[WK/32] (CHAMP) 1. Muffffy 9-2 v. 2. magus. 12-0 (muffffy wins)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 10:00pm EST.


    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.


    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties. An agreement of a line limit will thereby serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required.
    [12] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.
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  2. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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  3. magus.

    magus. 'Pistol' Pete Magus'vich

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    sounds great.
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  4. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    hey magus ..i need an ext

    as ive told others...i temporarily moved down to Va to visit my moms n shit..n id figured id get a part time job while im down here..well they just called me today..i go in for training today..and i start tommarow

    so theres no telling what the shift'll be..so JUST IN CASE..im asking for ext
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  5. magus.

    magus. 'Pistol' Pete Magus'vich

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    ok.
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  6. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    wow. i just saw you..guess Ill post first AGAIN

    ok Nick Nobody, Spire X, Silent L, etc whatever

    you got oneduh signin tryin to stop u from breakin his streak...no worries he'll be thankin me later

    if your new and dont get the personals fuck off.


    Budging Muff? hah nigga Im not fearin ya art
    How you also name yourself Nick Nobody then try to say your lyrics are sharp?
    Maggie's approaching win records'..ppl sign in attemptin to send this punk packin
    One thing: when Oneduh signs out this week at least youll know WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED
    US marine corps eh?.. mad loyal to his sergeant too
    "Hell instead of testing for landmines with equipment..lets send this dumb ass walkin through"
    Best believe this loss'll make him taddle n pout
    I always wanted to Bring our Troops Home..but after that some faggots never get out of the house
    Prolly got kicked out of the corps...my my ridiculous
    That wasnt a Honorable Discharge..your just a nice guy with syphillis
    As far as that streak homie I might just end it.
    Mag's ego the size of a jumbo jet..but im showin him exits like the flight attendant
    I know you 12-0...ion give a fuck what you hear clown
    Coz you only joined DOHPE..to compensate what you HAVENT BEEN FOR YEARS NOW
    Ull prolly leave us after this like "whos that loyal?"
    And if you got nothin to prove Ima let your dental records do that for you
    Caveat= oneduh,magus n john..although you think u champin B
    Unlike YOU faggot I can acquire the title and defend it single handedly
    U win? not so simple u fraud
    Youve been flirtin with disaster for so long..this week the bitch finally decided to give u call
    I know the reality gotta be hurtin yknow
    The RBL's at an all time low ..Explanation: Magus 13-0
    This homo disses EVERYONE then swears hes on top of the world
    and As much time he spends in Hookups..you would think hed get a shot at a girl
    E the real called us M n M..but the pic he dropped had this dude con-fused
    [​IMG]
    ^^Mag's like "Id rather be the green one that poses like shes in Moulin Rouge"

    Lmfao @ heaters...ill calm down for this herbs sake
    But how do you EVEN FRONT like the word "mag" sounds like the word "make"?
    How can niggas EVER think I attempted duckin this goof
    Calibre's wp is forced due to an accent..so motherfucker whats your excuse?


    ugh.

    good luck my nigga all bullshit aside.
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  7. magus.

    magus. 'Pistol' Pete Magus'vich

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    N ur chick? we laugh when ya girl comes through
    Just look at her Eisenhower' face looks like she been through World War 2 - Muffy



    RB booted you for that trash shit, they're like 'man he's boring'.
    He was so wack on this site, a whole other site banned him for it.
    youre a hypeman for dohpe, and you can trust that we'll win it.
    taken out the site battle? you were never good enough to be in it.
    get a style, dont take mine, being ill takes time
    muff's was good at the start.....

