[WK/35] [Champ] 01) Quriosity 15-2 v. 02) John Hensley 13-2 (hens wins)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 10:00pm EST.


    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.


    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties. An agreement of a line limit will thereby serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required.
    [12] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.
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  2. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    24.

    i should be writing today, or tomorrow at the latest. i don't want to wait around and then fuck around and not have time to write due to the holidays. so yea, i'll hit you with a message if i go more than 24 and whenever i'm done.
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  3. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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  4. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    Oh well. I guess this nigga must be scared to post. I'll tell you why.




    LMMFAO.
    Who knew Hens was a fucking faggot? Ol' biting ass nigga.




    Ok,
    It’s nothing to expose this fraud, I’m just defending my title,
    That film of dirt on his teeth must be the highlight reel of his idols,
    With the way he poses as other people, he’s a skillful magician,
    Mystique turned human in X3, and Magneto had him fill the position,
    Plus now the Army's recruiting kids and trying hard to convert,
    But I'll cross forbidden lines, by pissing off 2 bars of his verse,
    And that Braggin Writes Hall of Names got us nervous to text,
    Since this biter administers the site where all our verses are kept,
    Oneduh with all that T.a.C noise when it was YOU who was bogus,
    T.a.C used my lines, but at least I actually KNEW I was ghosting,
    Hens is always dropping fire, but now I doubt where it’s from,
    Cos usually pieces from people are gathered AFTER dropping a bomb,
    Seriously though, I swear his verses are the boldest mistakes,
    Why kick Jon’s.. when he’s already got people's shit all over the place?
    Lost every credible match, so how’s that stack with your clout?
    Jook, Oneduh, Ribo, timevirus, Resin, Fracture, ClasSick, and Ouch,
    And most say the egg was before the chicken, I agreed with it first,
    But with all the zeros still following Hens, it has to be the reverse,
    Beat nobodies and lost to the best.. if Hens is worthy, then how?
    Motherfucker sounds like an overrated, lisp-less version of Cal,
    But now I see why he was beat by every emcee who was nice,
    Cos it must be hard to win a match against the people you bite,
    Running around boasting and bragging like this faggot's the hottest,
    He’d push his luck, except the archive is an inanimate object,
    And fuck your icon, Hulk wouldn't even bother brawling, believe it,
    Cos this weakling makes Bruce Banner look like he's already heated,
    So if 3 is a crowd, then be happy that I'm leaving you torn,
    Cos you'll be undefeated if your losses ever see you perform,
    Gave him a fair shot at the champ, even allowed him to squeeze,
    But fuck a kiss, I'm hoping this mistle toe him out of the league,
    30, easy.


    Now die you wack, phony, biting, no clout-having motherfucker.

    :1_4_32:
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  5. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    u were a much better mod q.

    There's the comparison. but there's no way this brother's equals mine.
    With verses like your mag skills - at his best writing down other people's lines.
    Speaking of oral with women. the moral is not to think I'm forgettin'.
    there's no way that Qurator. his job's just to compile everything that I've written.
    I'm far ahead. winnin isn't somethin u'll achieve with less connection.
    ur only hopes at a 'spirited comeback' depend on your beliefs in ressurection.
    You're not champ material. See, I tend to see the clues he brings.
    microchip stock skyrocketed simply because of his tendency for losing things.
    in RM/RB.. ur shit talkin made me wanna put a stop to all ur threads.
    u KNOW u ain't shit when ur the RBL champ and had to rep for topical instead.
    As for Tac. u dont have command of shit, u shoulda just planned to quit.
    The verse was like your wife's pussy. the fuck knows who all had a hand in it?
    Ur job as a ghostwriter is thru. who cares if it's what you like to pursue.
    found out YOU wrote for Tac, but recently it looks more like he's been writing for u.
    As far as football. He's a cuntsack that's just too wack to be funny.
    So after I kick it off. i'll treat ur rank like a touchback and take it back to the 20's.
    Before you act like a baller. Maybe you should leave the house first.
    Cuz all of us know you've never sat on Chrome until google released its browser.
    He's got a retarded look to him, with a face like he's more in fatigue.
    your dna strands showed a D-formation that could rival any 3-4 in the league.
    Props bro, but after that quote, I wouldn't reccomend any tricks.
    I'm going for my 2nd title this year. you're just going for your 2nd in six.
    You're a walking contradiction. I dare you to try and keep pace and win.
    But how do you call One a corrupt mod, then ghost AND sway for the dude facing him.
    Think this dumb cat is elite? I'll make you run back to the streets.
    You're not blanketing your window.. but he's known to thumbtac in the sheets.
    U expect this fag to compete. I'll give you all you can take homie.
    My name's set in stone. while yours had to settle for a gay font on a fake trophy.
    Thanks for the skunk rule. I don't need votes on a page to predict em'.
    But you'll be the first to 5.. that's what this pedophile likes as an age for his victims.


    pz.


