Wk-6 1. Doc Richards 5-0 -vs- 2. Servical 4-1 *Title Match*

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  1. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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  2. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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    Lets drop 30, Good Luck.
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  3. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    there is not a chance in hell i am dropping 30

    you will get 16, and youll be lucky to get those
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  4. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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    shut up, and drop 20.
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  5. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    "your futures '8 miles' down, so listen you bitch
    last time we heard you...
    we were 'forced to listen to some individual, metaphysical' shit"- Servical


    it's fact that anyone with that stretched flow aint winnin...
    if ya whole verse was the 3 line style, youd test the post length limit
    if those his straight lines, then im foldin him
    verse a bigger collection of wack shit than grimet's punchline pandemonium
    won 4 times and now yall startin to think that this slut kills?
    if them wins dont bring our attention to the no show problem, then what will?!?
    might i suggest that you cry for the pin, n really vie for the win
    cuz after this, youll need a few more no shows to try it again
    even in the rankings with me, he's gone blank from the steeze
    but just try and think for a second...
    cause thats the highest youll ever be ranked in this league
    a dare to find someone whos read any of his flows from a bar...
    how can you be the #2 head and STILL NO ONE KNOWS WHO YOU ARE
    i know in recent battles, you havent been able to follow my rhymes clown
    but since you aint votin this week i no longer have to dumb my lines down
    we aint even on the same level, make sure you hear me, bro
    trumpin chrit was ya careers highlight - i beat his ass three years ago
    i realize i done ran through dude...so ill give this man the truth
    ive beat people, whove beat people that could handle YOU
    to think i needa try to beat this wack guy?, please
    my W column just got a talentless white ho...
    suddenly that shits the black eyed peas
    As soon as i got on, your dead...this shit is a lock
    ill put a knot on your head that could tie your contendership to the dock


    game.set.match
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  6. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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    lol, son why you lie'd for ?


    i dont understand this geeky fag flowing
    if he dumb his lines down any more...
    we'll need someone to translate his speech and hand motions
    copying swagger ? we know where you get it from you geek
    i guess charles ain't the only one facing a replica this week
    i'd set up your defeat, but its already done ...
    your verse did an imitation of your personality and was boring as fuck
    i dont know if you wanna lose or have us nodding off, but yo
    that verse did a multi task for you, and acomplished both
    demik was wack, and doc rich's last verse was atrocious
    funny how your new alias has the same rep as your old one
    whats his name beat you last week, his names in german lore
    see i can't prenounce his alias, but i've never heard of yours
    for a so called vet, your somewhat an under achiever
    who you trying to impress with that verse ? obviously none of the readers
    and i know you won't battle me live, cause you too small and peezy
    he'd have to climb on top of a thesaurus to 'jump off' the TV
    easy if i rip your alias, come up with another
    ^ that was a cheap shot, but at a bar it usually comes with your mother
    carry the weight of world ? tell your dickriders to stick in place
    you only have a load on ya shoulders, cause they aimed and missed your face


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  7. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    Decent battle fellas...Better champ match than last week

    fave lines from Doc:


    it's fact that anyone with that stretched flow aint winnin...
    if ya whole verse was the 3 line style, youd test the post length limit
    might i suggest that you cry for the pin, n really vie for the win
    cuz after this, youll need a few more no shows to try it again
    even in the rankings with me, he's gone blank from the steeze
    but just try and think for a second...
    cause thats the highest youll ever be ranked in this league
    a dare to find someone whos read any of his flows from a bar...
    how can you be the #2 head and STILL NO ONE KNOWS WHO YOU ARE
    we aint even on the same level, make sure you hear me, bro
    trumpin chrit was ya careers highlight - i beat his ass three years ago
    to think i needa try to beat this wack guy?, please
    my W column just got a talentless white ho...
    suddenly that shits the black eyed peas


    Ender doesn't compliment the rest of the verse...but I thought that Black Eyed Peas line was nice

    Fav lines from Serv:

    i dont understand this geeky fag flowing
    if he dumb his lines down any more...
    we'll need someone to translate his speech and hand motions
    copying swagger ? we know where you get it from you geek
    i guess charles ain't the only one facing a replica this week
    for a so called vet, your somewhat an under achiever
    who you trying to impress with that verse ? obviously none of the readers
    easy if i rip your alias, come up with another
    ^ that was a cheap shot, but at a bar it usually comes with your mother
    carry the weight of world ? tell your dickriders to stick in place
    you only have a load on ya shoulders, cause they aimed and missed your face


    Serv you presented a proper rebuttle to his verse. The only ting I felt wrong with it was that some lines in the middle weren't as hard as the rest. You dropped a dope verse but Doc edged out the battle by a couple of bars.

    v/Doc
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  8. Everest

    Everest E=MC Eat my Shorts

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    Alright.. I've waited to vote on this long enough.. lemme break it down real proper like for the champion ship.. Remember just my epinion, I don't want no hate.

