[WK/46] [CONTENDER] 3. Reptilian (2-0) v. 4. Wreck’n’eyez (2-1) (wreck wins)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am EST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​
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  2. Reptilian

    Reptilian I need live meals.

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    Checking in. G'luck potna
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  3. wreck'n'eyez

    wreck'n'eyez Custom Title User

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  4. -Kolli$ion-

    -Kolli$ion- 3-1-5

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    wreck i saw ur shit before - nice

    edit: were u on in like 2000?
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  5. Reptilian

    Reptilian I need live meals.

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    In baseball your team mates called you a teeny cupper
    wife dont wear bikini's on beaches, you see the blubber
    wreck is not recognized, never will be discovered
    so if you in my retina then call me stevie wonder
    homi ya whole team, ya head is swave severed
    know the name - whoryu? Throwin flames? Never
    numb you up like novacaine my flowin's way better,
    now you could watch me dot i like a lowercase letter
    face kicks, jigsaw a rapper that's real talk
    cuz he fight like a bitch so i'm sawin his heels off
    cuttin off ya brake line, kill you, you real soft
    and then i watched his whole car wreck-n-eye peeled off
    wreckneyez was drew from q? This mane needs a bruisin
    came up out the closet in his late teen confusion
    not cut for this sport - try golf dame ya losin
    this is contact - i'm fuckin eyez up, no saline solution!
    When i drop a verse on this thread, people say "lets look at that"
    cuz it's bars - not fabricated lines about cookin crack
    i will break inside your house, like who the fuck u lookin at?
    Trim my balls with ya damn beard trimmer & put it back
    so what jew gonna do? Get a tombstone that says "here lies..'
    for standin in the way of ben stein so i had to just clear eyez!
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  6. wreck'n'eyez

    wreck'n'eyez Custom Title User

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    goodnight

    all the nameplays are wack.. that shits already been done
    your style is for the birds, who in turn regurgitate it to their young
    this reptile is outta his element n u prolly feel all alone
    so i'll drag ya Rep thru the mud just so i can make u feel at home
    if ya girl actin distant.. it's cuz wreck be givin her that thunder
    im in her cell phone under Aussie cuz u can always find her down under
    im from the concrete jungle, but u can survivie on land or water
    you can tell this Reptile from the hood tho.. cuz he never met his goddamn father
    but its ok tho .. i feel for you n to show you i care yo
    they say 4 walls build a home... and i equiped them with air holes
    everyone bout to see this cat fall like a leaf that flutters in autumn
    cuz to beat Reptile its back back square.. like i gotta stuttering problem
    22 lines bro, why? u ain't got stamina.. ur primed to get worse
    the real test of endurance is just tryna get past the first 4 lines of ya verse
    ya frail in text n to put out an album, no one would be buyin it son
    if u were to get a whiff of any sales rep, it's when you're appylin for one
    after this defeat i wouldn't be surprised if dude just stopped droppin
    cuz ya early success must've taken a big hit when u fell from rock bottom
    bring harm to strangers, armed'n'dangerous.. ima household threat
    while in most cases it's been stated that Reptilians make good household pets
    im still tryna see where u fit in, there's already enuff wack dudes cramed in this league
    i may have Resilient Quriousity.. n which i will be champin next week

    wussup
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  7. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    Reptilian - Solid lines were mixed in there with some very weak lines. I'll do a line by line breakdown here.
    In baseball your team mates called you a teeny cupper
    wife dont wear bikini's on beaches, you see the blubber
    Not feeling this for an opener. How do you know his girl is fat? Weak
    wreck is not recognized, never will be discovered
    so if you in my retina then call me stevie wonder
    I like what you're attempting here, but the wording is off.. Decent
    homi ya whole team, ya head is swave severed
    know the name - whoryu? Throwin flames? Never
    Is this a Grindtime reference for Swave Sever? Any case, weak line
    numb you up like novacaine my flowin's way better,
    now you could watch me dot i like a lowercase letter
    Okay.. Decent
    face kicks, jigsaw a rapper that's real talk
    cuz he fight like a bitch so i'm sawin his heels off
    Decent again
    cuttin off ya brake line, kill you, you real soft
    and then i watched his whole car wreck-n-eye peeled off
    I liked this line.. Good play on his name here. Very nice
    wreckneyez was drew from q? This mane needs a bruisin
    came up out the closet in his late teen confusion
    Nope..
    not cut for this sport - try golf dame ya losin
    this is contact - i'm fuckin eyez up, no saline solution!
    This is your best line here. Nice punchline
    When i drop a verse on this thread, people say "lets look at that"
    cuz it's bars - not fabricated lines about cookin crack
    No.. Filler
    i will break inside your house, like who the fuck u lookin at?
    Trim my balls with ya damn beard trimmer & put it back
    what? More filler.. Could have done without this line.
    so what jew gonna do? Get a tombstone that says "here lies..'
    for standin in the way of ben stein so i had to just clear eyez!
    Nice closer. Good punchline again, good flip on his name.