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  6. Roscoe Babbage

    Roscoe Babbage U Eye-Ballin Me!?

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    Q had a few good personals, some nicely aimed haymakers like the 4 bitten lines, people you've bit, inanimate odject and the mistltoe closer, the problem is you dwelled on the biting issue too hard, it's much more to throw at an opponent than just one subject. As for Hensley, the opener and the follow-up were nice, the site battle reference was ill, the girl-line and Tac ghostwritin line was a sick punch, the rest of the bars in the first half were just OK. As for the secord half of the verse, I liked the 2nd in 6, trumbtac and set in stone punches, I wasn't feelin the closer though. All in all, I'd say John took this one with a more diversified verse, a bit more creativity and basically overall harder hittin lines, VOTE - JOHN HENSLEY.
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  7. Zorg

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    Q:

    That film of dirt on his teeth must be the highlight reel of his idols,
    With the way he poses as other people, he’s a skillful magician,
    Mystique turned human in X3, and Magneto had him fill the position,

    Hens is always dropping fire, but now I doubt where it’s from,
    Cos usually pieces from people are gathered AFTER dropping a bomb,

    And most say the egg was before the chicken, I agreed with it first,
    But with all the zeros still following Hens, it has to be the reverse,

    But now I see why he was beat by every emcee who was nice,
    Cos it must be hard to win a match against the people you bite,
    Running around boasting and bragging like this faggot's the hottest,
    He’d push his luck, except the archive is an inanimate object,

    - had a fluent read... these are some of the best lines in my opinion. Q had some solid punches, good personals, and good creativity...minimal filler/set up lines



    John:

    I'm far ahead. winnin isn't somethin u'll achieve with less connection.
    ur only hopes at a 'spirited comeback' depend on your beliefs in ressurection.

    You're not champ material. See, I tend to see the clues he brings.
    microchip stock skyrocketed simply because of his tendency for losing things.

    The verse was like your wife's pussy. the fuck knows who all had a hand in it?

    As far as football. He's a cuntsack that's just too wack to be funny.
    So after I kick it off. i'll treat ur rank like a touchback and take it back to the 20's.

    But how do you call One a corrupt mod, then ghost AND sway for the dude facing him.

    Thanks for the skunk rule. I don't need votes on a page to predict em'.
    But you'll be the first to 5.. that's what this pedophile likes as an age for his victims.

    - these are some of the best lines, also a fluent read, some hard punches, but a few that didn't do much like the gay font on a fake trophy line. the final line was a better closer than Q's but toward the end of the verse it gets rather weak for several bars


    overall Q was just a hair more consistent, and out of the lines i liked 11 of his and 10 of John's. This was super close but I think Q just barely and I do mean barely edged it out. I also think Q's punches on biting landed better.

    vote - Quriosity
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  8. Tony Elbow

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    nice battle here both full of good personal punches.

    Qs
    Plus now the Army's recruiting kids and trying hard to convert,
    But I'll cross forbidden lines, by pissing off 2 bars of his verse,
    And that Braggin Writes Hall of Names got us nervous to text,
    Since this biter administers the site where all our verses are kept,
    Oneduh with all that T.a.C noise when it was YOU who was bogus,
    T.a.C used my lines, but at least I actually KNEW I was ghosting,
    Hens is always dropping fire, but now I doubt where it’s from,
    Cos usually pieces from people are gathered AFTER dropping a bomb,
    Seriously though, I swear his verses are the boldest mistakes,
    Why kick Jon’s.. when he’s already got people's shit all over the place?
    Lost every credible match, so how’s that stack with your clout?
    Jook, Oneduh, Ribo, timevirus, Resin, Fracture, ClasSick, and Ouch,
    And most say the egg was before the chicken, I agreed with it first,
    But with all the zeros still following Hens, it has to be the reverse,
    But now I see why he was beat by every emcee who was nice,
    Cos it must be hard to win a match against the people you bite,
    Running around boasting and bragging like this faggot's the hottest,
    He’d push his luck, except the archive is an inanimate object,

    Those are the punches i liked from you. You did stick with the same concept throughout and never deviated from the topic, it gave the verse a nice structure and purpose.