    ...........cuz the fastest route from point A to B is a straight line.
    ya haven't had one yet. stop calling me, im not that friendly
    love connections? then why the fuck dont your punches have any?
    and we all think you suck faggot, the seeds have been sown.
    i let the cat out the bag.
    .........cuz i know this lonely faggot'll feed it and give it a home.
    verses touch both sides of the screen, no cause for respecting
    but...long lines are hereditary, the first one caused his conception
    no serious, switch the style...flow, try to use your words.
    it's enough characters in his verse to take on the marvel universe.




    thanks bitch, i needed a bodyguard with ribboned curls
    "magus he isnt even worth your time" ....i tell em get em girls?
    you're garbage, and between you and him, idk who's worse.
    cross the line? you should've crossed em and wrote a new verse.
    scared of getting a easy title. i was right to be worry
    easy week?
    shit...this big of a break from muff, could qualify for the clergy.
    you're in the wrong crew, last week, i could see it was over.
    FUCK DOHPE.......you need to hit up some apps for Mediohcre.
    consistently trash for years. and it's been hard to get big
    is it hard believe in yourself...
    .......cuz i have trouble believing somebody this garbage exists.
    you'll be in the 20's...bottom of the league, hurts for you.
    and let's be honest,
    you'll be at the bottom of the league well into your 30's too
    i should've posted the link from last time, and you know it.
    you couldn't put 3 verses together to beat anyone i've posted.
    you're useless, we clown you, daily. you dont amuse shit.
    fuck matching, i'd have to post 60 lines to write as much as you did.




    and i wasn't even home when you posted.
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  8. Undisputed.

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    verses touch both sides of the screen, no cause for respecting
    but...long lines are hereditary, the first one caused his conception
    no serious, switch the style...flow, try to use your words.
    it's enough characters in his verse to take on the marvel universe.
    you're garbage, and between you and him, idk who's worse.
    cross the line? you should've crossed em and wrote a new verse.



    i cant front man, you had some cool ideas that i posted above, but other then that it seemed like you were reaching with quite a few of your concepts. i mean some of your ish was flat out played, like the love connections line and the cross the line bar, just work on those and you'll be better im sure.


    vs


    Maggie's approaching win records'..ppl sign in attemptin to send this punk packin
    One thing: when Oneduh signs out this week at least youll know WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED
    Prolly got kicked out of the corps...my my ridiculous
    That wasnt a Honorable Discharge..your just a nice guy with syphillis
    Caveat= oneduh,magus n john..although you think u champin B
    Unlike YOU faggot I can acquire the title and defend it single handedly


    man some of your shit was stretched as fuck! i mean i know you think its your style or w.e. but it really makes your shit less appealing to read....you had a couple other punches then this that were ok. but definitely nothing outstanding.




    this battle was pretty close, i didnt really feel it was all that championship worthy tho....ehhh either way i vote for MAGUS because he had an extra good punch or two.
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  9. Blue Bayou

    Blue Bayou The Sothist.

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    Maggie's approaching win records'..ppl sign in attemptin to send this punk packin
    One thing: when Oneduh signs out this week at least youll know WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED
    Prolly got kicked out of the corps...my my ridiculous
    That wasnt a Honorable Discharge..your just a nice guy with syphillis
    Ull prolly leave us after this like "whos that loyal?"
    And if you got nothin to prove Ima let your dental records do that for you
    Caveat= oneduh,magus n john..although you think u champin B
    Unlike YOU faggot I can acquire the title and defend it single handedly
    Lmfao @ heaters...ill calm down for this herbs sake
    But how do you EVEN FRONT like the word "mag" sounds like the word "make"?


    Vs.

    youre a hypeman for dohpe, and you can trust that we'll win it.
    taken out the site battle? you were never good enough to be in it.
    ya haven't had one yet. stop calling me, im not that friendly
    love connections? then why the fuck dont your punches have any?
    verses touch both sides of the screen, no cause for respecting
    but...long lines are hereditary, the first one caused his conception
    no serious, switch the style...flow, try to use your words.
    it's enough characters in his verse to take on the marvel universe.
    scared of getting a easy title. i was right to be worry
    easy week?
    shit...this big of a break from muff, could qualify for the clergy.
    you'll be in the 20's...bottom of the league, hurts for you.
    and let's be honest,
    you'll be at the bottom of the league well into your 30's too


    Good champ match guys... although both had some misses both had some hard hitters and fresh lines as well.. i've got Magus taking it by a quotable.. he was a bit more consistent throughout... very close tho, props to both.