    So as you see, a few good concepts that needed some wording redone, Lots of filler. Your flow was solid through out, and you had some good end bar multies. Nice job in that aspect.


    wreck'n'eyez - Ok, not bad. Flow was decent, a few longer bars were mixed in there. For instance Feel All Alone / Feel At home. Should have been "Feel Alone" but whatever. You had some better concepts in there. Good flips on the Reptile name. Opener was ehh.. I liked lines 3 and 4 there. The air holes line I hope people will get. That was your most creative line in this verse. I liked the play on his verse, though in lines 13-14. So true. Household pets couplet was good too. Closer.. Nooooooo sorry.

    Vote - Wreck
    Line of the Match:
    "not cut for this sport - try golf dame ya losin
    this is contact - i'm fuckin eyez up, no saline solution!" - -Killi$ion-

    Wreck won this with more consistency in harder concepts and wording, but that saline solution line was fire.

    Good match.
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  8. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    In baseball your team mates called you a teeny cupper
    wife dont wear bikini's on beaches, you see the blubber
    ..ehh
    wreck is not recognized, never will be discovered
    so if you in my retina then call me stevie wonder
    ..nah
    homi ya whole team, ya head is swave severed
    know the name - whoryu? Throwin flames? Never
    ..weak
    numb you up like novacaine my flowin's way better,
    now you could watch me dot i like a lowercase letter
    .. played
    face kicks, jigsaw a rapper that's real talk
    cuz he fight like a bitch so i'm sawin his heels off
    ..uh, no
    cuttin off ya brake line, kill you, you real soft
    and then i watched his whole car wreck-n-eye peeled off
    .. decent
    wreckneyez was drew from q? This mane needs a bruisin
    came up out the closet in his late teen confusion
    ..ehh
    not cut for this sport - try golf dame ya losin
    this is contact - i'm fuckin eyez up, no saline solution!
    ..cool
    When i drop a verse on this thread, people say "lets look at that"
    cuz it's bars - not fabricated lines about cookin crack
    ..nah
    i will break inside your house, like who the fuck u lookin at?
    Trim my balls with ya damn beard trimmer & put it back
    ..funny, but ehh
    so what jew gonna do? Get a tombstone that says "here lies..'
    for standin in the way of ben stein so i had to just clear eyez!
    .. decent nameplay

    Overall this verse was pretty weak. I liked the wreck-n-eye peeled off line, and the saline and clear eyez lines were cool, but nothing else stood out to me.

    wreck:

    all the nameplays are wack.. that shits already been done
    your style is for the birds, who in turn regurgitate it to their young
    .. decent
    this reptile is outta his element n u prolly feel all alone
    so i'll drag ya Rep thru the mud just so i can make u feel at home
    ..ehh
    if ya girl actin distant.. it's cuz wreck be givin her that thunder
    im in her cell phone under Aussie cuz u can always find her down under
    ..ha
    im from the concrete jungle, but u can survivie on land or water
    you can tell this Reptile from the hood tho.. cuz he never met his goddamn father
    ..stretched
    but its ok tho .. i feel for you n to show you i care yo
    they say 4 walls build a home... and i equiped them with air holes
    ..hmm
    everyone bout to see this cat fall like a leaf that flutters in autumn
    cuz to beat Reptile its back back square.. like i gotta stuttering problem
    ..lol
    22 lines bro, why? u ain't got stamina.. ur primed to get worse
    the real test of endurance is just tryna get past the first 4 lines of ya verse
    .. decent
    ya frail in text n to put out an album, no one would be buyin it son
    if u were to get a whiff of any sales rep, it's when you're appylin for one
    ..cool
    after this defeat i wouldn't be surprised if dude just stopped droppin
    cuz ya early success must've taken a big hit when u fell from rock bottom
    ..nah
    bring harm to strangers, armed'n'dangerous.. ima household threat
    while in most cases it's been stated that Reptilians make good household pets
    ..could've been better
    im still tryna see where u fit in, there's already enuff wack dudes cramed in this league
    i may have Resilient Quriousity.. n which i will be champin next week
    ..nah