    Johns



    You're not champ material. See, I tend to see the clues he brings.
    microchip stock skyrocketed simply because of his tendency for losing things.
    in RM/RB.. ur shit talkin made me wanna put a stop to all ur threads.
    u KNOW u ain't shit when ur the RBL champ and had to rep for topical instead.
    As for Tac. u dont have command of shit, u shoulda just planned to quit.
    The verse was like your wife's pussy. the fuck knows who all had a hand in it?
    As far as football. He's a cuntsack that's just too wack to be funny.
    So after I kick it off. i'll treat ur rank like a touchback and take it back to the 20's.
    Before you act like a baller. Maybe you should leave the house first.
    Cuz all of us know you've never sat on Chrome until google released its browser.
    He's got a retarded look to him, with a face like he's more in fatigue.
    your dna strands showed a D-formation that could rival any 3-4 in the league.
    Props bro, but after that quote, I wouldn't reccomend any tricks.
    I'm going for my 2nd title this year. you're just going for your 2nd in six.
    You're a walking contradiction. I dare you to try and keep pace and win.
    But how do you call One a corrupt mod, then ghost AND sway for the dude facing him.
    Think this dumb cat is elite? I'll make you run back to the streets.
    You're not blanketing your window.. but he's known to thumbtac in the sheets.
    U expect this fag to compete. I'll give you all you can take homie.
    My name's set in stone. while yours had to settle for a gay font on a fake trophy.

    nice verse here too lots of personals, good mix of stuff on the ghostin, the biting and modding.


    I think I quote the same amount of lines each so this makes it more complicated. I think as far as personal punches and concepts you are both more or less even so I have to take this down to flow wording and structure. In that case I'm going to give it to Q. I have to say on a side and I didnt really take it into account but I dont like reading that font that john drops



    vote Q
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  9. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    Q...
    Ok,
    It’s nothing to expose this fraud, I’m just defending my title,
    That film of dirt on his teeth must be the highlight reel of his idols,
    With the way he poses as other people, he’s a skillful magician,
    Mystique turned human in X3, and Magneto had him fill the position,
    Plus now the Army's recruiting kids and trying hard to convert,
    But I'll cross forbidden lines, by pissing off 2 bars of his verse,
    And that Braggin Writes Hall of Names got us nervous to text,
    Since this biter administers the site where all our verses are kept,
    ^^opener, doesnt do it for me, the xman reference felt long winded to me, forbidden line was eh, bragginwrites was dope


    Oneduh with all that T.a.C noise when it was YOU who was bogus,
    T.a.C used my lines, but at least I actually KNEW I was ghosting,
    Hens is always dropping fire, but now I doubt where it’s from,
    Cos usually pieces from people are gathered AFTER dropping a bomb,
    Seriously though, I swear his verses are the boldest mistakes,
    Why kick Jon’s.. when he’s already got people's shit all over the place?
    Lost every credible match, so how’s that stack with your clout?
    Jook, Oneduh, Ribo, timevirus, Resin, Fracture, ClasSick, and Ouch,
    ^^me no get the ghosting reference, sowy, the dropping the bomb thing was worded a bit awkwardly, jon/ shit nooo, u just named people he lost to?

    And most say the egg was before the chicken, I agreed with it first,
    But with all the zeros still following Hens, it has to be the reverse,
    Beat nobodies and lost to the best.. if Hens is worthy, then how?
    Motherfucker sounds like an overrated, lisp-less version of Cal,
    But now I see why he was beat by every emcee who was nice,
    Cos it must be hard to win a match against the people you bite,
    ^^hens/ chicken reference? nooo, cal line was kool, people u bit is a bit generic but i guess

    Running around boasting and bragging like this faggot's the hottest,
    He’d push his luck, except the archive is an inanimate object,
    And fuck your icon, Hulk wouldn't even bother brawling, believe it,
    Cos this weakling makes Bruce Banner look like he's already heated,
    So if 3 is a crowd, then be happy that I'm leaving you torn,
    Cos you'll be undefeated if your losses ever see you perform,
    Gave him a fair shot at the champ, even allowed him to squeeze,
    But fuck a kiss, I'm hoping this mistle toe him out of the league,
    ^^archive u referring to same thing but not as aggressive,
    bruce banner was kool, losses line was ehh, mistle toe line was not executed right, seen many varieties of it too

    i felt as if u focused on the biting thing a lot, the name plays didnt get credit cuz of the way u used them seen too many before, flow was ok, overall not bad