    Vote - Magus.
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  10. Baron Mynd

    Baron Mynd Swaggersaurus Rex

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    Budging Muff? hah nigga Im not fearin ya art
    How you also name yourself Nick Nobody then try to say your lyrics are sharp?
    Prolly got kicked out of the corps...my my ridiculous
    That wasnt a Honorable Discharge..your just a nice guy with syphillis
    Ull prolly leave us after this like "whos that loyal?"
    And if you got nothin to prove Ima let your dental records do that for you
    Caveat= oneduh,magus n john..although you think u champin B
    Unlike YOU faggot I can acquire the title and defend it single handedly
    This homo disses EVERYONE then swears hes on top of the world
    and As much time he spends in Hookups..you would think hed get a shot at a girl
    Lmfao @ heaters...ill calm down for this herbs sake
    But how do you EVEN FRONT like the word "mag" sounds like the word "make"?


    Some solid lines in there, feeling th Syphilis and Dental ecords lines the most. Rest was cool also, thos ejust stood out more while reading through. I liked the clownage tip about the sergeant sending him in to clear the mines too, nice visual punch, almost quoted that too.


    Mag:

    youre a hypeman for dohpe, and you can trust that we'll win it.
    taken out the site battle? you were never good enough to be in it.
    ya haven't had one yet. stop calling me, im not that friendly
    love connections? then why the fuck dont your punches have any?
    and we all think you suck faggot, the seeds have been sown.
    i let the cat out the bag.
    .........cuz i know this lonely faggot'll feed it and give it a home.
    scared of getting a easy title. i was right to be worry
    easy week?
    shit...this big of a break from muff, could qualify for the clergy.
    you're in the wrong crew, last week, i could see it was over.
    FUCK DOHPE.......you need to hit up some apps for Mediohcre.
    consistently trash for years. and it's been hard to get big
    is it hard believe in yourself...
    .......cuz i have trouble believing somebody this garbage exists.
    you'll be in the 20's...bottom of the league, hurts for you.
    and let's be honest,
    you'll be at the bottom of the league well into your 30's too


    I think I have Mag one couplet ahead after picking out the lines I enjoyed most from both verses? This one is tighter than the votes look actually, feeling the closing section from
    Magus though where he just seemed to go for the neck. I'm giving Magus the nod in this one...
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  11. Vontana

    Vontana New Member

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    hmmm..guess im the odd man here

    i think mufffy took this. dont get me wrong, it was close and magus was tight too, but i feel like the difference is mufffy just had harsh disses that were actually based on magus' personal life. with him being in the military and all... plus the hookups line among others i liked. whereas a few of mag's shit i wasnt feelin. mufffy was more consistent with harder punches imo

    vote: mufffy
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  12. Citizen K.

    Citizen K. Kenny the G....

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    Budging Muff? hah nigga Im not fearin ya art
    How you also name yourself Nick Nobody then try to say your lyrics are sharp?
    eh
    Maggie's approaching win records'..ppl sign in attemptin to send this punk packin
    One thing: when Oneduh signs out this week at least youll know WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED
    ok
    US marine corps eh?.. mad loyal to his sergeant too
    "Hell instead of testing for landmines with equipment..lets send this dumb ass walkin through"
    ok concept, wasnt big on the execution tho
    Best believe this loss'll make him taddle n pout
    I always wanted to Bring our Troops Home..but after that some faggots never get out of the house
    lol. nice jab
    Prolly got kicked out of the corps...my my ridiculous
    That wasnt a Honorable Discharge..your just a nice guy with syphillis
    ok
    As far as that streak homie I might just end it.
    Mag's ego the size of a jumbo jet..but im showin him exits like the flight attendant
    i liked the execution on this one. helped out the punch itself
    I know you 12-0...ion give a fuck what you hear clown
    Coz you only joined DOHPE..to compensate what you HAVENT BEEN FOR YEARS NOW'ok'ish. coulda went harder with it
    Ull prolly leave us after this like "whos that loyal?"
    And if you got nothin to prove Ima let your dental records do that for you
    solid punch
    Caveat= oneduh,magus n john..although you think u champin B
    Unlike YOU faggot I can acquire the title and defend it single handedly
    ok personal
    U win? not so simple u fraud
    Youve been flirtin with disaster for so long..this week the bitch finally decided to give u call
    never seen this before. witty + creativity points in my book
    I know the reality gotta be hurtin yknow
    The RBL's at an all time low ..Explanation: Magus 13-0
    nah. to simple for my taste
    This homo disses EVERYONE then swears hes on top of the world
    and As much time he spends in Hookups..you would think hed get a shot at a girl
    the setup in the second line made the resulting punch kinda obvious. still not a bad diss tho
    E the real called us M n M..but the pic he dropped had this dude con-fused
    ^^Mag's like "Id rather be the green one that poses like shes in Moulin Rouge"
    nah
    Lmfao @ heaters...ill calm down for this herbs sake
    But how do you EVEN FRONT like the word "mag" sounds like the word "make"?
    eh
    How can niggas EVER think I attempted duckin this goof
    Calibre's wp is forced due to an accent..so motherfucker whats your excuse?
    eh personal



