[WK/58] [Champ] 1. ALIEN0888 11-1 v. 2. Oneduh 8-1 (alien wins)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    [01] - The deadline for verses is Friday @ 10:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Saturday @ 10:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Monday @ 12:59am EST.​


    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.​


    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​
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  2. ALIEN0888

    ALIEN0888 Your Hero's Idol

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    hah its finally here.... how many fucker?
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  3. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

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  4. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    you been sayin you had 20 for like 4 days now.. & you wanna go 26.. drop already.. I aint tryna have this shit get 4 votes
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  5. ALIEN0888

    ALIEN0888 Your Hero's Idol

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    He best not bring up my match with Eggo, or I'll catch em in a mess...
    Cuz he told me I won,
    But wouldn't vote..... cuz he wanted to battle him instead
    Had 20 nameplays ready before the match ended like some faggot...
    Mommy shoulda told her little One not to put all his Eggs in one basket
    Dickriding has begun, if only votes counted for the verses themselves...
    Guess I gotta play from behind... and this fag would prefer that as well

    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    A foolish vet.. it's time I bring the heat to you next...
    You beatin' me?
    Looks like this One flew straight into the coocoo's nest
    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line
    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right

    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers
    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory
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  6. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    GeOff35 (8:44:51 PM): I like when dudes fall asleep in my threads


    You say that like it aint the first clue about your steez
    Fucked up when people prefer a verse from you to countin sheep
    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted
    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    His girl a freak too, likes stickin rubber dicks in men
    & he loves being center of atteNtion.. so you know he gonna lett'er N
    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg
    That would make more sense if Egg didn't come sicker than this fucka could match
    Luckily he found the Qur.. < was that he was still holding a grudge from the past
    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?
    Everyone knows the outcome.. I'll rape you cuz I'm better with lines
    Nobody was anticipating Alien-One since the film debuted in seventy nine
    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?
    You only the champ via DQ.. you not a threat lil homie
    Your reign's gonna be so short.. Noah could replace the Arc with a set of floaties
    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it
    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name
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  7. Wordp1ay

    Wordp1ay the realest right

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    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill

    nicest of A's verse
    --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it

    nicest of N's verse
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    as a whole

    He best not bring up my match with Eggo, or I'll catch em in a mess...
    Cuz he told me I won,
    But wouldn't vote..... cuz he wanted to battle him instead

    Had 20 nameplays ready before the match ended like some faggot...
    Mommy shoulda told her little One not to put all his Eggs in one basket
    Dickriding has begun, if only votes counted for the verses themselves...
    Guess I gotta play from behind... and this fag would prefer that as well


    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Wordp1ay
    i changed it ... due to the nagging aim convo from One

    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    (i actually could see this)
    A foolish vet.. it's time I bring the heat to you next...
    You beatin' me?
    Looks like this One flew straight into the coocoo's nest
    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line
    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right
    (niceness swayin like left to right i get it)


    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Oneduh
    MetaSin. I based my style off the old shit of his I read

    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    (nice, wording culda been beter)
    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    (niceness)
    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers
    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory

    __________________________________________________________________


    You say that like it aint the first clue about your steez
    Fucked up when people prefer a verse from you to countin sheep
    (niceness)
    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted
    (niceness)
    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    His girl a freak too, likes stickin rubber dicks in men
    & he loves being center of atteNtion.. so you know he gonna lett'er N
    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg (niceness)
    That would make more sense if Egg didn't come sicker than this fucka could match
    Luckily he found the Qur.. < was that he was still holding a grudge from the past
    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter? (hurtful)
    Everyone knows the outcome.. I'll rape you cuz I'm better with lines
    Nobody was anticipating Alien-One since the film debuted in seventy nine
    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?
    You only the champ via DQ.. you not a threat lil homie
    Your reign's gonna be so short.. Noah could replace the Arc with a set of floaties
    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it
    (ewwww!)
    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name



    Aspect:

    Alien had a good read fa certain man....the met line was hot...wording was a lil off though... the archives was a freshness personal fa certain....overall you had a few low blowers in there

    one had a few low blowers in there along wit good punches...i wasnt feelin the last line felt forced to me
    but the uppity of the verse was more consistent from u then alien....

    a few drop offs in aliens verse...but then caught my attention again here n there

    one..less drop offs...kept my attention more...and i got a few more punches n personals hittin harder from one


    vote oneduh

    close call close close call.....alien u had some nice ones but one had a few more
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  8. ALIEN0888