    john...
    There's the comparison. but there's no way this brother's equals mine.
    With verses like your mag skills - at his best writing down other people's lines.
    Speaking of oral with women. the moral is not to think I'm forgettin'.
    there's no way that Qurator. his job's just to compile everything that I've written.
    I'm far ahead. winnin isn't somethin u'll achieve with less connection.
    ur only hopes at a 'spirited comeback' depend on your beliefs in ressurection.
    You're not champ material. See, I tend to see the clues he brings.
    microchip stock skyrocketed simply because of his tendency for losing things.
    ^^dont like opener, qurator concept was kool but missing more oomph, spirited was koo, losing things was witty

    in RM/RB.. ur shit talkin made me wanna put a stop to all ur threads.
    u KNOW u ain't shit when ur the RBL champ and had to rep for topical instead.
    As for Tac. u dont have command of shit, u shoulda just planned to quit.
    The verse was like your wife's pussy. the fuck knows who all had a hand in it?
    Ur job as a ghostwriter is thru. who cares if it's what you like to pursue.
    found out YOU wrote for Tac, but recently it looks more like he's been writing for u.
    As far as football. He's a cuntsack that's just too wack to be funny.
    So after I kick it off. i'll treat ur rank like a touchback and take it back to the 20's.
    ^^didnt know he was a topical head sowy, hand in it was koo, tac flip was ok, ha! at 20's line

    Before you act like a baller. Maybe you should leave the house first.
    Cuz all of us know you've never sat on Chrome until google released its browser.
    He's got a retarded look to him, with a face like he's more in fatigue.
    your dna strands showed a D-formation that could rival any 3-4 in the league.

    Props bro, but after that quote, I wouldn't reccomend any tricks.
    I'm going for my 2nd title this year. you're just going for your 2nd in six.
    You're a walking contradiction. I dare you to try and keep pace and win.
    But how do you call One a corrupt mod, then ghost AND sway for the dude facing him.
    ^^chrome was aight, 3-4 was raw, title line was the best of quoted hits so far, so this goes back to the his ghost line situation, sowy dont know whats going on roflz

    Think this dumb cat is elite? I'll make you run back to the streets.
    You're not blanketing your window.. but he's known to thumbtac in the sheets.
    U expect this fag to compete. I'll give you all you can take homie.
    My name's set in stone. while yours had to settle for a gay font on a fake trophy.
    Thanks for the skunk rule. I don't need votes on a page to predict em'.
    But you'll be the first to 5.. that's what this pedophile likes as an age for his victims.
    ^^thumbtac was koo, fake font was nasty, pedophile was eh to aigh

    kool verse, koo flow, good overall verse in my eyes, ur non personal shit was more creative, solid showing


    good battle to both
    vote john hensley
    more consistant IMO
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  10. -Wordplay-

    -Wordplay- New Member

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    Props bro, but after that quote, I wouldn't reccomend any tricks.
    I'm going for my 2nd title this year. you're just going for your 2nd in six.

    nice-it made me laugh thinkin someone would actually use bein champ almost six years ago compared to a recent 08



    As for Tac. u dont have command of shit, u shoulda just planned to quit.
    The verse was like your wife's pussy. the fuck knows who all had a hand in it?

    nice again


    There's the comparison. but there's no way this brother's equals mine.
    With verses like your mag skills - at his best writing down other people's lines.

    nice, fresh way to use a mag line




    Seriously though, I swear his verses are the boldest mistakes,
    Why kick Jon’s.. when he’s already got people's shit all over the place?

    nice first personal hard hitter of the verse since the beginning


    But now I see why he was beat by every emcee who was nice,
    Cos it must be hard to win a match against the people you bite,

    nice


    And fuck your icon, Hulk wouldn't even bother brawling, believe it,
    Cos this weakling makes Bruce Banner look like he's already heated,

    ill!!!!


    man that banner line was nice to look at man, q focused more on punches and john got personal wit it most his verse...im glad to see q didnt actually try and sway in his verse by puttin concepts in there he thinks his opponent will try to use against him.....due to more personal and consistency of niceness....john had it....q didnt really catch on til the end...

    vote john
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  11. Oliver Twist

    Oliver Twist Leavin em twisted

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    Quriosity

    Plus now the Army's recruiting kids and trying hard to convert,
    But I'll cross forbidden lines, by pissing off 2 bars of his verse,

    Hens is always dropping fire, but now I doubt where it’s from,
    Cos usually pieces from people are gathered AFTER dropping a bomb,

    Some hard personals.

