[WK/58] [Champ] 1. ALIEN0888 11-1 v. 2. Oneduh 8-1 (alien wins)

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  1. Awk is dope

    Awk is dope New Member

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    oneduh
    You say that like it aint the first clue about your steez
    Fucked up when people prefer a verse from you to countin sheep
    okay
    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted
    nice
    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    coo
    His girl a freak too, likes stickin rubber dicks in men
    & he loves being center of atteNtion.. so you know he gonna lett'er N
    haha nice
    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg
    ehh
    That would make more sense if Egg didn't come sicker than this fucka could match
    Luckily he found the Qur.. < was that he was still holding a grudge from the past
    ehh
    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?
    coo
    Everyone knows the outcome.. I'll rape you cuz I'm better with lines
    Nobody was anticipating Alien-One since the film debuted in seventy nine
    aiight
    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?
    haha coo
    You only the champ via DQ.. you not a threat lil homie
    Your reign's gonna be so short.. Noah could replace the Arc with a set of floaties
    aiight
    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero
    ehh
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it
    coo
    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name
    nice


    alien
    He best not bring up my match with Eggo, or I'll catch em in a mess...
    Cuz he told me I won,
    But wouldn't vote..... cuz he wanted to battle him instead
    coo
    Had 20 nameplays ready before the match ended like some faggot...
    Mommy shoulda told her little One not to put all his Eggs in one basket
    ehh
    Dickriding has begun, if only votes counted for the verses themselves...
    Guess I gotta play from behind... and this fag would prefer that as well
    lol
    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    aiight
    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    niice
    A foolish vet.. it's time I bring the heat to you next...
    You beatin' me?
    Looks like this One flew straight into the coocoo's nest
    haha coo
    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    lol nice
    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line
    okay
    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right
    coo
    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    okay
    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    nice
    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers
    ehh
    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory
    ehh


    Wow, this was a dope battle...I dont really know who to vote for cuz this shit was mad close and both of youz had nice verses but imah give the edge to oneduh cuz he felt like he came a lil harder vote-oneduh
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  2. Xquisite

    Xquisite Guest

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  3. MADD ILL

    MADD ILL WhO WaNt It!!!!!!!!

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    ALIEN'S VERSE
    He best not bring up my match with Eggo, or I'll catch em in a mess...
    Cuz he told me I won,
    But wouldn't vote..... cuz he wanted to battle him instead-good personal
    Had 20 nameplays ready before the match ended like some faggot...
    Mommy shoulda told her little One not to put all his Eggs in one basket-good lol
    Dickriding has begun, if only votes counted for the verses themselves...true true
    Guess I gotta play from behind... and this fag would prefer that as well-true line good lol

    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay-good
    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships-lol
    A foolish vet.. it's time I bring the heat to you next...
    You beatin' me?
    Looks like this One flew straight into the coocoo's nest-good
    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics-good
    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line-lol good
    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right-good




    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill-good
    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different-good
    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers-lol good
    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory-good



    ONE'S VERSE
    You say that like it aint the first clue about your steez
    Fucked up when people prefer a verse from you to countin sheep-good
    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted-good
    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking-good
    His girl a freak too, likes stickin rubber dicks in men
    & he loves being center of atteNtion.. so you know he gonna lett'er N-nice i like that
    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg-good
    That would make more sense if Egg didn't come sicker than this fucka could match
    Luckily he found the Qur.. < was that he was still holding a grudge from the past-good
    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?-good
    Everyone knows the outcome.. I'll rape you cuz I'm better with lines
    Nobody was anticipating Alien-One since the film debuted in seventy nine-good
    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?-good
    You only the champ via DQ.. you not a threat lil homie
    Your reign's gonna be so short.. Noah could replace the Arc with a set of floaties-good
    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero-good
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it-good
    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name-good


    this was a close ass battle but im a have to give this one to oneduh he had slighlty better punches and wordplay that made me be like damn more than aliens verse.
    both of ya'll nice though,but oneduh took this joint.