    RB booted you for that trash shit, they're like 'man he's boring'.
    He was so wack on this site, a whole other site banned him for it.
    ok. cool opener
    youre a hypeman for dohpe, and you can trust that we'll win it.
    taken out the site battle? you were never good enough to be in it.
    alittle statementish. decent.
    get a style, dont take mine, being ill takes time
    muff's was good at the start.....

    ...........cuz the fastest route from point A to B is a straight line.
    lol. nice
    ya haven't had one yet. stop calling me, im not that friendly
    love connections? then why the fuck dont your punches have any?
    eh
    and we all think you suck faggot, the seeds have been sown.
    i let the cat out the bag.
    .........cuz i know this lonely faggot'll feed it and give it a home.
    ok. humorous punch
    verses touch both sides of the screen, no cause for respecting
    but...long lines are hereditary, the first one caused his conception
    damn. that line went hard. nice flip at the end
    no serious, switch the style...flow, try to use your words.
    it's enough characters in his verse to take on the marvel universe.
    ok'ish
    thanks bitch, i needed a bodyguard with ribboned curls
    "magus he isnt even worth your time" ....i tell em get em girls?
    nah
    you're garbage, and between you and him, idk who's worse.
    cross the line? you should've crossed em and wrote a new verse.
    played concept.
    scared of getting a easy title. i was right to be worry
    easy week?
    shit...this big of a break from muff, could qualify for the clergy.
    lmao
    you're in the wrong crew, last week, i could see it was over.
    FUCK DOHPE.......you need to hit up some apps for Mediohcre.
    ok.
    consistently trash for years. and it's been hard to get big
    is it hard believe in yourself...
    .......cuz i have trouble believing somebody this garbage exists.
    ehh. 5/10
    you'll be in the 20's...bottom of the league, hurts for you.
    and let's be honest,
    you'll be at the bottom of the league well into your 30's too
    lol. ok
    i should've posted the link from last time, and you know it.
    you couldn't put 3 verses together to beat anyone i've posted.
    nah. doesnt hit hard
    you're useless, we clown you, daily. you dont amuse shit.
    fuck matching, i'd have to post 60 lines to write as much as you did.
    eh


    overall this battle was close. both had had some witty lines and a few played ones. neither had many wording problems, both verses read kinda smooth imo. guess it comes down to consistency and in the end i think mag barely edged out muff in that department. mags big lines stood out alittle more than muffs to me too.