    JH

    Speaking of oral with women. the moral is not to think I'm forgettin'.
    there's no way that Qurator. his job's just to compile everything that I've written.
    I'm far ahead. winnin isn't somethin u'll achieve with less connection.
    ur only hopes at a 'spirited comeback' depend on your beliefs in ressurection.

    in RM/RB.. ur shit talkin made me wanna put a stop to all ur threads.
    u KNOW u ain't shit when ur the RBL champ and had to rep for topical instead.

    Ur job as a ghostwriter is thru. who cares if it's what you like to pursue.
    found out YOU wrote for Tac, but recently it looks more like he's been writing for u.

    He's got a retarded look to him, with a face like he's more in fatigue.
    your dna strands showed a D-formation that could rival any 3-4 in the league.



    This is a clash of styles more than anything else. Obviously both cats are well polished, Q's scoring lines were personals with good/solid/polished wording & a couple flips. JH a little more text conventional with the wordplay and his version of personals. After reading both twice JH lines had more of an effect to me, one measure more than Q of creativity. Cool read but vote Hens
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  12. Citizen K.

    Citizen K. Kenny the G....

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    And that Braggin Writes Hall of Names got us nervous to text,
    Since this biter administers the site where all our verses are kept,
    Hens is always dropping fire, but now I doubt where it’s from,
    Cos usually pieces from people are gathered AFTER dropping a bomb,
    Seriously though, I swear his verses are the boldest mistakes,
    Why kick Jon’s.. when he’s already got people's shit all over the place?
    And most say the egg was before the chicken, I agreed with it first,
    But with all the zeros still following Hens, it has to be the reverse,


    vs


    I'm far ahead. winnin isn't somethin u'll achieve with less connection.
    ur only hopes at a 'spirited comeback' depend on your beliefs in ressurection.
    You're not champ material. See, I tend to see the clues he brings.
    microchip stock skyrocketed simply because of his tendency for losing things.
    in RM/RB.. ur shit talkin made me wanna put a stop to all ur threads.
    u KNOW u ain't shit when ur the RBL champ and had to rep for topical instead.
    Ur job as a ghostwriter is thru. who cares if it's what you like to pursue.
    found out YOU wrote for Tac, but recently it looks more like he's been writing for u.
    As far as football. He's a cuntsack that's just too wack to be funny.
    So after I kick it off. i'll treat ur rank like a touchback and take it back to the 20's.
    You're a walking contradiction. I dare you to try and keep pace and win.
    But how do you call One a corrupt mod, then ghost AND sway for the dude facing him.
    U expect this fag to compete. I'll give you all you can take homie.
    My name's set in stone. while yours had to settle for a gay font on a fake trophy.


    nice battle imo. both came with some strong personals, i feel hens' hit alittle harder tho. both had alot of concepts i was feeling, some creative jabs here. hens' was alittle more consistent to me, his execution being alittle more polished to me. close match but hens' verse was alittle more interesting read.

    v/ jhens
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  13. This was a nice battle.. both came out swinging..

    Q

    And that Braggin Writes Hall of Names got us nervous to text,
    Since this biter administers the site where all our verses are kept,

    Hens is always dropping fire, but now I doubt where it’s from,
    Cos usually pieces from people are gathered AFTER dropping a bomb,


    Those were the lines i was really feeling.. Alot of the verse you seemed to dedicate to Hens biting.. which really made most of your verse average..

    Hens..

    You're not champ material. See, I tend to see the clues he brings.
    microchip stock skyrocketed simply because of his tendency for losing things.

    in RM/RB.. ur shit talkin made me wanna put a stop to all ur threads.
    u KNOW u ain't shit when ur the RBL champ and had to rep for topical instead

    As for Tac. u dont have command of shit, u shoulda just planned to quit.
    The verse was like your wife's pussy. the fuck knows who all had a hand in it?

    As far as football. He's a cuntsack that's just too wack to be funny.
    So after I kick it off. i'll treat ur rank like a touchback and take it back to the 20's.

    You're a walking contradiction. I dare you to try and keep pace and win.
    But how do you call One a corrupt mod, then ghost AND sway for the dude facing him.


    Hens verse was just overall better.. had more lines.. kept me interested more.. nice match though..

