[WK/41] [Special IAR Finale] Deon vs. Nick Fletcher (Deon wins)

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  1. Oneduh

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    Special IAR Finale

    CURRENT VOTES

    Nick Fletcher [4]
    Styk Figer*
    Quriosity*
    Hush!
    KempoMRK*

    I'm Deon [6]
    Rex Stout*
    David Lama*
    J.Hens.*
    Burd.
    Roscoe Babbage
    Servical​
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  2. SPuL

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  4. Hush!

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    this is one of those votes thats gonna end up looking like a fucking book report... Ima try to make it brief n to the point

    Nick u opened up with like 4 nice personal lines n then hit with the run of the mill line which was funny so it was a uphill start..rest of that verse was also good but nothing banged to the point of standing out at the end of the battle
    2nd part of ur verse opened with another personal line that worked n was just worded in that way that made it sound that much better..interface was hot double meaning..fair ease was hot..but I didnt like the wording if u would have also made him look gay at the same time It woulda be a double win for u in my book...dunno to me I see something u could have used to a greater effect..haha tip his hat/striptease was crazy though..everything worked on that...HAHA fortune favors the bold u be a broke pussy bitch...line of ur verse so far to me thats ruthless..aside from that there was a SLIGHT fizzle in ya verse around this time...after school special was wierd setup wise but the punch was sick..lot of references/personals in the closeout half of ur verse n I dont get them all soooooo for how I can call it.......I cant say it was a bad ending just not the kinda bang out close I was looking for..either way that verse had more than a hanfull of highlights

    deon...opener was pretty cool maybe its the bud but I almost didnt get it n had to take a sec to realize it hit..haha overage charged okay thats tuff....nickll owe deon a apology was notable as well..n there were some other good wordplays in there but I think u also had a kind of downspurt around the 2nd half of that verse.....
    2nd verse came in funny also had alot of personals BDC/best member line had that kinda swag on it where u can just hear someone1 sayen it ..move the crowd also had a nice vibe to it....end of that verse had a strong attack vibe to it n wording was on every time....

    this is a hard call......aside from the fact u both had lines referering to shit I either knew half or nothing about...its still close on every other aspect...Im lleaning towards Fletch cos he prolly said more things that left a bigger impact on me when I think back on it without looking again....

    yea I reread....good battle but I gotta say Nick he had a way with words in this one to even make his weaker punches feel like they hit harder....It took me a few mins to make the call but I gotta go with my initial instint

    vote-nick fletch
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  5. Burd.

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    deon.



    I'm the best so be worried, D'll straight mess up this fairy,
    Nick tried hard to no avail..so he put on a wedding dress & got married.
    Your moms trashy & flirty, but most guys stray from tha silly hoe,
    & that tease trailer stinks so bad it'd get a movie released straight to video.
    I love your honesty, & I'm usually all for the beef son,
    but who's buying ya tough talk, when I was YOUR favorite since WEEK 1?!?!?!
    so plz quit knockin ya idol cuz you flopped for the title,
    its funny I'm facing Nick, when everybody thought Me vs Hops was the finals.
    & I shut you out before, so now i'm crushing this faggot twice,
    BDC gave me their best member...& i'm sorry I no showed Tettris on BragginWrites.
    now after reading each verse, how can anyone call him better?
    I drop that murder.txt. they shoulda dropped you from the alias all together.
    Dont worry how I knew, just know ur not passin a problem,
    I got the inside scoop, while Nick works part-time at baskin & robbins.
    You always force it dude, those are personals accordin to who?
    You shouldve posted a verse, not a list of textcees more important than you.

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    nick


    shit, our league runs have been about one thing from the onset
    me aimin for cash, n’ you aimin for another week to flip the same concepts
    pimp daddy? you’re ugly as hell.. looks just don’t match up to mine dude
    I may be white with a shaved head..
    ..but you look like the lovechild of rick ross and ice cube
    plus ya partner is gay, n’ it’s clear who’s the bitch n’ the butch
    see you’re HotDogVendorMan, so clearly you’ve never been the guy with the nuts
    plus, fantasy beckons.. coz in reality you got no chance of victory homes
    coz I stomp dudes with fair ease, you just hang out with the pixies n’ gnomes
    I win over guys when I floor ‘em, & dude’s already loving my slick steez
    so if I made defcon tip his hat to me, this bitch’ll be doin a striptease
    see I’m swift when I rip ho’s.. n’ this fag cudn’t go a round with a fetus
    I’ll leave him limp in two shakes, establishing common ground with his penis
    n’ you can flip how I hyped you, but don’t say I can’t compete b
    coz props aside.. you’ll need more than questionable votes if you plan to beat me

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    ok sooo i quoted everything i liked/sorta liked/thought was ok. it's still up in the air for me tho. i mean, nick came at deon hard. he had more personal lines but then deon had wittier ones. deon had fewer bars i didn't like but the ones i didn't were worse than the ones that i didn't like from nick. deon had some haymakers tho. which really evens things out. so i guess both were sorta consistent throughout. they had a bad few lines then a cool one or two. you guys should have just dropped like 20 instead of tryna force out 40 or w/e it was that you did. but yea anyway, i thought nicks two shakes line was hilarious. it was lotb for me.. but i think deon had the more polished verse w. slightly better wording and execution, his concepts were slightly more creative altho both had some eh lines. so yea.

    v/ deon.
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  6. Roscoe Babbage

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    OK, since this shit needs votes..flllluckit:

    shit, our league runs have been about one thing from the onset
    me aimin for cash, n’ you aimin for another week to flip the same concepts

    see deon’s always been common as fuck, that’s just how this queer roll
    run of the mill’s been his style almost as long as its been his career goal
    fuck thinking you’re on my level.. you’re time could be better spent b
    saying I suck, bitch.. I can’t remember the last time you voted against me

