya legs to queers, this pervert is sick to me
    .. Magus the only bitch runnin for Bush-position worse than Hilary
    no
    Murk you lyrically, i dont gotta count on my fame to be hot
    Cuz in this box ima household name.. ur household gotta name on the box
    playyyyyyed
    Them dots in that verse show dudes mouth gotta speech problem
    & ima give so many stutter steps u'd think Jordan had trained on him
    no
    This lame can't get laid, so he go sit and stare at the park..
    & now i dont think monsters are why kids say they scared of The Dark
    played
    And Magus you wont win this back .. it's time to get served
    Only time you got a trick up ya sleeve is when ya moms iron ya shirt
    ok, ok
    I bring fire to verse, while everything you write is weak
    Yeah u got the X-factor.. cuz ur lines are followed by Ys?.. Then Zs
    hahah nicee
    I read your stupid shit, and my man it's a fucking disgrace
    But i know u 'posed after work'.. for the guy who just bust on ya face
    are you serious?
    And remember i get respect for the stuff stuff i've dropped for years
    Got love from my peers since the jump-off.. urs wud love u to jump off a pier
    no

    I'm DONE with this queer. Murda is how im puttin it..
    You'd think im a journalist way i'll have a Magus seen with a bulletin
    eh, flipped alright i guess kinda forced tho'

    pretty good verse the x-factor lines and gotta life lines were hot but you had a little of played concepts and filler lines.

    vote=Magus
    reason: i think that Charles had some real hot lines probably the line of the battle but he dropped without consistency. Magus just pawned the dude w/ his comical approach.
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  20. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    6-5 Magus wins
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