    Vote Hens
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  14. I'm Deon

    I'm Deon the guy who fucked ur mom

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    It’s nothing to expose this fraud, I’m just defending my title,
    That film of dirt on his teeth must be the highlight reel of his idols,

    And that Braggin Writes Hall of Names got us nervous to text,
    Since this biter administers the site where all our verses are kept,

    Hens is always dropping fire, but now I doubt where it’s from,
    Cos usually pieces from people are gathered AFTER dropping a bomb,


    Running around boasting and bragging like this faggot's the hottest,
    He’d push his luck, except the archive is an inanimate object,

    some nice shots, but the verse as a whole was rather repetitive.

    vs


    I'm far ahead. winnin isn't somethin u'll achieve with less connection.
    ur only hopes at a 'spirited comeback' depend on your beliefs in ressurection.
    You're not champ material. See, I tend to see the clues he brings.
    microchip stock skyrocketed simply because of his tendency for losing things.
    in RM/RB.. ur shit talkin made me wanna put a stop to all ur threads.
    u KNOW u ain't shit when ur the RBL champ and had to rep for topical instead.
    As for Tac. u dont have command of shit, u shoulda just planned to quit.
    The verse was like your wife's pussy. the fuck knows who all had a hand in it?
    Ur job as a ghostwriter is thru. who cares if it's what you like to pursue.
    found out YOU wrote for Tac, but recently it looks more like he's been writing for u.
    As far as football. He's a cuntsack that's just too wack to be funny.
    So after I kick it off. i'll treat ur rank like a touchback and take it back to the 20's.
    Before you act like a baller. Maybe you should leave the house first.
    Cuz all of us know you've never sat on Chrome until google released its browser.
    He's got a retarded look to him, with a face like he's more in fatigue.
    your dna strands showed a D-formation that could rival any 3-4 in the league.


    Think this dumb cat is elite? I'll make you run back to the streets.
    You're not blanketing your window.. but he's known to thumbtac in the sheets.
    U expect this fag to compete. I'll give you all you can take homie.
    My name's set in stone. while yours had to settle for a gay font on a fake trophy.
    Thanks for the skunk rule. I don't need votes on a page to predict em'.
    But you'll be the first to 5.. that's what this pedophile likes as an age for his victims.

    yeah it just seemed like a bigger variety of lines here & even with some of the same personals they were just done nicely here. hens wanted this one & he got it

    v/jh
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  15. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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    And that Braggin Writes Hall of Names got us nervous to text,
    Since this biter administers the site where all our verses are kept,
    ^ok
    Hens is always dropping fire, but now I doubt where it’s from,
    Cos usually pieces from people are gathered AFTER dropping a bomb,
    ^LOLOL
    Running around boasting and bragging like this faggot's the hottest,
    He’d push his luck, except the archive is an inanimate object,
    ^nice concept

    vs.

    I'm far ahead. winnin isn't somethin u'll achieve with less connection.
    ur only hopes at a 'spirited comeback' depend on your beliefs in ressurection
    ^clever
    in RM/RB.. ur shit talkin made me wanna put a stop to all ur threads.
    u KNOW u ain't shit when ur the RBL champ and had to rep for topical instead
    ^ouch
    As for Tac. u dont have command of shit, u shoulda just planned to quit.
    The verse was like your wife's pussy. the fuck knows who all had a hand in it?
    ^ZING!
    As far as football. He's a cuntsack that's just too wack to be funny.
    So after I kick it off. i'll treat ur rank like a touchback and take it back to the 20's.
    ^Witty
    You're a walking contradiction. I dare you to try and keep pace and win.
    But how do you call One a corrupt mod, then ghost AND sway for the dude facing him.
    ^damn

    Q i know your a topical writer, so with respect I ask was the topic this
    week for you "Hens is a biter" you needed more variety in your verse. & did
    you notice Hensley used the dates in his accusation quotes? to a third party
    that makes a difference. Because I've seen plenty of people flip Hensley.
    Yeah Q as far as wording and non-filler lines you were very solid. it's
    more of the content that was your downfall. Hensley on the other hand,
    surprized me with one of the more impressive verses I've read in awhile
    very creative through-out.

    vote- Hensley
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  16. Blue Bayou

    Blue Bayou The Sothist.

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    It’s nothing to expose this fraud, I’m just defending my title,
    That film of dirt on his teeth must be the highlight reel of his idols,
    Plus now the Army's recruiting kids and trying hard to convert,
    But I'll cross forbidden lines, by pissing off 2 bars of his verse,
    Hens is always dropping fire, but now I doubt where it’s from,
    Cos usually pieces from people are gathered AFTER dropping a bomb
    Running around boasting and bragging like this faggot's the hottest,
    He’d push his luck, except the archive is an inanimate object,

    vs.