    strong matchup.
    v/ magus
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  13. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    muff man, muff daddy, muffy combs, m. diddy - you've definitely improved your game since the last time you two were pitted against each other. with 2 impressive wins against myself (though i honestly don't see how you're losing this when you beat my 2 verses being that it seemed as though the style and persona pulled you through then and now its being overlooked) you've really become a legitimate threat within the league. moving on, you started off decent with the opener. not much firepower behind it both conceptually and swaggiciously. follow up was nice though, i think the wording of the actual punch pulled it off or the sheer aggressiveness of it. the bar in itself was a bit stretched though but hardly noticed being that there was still a rhythm to it while reading. landmine line was kind've corny imo. i see what you were going for.. something that has received recognition in the past. i just wasn't a fan of the visual shit then nor am i now. honestly though, it was a well put together visual and seems like something the voters would eat up. troops home line was a funnier visual with good wordplay incorporated. never heard the reference so it was fresh for me. discharge was stupid. definitely not up to your standard whether now or then. still, execution was well but the concept itself was just corny and stupid imo. jumbo jet was pretty good. creative but simple and effective. this was a more tolerable visual too imo. dohpe was decent. dental records was eh'ish. flirt with disaster was along the same lines as the honorable discharge shit.. not feeling it. 13-0 was iffy. i get what you're saying and its a good prediction of how the votes will turn out because even though up to now i've thought that he's won every match, it is apparent that people love this nigga to death. he's like the newbie's quetzcoatl or some shit. at the same time, it was saying that you'd lose and the idea itself wasn't executed well enough imo.. decent shot though. hookups was along the lines of discharge/disaster but it had comedic value and was somewhat of a current personal, so i dug it. green mnm was useless here but could've been much better. felt as though you were just filling up space with that shit. last segment after the quote was pretty good, but still seemed as though you were pushing it out to fill up space. still.. i dug the mag/make because when i read it i was thinking, "damn, this whole time this niggas name has been may-gus." overall, it was somewhat consistent with a few lines that i don't think you should've dropped. i dug the approach more than anything. straightforward disses with less theatrics. i see what voters mean by the flow but at the same time i never loss the rhythm so it was never a problem for me. most people just see the length of the line and throw the hands up on that shit. i wouldn't say there was anything magnificent, but you were consistently average throughout and above average for the most part. all the lines beneath are lines that i dug.

    Maggie's approaching win records'..ppl sign in attemptin to send this punk packin
    One thing: when Oneduh signs out this week at least youll know WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED
    Best believe this loss'll make him taddle n pout
    I always wanted to Bring our Troops Home..but after that some faggots never get out of the house
    As far as that streak homie I might just end it.
    Mag's ego the size of a jumbo jet..but im showin him exits like the flight attendant
    I know you 12-0...ion give a fuck what you hear clown
    Coz you only joined DOHPE..to compensate what you HAVENT BEEN FOR YEARS NOW
    Caveat= oneduh,magus n john..although you think u champin B
    Unlike YOU faggot I can acquire the title and defend it single handedly
    This homo disses EVERYONE then swears hes on top of the world
    and As much time he spends in Hookups..you would think hed get a shot at a girl
    Lmfao @ heaters...ill calm down for this herbs sake
    But how do you EVEN FRONT like the word "mag" sounds like the word "make"?
    How can niggas EVER think I attempted duckin this goof
    Calibre's wp is forced due to an accent..so motherfucker whats your excuse?

    may-gus - eh, opener was nice but just seemed as though you were reaching for concepts. i don't know the story behind muff being thrown out but i didn't think it was for that line. aside from that, you voted for him in the match and made it seem as if the negro was damn near flawless. still, the bar itself was presented nicely and if true, harsh. follow up was another simple, harsh personal. straight line was eh.. a bit of a reach for me. i see what you're going for, but i don't even think it was worth all of that. love connections was dumb. the wording/setup was forced and the concept itself was just stupid to me, or at least as presented. cat out the bag was funny and creative. setup was a bit forced and didn't lead into muff being lonely or a homebody, but the punch itself was a pretty decent visual/wordplay punch. conception/marvel were both played concepts but pulled off fairly well. still, only decent bars imo. not really up to your standards or what has become expected of you. seemed like some stuff E would've dropped. i'll say conception was done better than marvel. conception was actually a solid personal, but that marvel shit was not only dumb but just not relevant. muff's verses don't even give off the notion that he uses a lot of characters. dots maybe.. i don't know, but i've never noticed the overusage to warrant such a line. plus, the line wasn't great conceptually. get 'em girls was eh'ish. going for comedic value but it didn't strike a smile from me. clergy was reaching, plust the wording was forced by leaving WORRY instead of WORRIED which was also uneccessary as worried would've worked just fine. mediochre was decent on some funny shit, but wasn't that good in all honesty. garbage was only decent, but worded nicely. the rest played out as just well worded filler. overall i'd say that you were the least consistent and that muffy was the aggressor. you seemed ill-prepared for this match imo. the last 2 quoted are only decent.

