[WK/45] [Champ] 01) ExodusIII 9-2 v. 02) Murder.txt 5-1 (exodus wins)

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  1. Quriosity

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    [01] - The deadline for verses is Friday @ 10:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Saturday @ 10:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 10:59pm EST.


    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.


    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties. If a line limit is not agreed upon by both competitors, the second to post must match the number of lines posted by the first. You may post less, but never more.
    [12] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.
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  2. Quriosity

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  3. Murder.txt

    Murder.txt Stomping fools.

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  4. ExodusIII

    ExodusIII New Member

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    drop however many you like...i'll be back befiore deadline
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  5. ExodusIII

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    this should be a great battle, cuz lately i've been smashin' fakes
    and murder's known to put on a spectacle...every time he masterbates
    ugly fuck, you'd have a better chance with women if your head was severed off
    might as well pull the pin now...cuz it's the only way you're gettin off
    ...something's shady 'bout this cat...man he aight right
    calls himself murder.txt cuz each verse consist of about 8 bytes
    your girl's a floozie, I hit it...dude heard the rumers too and he's shitty
    cuz 'Exodus' been in those draws in every hotel room in the city
    i'm like who the fuck are you? he's scared silent when i'm up in his face
    all i hear is murmur...while this shook faggot stutters his name
    bitches laugh at this little nigga...so when i see you flossin' it's weak
    cuz Mur calls it gettin' brain but his girl calls it flossin' her teeth


    this faggot voted against me too...that proves he's a wack rookie
    it's like your childhood...
    tried to keep the belt outta reach, and still got an ass whoppin
    all i hear is snoring...cuz murders whole verse is boring
    only thing they'll quote is your sig...after putting ExodusII before it
    droppin' wack and played shit, it's your only chance and you waste it
    ...cuz victory is sweet but you'll di-gest trynna taste it
    ...and fuck murder...i'm a cannibal in this fight game
    only time you'll see me back peddle is using his spine as a bike chain
    Ex is paid, this bummy nigga's on sidewalks trynna ask for dough
    you aint no murder.txt...nigga you're more like a ransom note


    frontin' like last week was a breeze even though your rhymes are stale
    how was that a mur-key verse? it's 'clear to see' that you tried and failed
    yeah it's a weak champ match, but it's only cuz that faggot is in it
    they call it show time, but voters would much rather you didn't
    trust it...i'm too busy fucking to be fighting with hoes
    it's not that murder likes 'make-up' sex...it's just the only kind that he knows
    you aint a pro, you aint ready yet...so take it slow
    cuz there's a 'gulf' of talent between us and you've got a fairway to go
    I'm cocky cuz my throw away punches could take ya
    Mur's such weak competition i'm saving my decent lines for Yung Money or Saber

    i went 32
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  6. Murder.txt

    Murder.txt Stomping fools.

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    rofl @ saying you only go 16-20.. then jumping out with 32 lines


    bitch please


    don’t think you’ll best me. murder.txt be running this place kid
    ironic this shit’s E-MT, cuz you’ll need one when I pummel ya face in
    dude you’ve lost the title, know matter how you attackin me right
    call this a hostile takeover, and I don’t mean how ex gets laid on a saturday night
    & last week was about showing how the height of ya talent is relevant
    I was telling dudes I’m the next champ, you were still bragging about losing to MetaSin
    & this geek is in love with his PC, so with chicks this ngga is sorry
    cuz one look at a computer & his penis peaks at 3½ inches and floppy
    I’m raising funds with this beating, my fists bringing lucrative shares
    beating you is such a cake walk.. next week i'm thinking I'll try musical chairs
    I find it amusing that your cocky, especially since I wreck zero’s man
    & if you’re ex the talented, oneduh’s a front man for the next emo band
    you see murder is sick with it, chicks line up to be dating with me
    but E3 brings stampedes.. of middle-aged geeks with their xbox, playstation & wii
    dudes thought I was magus, then user.. now ex is like “who will I meet?”
    I’ll keep it simple, and you can call me “another ngga that you’ll never beat”
    your game is weak son, you’re just a chicks last option it seems
    see, most dudes have a wingman.. ex struggles with a whole soccer team
    shit, even my penis be rockin endorsements, girls know how I flex
    but this week they’ll see murder endure ex without even promoting safe sex
    you’ve been garbage since forever.. and time has set its toll
    cuz ya text run’s been such a fade out.. that last verse could double as a credit roll
    I’m like a spy in this shit.. & this dungeons & dragons faggot is hopeless
    I’m a cloak & dagger type dude, ex still rolls with a longsword n’ magical potions
    see I’ve got throwaways to.. cuz my weaker shit’d leave you wrecked geek
    n’ I’m seeing a light at the end of the tunnel, ready to battle me for the title next week
    seriously though.. you do leave dudes shaken n’ torn
    ex is known for breaking up people, just ask his parents about the day he was born
    now mom’s is working the corners, a hooker for the turn of the century
    had so many foreigners inside her, her vag requires a SWAT team for tactical entry
    I’m a sex god.. I go through pregnancy scares weekly at best
    but I’m used to false positives.. shit, I used to be sure you were decent at text