    Speaking of oral with women. the moral is not to think I'm forgettin'.
    there's no way that Qurator. his job's just to compile everything that I've written.
    You're not champ material. See, I tend to see the clues he brings.
    As for Tac. u dont have command of shit, u shoulda just planned to quit.
    The verse was like your wife's pussy. the fuck knows who all had a hand in it?
    As far as football. He's a cuntsack that's just too wack to be funny.
    So after I kick it off. i'll treat ur rank like a touchback and take it back to the 20's.
    Before you act like a baller. Maybe you should leave the house first.
    Cuz all of us know you've never sat on Chrome until google released its browser.
    He's got a retarded look to him, with a face like he's more in fatigue.
    your dna strands showed a D-formation that could rival any 3-4 in the league.
    Props bro, but after that quote, I wouldn't reccomend any tricks.
    I'm going for my 2nd title this year. you're just going for your 2nd in six.
    You're a walking contradiction. I dare you to try and keep pace and win.
    But how do you call One a corrupt mod, then ghost AND sway for the dude facing him.
    U expect this fag to compete. I'll give you all you can take homie.
    My name's set in stone. while yours had to settle for a gay font on a fake trophy.


    Good champ match guys, but i've gotta give this one to Hens he was beastin this week... Q you had some really nice standouts and started off really strong but far too much of ur verse was focused on Hens bitting, in the beginning the personals we're strong but it got old pretty quick imo (especially since i've seen previous ppl. rip on Hens for the Ripken line and it's not a very recent example).. good verse nevertheless, but ya Hens was very consistent throghout, had more quotables, a more well-rounded verse and better concepts.. props to both'

    Vote - John Hensley.
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  17. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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    Good battle.
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  18. Rizpy

    Rizpy New Member

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    It’s nothing to expose this fraud, I’m just defending my title,
    That film of dirt on his teeth must be the highlight reel of his idols,
    Oneduh with all that T.a.C noise when it was YOU who was bogus,
    T.a.C used my lines, but at least I actually KNEW I was ghosting,
    Hens is always dropping fire, but now I doubt where it’s from,
    Cos usually pieces from people are gathered AFTER dropping a bomb,
    Beat nobodies and lost to the best.. if Hens is worthy, then how?
    Motherfucker sounds like an overrated, lisp-less version of Cal,
    Running around boasting and bragging like this faggot's the hottest,
    He’d push his luck, except the archive is an inanimate object

    vs.

    Speaking of oral with women. the moral is not to think I'm forgettin'.
    there's no way that Qurator. his job's just to compile everything that I've written.
    You're not champ material. See, I tend to see the clues he brings.
    microchip stock skyrocketed simply because of his tendency for losing things.
    in RM/RB.. ur shit talkin made me wanna put a stop to all ur threads.
    u KNOW u ain't shit when ur the RBL champ and had to rep for topical instead.
    As for Tac. u dont have command of shit, u shoulda just planned to quit.
    The verse was like your wife's pussy. the fuck knows who all had a hand in it?
    Ur job as a ghostwriter is thru. who cares if it's what you like to pursue.
    found out YOU wrote for Tac, but recently it looks more like he's been writing for u.
    Before you act like a baller. Maybe you should leave the house first.
    Cuz all of us know you've never sat on Chrome until google released its browser.
    Props bro, but after that quote, I wouldn't reccomend any tricks.
    I'm going for my 2nd title this year. you're just going for your 2nd in six.
    You're a walking contradiction. I dare you to try and keep pace and win.
    But how do you call One a corrupt mod, then ghost AND sway for the dude facing him.
    Think this dumb cat is elite? I'll make you run back to the streets.
    You're not blanketing your window.. but he's known to thumbtac in the sheets.

    Q had a tight verse, def champ worthy. Some of his personals were really harsh, tho some I felt were a bit of a stretch. Hens came hard, real hard. Sick verse, and the wife's pussy line was hilarious! Dope match fellas, job well done.

    Vote - Hens
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  19. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    i dont has meeeeeh linnnnnnkz