    RB booted you for that trash shit, they're like 'man he's boring'.
    He was so wack on this site, a whole other site banned him for it.
    youre a hypeman for dohpe, and you can trust that we'll win it.
    taken out the site battle? you were never good enough to be in it.
    and we all think you suck faggot, the seeds have been sown.
    i let the cat out the bag.
    .........cuz i know this lonely faggot'll feed it and give it a home.
    verses touch both sides of the screen, no cause for respecting
    but...long lines are hereditary, the first one caused his conception
    you're garbage, and between you and him, idk who's worse.
    cross the line? you should've crossed em and wrote a new verse.

    you're in the wrong crew, last week, i could see it was over.
    FUCK DOHPE.......you need to hit up some apps for Mediohcre.
    consistently trash for years. and it's been hard to get big
    is it hard believe in yourself...
    .......cuz i have trouble believing somebody this garbage exists.
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  14. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    overall, magus had some fancy wordplay but a lot of forced wording and more lines that i just didn't dig. his verse felt longer to me and more drawn out. muffy's was more original in structure and concept in the fact that it seemed more tailored for the opponent rather than just a cookie cutter verse. it was aggressive, personal, and had personality. i don't know, i just dug into his verse more. he had about 3 that i just couldn't rock with and a bunch of only decent lines but a lot of good stuff. mag mainly decent throughout with a few good lines and there was more stuff that i just couldn't give the nod too. some lines weren't neccessarily bad either in concept or wording, but i just wasn't feeling them. overall, i think muff's being robbed here.

    VOTE - MUFFFFY
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  15. x-Q-sis

    x-Q-sis R-BS

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    Maggie's approaching win records'..ppl sign in attemptin to send this punk packin
    One thing: when Oneduh signs out this week at least youll know WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED
    US marine corps eh?.. mad loyal to his sergeant too
    "Hell instead of testing for landmines with equipment..lets send this dumb ass walkin through"
    Best believe this loss'll make him taddle n pout
    I always wanted to Bring our Troops Home..but after that some faggots never get out of the house
    Ull prolly leave us after this like "whos that loyal?"
    And if you got nothin to prove Ima let your dental records do that for you
    Caveat= oneduh,magus n john..although you think u champin B
    Unlike YOU faggot I can acquire the title and defend it single handedly
    Lmfao @ heaters...ill calm down for this herbs sake
    But how do you EVEN FRONT like the word "mag" sounds like the word "make"?

    vs

    RB booted you for that trash shit, they're like 'man he's boring'.
    He was so wack on this site, a whole other site banned him for it.
    youre a hypeman for dohpe, and you can trust that we'll win it.
    taken out the site battle? you were never good enough to be in it.
    and we all think you suck faggot, the seeds have been sown.
    i let the cat out the bag.
    .........cuz i know this lonely faggot'll feed it and give it a home.
    you're in the wrong crew, last week, i could see it was over.
    FUCK DOHPE.......you need to hit up some apps for Mediohcre.
    consistently trash for years. and it's been hard to get big
    is it hard believe in yourself...
    .......cuz i have trouble believing somebody this garbage exists.


    Pretty good matchup here, alot of cool ideas, and freshly worded punches. Both took different approaches, but culd still feel the sting in punches. Muffy came personal and had alot of nice punches in there. Magus jus came with actual concepts, and still had nice punches. It was a really close match, but i got Muffy with more quotables. Jus more punches that i felt hit harder, so