    1 im out
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  4. wtf

    wtf hot sicka than yo average

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    ALIEN0888
    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    dope

    A foolish vet.. it's time I bring the heat to you next...
    You beatin' me?
    Looks like this One flew straight into the coocoo's nest
    haha nice

    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    oooohhh

    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line
    damn lol

    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    decent

    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers
    hahahaha

    vs

    Oneduh
    You say that like it aint the first clue about your steez
    Fucked up when people prefer a verse from you to countin sheep
    ha nice open
    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted
    nice followthrough

    His girl a freak too, likes stickin rubber dicks in men
    & he loves being center of atteNtion.. so you know he gonna lett'er N
    dope

    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg
    ouch

    Everyone knows the outcome.. I'll rape you cuz I'm better with lines
    Nobody was anticipating Alien-One since the film debuted in seventy nine
    feelin this line... dope

    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it
    i like this... and the following finisher was cool as well


    I have to say it was a good battle. ranks up there. Both had a damaging amount of personals which made this a close battle... Alien's verse had me goin a lil bit more..

    vote alien
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  5. RAWz

    RAWz *******

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    This champ match was crazy. alias's.. namedrops.. an abundance of personals; looks like this'll turn into a little rivalry. There were alot of quotables, and I have to re-read before I make my final choice.. but here are some of the lines that stood out the most to me this week:

    Had 20 nameplays ready before the match ended like some faggot...
    Mommy shoulda told her little One not to put all his Eggs in one basket
    Dickriding has begun, if only votes counted for the verses themselves...
    Guess I gotta play from behind... and this fag would prefer that as well
    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line
    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different

    vs

    in my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    That would make more sense if Egg didn't come sicker than this fucka could match
    Luckily he found the Qur.. < was that he was still holding a grudge from the past
    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?
    Everyone knows the outcome.. I'll rape you cuz I'm better with lines
    Nobody was anticipating Alien-One since the film debuted in seventy nine
    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name


    Ok, I have Alien with a couple more quotables. There were some bars from One that others have quoted, bars that I either didn't understand or wasnt feeling completely. One has some hard disses, Alien has alot of LOL-moments in his verse.. and his final bars in regards to metasin was clever and nicely executed. Oneduh is crazyily onpoint with nameplays, week after week. This is a tough decision, but I'm going to choose based on the bars that, imo, had more of an impact.

    Vote~ ALIEN
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  6. YonZula

    YonZula Yon the God

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    Alien:

    He best not bring up my match with Eggo, or I'll catch em in a mess...
    Cuz he told me I won,
    But wouldn't vote..... cuz he wanted to battle him instead

    ok opener,been done before though

    Had 20 nameplays ready before the match ended like some faggot...
    Mommy shoulda told her little One not to put all his Eggs in one basket

    nice

    Dickriding has begun, if only votes counted for the verses themselves...
    Guess I gotta play from behind... and this fag would prefer that as well

    been done before

    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Wordp1ay
    i changed it ... due to the nagging aim convo from One
    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay

    lol nice

    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships

    lmao

    A foolish vet.. it's time I bring the heat to you next...
    You beatin' me?
    Looks like this One flew straight into the coocoo's nest

    egh

    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics

    lmao

    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line

    lol nice

    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right

    egh

    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Oneduh
    MetaSin. I based my style off the old shit of his I read
    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill

    ok

    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different

    lol

    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers

    egh

    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory

    didn't like this closer





    One:

    GeOff35 (8:44:51 PM): I like when dudes fall asleep in my threads


    You say that like it aint the first clue about your steez
    Fucked up when people prefer a verse from you to countin sheep

    ok opener

    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted

    nah been done before

    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking

    lol

    His girl a freak too, likes stickin rubber dicks in men
    & he loves being center of atteNtion.. so you know he gonna lett'er N

    nah too forced

    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg

    decent

    That would make more sense if Egg didn't come sicker than this fucka could match
    Luckily he found the Qur.. < was that he was still holding a grudge from the past

    lol

    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?