    & I’ll establish this shit as my stompin grounds after I defeat this ho
    since he got stomped by a guy I just fucking stomped 2 weeks in a row
    n’ them body blows are weak yo.. against me you’ll stumble and slip
    u’ve never thrown a fist interface, just navigated sites for punches to flip
    plus, fantasy beckons.. coz in reality you got no chance of victory homes
    coz I stomp dudes with fair ease, you just hang out with the pixies n’ gnomes
    I win over guys when I floor ‘em, & dude’s already loving my slick steez
    so if I made defcon tip his hat to me, this bitch’ll be doin a striptease
    see I’m swift when I rip ho’s.. n’ this fag cudn’t go a round with a fetus
    I’ll leave him limp in two shakes, establishing common ground with his penis

    n’ this one’s for you.. ya moms black hole pussy cud swallow an erection
    that’s just a shot in the dark though, like the moments that led to your conception
    you’ve been a loser forever.. back of the class, worshipping dudes from afar
    rollin on RM as ‘I’m Deon’, like you actually thought people care who you are
    n’ you can flip how I hyped you, but don’t say I can’t compete b
    coz props aside.. you’ll need more than questionable votes if you plan to beat me

    n’ you thought Hops don’t like me, but he won’t disagree that we’re better
    we were in league all along, & the only two that are leaving with cheddar


    .vs.

    This guys a pedo, you should see Nick lure'm in with a nudge,
    Sprint sends me overage charges, while you get yours sent from the judge.

    Lets be real, you owe every view this thread receieves all to me,
    & after that childish performance here... NickeloDeon an apology.
    see...
    I'm the best so be worried, D'll straight mess up this fairy,
    Nick tried hard to no avail..so he put on a wedding dress & got married.
    Your moms trashy & flirty, but most guys stray from tha silly hoe,
    & that tease trailer stinks so bad it'd get a movie released straight to video.

    I love your honesty, & I'm usually all for the beef son,
    but who's buying ya tough talk, when I was YOUR favorite since WEEK 1?!?!?!

    & SPEAKING of Dohpe, i'm telling this bitch dont even act stupid,
    when USER swept & clowned Nicks faggot ass all the way off of rapmusic.

    now after reading each verse, how can anyone call him better?
    I drop that murder.txt. they shoulda dropped you from the alias all together.
    Dont worry how I knew, just know ur not passin a problem,
    I got the inside scoop, while Nick works part-time at baskin & robbins.
    Kid you wack so we know you not matchin my flow,
    But you CAN move the crowd...in a file line to their cars AFTER my show.
    You always force it dude, those are personals accordin to who?
    You shouldve posted a verse, not a list of textcees more important than you.

    I posted late before, but now I guess the vibe is killed,
    No Extenze Nick? Yeah, cuz after I win he wont have money to buy the pills.

    This was over long ago, you wanna know when ya grasp of this ended?
    When you let being here become a bigger priority than you actually winning.


    WOOWWWW, this was pretty awesome, no-bullshit a very, very evenly matched battle, props to both battlers, this shit was ill. Now on to the analysis: Fletch came out with the heat fa'sho, throw a whole lotta heavy personals and was lookin to humiliate his opponent and he succeed in many of his lines. Yet there were a few that were a bit too straight-foward with there wording, which caused those said lines to fall flat. As for HDVM, he had an adundant supply of creative punches and concepts. Many of his lines fresh ideas or at least a fresh flip. The only obvious problem with the verse is some of the wording's awkward at times, which costed some readibilty at times. Overall I'd haveta lean towards Deon a bit, due to all of the creative lines. Fletch was hard with the perso's, but like I said, the verse was too plain with the hits. Too many jabs and not enough hooks or uppercuts, so VOTE - DEON.

    ...much respect to u brothers on a dope battle.
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  7. Voodu

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    word, lets get some more on this shit.
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  9. Voodu

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    over..
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  10. Roscoe Babbage

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    this some bullshit, niggas not voting at all.
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    lol well it did get 10 votes total
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    well, this is usually the day RBL battlers hit up them votes

    rofl though @ 10 votes in 2 weeks.. DAMN!
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  13. I'm Deon

    I'm Deon the guy who fucked ur mom

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    i know right?

    shoulda went 20
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    blame spul with his fucking 36 lines minimum rule.
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  15. I'm Deon

    I'm Deon the guy who fucked ur mom

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    lol he did pull a switch up on everybody

    LINE LIMIT CHANGE!!!!
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    First of all, is this for money? Lol whoever wins, you guys should split the money with each other.

    Anyway both verses shoulda been shorter, i didn't feel close to 40 bars was necessary but at the same time i didn't think it really hurt either verse since neither one didn't seem to drag to me, if that makes sense.

    Basically, Nick came out swinging, had hard hitting personals that would've made a newbie cry.

    Dude was nasty, them personals were like haymakers, and the wording was good for the most part.

    Deon just did what he always does, started off slow but gradually picked apart his opponent with cleverness, wit and creativity.

    He didn't have as many hard hitting lines as Nick, but he made up for it with consistancy and more cleaner shots throughout.

    This is as close as a battle can get, i prefer Nick's style but Deon just brought a little more variety as a battle verse in my opinion.

    Nick, never heard of you but props, it could go either way but i got Deon winning this by a small margin.

    V/Deon
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    ^for $400.

    but thanks for voting.

    7-4 Deon
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  18. Quriosity

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    i wish you guys could mention who the 7th vote is so i can edit the name and link to the vote in the post above. and how long before nick admits defeat?
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    ^some guy on BW. E something lol
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  20. SPuL

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    Deon wins 7-4 and is the LTL season 1 champion.
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