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  7. Venamis

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    Wow. Really ill verse. That bike chain and txt/8byte lines were killing me haha. I was def feeling your verse. That fairway line was ill too. Good job.
    WOW @ that E3 line. That shit was funny as hell. You had a pretty ill verse two, but those two punches stood out the most. Good drop.

    Two pretty ill drops but I gotta give it to Exodus.

    vote - exodus
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  8. Troof

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    exodusIII

    your girl's a floozie, I hit it...dude heard the rumers too and he's shitty
    cuz 'Exodus' been in those draws in every hotel room in the city
    i'm like who the fuck are you? he's scared silent when i'm up in his face
    all i hear is murmur...while this shook faggot stutters his name

    this faggot voted against me too...that proves he's a wack rookie
    it's like your childhood...
    tried to keep the belt outta reach, and still got an ass whoppin
    all i hear is snoring...cuz murders whole verse is boring
    only thing they'll quote is your sig...after putting ExodusII before it
    ...and fuck murder...i'm a cannibal in this fight game
    only time you'll see me back peddle is using his spine as a bike chain

    Ex is paid, this bummy nigga's on sidewalks trynna ask for dough
    you aint no murder.txt...nigga you're more like a ransom note
    yeah it's a weak champ match, but it's only cuz that faggot is in it
    they call it show time, but voters would much rather you didn't



    murder.txt

    don’t think you’ll best me. murder.txt be running this place kid
    ironic this shit’s E-MT, cuz you’ll need one when I pummel ya face in
    you see murder is sick with it, chicks line up to be dating with me
    but E3 brings stampedes.. of middle-aged geeks with their xbox, playstation & wii

    dudes thought I was magus, then user.. now ex is like “who will I meet?”
    I’ll keep it simple, and you can call me “another ngga that you’ll never beat”
    your game is weak son, you’re just a chicks last option it seems
    see, most dudes have a wingman.. ex struggles with a whole soccer team
    see I’ve got throwaways to.. cuz my weaker shit’d leave you wrecked geek
    n’ I’m seeing a light at the end of the tunnel, ready to battle me for the title next week

    seriously though.. you do leave dudes shaken n’ torn
    ex is known for breaking up people, just ask his parents about the day he was born
    I’m a sex god.. I go through pregnancy scares weekly at best
    but I’m used to false positives.. shit, I used to be sure you were decent at text

    daaaaamn nice one guys, ive never heard of Murder before

    the line of the battle was the E3 line from Murder.. Murder hit some high spots for sure.. my next two favorites were the wingman and light at the end of the tunnell.. those were both good

    Ex though was consistenly solid, I dug the ExodusII line, even the Exodus bible line was kind of cool, back peddle, murmur, both were pretty solid lines, I mean damn, this verse is hard to vote against

    i bolded what i thought was the very best from each

    i think Murder had the lotb, and made this close but Exodus was pretty nice with it here

    vote exodus
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  9. Quriosity

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    this should be a great battle, cuz lately i've been smashin' fakes
    and murder's known to put on a spectacle...every time he masterbates
    bitches laugh at this little nigga...so when i see you flossin' it's weak
    cuz Mur calls it gettin' brain but his girl calls it flossin' her teeth
    all i hear is snoring...cuz murders whole verse is boring
    only thing they'll quote is your sig...after putting ExodusII before it
    ...and fuck murder...i'm a cannibal in this fight game
    only time you'll see me back peddle is using his spine as a bike chain
    Ex is paid, this bummy nigga's on sidewalks trynna ask for dough
    you aint no murder.txt...nigga you're more like a ransom note
    yeah it's a weak champ match, but it's only cuz that faggot is in it
    they call it show time, but voters would much rather you didn't
    trust it...i'm too busy fucking to be fighting with hoes
    it's not that murder likes 'make-up' sex...it's just the only kind that he knows

    v.

