[WK/37] [Champ] 01) TREDone 5-0 v. 02) Blue Bayou 5-0 (blue wins)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 10:00pm EST.


    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.


    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties. An agreement of a line limit will thereby serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required.
    [12] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.
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  2. TREDone

    TREDone New Member

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  3. Blue Bayou

    Blue Bayou The Sothist.

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  4. Blue Bayou

    Blue Bayou The Sothist.

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    i was thinkin like 24-30ish.. that cool?
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  5. TREDone

    TREDone New Member

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    cool.

    i might drop tonight but i'll prob need an extension until friday.

    just giving you the heads up in case i can't get online.
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  6. Blue Bayou

    Blue Bayou The Sothist.

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    ight, tomorrow it is.
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  7. Blue Bayou

    Blue Bayou The Sothist.

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    Champ match time, nerves goin & I’m flexin to impress
    All I hear in my mind is don’t blow it.. like this fag seconds into sex
    Walk away pussy.. ya scripts aren’t timeless & sacred
    I’ll leave you down long enough to fill even the finest of blankets
    Forget swim lessons & navy drills, this wack is deceased
    All you’ll need to see Tred-in water is scuba gear & a map to the reef
    Callin me pussy.. but really I’ma solider you bogus fruit
    I march with a Band of Brothers..ur click resembles that Jonas group
    Fuckin homo.. spend all ur time tryna soften & crotch friends
    The worlds greatest comic fan’s got NOTHIN on how often you Watchmen
    Sex life’s a lie, ha claimin “I get pussy & stunt with the girls”
    ^That shit had me rolling for so long I now got the biggest blunt in the world
    Ain’t got dolla’s either.. broke liar I should bruise ya lid
    We’d have a better chance seein Tredmill’s lookin in User’s crib
    Last week was a joke.. begged for a no-show, pleadin outta ur dread
    Cuz I’d rate Kennedy -
    & if he showed YOU’d be the one bleedin outta ur head
    Make it in audio.. this whack rapper’s just a fake n joke
    I’d destroy Tred’s tone with such ease Jason Bourne’d start takin notes
    Tre ur style is pussy, in combat no one’d vouch for ur moves
    So bring ya Kung Fu out for the fight & I’ll beat the shit outta him too
    Garbage writtens.. no hot bars - this G be plain..
    Could visit every Hawaiian village there is & STILL wouldn’t see Tiki flames
    Chose One to end ur name? guys it’s silly as fuck to beef when..
    One of u got dicked while the other needed 8 false personals just to beat him
    I’ve never seen such pussies.. entire rep’s have been sunk damn
    Faggots couldn’t BeeGee’s playin “Tragedy” w/ Barry Gibb as a front man
    Frac drop Kung & we’ll team.. next week I’ll start addin some weight bitch
    But no doubt I’ma be carryin T~R~E… so Oneduh sign us up: as Waitress.

    28.
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  8. TREDone

    TREDone New Member

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    this is do or die yo. n you so sad u can't ruin my hopes
    so the only thing Bayou after this... is a gun & suicide note
    heard you go by Ayp on RB. and you can just call it a hunch
    you got that name from that shit you throw, then call it a punch
    n now they sayin i'm Kung. & they sayin' i'm Frac
    they're also sayin' i'll win, cuz they STILL saying you're wack
    im laughin tears, and reppin homefield for these bastards here
    its like the Vikes, we'll never see the best at RB be a champ this year
    now mods are scared to champ me, Ones prolly fixin the winner
    the rbl's taken a lot of shit from this cat, n his verse is pick of the litter
    it's just TRED nigga. this faggot's so soft & wack still
    if heads are feeling Blue, my shit's the Prozac, Zoloft & Paxil
    & in that RB shit, Oneduh bounced. i'm applyin the ether.
    cuz if i had a choice, i wouldn't waste my time with you either
    there aint no jesus piece, but ya necks getting crossed
    face soo hideous we don’t even want you to reflect on this loss
    fuck ur gun talk, ill leave this corny faggot soakin his jeans
    we all know the only thing G about you, is the note of ur screams
    kid, i'm the illest. i don't even gotta try it seems
    so if u bet on Blue, better Renig faster than Fracture with a time machine
    my verses are amazing, and always include somethin' risky
    while nobody likes Blues, cept the middle aged with a love for whiskey
    i make a bee-line for the win, and im proving ur the worst
    while u take a b-line, give it a setup and try to use it in ur verse
    Call me whoever u want, your just a clown shootin blanks
    Only namedrop we're gonna see after this is urs.. down through the ranks
    must suck to know ur gonna lose, nobodys feelin ya lines
    youll be so salty over this loss, next week ur in a 3way with tequila & limes

    28. Game, Set, Match.
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  9. Hush!

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    lotta lines here but ima still do my best to break it down as much as I can

    Blue..opener was pretty funny..2nd bar was weird to me dunno jus didnt fuck with it honestly..liked the concept on the next bar alot..jus not execution as much..jonas bar was pretty clever like multi levered or whatever so I respect it for that just didnt like it, prolly jus a personal taste thing..watchmen haha obvious but aiight ...next bar to me was the best one in the battle, yet im prolly biast on that fact, really Liked that tho one of those damn moments ...guessing users very fat nother funny bar at this point verse is picking up hardbody..kennedy/out the head was another line that was above par..I think the way u worded it sold it for me on that one..Next bar dont get but I dont watch movies like that..Kung fu line was funny.tiki flames didnt burn for me...dunno..didnt get the personals on the next bar.. an beegees line was kinda a force for me to b honest.. whatev, closer was funnier