    Ok,
    It’s nothing to expose this fraud, I’m just defending my title,
    That film of dirt on his teeth must be the highlight reel of his idols,
    (ok)
    With the way he poses as other people, he’s a skillful magician,
    Mystique turned human in X3, and Magneto had him fill the position,
    (eeeeeeh)
    Plus now the Army's recruiting kids and trying hard to convert,
    But I'll cross forbidden lines, by pissing off 2 bars of his verse,
    (ok)
    And that Braggin Writes Hall of Names got us nervous to text,
    Since this biter administers the site where all our verses are kept,
    (lmfao nice)
    Oneduh with all that T.a.C noise when it was YOU who was bogus,
    T.a.C used my lines, but at least I actually KNEW I was ghosting,
    (hah)
    Hens is always dropping fire, but now I doubt where it’s from,
    Cos usually pieces from people are gathered AFTER dropping a bomb,
    (hah)
    Seriously though, I swear his verses are the boldest mistakes,
    Why kick Jon’s.. when he’s already got people's shit all over the place?
    (ok)
    Lost every credible match, so how’s that stack with your clout?
    Jook, Oneduh, Ribo, timevirus, Resin, Fracture, ClasSick, and Ouch,
    (not feelin)
    And most say the egg was before the chicken, I agreed with it first,
    But with all the zeros still following Hens, it has to be the reverse,
    (not feelin)
    Beat nobodies and lost to the best.. if Hens is worthy, then how?
    Motherfucker sounds like an overrated, lisp-less version of Cal,
    (again not feelin)
    But now I see why he was beat by every emcee who was nice,
    Cos it must be hard to win a match against the people you bite,
    (sounds like somethin i would write..feelin)
    Running around boasting and bragging like this faggot's the hottest,
    He’d push his luck, except the archive is an inanimate object,
    (ok)
    And fuck your icon, Hulk wouldn't even bother brawling, believe it,
    Cos this weakling makes Bruce Banner look like he's already heated,
    (eh)
    So if 3 is a crowd, then be happy that I'm leaving you torn,
    Cos you'll be undefeated if your losses ever see you perform,
    (ok)
    Gave him a fair shot at the champ, even allowed him to squeeze,
    But fuck a kiss, I'm hoping this mistle toe him out of the league,
    (kinda gay)


    wow started of dope hardbody status then started to fall off..there were like 5-8 lines in a row i wasnt feelin..but u def killed it in the beggining i swear u did



    There's the comparison. but there's no way this brother's equals mine.
    With verses like your mag skills - at his best writing down other people's lines.
    (ok)
    Speaking of oral with women. the moral is not to think I'm forgettin'.
    there's no way that Qurator. his job's just to compile everything that I've written.
    (lol)
    I'm far ahead. winnin isn't somethin u'll achieve with less connection.
    ur only hopes at a 'spirited comeback' depend on your beliefs in ressurection.
    (damn nice)
    You're not champ material. See, I tend to see the clues he brings.
    microchip stock skyrocketed simply because of his tendency for losing things.
    (heh word)
    in RM/RB.. ur shit talkin made me wanna put a stop to all ur threads.
    u KNOW u ain't shit when ur the RBL champ and had to rep for topical instead.
    (i cant talk but considering the truth this is good)
    As for Tac. u dont have command of shit, u shoulda just planned to quit.
    The verse was like your wife's pussy. the fuck knows who all had a hand in it?
    (came off like a everybody gets a turn/doornob line..not feelin)
    Ur job as a ghostwriter is thru. who cares if it's what you like to pursue.
    found out YOU wrote for Tac, but recently it looks more like he's been writing for u.
    (lol)
    As far as football. He's a cuntsack that's just too wack to be funny.
    So after I kick it off. i'll treat ur rank like a touchback and take it back to the 20's.
    (oh shit)
    Before you act like a baller. Maybe you should leave the house first.
    Cuz all of us know you've never sat on Chrome until google released its browser.
    (lmfao)
    He's got a retarded look to him, with a face like he's more in fatigue.
    your dna strands showed a D-formation that could rival any 3-4 in the league.
    (ok)







    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Quriosity
    & So what if you champed the league when its occurrence was late?
    I champed this bitch in '01, '2 AND '3.. you champed in early '08,

    Props bro, but after that quote, I wouldn't reccomend any tricks.
    I'm going for my 2nd title this year. you're just going for your 2nd in six.
    (bam)
    You're a walking contradiction. I dare you to try and keep pace and win.
    But how do you call One a corrupt mod, then ghost AND sway for the dude facing him.
    (bam)
    Think this dumb cat is elite? I'll make you run back to the streets.
    You're not blanketing your window.. but he's known to thumbtac in the sheets.
    (lol)
    U expect this fag to compete. I'll give you all you can take homie.
    My name's set in stone. while yours had to settle for a gay font on a fake trophy.
    (ok)
    Thanks for the skunk rule. I don't need votes on a page to predict em'.
    But you'll be the first to 5.. that's what this pedophile likes as an age for his victims.
    (eh(


    lol

    i think i got hens in this...maddddddd consistent..there was only like 4-6 lines i didnt feel at all rest were ok to hilarious

    q was less consistent but definitely had some haymakers

    v/hens
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  20. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    john hensley wins, 11-2 in votes.
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