    ALIEN0888 Your Hero's Idol

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    didnt you vote on this already? lol weird.. 0-1 uppin.
    dope verse One
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  9. Significantt

    Significantt New Member

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    This was a good one.

    alien

    Dickriding has begun, if only votes counted for the verses themselves...
    Guess I gotta play from behind... and this fag would prefer that as well
    ^good punch, a little played but solid none the less


    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    ^lol nicee

    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    ^lol nice again

    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    ^lol good

    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right
    ^cool.. its true

    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    ^another good personal effective

    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    ^ dam this one stung


    one





    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    ^good personal

    His girl a freak too, likes stickin rubber dicks in men
    & he loves being center of atteNtion.. so you know he gonna lett'er N
    ^this was dope

    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg
    ^nice



    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?
    ^lol this was good

    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero
    ^I liked this, good ish

    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it
    ^lol nice

    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name
    ^cool closer


    This battle was without a doubt close, both came pretty hard with nice ishh props to both of you probaly the best battle ive seen in this league so far. with that being said I think alien won this with stronger personals, a lot of quotables from both but in my opinion alien edged this one out.

    vote/alien
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  10. Xquisite

    Xquisite Guest

    He best not bring up my match with Eggo, or I'll catch em in a mess...
    Cuz he told me I won,
    But wouldn't vote..... cuz he wanted to battle him instead
    -- seemed more like a defensive punch, but it didnt get at him too hard
    Had 20 nameplays ready before the match ended like some faggot...
    Mommy shoulda told her little One not to put all his Eggs in one basket
    -- coo
    Dickriding has begun, if only votes counted for the verses themselves...
    Guess I gotta play from behind... and this fag would prefer that as well
    -- haha


    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Wordp1ay
    i changed it ... due to the nagging aim convo from One

    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    -- nice
    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    -- haha nice
    A foolish vet.. it's time I bring the heat to you next...
    You beatin' me?
    Looks like this One flew straight into the coocoo's nest
    -- nice...a fresh one nameplay
    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    -- lol, jokes!
    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line
    -- meh, not as good as your others
    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right
    -- coo not bad not bad


    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Oneduh
    MetaSin. I based my style off the old shit of his I read

    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    -- good hit
    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    -- dooooope, best line so far
    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers
    -- eh
    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory
    -- nice swag to close out

    vs.

    You say that like it aint the first clue about your steez
    Fucked up when people prefer a verse from you to countin sheep
    -- coo
    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted
    -- haha oh really?
    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    -- haha dope...this hit
    His girl a freak too, likes stickin rubber dicks in men
    & he loves being center of atteNtion.. so you know he gonna lett'er N
    -- pretty creative
    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg
    -- nice hit
    That would make more sense if Egg didn't come sicker than this fucka could match
    Luckily he found the Qur.. < was that he was still holding a grudge from the past
    -- coo
    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?
    -- nice personal
    Everyone knows the outcome.. I'll rape you cuz I'm better with lines
    Nobody was anticipating Alien-One since the film debuted in seventy nine
    -- dope nameplay
    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?
    -- ouch
    You only the champ via DQ.. you not a threat lil homie
    Your reign's gonna be so short.. Noah could replace the Arc with a set of floaties
    -- eh
    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero
    -- aight
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it
    -- hahah dope, LOTB
    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name
    -- creative

    man this battle was sick, you both came dope and both had some haymakers...close as fuck but I think Oneduh edged this out by a hair...I was pulling for Alien wit the upset, but Oneduh didnt let up...he came too sick with some nice personals...This was one of the nicer verses I've seen from alien too...but unfortunately Oneduh barely one upped u..good shit homies

    vote = oneduh
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  11. -Sephiroth-

    -Sephiroth- Geostigmatic

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    daaaamn, props fellas.

    this shit was dope.
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  12. Deep Pocketz

    Deep Pocketz Writer of Sorts

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    Whoa

    Dopest battle I have read since I been on the boards. What champ matches are meant to look like right here, props to both of you.

    Alien
    He best not bring up my match with Eggo, or I'll catch em in a mess...
    Cuz he told me I won,
    But wouldn't vote..... cuz he wanted to battle him instead
    ^^Haha, dope start with the personal

    Had 20 nameplays ready before the match ended like some faggot...
    Mommy shoulda told her little One not to put all his Eggs in one basket
    ^^Nice

    Dickriding has begun, if only votes counted for the verses themselves...
    Guess I gotta play from behind... and this fag would prefer that as well
    ^^Not as hard hitting, but still good

    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    ^^lmao, damn dope personal

    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    ^^lol

    A foolish vet.. it's time I bring the heat to you next...
    You beatin' me?
    Looks like this One flew straight into the coocoo's nest
    ^^Haha, dope flip

    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    ^^haha

    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line
    ^^haha, ok

    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right
    ^^Cool personal

    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    ^^lol, dooope..