    nice

    Everyone knows the outcome.. I'll rape you cuz I'm better with lines
    Nobody was anticipating Alien-One since the film debuted in seventy nine

    egh not real hard hitting

    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?

    more self hype that anything else

    You only the champ via DQ.. you not a threat lil homie
    Your reign's gonna be so short.. Noah could replace the Arc with a set of floaties

    a noah/reign line in 09? wow

    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero

    egh

    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it

    lol nice

    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name

    egh ok closer


    my vote goes to Alien, One tried alot of personals but alot of them didn't hit hard while Alien had some nice punches that did hit. Both verses had some real good lines and the ones that weren't good missed by alot. close match though
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  7. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    He best not bring up my match with Eggo, or I'll catch em in a mess...
    Cuz he told me I won,
    But wouldn't vote..... cuz he wanted to battle him instead
    Had 20 nameplays ready before the match ended like some faggot...
    Mommy shoulda told her little One not to put all his Eggs in one basket
    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    A foolish vet.. it's time I bring the heat to you next...
    You beatin' me?
    Looks like this One flew straight into the coocoo's nest
    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers

    All of these lines I was feelin from Alien, he had a consistent verse overall with very few lines I would totally disagree with, and that special olympics line was pretty sick to me, I looll'd at that rekindling friendships, but yea overall that was a nice verse..

    One,

    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted
    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg
    That would make more sense if Egg didn't come sicker than this fucka could match
    Luckily he found the Qur.. < was that he was still holding a grudge from the past
    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it

    One had a decent verse with a few sick lines here and there but he also had lines that didn't hit very hard as some of Alien's..like the world war 2 line and the noah's arc were aight but didn't hit very hard..you had a few more like that and they took away from a win you could of taken..this was a very close one but man I'll have to go with alien on this one

    v-Alien
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  8. MC Guttso

    MC Guttso Fingers in Pies

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    Alien -
    Dickriding has begun, if only votes counted for the verses themselves...
    Guess I gotta play from behind... and this fag would prefer that as well
    GOOD PUNCH
    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line
    This segment was great two, packed with plenty of punches, the word play was nice and the mechanics and "flow" was ok.
    Yeah a good showing I guess.

    Oneduh - The only line I really liked was:
    "I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg" - absolute quality, nice wordplay, nice punch. Don't get me wrong your verse was good, flow was nice and consistent, just wasn't as many stand out or powerful lines as alien's.

    v - Alien
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  9. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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    Alien, your first sequence was pretty smooth.

    Wasn't feelin the wordplay line but the follow up was nice, connected well.

    Coocoo's nest/Special olympics/Vertical line and Relentless swaying were all decent jabs.

    The Metasin line is played, it's been done to death against Oneduh.

    After that, verse cooled down a bit the the closer was nice.
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    Oneduh, your opener was bland but everything picked up pretty quickly afterwards.

    Power ranking line made me laugh foreal, had swag to it.

    Kitchen counter/Qur/Noah's ark and Explaining to voters lines were nasty, evrything after were effective personals that were good.

    What almost killed it for me was your closer, i didn't get that shit at all so you lose points on that.

    Overall, i think One edged it out, his style and execution was cleaner and had more of an impact for me.

    Both were consistant throughout, but Alien was more consistant at throwing jabs, One was more consistant at haymakers and personals that do damage.

    V/Oneduh
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  10. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line
    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right
    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers
    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory

    v.