    Tre...didnt like the bayou flip on the opener seeing as against this dude im sure theres been ahunndred by you lines that one didnt jump out for me..2nd bar huh? maybe Im missing something..haha saying this saying that I liked the style of this bar alot good shit..didnt like the vikes line, dunno those kinda lines gotta be really on a certain level to stand out for me that one while being good, jus wsnt up there for my taste..pick of the litter is pretty hot..feeling blue lines was bananas right now its a toss up for best line of the battle..Onduh line was aiight too..didnt like the crossed/reflect line so much but I see what u was trying to do with it doubling up on concept an setup an respect that..g note/screams haha aiight like that bettr..renig/timemachine/frac. maybe a personal im missing here...blues music concept was cool but u prolly coulda rocked him harder with that..B line ..well line was crack another haymaker good shit..namedrops was another high level line the verse is coming off harder towards the end..haha salty line was funny but jus kinda a anticlimax after the b line


    this deserved to be the championship match..Tre u definetly had the 2 hardest shots of the fight..consistency wise u guys might be about even after I reread again..I like these kinda battles cuz they make me think....yeaa I think its gonna come down to who had me be like oh shit the most an tre got that..cuz the zoloft line is up there too in creatity..blue I think uhad alot of good lines an hot concepts put not the amount of knockout hits to match the ones tre landed...

    vote=tredone
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  10. Nick Fletcher

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    Champ match time, nerves goin & I’m flexin to impress
    All I hear in my mind is don’t blow it.. like this fag seconds into sex
    ok opener, nothing great

    Walk away pussy.. ya scripts aren’t timeless & sacred
    I’ll leave you down long enough to fill even the finest of blankets
    ehh, not feeling this

    Forget swim lessons & navy drills, this wack is deceased
    All you’ll need to see Tred-in water is scuba gear & a map to the reef
    cool name flip

    Callin me pussy.. but really I’ma solider you bogus fruit
    I march with a Band of Brothers..ur click resembles that Jonas group
    rofl, this made me laugh

    Fuckin homo.. spend all ur time tryna soften & crotch friends
    The worlds greatest comic fan’s got NOTHIN on how often you Watchmen
    pretty cool flip on an OLD ASS concept

    Sex life’s a lie, ha claimin “I get pussy & stunt with the girls”
    ^That shit had me rolling for so long I now got the biggest blunt in the world
    lol, funny

    Ain’t got dolla’s either.. broke liar I should bruise ya lid
    We’d have a better chance seein Tredmill’s lookin in User’s crib
    it was ok, but using User as ammo is being done all the time it seems

    Last week was a joke.. begged for a no-show, pleadin outta ur dread
    Cuz I’d rate Kennedy -
    & if he showed YOU’d be the one bleedin outta ur head
    this was ok

    Make it in audio.. this whack rapper’s just a fake n joke
    I’d destroy Tred’s tone with such ease Jason Bourne’d start takin notes
    cool

    Tre ur style is pussy, in combat no one’d vouch for ur moves
    So bring ya Kung Fu out for the fight & I’ll beat the shit outta him too
    lol, this was pretty funny

    Garbage writtens.. no hot bars - this G be plain..
    Could visit every Hawaiian village there is & STILL wouldn’t see Tiki flames
    nah, played

    Chose One to end ur name? guys it’s silly as fuck to beef when..
    One of u got dicked while the other needed 8 false personals just to beat him
    lol, pretty funny

    I’ve never seen such pussies.. entire rep’s have been sunk damn
    Faggots couldn’t BeeGee’s playin “Tragedy” w/ Barry Gibb as a front man
    lol

    Frac drop Kung & we’ll team.. next week I’ll start addin some weight bitch
    But no doubt I’ma be carryin T~R~E… so Oneduh sign us up: as Waitress.
    roflz, good closer


    overall a pretty consistent verse. there were a couple of low points where the wording was a bit simple, or the concept wasn't flipped to its potential. but for the most part you were hitting and some of them punches just had me rolling so much I could have the biggest blunt in the world.. rofl @ that punch though, that was funny and that closer was a strong way to end coz it had me laughing. overall a solid verse.


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    this is do or die yo. n you so sad u can't ruin my hopes
    so the only thing Bayou after this... is a gun & suicide note
    lol, cool flip on his name

    heard you go by Ayp on RB. and you can just call it a hunch
    you got that name from that shit you throw, then call it a punch
    nah, not feeling this

    n now they sayin i'm Kung. & they sayin' i'm Frac
    they're also sayin' i'll win, cuz they STILL saying you're wack
    direct and it hit well

    im laughin tears, and reppin homefield for these bastards here
    its like the Vikes, we'll never see the best at RB be a champ this year
    eh, I didn't like it personally

    now mods are scared to champ me, Ones prolly fixin the winner
    the rbl's taken a lot of shit from this cat, n his verse is pick of the litter
    seen the cat/litter shit been done before

    it's just TRED nigga. this faggot's so soft & wack still
    if heads are feeling Blue, my shit's the Prozac, Zoloft & Paxil
    rofl, i did a feeling blue punch on BW.. but this one is prolly better

    & in that RB shit, Oneduh bounced. i'm applyin the ether.
    cuz if i had a choice, i wouldn't waste my time with you either
    nah, didn't like it

    there aint no jesus piece, but ya necks getting crossed
    face soo hideous we don’t even want you to reflect on this loss
    wordplay been done before, it was ok though

    fuck ur gun talk, ill leave this corny faggot soakin his jeans
    we all know the only thing G about you, is the note of ur screams
    iunno, wording seems off to me

    kid, i'm the illest. i don't even gotta try it seems
    so if u bet on Blue, better Renig faster than Fracture with a time machine
    lol

    my verses are amazing, and always include somethin' risky
    while nobody likes Blues, cept the middle aged with a love for whiskey
    name flips are getting weaker now

    i make a bee-line for the win, and im proving ur the worst
    while u take a b-line, give it a setup and try to use it in ur verse
    lol, this made me laugh

    Call me whoever u want, your just a clown shootin blanks
    Only namedrop we're gonna see after this is urs.. down through the ranks
    nah, too played

    must suck to know ur gonna lose, nobodys feelin ya lines
    youll be so salty over this loss, next week ur in a 3way with tequila & limes
    rofl, good closer

    overall a good verse. i felt as though the more name flips you dropped the weaker they got. you had a couple of played punches in there, you tried to flip them fresh and a couple times I don't think you pulled them off. there were some funny and direct punches that had me rolling. the closer was just as strong as blue's and similar type of punch to i think. overall i felt you had a few more spots where you fell in your consistency and that's what cost you the battle here in my opinion.