    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    ^^lolol

    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers
    ^^haha, nice

    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory
    ^^Cool close out to a really good verse man...

    Oneduh
    You say that like it aint the first clue about your steez
    Fucked up when people prefer a verse from you to countin sheep
    ^^lol

    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted
    ^^lol, cool

    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    ^^cool..

    His girl a freak too, likes stickin rubber dicks in men
    & he loves being center of atteNtion.. so you know he gonna lett'er N
    ^^Damn, dope..

    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg
    ^^haha, cool personal

    That would make more sense if Egg didn't come sicker than this fucka could match
    Luckily he found the Qur.. < was that he was still holding a grudge from the past
    ^^Ouch

    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?
    ^^ouch again

    Everyone knows the outcome.. I'll rape you cuz I'm better with lines
    Nobody was anticipating Alien-One since the film debuted in seventy nine
    ^^haha, cool

    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?
    ^^Damn

    You only the champ via DQ.. you not a threat lil homie
    Your reign's gonna be so short.. Noah could replace the Arc with a set of floaties
    ^^lol

    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero
    ^^cool

    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it
    ^^haha, nice

    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name
    ^^Dope closer

    Damn this shit was neck and neck. Not really any lines that I didn't like and pretty much all of them were creative. So to me it was a matter of who had the best personals. One's verse clowned on Alien winning last week by DQ. No doubt those were his hardest hitting personals...
    Alien's personal about One's Avy and the swaying the voter's were all dope. The Forced Wordplay shit was mad creative too. In a neck and neck match I have Alien taking it but just by a tiny bit. I wish I could say the shit was a draw, but a winner has to be chosen.

    Vote - Alien...

    Shit, if I came in and read this shit tomorrow I might even say One took it...That's how close the shit is to me. Props to you both this week..
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  13. kungfugrip

    kungfugrip New Member

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    lmao
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  14. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    Vote= Alien

    Damn good battle guys

    Good shit all around


    Best from oneduh


    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?
    Everyone knows the outcome.. I'll rape you cuz I'm better with lines
    Nobody was anticipating Alien-One since the film debuted in seventy nine
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it
    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name


    Best from Alien


    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers
    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory


    in the end though, I think alien edged it out, he was pretty fresh with his originality, never seen anything as far as oneduh writing for Alien so those 6 lines that oneduh had sayin that didn't connect well for me, alien was solid throughout, swayin line as the only one I was like nah, once again tho this was fuckin close cuz oneduhs hard hitters hit hella hard, it's just alien was more consistant
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  15. eggo

    eggo gg

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    ONEDUH
    You say that like it aint the first clue about your steez
    Fucked up when people prefer a verse from you to countin sheep
    okay but I've seen similiar.
    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted
    coo.
    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    I pointed that out in the mag. nice personal.
    His girl a freak too, likes stickin rubber dicks in men
    & he loves being center of atteNtion.. so you know he gonna lett'er N
    wasn't diggin this.
    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg
    haha.
    That would make more sense if Egg didn't come sicker than this fucka could match
    Luckily he found the Qur.. < was that he was still holding a grudge from the past
    lmao.
    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?
    nice.
    Everyone knows the outcome.. I'll rape you cuz I'm better with lines
    Nobody was anticipating Alien-One since the film debuted in seventy nine
    not that hard hitting imo.
    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?
    haha.
    You only the champ via DQ.. you not a threat lil homie
    Your reign's gonna be so short.. Noah could replace the Arc with a set of floaties
    this woulda been dope if you said canoe or some typa small boat thats like an arc more.
    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero
    coo.
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it
    nice again.
    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name
    dope nameplay.

    vs

    ALIEN
    He best not bring up my match with Eggo, or I'll catch em in a mess...
    Cuz he told me I won,
    But wouldn't vote..... cuz he wanted to battle him instead
    lol.
    Had 20 nameplays ready before the match ended like some faggot...
    Mommy shoulda told her little One not to put all his Eggs in one basket
    personal.
    Dickriding has begun, if only votes counted for the verses themselves...
    Guess I gotta play from behind... and this fag would prefer that as well
    ehh.
    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    haha.
    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    dope.
    A foolish vet.. it's time I bring the heat to you next...
    You beatin' me?
    Looks like this One flew straight into the coocoo's nest
    not feelin this.
    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    lol.
    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line
    hah.
    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right
    coo.
    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    aight. woulda been better if you didn't give away the metasin til the end of the punch.
    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    damn.
    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers
    not that hard hitting.
    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory
    solid closer. idk if this has been done on him or not.