    don’t think you’ll best me. murder.txt be running this place kid
    ironic this shit’s E-MT, cuz you’ll need one when I pummel ya face in
    & last week was about showing how the height of ya talent is relevant
    I was telling dudes I’m the next champ, you were still bragging about losing to MetaSin
    dudes thought I was magus, then user.. now ex is like “who will I meet?”
    I’ll keep it simple, and you can call me “another ngga that you’ll never beat”
    see I’ve got throwaways to.. cuz my weaker shit’d leave you wrecked geek
    n’ I’m seeing a light at the end of the tunnel, ready to battle me for the title next week

    i quoted everything i could. though this champ match was fulfilling due to length and the obvious effort put in, it wasn't there talent-wise. i'd say exodus delivered because i was surprised at his verse. i've come not to expect but so much from him and i think he went all in with this one. murder/nick fletcher disappointed because i expected more, and honestly i expected a win, but he was just long winded and boring. neither were great though, but one clearly rose to the occasion. the main difference was the approach, in which case exodus was more direct which worked in his favor while nick seemed to have these boring, long winded, wordy punches. a lot of shit was corny in nick's verse and the rest was just over-thought and over-written. ex didn't have too much corny stuff, but some lines just weren't that good. yet, he had more harshness throughout and more lines that i could dig. nick had some straight up stupid shit like the game system line, the dungeon's and dragons shit, swat team, credit roll, false positives, etc. i could literally go on and on. in the end, i just didn't like it. flow dragged, lines were ineffective, and the bars were just too much. ex had better material to work with and it showed. a few lines were comical, but ex also had some corny shit throughout like the stutter, ass whooping, digest, and his closer. still, he gets the win.

    VOTE - EXODUSIII
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  10. Quriosity

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  11. ExodusIII

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  12. 2triple0

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    vote: murder

    i thought exodus didn't have the best flow throughout his piece, and a lot of his punches just seemed weaker or not connecting compared with murder's verse... there were a couple of lines that picked up his verse towards the ends, but i still feel that murder had just enough to take this... the quotes in ex's verse didn't seem extremely relevant and i felt that made his verse lack more substance..

    murder's verse had a good flow, quality punches, and at some moments i almost wanted to smile.. i thought even though he wasn't as personal as ex maybe his punches were enough to take my vote, because ex didn't word his personals well.. i enjoyed reading murder's verse more and ex's verse just didn't feel like a champ match verse to me...
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  13. Sakim Aerias

    Sakim Aerias Sunset Cradling Prince

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    This was a very good battle best I've seen all week...
    Though it pains me to quote anything I don't think I'd have time
    It was everywhere Ether that is being thrown from both sides.


    Murder's verse was what I liked the E3 line was killer that was the line of the battle and hopefully the number one line this week in the mag. That verse had some lines I really didnt care for but I still went on with them
    Exodus had a stronger verse out of the two and was more consistent with his approach than murder was

    because consistency wins battles.

    Vote-Exodus
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  14. Xquisite

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    Exodus,

    i'm like who the fuck are you? he's scared silent when i'm up in his face
    all i hear is murmur...while this shook faggot stutters his name
    this faggot voted against me too...that proves he's a wack rookie
    it's like your childhood...
    tried to keep the belt outta reach, and still got an ass whoppin
    droppin' wack and played shit, it's your only chance and you waste it
    ...cuz victory is sweet but you'll di-gest trynna taste it
    ...and fuck murder...i'm a cannibal in this fight game
    only time you'll see me back peddle is using his spine as a bike chain
    Ex is paid, this bummy nigga's on sidewalks trynna ask for dough
    you aint no murder.txt...nigga you're more like a ransom note
    frontin' like last week was a breeze even though your rhymes are stale
    how was that a mur-key verse? it's 'clear to see' that you tried and failed
    yeah it's a weak champ match, but it's only cuz that faggot is in it
    they call it show time, but voters would much rather you didn't
    you aint a pro, you aint ready yet...so take it slow
    cuz there's a 'gulf' of talent between us and you've got a fairway to go
    I'm cocky cuz my throw away punches could take ya
    Mur's such weak competition i'm saving my decent lines for Yung Money or Saber

    vs.