    VOTE: BLUE BAYOU
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  11. ExodusIII

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    bb

    Forget swim lessons & navy drills, this wack is deceased
    All you’ll need to see Tred-in water is scuba gear & a map to the reef
    aight
    Callin me pussy.. but really I’ma solider you bogus fruit
    I march with a Band of Brothers..ur click resembles that Jonas group
    lol..wording was nice too
    Sex life’s a lie, ha claimin “I get pussy & stunt with the girls”
    ^That shit had me rolling for so long I now got the biggest blunt in the world
    ehh..50/50
    Ain’t got dolla’s either.. broke liar I should bruise ya lid
    We’d have a better chance seein Tredmill’s lookin in User’s crib
    Last week was a joke.. begged for a no-show, pleadin outta ur dread
    Cuz I’d rate Kennedy -
    & if he showed YOU’d be the one bleedin outta ur head
    cool...seems like your verse is pickin up steam

    kinda dropped off after that...lol... guess i spoke to soon... i couldn't quite get my head around the closer...i tried like 3 times to figure out what u meant...i got the whole tray/waitress shit...but i guess it just wasn't worded all that well

    tre

    nice opener
    it's just TRED nigga. this faggot's so soft & wack still
    if heads are feeling Blue, my shit's the Prozac, Zoloft & Paxil
    cool
    i make a bee-line for the win, and im proving ur the worst
    while u take a b-line, give it a setup and try to use it in ur verse
    cool


    tre just dropped alot of shit that didn't move me in any way... it wasn't wack, it was just like... aight...that's another line...read the next one...okay, that's another line...and it pretty much went like that throughout the verse...just didn't have those haymakers

    bb dropped a pretty nice verse... few good lines...and nothing really weak

    decent champ match this week...considering what you guys are capable of it could've been better but still decent

    vote=bb
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  12. Tony Elbow

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    blue
    Ain’t got dolla’s either.. broke liar I should bruise ya lid
    We’d have a better chance seein Tredmill’s lookin in User’s crib
    Tre ur style is pussy, in combat no one’d vouch for ur moves
    So bring ya Kung Fu out for the fight & I’ll beat the shit outta him too
    Frac drop Kung & we’ll team.. next week I’ll start addin some weight bitch
    But no doubt I’ma be carryin T~R~E… so Oneduh sign us up: as Waitress.

    I read blue last week and his verse was fire so I taught he would have a lot more than 3 standout lines in a 24 line champ match. Bee gees punches?!!? tred water punches?!?! roll/blunt punches?!?!? whatever though



    Tred
    this is do or die yo. n you so sad u can't ruin my hopes
    so the only thing Bayou after this... is a gun & suicide note
    now mods are scared to champ me, Ones prolly fixin the winner
    the rbl's taken a lot of shit from this cat, n his verse is pick of the litter
    it's just TRED nigga. this faggot's so soft & wack still
    if heads are feeling Blue, my shit's the Prozac, Zoloft & Paxil
    there aint no jesus piece, but ya necks getting crossed
    face soo hideous we don’t even want you to reflect on this loss
    fuck ur gun talk, ill leave this corny faggot soakin his jeans
    we all know the only thing G about you, is the note of ur screams
    must suck to know ur gonna lose, nobodys feelin ya lines
    youll be so salty over this loss, next week ur in a 3way with tequila & limes

    tred nice verse I think you got this easy, those were the stand out lines above but even ya kinda swag, not wordplay lines were constructed well like:

    n now they sayin i'm Kung. & they sayin' i'm Frac
    they're also sayin' i'll win, cuz they STILL saying you're wack
    & in that RB shit, Oneduh bounced. i'm applyin the ether.
    cuz if i had a choice, i wouldn't waste my time with you either

    down the ranks line was probably your worst, closer was best. As far as the nameplays I havent seen most of them done against blue so they were fresh to me.



    Vote TREDone
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  13. Rizpy

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    Forget swim lessons & navy drills, this wack is deceased
    All you’ll need to see Tred-in water is scuba gear & a map to the reef
    Callin me pussy.. but really I’ma solider you bogus fruit
    I march with a Band of Brothers..ur click resembles that Jonas group
    Fuckin homo.. spend all ur time tryna soften & crotch friends
    The worlds greatest comic fan’s got NOTHIN on how often you Watchmen
    Sex life’s a lie, ha claimin “I get pussy & stunt with the girls”
    ^That shit had me rolling for so long I now got the biggest blunt in the world
    Ain’t got dolla’s either.. broke liar I should bruise ya lid
    We’d have a better chance seein Tredmill’s lookin in User’s crib
    Make it in audio.. this whack rapper’s just a fake n joke
    I’d destroy Tred’s tone with such ease Jason Bourne’d start takin notes
    Chose One to end ur name? guys it’s silly as fuck to beef when..
    One of u got dicked while the other needed 8 false personals just to beat him
    I’ve never seen such pussies.. entire rep’s have been sunk damn
    Faggots couldn’t BeeGee’s playin “Tragedy” w/ Barry Gibb as a front man

    vs.