    this was closee as hell. you both had like 4 punches I wasn't really feelin. n' aside from that ya'll dropped some haymakers. its the best I've seen from both of you recently. I honestly thought one was gonna take this, then.. I read his verse first n' I coulda swore he had it. but alien came correct as hell. I got him edgin this by a little. dope champ match though.

    v/alien
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  16. JayTwo

    JayTwo New Member

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    He best not bring up my match with Eggo, or I'll catch em in a mess...
    Cuz he told me I won,
    But wouldn't vote..... cuz he wanted to battle him instead
    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line
    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right
    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory


    vs


    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    You only the champ via DQ.. you not a threat lil homie
    Your reign's gonna be so short.. Noah could replace the Arc with a set of floaties
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it
    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name


    v/alien


    I thought One would win this. In fact his 4 lines about Q were nice until I read Q's post about him not closing the match so that kinda made them worthless. The opener has been done before as has the 2nd couplet by anyone who has had to battle someone they ghosted for in the past. Crack an egg was too simple and the zero line wasn't good. The punch explaining it was better. Power rankings was a harsh personal and the floaties was just comedy. Very funny line. Eggos opener was a cool personal (if true) and he stayed pretty consistent from the start. The wordplay, swaying and metasin punches were nice personals too. Family tree was funny too. I've seen similar closers before (not exact) but it was a decent nameplay. Overall Alien just came more consisten with harsher personals. I think One thought he could win simply by stating he ghosted for him before.
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  17. Mr. Skull

    Mr. Skull G.T.P.

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    Man I don't do that break down shit...

    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right
    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory


    vs.

    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted
    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg
    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?
    You only the champ via DQ.. you not a threat lil homie
    Your reign's gonna be so short.. Noah could replace the Arc with a set of floaties
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it
    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name

    I have to go with One here. Alien u had a DOPE showing and might even still be champ, but IMO One had you by one punch.

    Vote - Oneduh
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  18. Allen Knight

    Allen Knight sending terror

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    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right
    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers


    Vs

    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted
    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg
    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it



    V/alien...this was a dope close battle, i felt alien took this with a more consistent verse he had a whole section that was straight hard hitting punches and personals, one you came dope too i like the flip line it was nice but i felt alien just edged you out by a little bit in this one.
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  19. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    He best not bring up my match with Eggo, or I'll catch em in a mess...
    Cuz he told me I won,
    But wouldn't vote..... cuz he wanted to battle him instead
    cool opener.

    Had 20 nameplays ready before the match ended like some faggot...
    Mommy shoulda told her little One not to put all his Eggs in one basket
    ok. didn't like how u worded it, came off weak, tho concept was good.

    Dickriding has begun, if only votes counted for the verses themselves...
    Guess I gotta play from behind... and this fag would prefer that as well
    eh, aite. used well, but not too original...

    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Wordp1ay
    i changed it ... due to the nagging aim convo from One

    Bitch... your swaying of votes got exposed in the worst way...
    But then again, you were always known for forcin' Wordp1ay
    He goes ghost on AIM... says RM cats are on his dick n its endless...
    But as soon as I drop,
    I guarantee he signs right back on and starts rekindling friendships
    Nice. hard hitting, and worded well

    A foolish vet.. it's time I bring the heat to you next...
    You beatin' me?
    Looks like this One flew straight into the coocoo's nest
    ok

    He's not black.... but he really needs some help to admit it
    Haven't seen this much confusion on race since the special olympics
    lol. ( i always thought someone would use this concept on frac)

    He is WHITE TRASH, for him incest is a perfect design...
    That explains the fact his family tree is one straight vertical line
    lmao. that came off funny

    I'll have votes comin' from every side, on that you can bet your life
    Your relentless swaying is the only way you got votes goin' left and right
    eh, swaying lines have to be real good

    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Oneduh
    MetaSin. I based my style off the old shit of his I read
    [teet]

    You really think your still elite? Obviously still poppin' pills...
    You got so much MetaSin in you, explains why your no longer ill
    eh, been done to death... everyone did this same line different ways

    Your avatar is cool but the message is one hell of a gimmick...
    Says Oneduh > Kungfugrip... but the archives keep tellin' me different
    LOL.