    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted
    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg
    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?
    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?
    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it

    i don't know the quote count as far as how many from each i quoted above, but i know the feeling i got when reading and basically i'll go on record to say that oneduh's being robbed here. in my opinion, alien brought his C game to the table because although he had some nice shit, his lines that missed were ridiculously wack like eggs/basket, play from behind, wordplay, and etcetera. those lines just didn't work for me at all. even the race/special olympics line was border line wack as fuck for me, but i think i may have quoted it due to execution. at the same time, you showed signs of promise with lines like the rekindling friendships and left and right. the rest of the quoted lines were only decent, but the best of the bunch to me. oneduh, on the other hand, came much more creative in terms of disses as it pertains to this match. he was more aggressive and his punches just read as if he was gritting his teeth while typing. the first qur line was weak, but the follow up was dope regardless of it being false. also, your personal about writing punches greatly outweighed alien's opener about you not wanting to battle which was all in all ineffective and worded in a way that it didn't even read as a punch. the world war 2 shit was dope, both punches. power ranking was good. without dickriders was good. egg cracking was eh, decent at best, but came off nicely. the rest of your lines still weren't complete failures though, like a few of alien's misses. the only line i thought was terrible was that closer. you were reaching. well, seventy nine and atteNtion were weak too, especially that attention shit. you were reaching. but then you had shit like the floaties line, which wasn't bad, just off in rhyme and wording. for this, you get the nod.

    VOTE - ONEDUH
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  11. Guest

    Guest Elevation is the Key

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    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line
    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory

    VS.

    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted
    You only the champ via DQ.. you not a threat lil homie
    Your reign's gonna be so short.. Noah could replace the Arc with a set of floaties
    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it
    -----------------------------------
    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name
    had to say this. i did a line like this and got crucified for it...

    Overall alien had more quotables. To me most of oneduhs lines were kinda eh-ish. I think he got laxed. Overall Alien just had a better verse to me. One's verse woulda beat anyone but alien upped him.
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  13. Y u n o

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    this could go either way...i went back in forth on it...

    alien had a few better lines.. but then had a few corny lines(like the coocoo nest and play from behind) which were worst then oneduhs bad lines... where as oneduh stayed about the same /consistent through out..

    other then the closer and that letter N shit which was forced as shit to me i think oneduh didnt show anything explosive but did do good enough to win with the personals and better execution overall

    vote-oneduh
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  14. Final Chapta

    Final Chapta End of Story

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    damn , nice battle.

    alien :

    He best not bring up my match with Eggo, or I'll catch em in a mess...
    Cuz he told me I won,
    But wouldn't vote..... cuz he wanted to battle him instead

    nice.

    Had 20 nameplays ready before the match ended like some faggot...
    Mommy shoulda told her little One not to put all his Eggs in one basket

    heh

    Dickriding has begun, if only votes counted for the verses themselves...
    Guess I gotta play from behind... and this fag would prefer that as well

    dope.


    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Wordp1ay
    i changed it ... due to the nagging aim convo from One

    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay

    nice personal. very nice.

    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships

    haha

    A foolish vet.. it's time I bring the heat to you next...
    You beatin' me?
    Looks like this One flew straight into the coocoo's nest

    ahhh iono. i get it ..didnt do much for me

    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics

    lol

    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line

    lol

    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right

    oh damn


    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Oneduh
    MetaSin. I based my style off the old shit of his I read

    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill

    LMAO

    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different

    ouch.

    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers

    ha

    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory

    could have been a better closer. but cool none the less



    oneduh :

    You say that like it aint the first clue about your steez
    Fucked up when people prefer a verse from you to countin sheep

    cool personal

    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted

    ouch.

    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking

    loool

    His girl a freak too, likes stickin rubber dicks in men
    & he loves being center of atteNtion.. so you know he gonna lett'er N

    didnt like this. kinda forced.

    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg

    lol

    That would make more sense if Egg didn't come sicker than this fucka could match
    Luckily he found the Qur.. < was that he was still holding a grudge from the past

    didnt like it.

    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?

    haha

    Everyone knows the outcome.. I'll rape you cuz I'm better with lines
    Nobody was anticipating Alien-One since the film debuted in seventy nine

    eh

    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?

    cool personal , if thats true.

    You only the champ via DQ.. you not a threat lil homie
    Your reign's gonna be so short.. Noah could replace the Arc with a set of floaties

    flow was kind of off for me , but the punch was comedy.