    Servical..
    3 punches that I really liked , cheap shot, load shoulders, hand motions...
    flow was sketchy in my opinion. ya got personal ,, i don't know him or his alias, so i'll validate your attempt and just let others decide how good they were. i didn't see you try anything crazy in the vocab, multi syallable rhyme, or metaphor department... not a bad verse.. but i'd call it a bit above average.. Grade=B-

    Doc Richards- No show line aight.. so long as it's true.. i don't know.........couple personals in a row,, with a multi (rhyme clown lines down)black eye eas line was clever. well overall I couldn't really find your flow either,, but,, It was a solid verse. I've read em each three times now.. So
    my thoughts are that overall , Doc's verse was a little bit more impressive.. punches wise it struck a a chord once or twice more with clever lines than Servical, and I saw at least one multi in Doc's..

    so Vote=Doc
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  9. Schadenfreude

    Schadenfreude da nigga, Sha-Fue-Diggidy

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    versus

    Damn, I actually came into this somewhat bias expecting Doc to kill(plus Serv hadn't impressed 'til now), but in all honesty Serv had many-a-haymaker in his verse. Doc dropped nicely, but some of his hitters didn't land well, whereas Serv got on a roll and merked shit..Vote - Servical.
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  10. Name play.

    Name play. Abuser title.

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    ridiculous battle. i cant see anything. i liked doc richard's verse, but u cant open up with a played line like that. some very good punches in between. closed it nicely. servical came out nicely, and said exactly what i was thinkin in his first bar. his closer was phenomenal also. overall better verse.

    v-servical
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  11. 4Matt

    4Matt On the money

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    Wow, i'm surprised for a champ match this is getting slept on crazy.

    Dock, it looked like you took Servical lightly. Your verse was still decent though, but it was almost as if you knew this would be enough to win. As for the verse, the "Think for a second" and "Try it again" lines were my fav.

    Serv, i actually thought this was a very good verse. I hate when people feed, but still in this case i'll let it slide since i liked your rebuttals. The opener was dope and so was most of your lines in between that and the closer. I didn't like the fact you kept on talking about names and aliases though. Still, what set your verse apart from Dock was the consistancy, so based on that....

    Vote goes to Servical.
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  12. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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  13. ExodusIII

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    doc

    if those his straight lines, then im foldin him
    verse a bigger collection of wack shit than grimet's punchline pandemonium

    lol

    even in the rankings with me, he's gone blank from the steeze
    but just try and think for a second...
    cause thats the highest youll ever be ranked in this league

    nice

    i realize i done ran through dude...so ill give this man the truth
    ive beat people, whove beat people that could handle YOU

    nice



    servical

    i dont know if you wanna lose or have us nodding off, but yo
    that verse did a multi task for you, and acomplished both

    nice

    carry the weight of world ? tell your dickriders to stick in place
    you only have a load on ya shoulders, cause they aimed and missed your face

    nice

    serv had a nice verse but doc just had the more solid verse

    vote = doc
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  14. Gundam

    Gundam that G..

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    pretty good battle.

    might i suggest that you cry for the pin, n really vie for the win
    cuz after this, youll need a few more no shows to try it again
    even in the rankings with me, he's gone blank from the steeze
    but just try and think for a second...
    cause thats the highest youll ever be ranked in this league

    ^ i liked those the best from docs verse.


    copying swagger ? we know where you get it from you geek
    i guess charles ain't the only one facing a replica this week
    and i know you won't battle me live, cause you too small and peezy
    he'd have to climb on top of a thesaurus to 'jump off' the TV
    easy if i rip your alias, come up with another
    ^ that was a cheap shot, but at a bar it usually comes with your mother


    i seen both of you two drop better some harder shit before, but still this was a pretty cool battle.

    serv edged it out with overall a little more substance and creativity in his verse.

    vote-serv
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  15. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    4-3 Servical wins.
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