    Your reputation is all hype, just another worthless battle rhymer...
    When I think of the cats I respect most, your right there.. servin' em appetizers
    o_o

    Your a superhero to some, but your straight up shit to me...
    Yeah I'm battlin' this boy Oneduh... but your not Robin me of this victory
    good closer. I like the concept.


    ---------------------------

    You say that like it aint the first clue about your steez
    Fucked up when people prefer a verse from you to countin sheep
    aite opener

    That's why when we read your verses, we know someone hot ghosted
    I'm not claimin I wrote all of your lines.. just the ones that got quoted
    cool "personal"

    In my opinion.. a namechange is a route worth taking
    Aliens are supposed to have super powers.. you don't even have a power ranking
    another decent personal.

    His girl a freak too, likes stickin rubber dicks in men
    & he loves being center of atteNtion.. so you know he gonna lett'er N
    eh.

    I gotta change my name due to how much this faggot begs
    From now on call me Kitchen Counter.. he needed my help to crack an Egg
    lol. nice.

    That would make more sense if Egg didn't come sicker than this fucka could match
    Luckily he found the Qur.. < was that he was still holding a grudge from the past
    good personal.

    So he came & closed the thread.. look, you robbed him for the title
    How's it feel to need ghosted lines AND a crooked mod to beat a biter?
    solid personal.

    Everyone knows the outcome.. I'll rape you cuz I'm better with lines
    Nobody was anticipating Alien-One since the film debuted in seventy nine
    ha... i imagine it has been used before, but I dont read text much so i liked it.

    I told you I gave Main Stream lines in your bout with him prior
    How you gonna beat me.. when I wrote a verse that beat you WITHOUT my dickriders?
    haha...

    You only the champ via DQ.. you not a threat lil homie
    Your reign's gonna be so short.. Noah could replace the Arc with a set of floaties
    good punch, but coulda rhymed it better

    Lets be honest, he's nobody.. I'm this kids hero
    Got me feelin like a World War 2 pilot fightin this Zero
    ^ those were the planes the Japs used when they used to fly the pacific
    I'm not explaining to voters.. just making sure you use it right when you flip it
    lol. The first couplet was aite, but the second made it better, and came off harsh...

    If you're wondering why anyone would say he wins, I'll explain
    Just take Alien, put a space after A.. then take the n off his name
    aite closer.



    Good battle. In the end you guys had good lines, and I enjoyed the personals the most... Thats when u guys had the most swag, and came off the most harsh....

    Alien started better than Oneduh to a slight degree, but the middle to the end off One's was a bit better than Alien's. Alien did have a better finishing line, but had a few that weren't hard enough (sway, prefer behind, serving appetizers, the 100th metasin/not sick line used against one). Your best lines imo were the archives, special olympics, robin, and family tree lines. The eggs in one basket line was just ok, as was the opener... I also dug the wordplay line a bit.

    One had his fair share of average lines with the worst being that weak attention line... The difference is he used personals throughout the whole thing, so when he missed atleast some of what was said was relevent... Point in case: the zero line was just aaaite, but the couplet after that used it as a setup for a good diss.... Alien did as well, but used slightly more generic/played concepts i.e. (sway, from behind, and metasin/oneduh disses) in his personals. I think a good part of the middle of your verse transitioned pretty well, and u gained steam as it went along.

    good battle, but even though i think some of Alien's best lines were executed well (special olympics was one of the best lines, along with robin/boy oneduh) i think One was a bit more direct, and had a whole section of 12-16 bars I liked, where as Alien would have lines I'd really like, then lines that lost the momentum...

    Good battle...

    Vote: Oneduh

    btw... this was one of the better battles I've read since I dipped out... Harshness, and a consistency throughout... good job fellas....
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  20. L. Kross

    L. Kross His Highness

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    Alien - nice champ showing, rhyme schemes were strong, punches were clever, most of the verse was pretty personal. strongest point in your verse was your attack on him swayin votes. Wether thats true or not, I believe one said that its better to have fake personals than no personals lol but my boy revs in grindtime battles an i saw a line in your verse that was flipped from a toronto grindtime battle a week ago YouTube - KOTD - Nat Select vs Speakeasy <-- 6:00

    One - Sick. real clever ideas, very creative piece. Almost entirely a personal verse also, but I feel like One had a way nastier angle, Alien attackin One swayin votes, an One is tellin him that all his sick lines, One wrote em, he lost to mainstream when one wrote for him without ones fans. Whole verse was just crazy personal, extremely mean. Definitely pulled no punches for the champ match an I got one winnin this from creativity, personals an probly the top 2 or 3 lines of the battle.


    Vote - One
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