    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it

    didnt like the first 2 ..but the 2nd two made it worth it

    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name

    cool.



    wow. this was real dope. both had a GANG of quotables. really tough one to vote on. onduh hit home with a couple more personals AND didnt over dose on the name plays [ which i dont mind ..i think nameplays are fresh ] ..but the name plays he did use didnt really do a whole lot for me. and i think aliens was a little more consistant with the creative flips. its weird. cause the two didnt have solid verses allt he way through ..couple forced bars and ehh nameplays evened it out. iono man.

    think im 'a go with alien on this one ..just vibed with his verse a little better than i did ones.

    great read.

    vote - alien.
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  15. Mic-illaH

    Mic-illaH aka paisano

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    He best not bring up my match with Eggo, or I'll catch em in a mess...
    Cuz he told me I won,
    But wouldn't vote..... cuz he wanted to battle him instead
    ok
    Had 20 nameplays ready before the match ended like some faggot...
    Mommy shoulda told her little One not to put all his Eggs in one basket
    ok
    Dickriding has begun, if only votes counted for the verses themselves...
    Guess I gotta play from behind... and this fag would prefer that as well
    nice


    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Wordp1ay
    i changed it ... due to the nagging aim convo from One

    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    nice use of the quote
    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    lol
    A foolish vet.. it's time I bring the heat to you next...
    You beatin' me?
    Looks like this One flew straight into the coocoo's nest
    not feelin this line
    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    lol i thought this was hilarious
    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line
    ehh ok
    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right
    ok


    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Oneduh
    MetaSin. I based my style off the old shit of his I read

    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    seen a lot of these medicine lines, but decent use of the quote
    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    good personal
    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers
    not feeling this
    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory
    not feelin the closer.



    GeOff35 (8:44:51 PM): I like when dudes fall asleep in my threads


    You say that like it aint the first clue about your steez
    Fucked up when people prefer a verse from you to countin sheep
    lol good use of the quote
    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted
    decent
    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    lol nice
    His girl a freak too, likes stickin rubber dicks in men
    & he loves being center of atteNtion.. so you know he gonna lett'er N
    not feeling this
    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg
    dope
    That would make more sense if Egg didn't come sicker than this fucka could match
    Luckily he found the Qur.. < was that he was still holding a grudge from the past
    decent
    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?
    ok
    Everyone knows the outcome.. I'll rape you cuz I'm better with lines
    Nobody was anticipating Alien-One since the film debuted in seventy nine
    nice
    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?
    lol
    You only the champ via DQ.. you not a threat lil homie
    Your reign's gonna be so short.. Noah could replace the Arc with a set of floaties
    wow dope
    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero
    ok
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it
    lol nice
    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name
    creative wordplay


    fuck, nice battle fellas. this was a good champ match.
    Alien, nice verse bro. Thought the use of wordplay's quote was nice - I don't see how people can't say thats nice....I thought the special olympics line was hilarious as well.
    Oneduh - came oneduh-esque. opener was nice, crack an egg line was nice, and the floaties line I think was the line of the battle.
    Overall, I think Alien had more misses in his verse (eggs in basket, coo coo's next, white trash, metasin, servin appetizers)...the rest of his shit was strong, but I dont think those lines hit that hard.
    Oneduh had some misses as well (the atteNtion line, word war 2 pilot) and everything else was good or strong.

    So my vote goes to Oneduh for overall more consistency throughout his verse. I tried to explain this as much as I could so there is no bullshit, because both are cool in my book.