    im laughin tears, and reppin homefield for these bastards here
    its like the Vikes, we'll never see the best at RB be a champ this year
    there aint no jesus piece, but ya necks getting crossed
    face soo hideous we don’t even want you to reflect on this loss
    fuck ur gun talk, ill leave this corny faggot soakin his jeans
    we all know the only thing G about you, is the note of ur screams
    kid, i'm the illest. i don't even gotta try it seems
    so if u bet on Blue, better Renig faster than Fracture with a time machine
    Call me whoever u want, your just a clown shootin blanks
    Only namedrop we're gonna see after this is urs.. down through the ranks

    Nice battle here, a worthy champ match. I got Blue here, though. TREDone had my favorite line of the battle with the Adrian Peterson thing, but Blue looked like he wanted this more as he came mad consistent for such a long verse while TREDone had some filler in there.

    Vote - Blue Bayou
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  14. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    New contenders met in a Champ Match.
    I'm excited to read this, please bare with me on voting.


    Champ match time, nerves goin & I’m flexin to impress
    All I hear in my mind is don’t blow it.. like this fag seconds into sex
    ^+1
    Walk away pussy.. ya scripts aren’t timeless & sacred
    I’ll leave you down long enough to fill even the finest of blankets
    ^I'm imagining this worded differently.
    Forget swim lessons & navy drills, this wack is deceased
    All you’ll need to see Tred-in water is scuba gear & a map to the reef
    ^+1
    Callin me pussy.. but really I’ma solider you bogus fruit
    I march with a Band of Brothers..ur click resembles that Jonas group
    ^+2 - LOL
    Fuckin homo.. spend all ur time tryna soften & crotch friends
    The worlds greatest comic fan’s got NOTHIN on how often you Watchmen
    ^+3 - i like how it connects; set-up to punchline..
    Sex life’s a lie, ha claimin “I get pussy & stunt with the girls”
    ^That shit had me rolling for so long I now got the biggest blunt in the world
    ^+4 - This was Funny.
    Ain’t got dolla’s either.. broke liar I should bruise ya lid
    We’d have a better chance seein Tredmill’s lookin in User’s crib
    ^This didn't fully connect for me. something in comparison with the set-up to punch.
    Last week was a joke.. begged for a no-show, pleadin outta ur dread
    Cuz I’d rate Kennedy -
    & if he showed YOU’d be the one bleedin outta ur head
    ^+1 - I liked how this was structured.
    Make it in audio.. this whack rapper’s just a fake n joke
    I’d destroy Tred’s tone with such ease Jason Bourne’d start takin notes
    ^Over my head.
    Tre ur style is pussy, in combat no one’d vouch for ur moves
    So bring ya Kung Fu out for the fight & I’ll beat the shit outta him too

    ^+1 - Toughest couplet I've seen in the League for a minute!
    Garbage writtens.. no hot bars - this G be plain..
    Could visit every Hawaiian village there is & STILL wouldn’t see Tiki flames
    ^Word differently.
    Chose One to end ur name? guys it’s silly as fuck to beef when..
    One of u got dicked while the other needed 8 false personals just to beat him
    ^+1
    I’ve never seen such pussies.. entire rep’s have been sunk damn
    Faggots couldn’t BeeGee’s playin “Tragedy” w/ Barry Gibb as a front man
    ^+2
    Frac drop Kung & we’ll team.. next week I’ll start addin some weight bitch
    But no doubt I’ma be carryin T~R~E… so Oneduh sign us up: as Waitress.
    ^+3 - Closer was tight as fuck.

    Total: 19
    Overall,
    B.Bayou has good nameplays throughout his verse, which he was consistant inwriting. Many personals too. Only a few lines were over my head, such as the jason bourne; and a couple that I wasn't feelin' because of the wording, such as the Tredmil-line and tiki flames. ALOT of witty lyrics, keeping my interest throughout reading your verse.


    Vs.


    this is do or die yo. n you so sad u can't ruin my hopes
    so the only thing Bayou after this... is a gun & suicide note
    ^+1 - Really Smooth with the opener.
    heard you go by Ayp on RB. and you can just call it a hunch
    you got that name from that shit you throw, then call it a punch
    ^+2 - I don'y anything about him being at RM.. but the way you were able to connect the punch was nicely worded.
    n now they sayin i'm Kung. & they sayin' i'm Frac
    they're also sayin' i'll win, cuz they STILL saying you're wack
    ^Kinda generic. But I understand the situation of the battle; being accused as being an alias.
    im laughin tears, and reppin homefield for these bastards here
    its like the Vikes, we'll never see the best at RB be a champ this year
    ^+1 - Wasn't feelin at first glance.. then I re-read.
    now mods are scared to champ me, Ones prolly fixin the winner
    the rbl's taken a lot of shit from this cat, n his verse is pick of the litter
    ^Worded differently and this would have made a stronger impact, imo. Comparing 'shit' to 'litter-box'..?
    it's just TRED nigga. this faggot's so soft & wack still
    if heads are feeling Blue, my shit's the Prozac, Zoloft & Paxil
    ^+1
    & in that RB shit, Oneduh bounced. i'm applyin the ether.
    cuz if i had a choice, i wouldn't waste my time with you either
    ^Wasn't feeling the set-up.
    there aint no jesus piece, but ya necks getting crossed
    face soo hideous we don’t even want you to reflect on this loss
    ^+1
    fuck ur gun talk, ill leave this corny faggot soakin his jeans
    we all know the only thing G about you, is the note of ur screams
    ^+2
    kid, i'm the illest. i don't even gotta try it seems
    so if u bet on Blue, better Renig faster than Fracture with a time machine
    ^I'm assuming someone was onced called Renig..? Punch didn't hit for me.
    my verses are amazing, and always include somethin' risky
    while nobody likes Blues, cept the middle aged with a love for whiskey
    ^Over my head.
    i make a bee-line for the win, and im proving ur the worst
    while u take a b-line, give it a setup and try to use it in ur verse
    ^+1
    Call me whoever u want, your just a clown shootin blanks
    Only namedrop we're gonna see after this is urs.. down through the ranks
    ^+2
    must suck to know ur gonna lose, nobodys feelin ya lines
    youll be so salty over this loss, next week ur in a 3way with tequila & limes

    ^+3 - LOL. Good closer.