    Decent verse. I liked the back back square line, and the aussie line. Some others were alright too. Overall, it was a decent verse.

    vote: wreck n eyez

    He had a decent verse, and Rep had a weak verse.
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  9. SnakeBite

    SnakeBite New Member

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    Damn weak all around

    Like wtf was this
    face kicks, jigsaw a rapper that's real talk
    cuz he fight like a bitch so i'm sawin his heels off
    Come on
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  10. Thorne

    Thorne come at me bro

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    read this a few times, got to give it to wreck. basically had more lines nad was more clever. reptilian- didnt feel much, work on wording and smoothing out your words more.


    v- wreck n eyes
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  11. Quriosity

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    Reptilian, wtf at that first couplet? the two lines had literally nothing to do with each other. And we're those actually meant as disses? I'll treat them as two separate lines that just happened to rhyme. Teeny cuppers? Really? That was forced like a motherfucker. And seeing his wife's blubber was so irrelevant and uninteresting. Would make sense to reference his wife if we knew him to be married. Would make even more sense to refer to her as fat if she, indeed, was known to be fat. However, neither is the case, and thus—what the fuck were you talking about? Stevie wonder line, I don't even get it, or how it might be considered a diss rather. Just plain dumb. Homi ya whole team, ya head is swaved severed.. Huh? Like seriously, and I the only one that's thinking you're delusional at this point? What on earth do you mean? Super super forced. Why would you dot I? I get the I/eye, but what do you mean using dot here as a verb? I would not be scared if someone were to threaten to dot me. I'd laugh, in fact. Shit sounds ignorant. Let me speed this up. Heels off, no. Peeled off, eh.. no. Teen confusion, no—and why am I mentioned here? Saline solution, decent but bad poor execution. Cookin crack, no. Put it back, no—wtf? Clear eyes, no, and horrible execution. Overall, this was a horrible verse. Truthfully, I wish I hadn't read it. Not sure how to remain positive here, so I won't. Dust off.

    Wreck, I liked the first two and could drop my vote just after that. Twice as much as rep offered. However, as is, I'd say they need to be cleaned up a bit to be quoted. Birds concept was dope to me though, and mud line was played, but relevant here. Aussie was original. Again, I think it needs to be cleaned up, and not truly an effective punch, but nice nonetheless. Not feeling the father or air holes.. those were throwaways. Autumn setup is stretched/dumb. Don't get the back back square/stuttering reference. Sounded like a video game move, but you tied it into stuttering and I'm confused. Again, I blame the writer, not the reader. But maybe it's just over my head, or under, as I see others quoting it. Test of endurance, nice. Dug the sales rep concept, but you didn't pull it off. Rock bottom, no. Household pet, eh.. no. And you closer was stupid. Overall, I wouldn't rate this near nice, but leaps and bounds beyond what rep posted.

    Vote - wreck, easily, although rep deserves the credit for being so wack here.
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  12. Quriosity

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    4-0, wreck'n'eyez.
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  13. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    wreck is not recognized, never will be discovered
    so if you in my retina then call me stevie wonder

    cuttin off ya brake line, kill you, you real soft
    and then i watched his whole car wreck-n-eye peeled off


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    wreck:

    all the nameplays are wack.. that shits already been done
    your style is for the birds, who in turn regurgitate it to their young

    this reptile is outta his element n u prolly feel all alone
    so i'll drag ya Rep thru the mud just so i can make u feel at home

    if ya girl actin distant.. it's cuz wreck be givin her that thunder
    im in her cell phone under Aussie cuz u can always find her down under

    22 lines bro, why? u ain't got stamina.. ur primed to get worse
    the real test of endurance is just tryna get past the first 4 lines of ya verse

    ya frail in text n to put out an album, no one would be buyin it son
    if u were to get a whiff of any sales rep, it's when you're appylin for one


    vote-Wreck
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