[WK/28] (CHAMP) 1. Servical 6-0 (Co-Champ) v. 2. -Sephiroth- 9-1 (servical recycles)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 10:00pm EST.


    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.


    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are TO remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties. An agreement of a line limit will thereby serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required.
    [12] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.
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  2. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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    Im'a be busy this week so...

    24, maybe 30.
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  3. -Sephiroth-

    -Sephiroth- Geostigmatic

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  4. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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    Gonna need an extension.
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  5. -Sephiroth-

    -Sephiroth- Geostigmatic

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    16.

    bitches always do you dirty, you being a champ ain't well fitting
    it's like you and cav have a prenup, how he took half the belt with him
    shoulda zigged before you zagged, now you claiming dudes jerked you
    you were never a real champ anyways, so your career's come full circle
    so quit with all the excuses and bitching, your whining's awful dude
    cause all we hearing's the same song, and your singing in autotune
    your verses lack the basics, but i'll admit it ain't the weakest though
    that textbook style of yours could teach newbs to atleast have a decent flow
    got multi's for days, your dull and just played, i'll rap like you to prove it
    ^ but whats the point of writing like that, when it's absolutely useless
    have a rep of a champion ? pfft, you know you lacking the stuff
    when the only reason we vote on your battles is to tell you how badly you suck
    we're at a loss of words, when bringing up the topic of serv
    .............
    ^ see that right there, thats me giving you the props you deserve
    we'll keep you aboard for the semi-annuals, seeing you score
    congrats though, your most likely to win the best female award
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  6. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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    just in time, key.

    i know you nervous right? it ain't nothing for me to carve up a win.
    nigga you ain't just growing concern, you have a whole garden of them.
    i got marksmen like saavy, plus my aim and focus better.
    so you ain't got no choice but to catch 22 like joseph heller.
    ur getting gassed up, and now it gots you blowing air.
    ur running on fumes so much, that it could deplete the ozone layer.
    it's bout 'change', and you should give a little to show the profit.
    but you even shady with 50cent, like when interscope was poppin.
    so have a saigon moment, realize you lost and then run dude.
    if i have saigon moment, it's right before my entourage jumps you.
    you holding on old victories, so i dare you to try again.
    the biggest win you have was Mag, and that was back when grimet was writing them.
    he be getting robbed so often, people done it to him casually.
    so if you bank'd on a win, then this is money in the bag for me.
    you already got KO'd, don't worry bout landing some punches.
    i'd leave it to voters, you'll still get beat at the hands of the judges.

    pz.
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  7. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    vote - Serv

    his verse was much more polished, wit lyrics that are real witty.
    seph came correct, but in comparison, still wasn't f'n with the champ.
    i was expecting MUCH more, this week especially, from Seph being a champ bout.
    this battle is a toss up, but serv seemed more experienced, more prepared.
    Seph, I still got much Respect for you.
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  8. Walter Sickert

    Walter Sickert New Member

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    oh wow. this was awesome.

    sephiroth-

    lines i liked:
    your verses lack the basics, but i'll admit it ain't the weakest though
    that textbook style of yours could teach newbs to atleast have a decent flow
    got multi's for days, your dull and just played, i'll rap like you to prove it
    ^ but whats the point of writing like that, when it's absolutely useless

    and

    shoulda zigged before you zagged, now you claiming dudes jerked you
    you were never a real champ anyways, so your career's come full circle

    the only thing i thought was pointless was you messed up the pre-nup line. when you don't sign a prenup then the other person in marriage whether gay or straight can take half of the "estate" (which is what all the money, houses, and cars is) with them after divorce.

    i liked sephiroth's verse and the way it is set up in form. using reputation to challenge the opponent through personals.


    servical-

    lines i liked:

    so have a saigon moment, realize you lost and then run dude.
    if i have saigon moment, it's right before my entourage jumps you.

    ^that is what mainly made my day with this battle. it's very solid. everything timed damn good.

    you holding on old victories, so i dare you to try again.
    the biggest win you have was Mag, and that was back when grimet was writing them.

    i like servical's execution with his words. some of the rhymes were accented which is cool. i liked the way it was like all nonchalant like "fuck off".

    my vote goes to servical because he had a solid verse whereas sephiroth had a few leaks. i want to call it even somewhat but i think that servical just edges it out a little bit.

    v-servical
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  9. Future

    Future Get Busy

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    Sephiroth:


    bitches always do you dirty, you being a champ ain't well fitting
    it's like you and cav have a prenup, how he took half the belt with him
    ok
    so quit with all the excuses and bitching, your whining's awful dude
    cause all we hearing's the same song, and your singing in autotune
    fuck with this line for sum reason

    got multi's for days, your dull and just played, i'll rap like you to prove it
    ^ but whats the point of writing like that, when it's absolutely useless
    damn thats how u feel

    we're at a loss of words, when bringing up the topic of serv
    .............
    ^ see that right there, thats me giving you the props you deserv
    lol