    Total: 14

    Overall,
    Tred had some REALLY slick and witty punchlines.. and with that there were just as many punches that didn't seem to fully connect, imo, based on wording. The lines that I weren't feeling all had to do with nameplays / name reference to another board member.. thought it was forced. It seemed like every other couplet, that was the situation. You're more consistant than I've been in recent times, I can admit that.


    Great Battle.
    Favorite Punches in Orage.

    Vote = Blue Bayou
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  15. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    BLUE BAYOU

    Forget swim lessons & navy drills, this wack is deceased
    All you’ll need to see Tred-in water is scuba gear & a map to the reef
    Callin me pussy.. but really I’ma solider you bogus fruit
    I march with a Band of Brothers..ur click resembles that Jonas group
    Fuckin homo.. spend all ur time tryna soften & crotch friends
    The worlds greatest comic fan’s got NOTHIN on how often you Watchmen
    Sex life’s a lie, ha claimin “I get pussy & stunt with the girls”
    ^That shit had me rolling for so long I now got the biggest blunt in the world
    Ain’t got dolla’s either.. broke liar I should bruise ya lid
    We’d have a better chance seein Tredmill’s lookin in User’s crib
    Last week was a joke.. begged for a no-show, pleadin outta ur dread
    Cuz I’d rate Kennedy -
    & if he showed YOU’d be the one bleedin outta ur head
    Make it in audio.. this whack rapper’s just a fake n joke
    I’d destroy Tred’s tone with such ease Jason Bourne’d start takin notes
    Tre ur style is pussy, in combat no one’d vouch for ur moves
    So bring ya Kung Fu out for the fight & I’ll beat the shit outta him too
    Garbage writtens.. no hot bars - this G be plain..
    Could visit every Hawaiian village there is & STILL wouldn’t see Tiki flames

    TREDONE

    this is do or die yo. n you so sad u can't ruin my hopes
    so the only thing Bayou after this... is a gun & suicide note
    heard you go by Ayp on RB. and you can just call it a hunch
    you got that name from that shit you throw, then call it a punch
    n now they sayin i'm Kung. & they sayin' i'm Frac
    they're also sayin' i'll win, cuz they STILL saying you're wack
    im laughin tears, and reppin homefield for these bastards here
    its like the Vikes, we'll never see the best at RB be a champ this year
    it's just TRED nigga. this faggot's so soft & wack still
    if heads are feeling Blue, my shit's the Prozac, Zoloft & Paxil
    & in that RB shit, Oneduh bounced. i'm applyin the ether.
    cuz if i had a choice, i wouldn't waste my time with you either
    there aint no jesus piece, but ya necks getting crossed
    face soo hideous we don’t even want you to reflect on this loss
    fuck ur gun talk, ill leave this corny faggot soakin his jeans
    we all know the only thing G about you, is the note of ur screams
    kid, i'm the illest. i don't even gotta try it seems
    so if u bet on Blue, better Renig faster than Fracture with a time machine

    --------

    whoa, dope match. BB was nice with it. he began somewhat slow and finished the same. i actually thought the whole kung/one thing at the bottom wasn't needed. should've stayed on course with the fresh ass concepts and punches that you dropped in the middle. damn near the entire middle section was nice to me. some slick ass wordplay which is hardly seen anymore or even more so its hardly seen and still considered fresh. the tiki flames was dope. the tredmill and and other tred lines weren't as creative but the execution of them were all dope. oh, and the tredstone was creative as fuck, though i think the execution could've been slightly better. also there was just some simple good stuff like the jonas brothers which was funny and that blunt line which was dope. overall, and for its length, this was one of the better verses that i've seen dropped lately and i now see why one says you're the best in the league at the moment. on the other hand, tred never let up either. his verse against deon was somewhat trash in my opinion but this was top notch. a different approach with less theatrics and more pure punches and whatnot. he hardly ever stopped clowning in the verse. RB was dope. reflect on this loss was dope. renig was super dope. lol. the suicide note was probably the only decent line in the mix on account of the bayou plays being overdone in BB matches. still it was nice and the rest were subtle but still nice. tough call, so i'll count the quotes.
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  16. Quriosity

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    well, looks like BB gets it by a bar. i honestly went in to typing this thinking that i had tred pegged for the W, but i can't cheat the system. there were more lines that i liked from BB and seeing as how you both matched in line amounts, it's only fair that BB gets the win. i think i had tred picked because he appeared to be more consistent with the stronger start and stronger finish, his few lines that i didn't dig were spread out more. plus, i read his second so it stuck in my memory. to be completely fair though, i'll go through the lines that i dug to see who really came out on top in my opinion.

