[WK/45] 27) Jordan Robinson 0-0 v. 28) Oneduh 0-0 (kungduh wins)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    [01] - The deadline for verses is Friday @ 10:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Saturday @ 10:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 10:59pm EST.


    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.


    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties. If a line limit is not agreed upon by both competitors, the second to post must match the number of lines posted by the first. You may post less, but never more.
    [12] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.
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  2. Jordan Robinson

    Jordan Robinson All Game

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  3. Quriosity

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  4. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    I was thinking 16..
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  5. Jordan Robinson

    Jordan Robinson All Game

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    Early 12...

    You aint coming up, Jordan put you back down like its bed time,
    If this is OD’s calling then consider me the poison control help line,
    You aint rising, you aint got the right ingredients to phase me,
    Looks Like ………………………………...........................
    Oneduh is the one loaf of bread that wont be making it to the bakery,
    Your recycled lines and flipped concepts are not credible for warfare,
    One couldn’t think outside the box, waiting line in a game of four square,
    No hope , Your lines have seen more black holes than a bar of soap,
    This aint a joke, ill have the voters cop out one’duh like im telling a Blonde joke,
    He swallows Viagra cause no gurl would ever give him a hard on chance
    beating me? would resulted in third degree burns on both of his hands,
    So the Tuff Talk Arguments leaves me dumbfounded with Astonishment,
    How am I facing conflict when your one of T.a.C’s sweep away accomplishments

    Think about that...
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  6. kungfugrip

    kungfugrip New Member

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    ayo Oneduh got at me & asked me to post his verse





    fuck this homo, i think the nerd is wilin'
    Robinson Crusoe wack they all got banished to a deserted island
    i don't want to murder u, but if u ask i'll say
    i wish u had no Air Jordan. like Footaction on Black Friday
    Oneduh can't lose, plus u can't do me no damage, pops
    u got a 'bottom of the Barrel look' & i'm prayin that the hammer drops
    of couse ur gonna lose. what'd you expect geek
    this faggot got two last names, like u and whoever i face next week
    i'll embarass u. i don't wanna see u drop for a while
    faggot, i'll clean your clock. u still need to polish ur style
    here's a played line, because i'm colder than a blizzard
    so fuck that Bull. if u want a win, Jordan better be a Wizard



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  7. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  8. Quriosity

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    Your recycled lines and flipped concepts are not credible for warfare,
    One couldn’t think outside the box, waiting line in a game of four square,
    So the Tuff Talk Arguments leaves me dumbfounded with Astonishment,
    How am I facing conflict when your one of T.a.C’s sweep away accomplishments

    v.

    uck this homo, i think the nerd is wilin'
    Robinson Crusoe wack they all got banished to a deserted island
    of couse ur gonna lose. what'd you expect geek
    this faggot got two last names, like u and whoever i face next week

    even in quotes, i know, but keep in mind that JR's quotes were borderline wack while kungduh's quotes were nice. also, the rest of kungduh's verse was above the rest of JR's. the four square was the only notable concept and only in concept and only because i've never heard the reference, or twist on the reference, before. i thought the four square addition was creative though here it was executed poorly, thus unworthy of actually quoting. the second line was slightly funny, but dumb for the fact that everybody knows or should know that i wrote that verse for tac. kung's 2 bars that i quoted were nice and witty. that crusoe shit was creative and the last names, though done before, was a much more creative flip. a better delivery too with more direct punches while JR forced extra wording for some fictional added effect that really hurt the verse. not much to go on, but the decision was still quite easy.

    VOTE - KUNGDUH
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  9. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    JR
    You aint coming up, Jordan put you back down like its bed time,
    If this is OD’s calling then consider me the poison control help line,
    nah..this wasn't all that, the concept wasn't too good is what made this hit kind of weak
    You aint rising, you aint got the right ingredients to phase me,
    Looks Like ………………………………....................... ....
    Oneduh is the one loaf of bread that wont be making it to the bakery,
    this was cool..concepts been used before many times though

    Your recycled lines and flipped concepts are not credible for warfare,
    One couldn’t think outside the box, waiting line in a game of four square
    pretty good
    No hope , Your lines have seen more black holes than a bar of soap,
    This aint a joke, ill have the voters cop out one’duh like im telling a Blonde joke,
    aight, needs rewording tho
    He swallows Viagra cause no gurl would ever give him a hard on chance
    beating me? would resulted in third degree burns on both of his hands,
    nah, not feeling...
    So the Tuff Talk Arguments leaves me dumbfounded with Astonishment,
    How am I facing conflict when your one of T.a.C’s sweep away accomplishments
    nice personal

    One or Kung, whoever

    fuck this homo, i think the nerd is wilin'
    Robinson Crusoe wack they all got banished to a deserted island
    this was aight
    don't want to murder u, but if u ask i'll say
    i wish u had no Air Jordan. like Footaction on Black Friday
    lol, I like this
    Oneduh can't lose, plus u can't do me no damage, pops
    u got a 'bottom of the Barrel look' & i'm prayin that the hammer drops
    aight
    of couse ur gonna lose. what'd you expect geek
    this faggot got two last names, like u and whoever i face next week
    ehhh...
    i'll embarass u. i don't wanna see u drop for a while
    faggot, i'll clean your clock. u still need to polish ur style
    cool
    here's a played line, because i'm colder than a blizzard
    so fuck that Bull. if u want a win, Jordan better be a Wizard
    aight..

    I think Kungduh got this by a small margin for better concepts and punches

    vote-Kungduh
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  10. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

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  11. ExodusIII

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    jr
    Your recycled lines and flipped concepts are not credible for warfare,
    One couldn’t think outside the box, waiting line in a game of four square
    So the Tuff Talk Arguments leaves me dumbfounded with Astonishment,
    How am I facing conflict when your one of T.a.C’s sweep away accomplishments
    those were nice

    one
    fuck this homo, i think the nerd is wilin'
    Robinson Crusoe wack they all got banished to a deserted island
    don't want to murder u, but if u ask i'll say
    i wish u had no Air Jordan. like Footaction on Black Friday
    of couse ur gonna lose. what'd you expect geek
    this faggot got two last names, like u and whoever i face next week

    vote one...he was just more polished overall...jr put in a decent showing tho
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  12. 2triple0

    2triple0 New Member

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    nothing

    vs.

    fuck this homo, i think the nerd is wilin'
    Robinson Crusoe wack they all got banished to a deserted island
    i don't want to murder u, but if u ask i'll say
    i wish u had no Air Jordan. like Footaction on Black Friday
    Oneduh can't lose, plus u can't do me no damage, pops
    u got a 'bottom of the Barrel look' & i'm prayin that the hammer drops

    vote: oneduh
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  13. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    kungduh wins, 4-0 in votes.
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