    v/ muffy.
    test
  16. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    Budging Muff? hah nigga Im not fearin ya art
    How you also name yourself Nick Nobody then try to say your lyrics are sharp?
    aight
    Maggie's approaching win records'..ppl sign in attemptin to send this punk packin
    One thing: when Oneduh signs out this week at least youll know WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED
    felt this
    US marine corps eh?.. mad loyal to his sergeant too
    "Hell instead of testing for landmines with equipment..lets send this dumb ass walkin through"
    lol, aight
    Best believe this loss'll make him taddle n pout
    I always wanted to Bring our Troops Home..but after that some faggots never get out of the house
    lol
    Prolly got kicked out of the corps...my my ridiculous
    That wasnt a Honorable Discharge..your just a nice guy with syphillis
    haha, like the short approach.
    As far as that streak homie I might just end it.
    Mag's ego the size of a jumbo jet..but im showin him exits like the flight attendant
    k
    I know you 12-0...ion give a fuck what you hear clown
    Coz you only joined DOHPE..to compensate what you HAVENT BEEN FOR YEARS NOW
    these lines read played, but it's still executed nicely.
    Ull prolly leave us after this like "whos that loyal?"
    And if you got nothin to prove Ima let your dental records do that for you
    pretty good
    Caveat= oneduh,magus n john..although you think u champin B
    Unlike YOU faggot I can acquire the title and defend it single handedly
    pretty nice
    U win? not so simple u fraud
    Youve been flirtin with disaster for so long..this week the bitch finally decided to give u call
    nah
    I know the reality gotta be hurtin yknow
    The RBL's at an all time low ..Explanation: Magus 13-0
    lol. funny, seen similar
    This homo disses EVERYONE then swears hes on top of the world
    and As much time he spends in Hookups..you would think hed get a shot at a girl
    nah

    E the real called us M n M..but the pic he dropped had this dude con-fused
    ^^Mag's like "Id rather be the green one that poses like shes in Moulin Rouge"
    lol, aight
    Lmfao @ heaters...ill calm down for this herbs sake
    But how do you EVEN FRONT like the word "mag" sounds like the word "make"?
    yaaa, but not a hard diss.
    How can niggas EVER think I attempted duckin this goof
    Calibre's wp is forced due to an accent..so motherfucker whats your excuse?
    solid


    vs



    RB booted you for that trash shit, they're like 'man he's boring'.
    He was so wack on this site, a whole other site banned him for it.
    funny, nice flip on the situation[/b]
    youre a hypeman for dohpe, and you can trust that we'll win it.
    taken out the site battle? you were never good enough to be in it.
    good swag, but simple, common
    get a style, dont take mine, being ill takes time
    muff's was good at the start.....

    ...........cuz the fastest route from point A to B is a straight line.
    eh, not feelin it as much
    ya haven't had one yet. stop calling me, im not that friendly
    love connections? then why the fuck dont your punches have any?
    alright
    and we all think you suck faggot, the seeds have been sown.
    i let the cat out the bag.
    .........cuz i know this lonely faggot'll feed it and give it a home.
    ehh
    verses touch both sides of the screen, no cause for respecting
    but...long lines are hereditary, the first one caused his conception
    lol nice
    no serious, switch the style...flow, try to use your words.
    it's enough characters in his verse to take on the marvel universe.
    pretty good
    thanks bitch, i needed a bodyguard with ribboned curls
    "magus he isnt even worth your time" ....i tell em get em girls?
    funny but i dunno
    you're garbage, and between you and him, idk who's worse.
    cross the line? you should've crossed em and wrote a new verse.
    nah, seen similar
    scared of getting a easy title. i was right to be worry
    easy week?
    shit...this big of a break from muff, could qualify for the clergy.
    pretty good
    you're in the wrong crew, last week, i could see it was over.
    FUCK DOHPE.......you need to hit up some apps for Mediohcre.
    nah, not that clever really
    consistently trash for years. and it's been hard to get big
    is it hard believe in yourself...
    .......cuz i have trouble believing somebody this garbage exists.
    harsh, solid
    you'll be in the 20's...bottom of the league, hurts for you.
    and let's be honest,
    you'll be at the bottom of the league well into your 30's too
    not bad
    i should've posted the link from last time, and you know it.
    you couldn't put 3 verses together to beat anyone i've posted.
    ok
    you're useless, we clown you, daily. you dont amuse shit.
    fuck matching, i'd have to post 60 lines to write as much as you did.
    lol





    This turned out pretty well, 2 good battlers, lots of hype.

    Muff, I thought you had a good personal feel, the vibe each line gave me had a little bit more harshness to it, similar to last week against Deon, it carried over a little here. I thought the Oneduh, Troops, Discharge, Caveat lines were ur best. The MnM one was iffy, and you had some whiffs with the exit line imo, and the flirting with disaster one.