    V/ One
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  16. mAc Detroit

    mAc Detroit da muthafuckin south

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    Vote: Oneduh

    I'm not about to break down the shit line for line. But some of alien's shit was kinda done before. Like the play from behind, coocoo's nest, etc. Others such a the left to right punch, just didn't hit hard. As for Oneduh, he did have a few he coulda kept, such as the attention line, but overall his verse ultimatlely read better imo. Just more polished to me. Alien is nice tho, win or lose. Both of yall dropped nicely. But one got ya.
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  17. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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    He best not bring up my match with Eggo, or I'll catch em in a mess...
    Cuz he told me I won,
    But wouldn't vote..... cuz he wanted to battle him instead
    -aight

    Had 20 nameplays ready before the match ended like some faggot...
    Mommy shoulda told her little One not to put all his Eggs in one basket
    -not feeling how you worded this. could have been dope

    Dickriding has begun, if only votes counted for the verses themselves...
    Guess I gotta play from behind... and this fag would prefer that as well
    -ehhhh na

    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Wordp1ay
    i changed it ... due to the nagging aim convo from One
    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    -heh cool. nice use of the quote

    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    -cool

    A foolish vet.. it's time I bring the heat to you next...
    You beatin' me?
    Looks like this One flew straight into the coocoo's nest
    - not feeling it at all.

    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    -aight

    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line
    -naaaaa

    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right
    -ehhh na. seen too many swaying lines. this didnt really do much different than the others ive seen before

    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Oneduh
    MetaSin. I based my style off the old shit of his I read
    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    -although it does feel a bit old since dudes tend to use metasin references like this alot when metasin is active it still hit and did damage. cool

    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    -ok

    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers
    -naaa

    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory
    -although i tend to like wordplay to work both ways. which this didnt.. i still liked it. it was cute. cool



    GeOff35 (8:44:51 PM): I like when dudes fall asleep in my threads


    You say that like it aint the first clue about your steez
    Fucked up when people prefer a verse from you to countin sheep
    -naaaa

    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted
    - ehh.

    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    -cool

    His girl a freak too, likes stickin rubber dicks in men
    & he loves being center of atteNtion.. so you know he gonna lett'er N
    -nice. only thing i dont like about this is theres a "the" missing before center

    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg
    -aight

    That would make more sense if Egg didn't come sicker than this fucka could match
    Luckily he found the Qur.. < was that he was still holding a grudge from the past
    -uhhh ok i guess



    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?
    -too bland even for me.. not feeling it

    Everyone knows the outcome.. I'll rape you cuz I'm better with lines
    Nobody was anticipating Alien-One since the film debuted in seventy nine
    aight

    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?
    -cool

    You only the champ via DQ.. you not a threat lil homie
    Your reign's gonna be so short.. Noah could replace the Arc with a set of floaties
    -ehhhh

    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero
    -cool

    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it
    -aight

    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name
    -uhh wasnt feeling this. felt like you was trying too hard here lol


    damn. i forgot who had more lines i liked. this is sorta of close here. im'a go ahead and pick out all my favorite lines from each and just choose a winner by the one who had the most fav lines


    alien
    He best not bring up my match with Eggo, or I'll catch em in a mess...
    Cuz he told me I won,
    But wouldn't vote..... cuz he wanted to battle him instead
    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory


    oneduh
    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    His girl a freak too, likes stickin rubber dicks in men
    & he loves being center of atteNtion.. so you know he gonna lett'er N
    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg
    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?
    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it

    damn guess my fav lines are tied. i got it at 6 bars each

    this is pretty close

    i'll go ahead and judge it based on other things then which would have to be wording and the weaker lines. and id have to say oneduhs weaker lines were a bit better than aliens.. and his wording was as well. i mean at times you can tell alien used the 3 line style only so his lines wouldnt look stretched. oneduhs lines read a little smoother at times. very close battle. alien has stepped it up alot. but i got oneduh edging it out due to crispier wording and a bit more consistent verse

    vote - Oneduh
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  18. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    voters who are neither members nor champions will not be counted.
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  19. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    I don't do the line for line breakdown.......


    Not really much I can say because it seems that everyone has said everything that could either go right or wrong with this battle. You both had some really good lines as well as played lines. This was an even matchup in my eyes. I felt that Alien was more personal. So I will give him the nod based on the fact that he had maybe 2 better lines than Oneduh

    v/Alien
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  20. Quriosity

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    alien wins, 14-13 in votes.
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