    MT,

    don’t think you’ll best me. murder.txt be running this place kid
    ironic this shit’s E-MT, cuz you’ll need one when I pummel ya face in
    & last week was about showing how the height of ya talent is relevant
    I was telling dudes I’m the next champ, you were still bragging about losing to MetaSin
    I’m raising funds with this beating, my fists bringing lucrative shares
    beating you is such a cake walk.. next week i'm thinking I'll try musical chairs
    you see murder is sick with it, chicks line up to be dating with me
    but E3 brings stampedes.. of middle-aged geeks with their xbox, playstation & wii
    dudes thought I was magus, then user.. now ex is like “who will I meet?”
    I’ll keep it simple, and you can call me “another ngga that you’ll never beat”
    your game is weak son, you’re just a chicks last option it seems
    see, most dudes have a wingman.. ex struggles with a whole soccer team
    shit, even my penis be rockin endorsements, girls know how I flex
    but this week they’ll see murder endure ex without even promoting safe sex
    you’ve been garbage since forever.. and time has set its toll
    cuz ya text run’s been such a fade out.. that last verse could double as a credit roll
    seriously though.. you do leave dudes shaken n’ torn
    ex is known for breaking up people, just ask his parents about the day he was born
    now mom’s is working the corners, a hooker for the turn of the century
    had so many foreigners inside her, her vag requires a SWAT team for tactical entry
    I’m a sex god.. I go through pregnancy scares weekly at best
    but I’m used to false positives.. shit, I used to be sure you were decent at text


    I agree and disagree with the majority here...I thought Murder.txt was more consistent with alot of nice lines, while Exodus started off blah to me....but Exodus did pick it up in the middle of his verse and didnt stop. Murder.txt had alot off coo lines but Exodus had more dope lines. Exodus' shit was just hittin hard with some punches. Murder.txt's punches were hittin but they werent haymakers for the most part...although that braggin about losing to metasin shit left a scar....this was a really really close battle. Murder.txt was more consistent but Exodus was more effective.....hmmm, well Exodus' nonquotables werent terrible and dude had a fairly consistent verse as well so imma go with Exodus for havin the more effective verse...definately a good champ match tho...you both brought that fiya.

    Vote = Exodus
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  15. T.a.C

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    Ex:

    this faggot voted against me too...that proves he's a wack rookie
    it's like your childhood...
    tried to keep the belt outta reach, and still got an ass whoppin

    Ex is paid, this bummy nigga's on sidewalks trynna ask for dough
    you aint no murder.txt...nigga you're more like a ransom note

    frontin' like last week was a breeze even though your rhymes are stale
    how was that a mur-key verse? it's 'clear to see' that you tried and failed

    yeah it's a weak champ match, but it's only cuz that faggot is in it
    they call it show time, but voters would much rather you didn't

    trust it...i'm too busy fucking to be fighting with hoes
    it's not that murder likes 'make-up' sex...it's just the only kind that he knows

    you aint a pro, you aint ready yet...so take it slow
    cuz there's a 'gulf' of talent between us and you've got a fairway to go

    I'm cocky cuz my throw away punches could take ya
    Mur's such weak competition i'm saving my decent lines for Yung Money or Saber

    vs

    Murder:

    you woulda been better if some of your lines rhymed but i didnt find anything quotable

    vote- Ex
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  16. Main Stream

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    your girl's a floozie, I hit it...dude heard the rumers too and he's shitty
    cuz 'Exodus' been in those draws in every hotel room in the city
    bitches laugh at this little nigga...so when i see you flossin' it's weak
    cuz Mur calls it gettin' brain but his girl calls it flossin' her teeth
    Ex is paid, this bummy nigga's on sidewalks trynna ask for dough
    you aint no murder.txt...nigga you're more like a ransom note
    trust it...i'm too busy fucking to be fighting with hoes
    it's not that murder likes 'make-up' sex...it's just the only kind that he knows


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    don’t think you’ll best me. murder.txt be running this place kid
    ironic this shit’s E-MT, cuz you’ll need one when I pummel ya face in
    & last week was about showing how the height of ya talent is relevant
    I was telling dudes I’m the next champ, you were still bragging about losing to MetaSin
    your game is weak son, you’re just a chicks last option it seems
    see, most dudes have a wingman.. ex struggles with a whole soccer team
    I’m like a spy in this shit.. & this dungeons & dragons faggot is hopeless
    I’m a cloak & dagger type dude, ex still rolls with a longsword n’ magical potions
    now mom’s is working the corners, a hooker for the turn of the century
    had so many foreigners inside her, her vag requires a SWAT team for tactical entry


    Real close battle here and an enjoyable read. Ex had 4 nice lines - the ransom note and bible reference were my favorites. Murder had 5 that stood out to me (E-MT, metasin and dungeons were the best). I had to reread both verses over bcuz at first it was too close to call. However after the 2nd read more of murder's lines stood out to me. Very nice battle but I have to go against the grain here.


    vote=murder
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  17. Quriosity

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    exodusiii wins, 6-2 in votes.
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