    BLUE BAYOU

    Forget swim lessons & navy drills, this wack is deceased
    All you’ll need to see Tred-in water is scuba gear & a map to the reef
    ^the wordplay/concept is played, but the execution was done nicely. still, the punch itself, when you dig into it, is somewhat irrelevant. i still lend credit due to the fact that your set-up creates its relevance thus making the line nice enough for acknowledgment.
    7/10

    Callin me pussy.. but really I’ma solider you bogus fruit
    I march with a Band of Brothers..ur click resembles that Jonas group
    ^this was funny above all else. not the strongest of punches, but the comedic value and the fact that i haven't heard this before gets it the nod. bogus fruit was a bit forced but it works.
    8/10

    Fuckin homo.. spend all ur time tryna soften & crotch friends
    The worlds greatest comic fan’s got NOTHIN on how often you Watchmen
    ^this was nice, solely because i can't wait for the movie and the fact that i have never seen a similar line. it's current, the wordplay is nice, the line is nice. set-up here works but is forced at the same time. crotch is not a verb.
    8/10

    Sex life’s a lie, ha claimin “I get pussy & stunt with the girls”
    ^That shit had me rolling for so long I now got the biggest blunt in the world
    ^i dug this. i see someone else stated that the concept is played. given, i took about 4 or 5 years off from the "internet text scene" so it may very well be played, but i've never heard of it and it rolled off the tongue in my head nicely so i dug it.
    8/10

    Ain’t got dolla’s either.. broke liar I should bruise ya lid
    We’d have a better chance seein Tredmill’s lookin in User’s crib
    ^not only is the tredmill thing a bit simple and had tred been in the game longer i'm sure it would be played, but the user/fat idea is played as well. in the same breath, this was still done nicely and still comedic in my opinion, plus there has yet to be a tredmill line or at least as good as this from what i've read in tred's matches.
    6/10

    Last week was a joke.. begged for a no-show, pleadin outta ur dread
    Cuz I’d rate Kennedy -
    & if he showed YOU’d be the one bleedin outta ur head
    ^nice, relevant too. this was somewhat of a personal mixed with wordplay. connected for me.
    9/10

    Make it in audio.. this whack rapper’s just a fake n joke
    I’d destroy Tred’s tone with such ease Jason Bourne’d start takin notes
    ^this was dope, creative as fuck. tredstone, lol. i would've never thought of this. i think the execution could've been better possibly, but at the same time, i can't think of a better variation. i dug it.
    9/10

    Tre ur style is pussy, in combat no one’d vouch for ur moves
    So bring ya Kung Fu out for the fight & I’ll beat the shit outta him too
    ^subtle dopeness. nothing outstanding but it gets the job done and knocks on the fact that you don't give a fuck if he's kung or not. a very confident line. i dig it.
    8/10

    Garbage writtens.. no hot bars - this G be plain..
    Could visit every Hawaiian village there is & STILL wouldn’t see Tiki flames
    ^this would be the only 10/10 line thus far except for the fact that the "this g be plain" is forced like a motherfucker. still, i sympathize with the fact that there weren't many ways to pull it off.
    9/10

    TREDONE

    this is do or die yo. n you so sad u can't ruin my hopes
    so the only thing Bayou after this... is a gun & suicide note
    ^similar to the tred/in water concept. still, this works for me and i dug the execution of it. tight flow mixed with a quick release of punch. slight wordplay too.
    7/10

    heard you go by Ayp on RB. and you can just call it a hunch
    you got that name from that shit you throw, then call it a punch
    ^lol, this was nice. again, i haven't read many BB/Ayp matches being that i don't venture to other sites, but thus far i haven't seen a similar line. still, it reads as one of those concepts that would be played, but i dug it. a lot actually.
    9/10

    n now they sayin i'm Kung. & they sayin' i'm Frac
    they're also sayin' i'll win, cuz they STILL saying you're wack
    ^lol. subtle dopeness. this is the type of shit that wins battles. this is the type of shit that defines talent. i hate to say it, but there is a such thing as real talent with this text shit and lines like this support it. i'm over-hyping it a bit, but its confident yet simple but still effective. anyone can formulate a punch these days, but many miss these simple opportunities to just say fuck you in text fashion.
    9/10

    im laughin tears, and reppin homefield for these bastards here
    its like the Vikes, we'll never see the best at RB be a champ this year
    ^lol, wow. creative as fuck. i would've never thought of this shit. the execution was done well and the flow was on point. i can dig it.
    10/10

    it's just TRED nigga. this faggot's so soft & wack still
    if heads are feeling Blue, my shit's the Prozac, Zoloft & Paxil
    ^a list punch. still, this was nice, nothing great though.
    6/10

    & in that RB shit, Oneduh bounced. i'm applyin the ether.
    cuz if i had a choice, i wouldn't waste my time with you either
    ^another simple yet effective punch. i didn't feel it as much as the last, but it was felt. it would be a 9 if i dug the set-up more.
    8/10

    there aint no jesus piece, but ya necks getting crossed
    face soo hideous we don’t even want you to reflect on this loss
    ^lol. dope. never heard it before. the set-up was forced, but this shit was nice.
    9/10

    fuck ur gun talk, ill leave this corny faggot soakin his jeans
    we all know the only thing G about you, is the note of ur screams
    ^again, set-up was forced for me, but the punch itself was nice.
    8/10

    kid, i'm the illest. i don't even gotta try it seems
    so if u bet on Blue, better Renig faster than Fracture with a time machine
    ^lol. line of the battle. just creative as fuck, but still just simple wordplay and rawness.
    10/10

    BLUE = 72
    TRED = 76

    VOTE - TREDONE
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  17. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  18. Roscoe Babbage

    Roscoe Babbage U Eye-Ballin Me!?