    Mag, you had a confident feel to your verse too. Conceptually I didn't think you really brought it here though, I woulda felt it if you stuck on the personal vibe like your first line. The crew battle line was harsh, but seems like something you'd see said in any crew battle situation. You had some generics that I thought were iffy, like the cat, AB line, and the worth your time ones. Also I thought Muff's DOHPE line was a bit better as well. The characters line was good, shots on the style was nice at the end.


    Overall this was a pretty good battle, but I have Muffy winning this, not easily, but I came away from both verses confident in who I was voting for after a breakdown, and a 2nd read. I thought Muffy's execution was more direct, and his concepts were good enough to keep most of the lines interesting. He had a few misses, and several oddball lines, but the personals were very effective and executed really well. Magus also had a solid verse, but conceptually was inconsistent, by personal feel, some of the ideas he chose to work with just didn't come off as very harsh disses in comparison to some of what Muffy had.


    Vote- Mufffy.
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  17. D.LOKE

    D.LOKE New Member

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    VOTE : MUFF

    this was a close one and I appreciated this battle cause they both had some gut wrenching personals which i like. quote for quote tho I have muff taking this by one rhyme.
    I loved that marvel line by Magnus but I like that discharge line by Muff too. I got Muff by a hair but it was definaly the best battle I read this week. I'd love for somebody to explain the animosity with the RB heads. and when the site battle took place and where can I view it.



    Budging Muff? hah nigga Im not fearin ya art
    How you also name yourself Nick Nobody then try to say your lyrics are sharp?
    US marine corps eh?.. mad loyal to his sergeant too
    "Hell instead of testing for landmines with equipment..lets send this dumb ass walkin through"
    Prolly got kicked out of the corps...my my ridiculous
    That wasnt a Honorable Discharge..your just a nice guy with syphillis
    ^WHOA!!lol
    I know the reality gotta be hurtin yknow
    The RBL's at an all time low ..Explanation: Magus 13-0
    Lmfao @ heaters...ill calm down for this herbs sake
    But how do you EVEN FRONT like the word "mag" sounds like the word "make"?
    How can niggas EVER think I attempted duckin this goof
    Calibre's wp is forced due to an accent..so motherfucker whats your excuse?



    VS


    RB booted you for that trash shit, they're like 'man he's boring'.
    He was so wack on this site, a whole other site banned him for it.
    youre a hypeman for dohpe, and you can trust that we'll win it.
    taken out the site battle? you were never good enough to be in it.
    ya haven't had one yet. stop calling me, im not that friendly
    love connections? then why the fuck dont your punches have any?
    no serious, switch the style...flow, try to use your words.
    it's enough characters in his verse to take on the marvel universe.
    consistently trash for years. and it's been hard to get big
    is it hard believe in yourself...
    .......cuz i have trouble believing somebody this garbage exists.
    test
  18. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    test
  19. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Lol@ Q's extremely long breakdown. Damn.. that nigga was reciting bible stories and shit. Lol

    But nah..

    Muffff, this was the best Ive ever seen you come in a match before. seems like you really took your time on this 1. You were very consistant with ideas, personals and wordplay. I really enjoyed ya shit. Loved the Honorable Discharge line. Made me laugh.. as well as a couple others. You hada lot of head knods through out. Good job.

    Magus, ya had your moments of dominance.. but then again you had your moments of... ehhh. I loved the Mediocre line.. it was very clever.. made me laugh. As well as a couple others.. but that line was just my fav. the only real problem I had with ya verse is that it just wasn't consistant. I don't know.. maybe you thought Muffff wasn't going to go hard but.. in recent weeks... he's showed that he keeps getting better. I can understand he's the 1st of 92 battles you have coming up.. but just don't assume you're gonna be champ.. you have to beat the champ.. in order to get there 1st. Then thats when you can turn the confidence on to intimidate peeps... you kinda jumped the gun on this 1. That shit doesn't work if your facing the champ.

    Vote=Muffffy
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  20. Fervent_Notion

    Fervent_Notion music is life

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    This was a good battle. Both came strong and both came with some solid lines. After reading both verses twice, Muffffy's verse stood out to me more. I just thought that he was the most consistent throughout his verse. Simply put, his verse just entertained me more.

    Vote: Muffffy
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