    Pretty much the whole verse was consistent put those lines stood out for me

    Serv:

    i know you nervous right? it ain't nothing for me to carve up a win.
    nigga you ain't just growing concern, you have a whole garden of them.
    lol

    it's bout 'change', and you should give a little to show the profit.
    but you even shady with 50cent, like when interscope was poppin.
    lol

    so have a saigon moment, realize you lost and then run dude.
    if i have saigon moment, it's right before my entourage jumps you.
    pretty nice

    you holding on old victories, so i dare you to try again.
    the biggest win you have was Mag, and that was back when grimet was writing them
    lol best line in the battle

    Overall u both had four lines i fucked with but Ima have to go with Serv cuz i lol on a couple literally

    Vote: Serv
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  10. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    Seph,
    bitches always do you dirty, you being a champ ain't well fitting
    it's like you and cav have a prenup, how he took half the belt with him
    aight..
    shoulda zigged before you zagged, now you claiming dudes jerked you
    you were never a real champ anyways, so your career's come full circle
    ehhh..
    so quit with all the excuses and bitching, your whining's awful dude
    cause all we hearing's the same song, and your singing in autotune
    coo..
    your verses lack the basics, but i'll admit it ain't the weakest though
    that textbook style of yours could teach newbs to atleast have a decent flow
    ehh..seen this "textbook style" flip too many times
    got multi's for days, your dull and just played, i'll rap like you to prove it
    ^ but whats the point of writing like that, when it's absolutely useless
    lol..I like this
    have a rep of a champion ? pfft, you know you lacking the stuff
    when the only reason we vote on your battles is to tell you how badly you suck
    haha
    we're at a loss of words, when bringing up the topic of serv
    .............
    ^ see that right there, thats me giving you the props you deserve
    nice
    we'll keep you aboard for the semi-annuals, seeing you score
    congrats though, your most likely to win the best female award
    kinda laughable..

    Seph started off kind of slow in my opinion but gradually picked up as the verse went on...I was feeling that line about him giving serv props, it was pretty nice...opener and closer were ok-ish..pretty cool verse

    Serv,
    i know you nervous right? it ain't nothing for me to carve up a win.
    nigga you ain't just growing concern, you have a whole garden of them
    pretty coo..
    i got marksmen like saavy, plus my aim and focus better.
    so you ain't got no choice but to catch 22 like joseph heller
    ehh..
    ur getting gassed up, and now it gots you blowing air.
    ur running on fumes so much, that it could deplete the ozone layer.
    aight..seems like I've seen it before
    it's bout 'change', and you should give a little to show the profit.
    but you even shady with 50cent, like when interscope was poppin
    very nice...i'm diggin
    so have a saigon moment, realize you lost and then run dude.
    if i have saigon moment, it's right before my entourage jumps you
    haha
    you holding on old victories, so i dare you to try again.
    the biggest win you have was Mag, and that was back when grimet was writing them.
    lmao..
    he be getting robbed so often, people done it to him casually.
    so if you bank'd on a win, then this is money in the bag for me.
    good
    you already got KO'd, don't worry bout landing some punches.
    i'd leave it to voters, you'll still get beat at the hands of the judges.
    ok

    Serv also started a little slow but as the verse went on, he started throwing hay makers..the 50 cent/shady line and the Mag line were the most standout in your verse.. the closer was slightly better than seph's and the punches all together were just a little better..

    so my vote-Serv
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  11. PERTAiN2LiFE

    PERTAiN2LiFE sheesh the rapper

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    got multi's for days, your dull and just played, i'll rap like you to prove it
    ^ but whats the point of writing like that, when it's absolutely useless
    have a rep of a champion ? pfft, you know you lacking the stuff
    when the only reason we vote on your battles is to tell you how badly you suck
    we're at a loss of words, when bringing up the topic of serv
    .............
    ^ see that right there, thats me giving you the props you deserve
    we'll keep you aboard for the semi-annuals, seeing you score
    congrats though, your most likely to win the best female award

    to

    i know you nervous right? it ain't nothing for me to carve up a win.
    nigga you ain't just growing concern, you have a whole garden of them.
    i got marksmen like saavy, plus my aim and focus better.
    so you ain't got no choice but to catch 22 like joseph heller.
    ur getting gassed up, and now it gots you blowing air.
    ur running on fumes so much, that it could deplete the ozone layer.
    so have a saigon moment, realize you lost and then run dude.
    if i have saigon moment, it's right before my entourage jumps you.
    he be getting robbed so often, people done it to him casually.
    so if you bank'd on a win, then this is money in the bag for me.