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    reserving this spot for my vote, I'll be right back.
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  19. Ovea

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    Champ match time, nerves goin & I’m flexin to impress
    All I hear in my mind is don’t blow it.. like this fag seconds into sex

    solid open

    Walk away pussy.. ya scripts aren’t timeless & sacred
    I’ll leave you down long enough to fill even the finest of blankets

    not feeling

    Forget swim lessons & navy drills, this wack is deceased
    All you’ll need to see Tred-in water is scuba gear & a map to the reef

    coo

    Callin me pussy.. but really I’ma solider you bogus fruit
    I march with a Band of Brothers..ur click resembles that Jonas group

    haha

    Fuckin homo.. spend all ur time tryna soften & crotch friends
    The worlds greatest comic fan’s got NOTHIN on how often you Watchmen

    ok

    Sex life’s a lie, ha claimin “I get pussy & stunt with the girls”
    ^That shit had me rolling for so long I now got the biggest blunt in the world

    too wordy

    Ain’t got dolla’s either.. broke liar I should bruise ya lid
    We’d have a better chance seein Tredmill’s lookin in User’s crib

    lool

    Last week was a joke.. begged for a no-show, pleadin outta ur dread
    Cuz I’d rate Kennedy -
    & if he showed YOU’d be the one bleedin outta ur head

    nah

    Make it in audio.. this whack rapper’s just a fake n joke
    I’d destroy Tred’s tone with such ease Jason Bourne’d start takin notes

    niiice

    Tre ur style is pussy, in combat no one’d vouch for ur moves
    So bring ya Kung Fu out for the fight & I’ll beat the shit outta him too

    ehh

    Garbage writtens.. no hot bars - this G be plain..
    Could visit every Hawaiian village there is & STILL wouldn’t see Tiki flames

    haha nice

    Chose One to end ur name? guys it’s silly as fuck to beef when..
    One of u got dicked while the other needed 8 false personals just to beat him

    good

    I’ve never seen such pussies.. entire rep’s have been sunk damn
    Faggots couldn’t BeeGee’s playin “Tragedy” w/ Barry Gibb as a front man

    naaah

    Frac drop Kung & we’ll team.. next week I’ll start addin some weight bitch
    But no doubt I’ma be carryin T~R~E… so Oneduh sign us up: as Waitress.

    coo close

    this verse was pretty nice, consistently on the attack here. a few lines i didnt like but it worked as a whole verse, nice job.

    v

    this is do or die yo. n you so sad u can't ruin my hopes
    so the only thing Bayou after this... is a gun & suicide note

    haha

    heard you go by Ayp on RB. and you can just call it a hunch
    you got that name from that shit you throw, then call it a punch

    ehh

    n now they sayin i'm Kung. & they sayin' i'm Frac
    they're also sayin' i'll win, cuz they STILL saying you're wack

    haha nice swagger

    im laughin tears, and reppin homefield for these bastards here
    its like the Vikes, we'll never see the best at RB be a champ this year

    damn

    now mods are scared to champ me, Ones prolly fixin the winner
    the rbl's taken a lot of shit from this cat, n his verse is pick of the litter

    nah kind of played

    it's just TRED nigga. this faggot's so soft & wack still
    if heads are feeling Blue, my shit's the Prozac, Zoloft & Paxil

    ouch

    & in that RB shit, Oneduh bounced. i'm applyin the ether.
    cuz if i had a choice, i wouldn't waste my time with you either

    nah

    there aint no jesus piece, but ya necks getting crossed
    face soo hideous we don’t even want you to reflect on this loss

    heh

    fuck ur gun talk, ill leave this corny faggot soakin his jeans
    we all know the only thing G about you, is the note of ur screams

    witty, never seen this done

    kid, i'm the illest. i don't even gotta try it seems
    so if u bet on Blue, better Renig faster than Fracture with a time machine

    roflz@ renig..but this is like saying frac wishes he could go back to before saying he was white, which kinda took the sting away


    my verses are amazing, and always include somethin' risky
    while nobody likes Blues, cept the middle aged with a love for whiskey

    good jab

    i make a bee-line for the win, and im proving ur the worst
    while u take a b-line, give it a setup and try to use it in ur verse

    eh not feeling



    Call me whoever u want, your just a clown shootin blanks
    Only namedrop we're gonna see after this is urs.. down through the ranks

    eh too simple


    must suck to know ur gonna lose, nobodys feelin ya lines
    youll be so salty over this loss, next week ur in a 3way with tequila & limes

    roflz


    wow some nice punchs in this verse here but you had a few lines that made me think you were tryna meet quota cuz the quality was up and down but you definetly dropped some hot stuff

    BB:

    Champ match time, nerves goin & I’m flexin to impress
    All I hear in my mind is don’t blow it.. like this fag seconds into sex
    Forget swim lessons & navy drills, this wack is deceased
    All you’ll need to see Tred-in water is scuba gear & a map to the reef
    Callin me pussy.. but really I’ma solider you bogus fruit
    I march with a Band of Brothers..ur click resembles that Jonas group
    Ain’t got dolla’s either.. broke liar I should bruise ya lid
    We’d have a better chance seein Tredmill’s lookin in User’s crib
    Make it in audio.. this whack rapper’s just a fake n joke
    I’d destroy Tred’s tone with such ease Jason Bourne’d start takin notes
    Garbage writtens.. no hot bars - this G be plain..
    Could visit every Hawaiian village there is & STILL wouldn’t see Tiki flames
    Chose One to end ur name? guys it’s silly as fuck to beef when..
    One of u got dicked while the other needed 8 false personals just to beat him
    Frac drop Kung & we’ll team.. next week I’ll start addin some weight bitch
    But no doubt I’ma be carryin T~R~E… so Oneduh sign us up: as Waitress.

    v

    TO:

    this is do or die yo. n you so sad u can't ruin my hopes
    so the only thing Bayou after this... is a gun & suicide note
    n now they sayin i'm Kung. & they sayin' i'm Frac
    they're also sayin' i'll win, cuz they STILL saying you're wack
    im laughin tears, and reppin homefield for these bastards here
    its like the Vikes, we'll never see the best at RB be a champ this year
    it's just TRED nigga. this faggot's so soft & wack still
    if heads are feeling Blue, my shit's the Prozac, Zoloft & Paxil
    there aint no jesus piece, but ya necks getting crossed
    face soo hideous we don’t even want you to reflect on this loss
    fuck ur gun talk, ill leave this corny faggot soakin his jeans
    we all know the only thing G about you, is the note of ur screams
    must suck to know ur gonna lose, nobodys feelin ya lines
    youll be so salty over this loss, next week ur in a 3way with tequila & limes

    i think tred kind of slid a little towards the end here, i have Blue 16-14

    v/Blue
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    Aiight this was a pretty dope match-up.

    Champ match time, nerves goin & I’m flexin to impress
    All I hear in my mind is don’t blow it.. like this fag seconds into sex
    ^ehh this was ok. Not bad.

    Walk away pussy.. ya scripts aren’t timeless & sacred
    I’ll leave you down long enough to fill even the finest of blankets
    ^nahh didn't like this

    Forget swim lessons & navy drills, this wack is deceased
    All you’ll need to see Tred-in water is scuba gear & a map to the reef
    ^cool nameplay. could have been harsher tho

    Callin me pussy.. but really I’ma solider you bogus fruit
    I march with a Band of Brothers..ur click resembles that Jonas group
    ^LOL this was tight. good shit

    Fuckin homo.. spend all ur time tryna soften & crotch friends
    The worlds greatest comic fan’s got NOTHIN on how often you Watchmen
    ^aha cool

    Sex life’s a lie, ha claimin “I get pussy & stunt with the girls”
    ^That shit had me rolling for so long I now got the biggest blunt in the world
    ^lol coo

    Ain’t got dolla’s either.. broke liar I should bruise ya lid
    We’d have a better chance seein Tredmill’s lookin in User’s crib
    ^nahh seen too many user lines just this week. wtf lol

    Last week was a joke.. begged for a no-show, pleadin outta ur dread
    Cuz I’d rate Kennedy -
    & if he showed YOU’d be the one bleedin outta ur head
    ^okkk

    Make it in audio.. this whack rapper’s just a fake n joke
    I’d destroy Tred’s tone with such ease Jason Bourne’d start takin notes
    ^not bad. coo

    Tre ur style is pussy, in combat no one’d vouch for ur moves
    So bring ya Kung Fu out for the fight & I’ll beat the shit outta him too
    ^haha nice

    Garbage writtens.. no hot bars - this G be plain..
    Could visit every Hawaiian village there is & STILL wouldn’t see Tiki flames
    ^nopeee

    Chose One to end ur name? guys it’s silly as fuck to beef when..
    One of u got dicked while the other needed 8 false personals just to beat him
    ^hahah word

    I’ve never seen such pussies.. entire rep’s have been sunk damn
    Faggots couldn’t BeeGee’s playin “Tragedy” w/ Barry Gibb as a front man
    ^ehh decent

    Frac drop Kung & we’ll team.. next week I’ll start addin some weight bitch
    But no doubt I’ma be carryin T~R~E… so Oneduh sign us up: as Waitress.
    ^LOL nice




    Good verse here. Seemed to start out ehh, then picked it up, had another ehh section but finished pretty strong. Didn't have any wack verses. So really pretty consistent. Good shit tho. Jonas brothers one was my fave lol


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    this is do or die yo. n you so sad u can't ruin my hopes
    so the only thing Bayou after this... is a gun & suicide note
    ^nameplay was there. cool

    heard you go by Ayp on RB. and you can just call it a hunch
    you got that name from that shit you throw, then call it a punch
    ^ehh

    n now they sayin i'm Kung. & they sayin' i'm Frac
    they're also sayin' i'll win, cuz they STILL saying you're wack
    ^hahaha i liked this. good shit. had nice swag to it

    im laughin tears, and reppin homefield for these bastards here
    its like the Vikes, we'll never see the best at RB be a champ this year
    ^cool

    now mods are scared to champ me, Ones prolly fixin the winner
    the rbl's taken a lot of shit from this cat, n his verse is pick of the litter
    ^nahh played

    it's just TRED nigga. this faggot's so soft & wack still
    if heads are feeling Blue, my shit's the Prozac, Zoloft & Paxil
    ^haha good shit

    & in that RB shit, Oneduh bounced. i'm applyin the ether.
    cuz if i had a choice, i wouldn't waste my time with you either
    ^nope

    there aint no jesus piece, but ya necks getting crossed
    face soo hideous we don’t even want you to reflect on this loss
    ^played

    fuck ur gun talk, ill leave this corny faggot soakin his jeans
    we all know the only thing G about you, is the note of ur screams
    ^decent

    kid, i'm the illest. i don't even gotta try it seems
    so if u bet on Blue, better Renig faster than Fracture with a time machine
    ^ha coo

    my verses are amazing, and always include somethin' risky
    while nobody likes Blues, cept the middle aged with a love for whiskey
    ^ehh

    i make a bee-line for the win, and im proving ur the worst
    while u take a b-line, give it a setup and try to use it in ur verse
    ^okk

    Call me whoever u want, your just a clown shootin blanks
    Only namedrop we're gonna see after this is urs.. down through the ranks
    ^played

    must suck to know ur gonna lose, nobodys feelin ya lines
    youll be so salty over this loss, next week ur in a 3way with tequila & limes
    ^LOL nice

    Good verse here too. Just felt like you had a bit too many nameplays. Also a few concepts that didn't really sting as hard. All in all, verse was good. Worthy of a champ match.

    Overall, both came good. But I think BLu had a few less played lines, and his punches hit a lot harder.

    Good match but I got blue here

    v/Blue
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