    Vote - Serv

    Seph had a tight verse, some things a little forced, but nice indeed.
    Serv had a hard hitting verse that I dug a bit more.

    Nice battle.
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  12. 4Matt

    4Matt On the money

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    so quit with all the excuses and bitching, your whining's awful dude
    cause all we hearing's the same song, and your singing in autotune
    your verses lack the basics, but i'll admit it ain't the weakest though
    that textbook style of yours could teach newbs to atleast have a decent flow
    got multi's for days, your dull and just played, i'll rap like you to prove it
    ^ but whats the point of writing like that, when it's absolutely useless
    have a rep of a champion ? pfft, you know you lacking the stuff
    when the only reason we vote on your battles is to tell you how badly you suck

    VS.

    i know you nervous right? it ain't nothing for me to carve up a win.
    nigga you ain't just growing concern, you have a whole garden of them.
    it's bout 'change', and you should give a little to show the profit.
    but you even shady with 50cent, like when interscope was poppin.
    you holding on old victories, so i dare you to try again.
    the biggest win you have was Mag, and that was back when grimet was writing them.

    Overall, i thought Seph was more consistant. Seph picked up towards the end where as Serv kinda lagged. Seph had a little bit more orginality, but both pretty much had mostly decent hits then killer haymakers.

    Overall, i vote Seph.
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  13. Gundam

    Gundam that G..

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    Seph
    bitches always do you dirty, you being a champ ain't well fitting
    it's like you and cav have a prenup, how he took half the belt with him
    - coo
    shoulda zigged before you zagged, now you claiming dudes jerked you
    you were never a real champ anyways, so your career's come full circle
    - ok
    so quit with all the excuses and bitching, your whining's awful dude
    cause all we hearing's the same song, and your singing in autotune
    - lol ok
    your verses lack the basics, but i'll admit it ain't the weakest though
    that textbook style of yours could teach newbs to atleast have a decent flow
    - iite
    got multi's for days, your dull and just played, i'll rap like you to prove it
    ^ but whats the point of writing like that, when it's absolutely useless
    - nice
    have a rep of a champion ? pfft, you know you lacking the stuff
    when the only reason we vote on your battles is to tell you how badly you suck
    - ok
    we're at a loss of words, when bringing up the topic of serv
    .............
    ^ see that right there, thats me giving you the props you deserve
    - lol nice
    we'll keep you aboard for the semi-annuals, seeing you score
    congrats though, your most likely to win the best female award
    - coo


    Serv
    i know you nervous right? it ain't nothing for me to carve up a win.
    nigga you ain't just growing concern, you have a whole garden of them.
    - nice
    i got marksmen like saavy, plus my aim and focus better.
    so you ain't got no choice but to catch 22 like joseph heller.
    - ok
    ur getting gassed up, and now it gots you blowing air.
    ur running on fumes so much, that it could deplete the ozone layer.
    - eh
    it's bout 'change', and you should give a little to show the profit.
    but you even shady with 50cent, like when interscope was poppin.
    - iite
    so have a saigon moment, realize you lost and then run dude.
    if i have saigon moment, it's right before my entourage jumps you.
    - nice
    you holding on old victories, so i dare you to try again.
    the biggest win you have was Mag, and that was back when grimet was writing them.
    - ok
    he be getting robbed so often, people done it to him casually.
    so if you bank'd on a win, then this is money in the bag for me.
    - aw man, recycled
    you already got KO'd, don't worry bout landing some punches.
    i'd leave it to voters, you'll still get beat at the hands of the judges.
    - recycled again?


    this battle was about dead even to me untill i noticed serv recycled.

    http://board.rapmusic.com/rbl-top-20/1089622-7-munch-3-0-vs-8-servical-7-3-a.html

    http://board.rapmusic.com/rbl-top-20/1084536-1-servical-6-1-vs-2-willie-gallo-5-0-verses-up.html

    ^ last 4 bars were recycled from those two battles. honestly, thats pretty weak fam. gotta go with seph though, just a little more fresher and the second half of his verse was strong.
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  14. Ren.

    Ren. elite.

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    Seph
    bitches always do you dirty, you being a champ ain't well fitting
    it's like you and cav have a prenup, how he took half the belt with him
    haha
    shoulda zigged before you zagged, now you claiming dudes jerked you
    you were never a real champ anyways, so your career's come full circle
    na.
    so quit with all the excuses and bitching, your whining's awful dude
    cause all we hearing's the same song, and your singing in autotune
    ok.
    your verses lack the basics, but i'll admit it ain't the weakest though
    that textbook style of yours could teach newbs to atleast have a decent flow
    ok.
    got multi's for days, your dull and just played, i'll rap like you to prove it
    ^ but whats the point of writing like that, when it's absolutely useless
    personal
    have a rep of a champion ? pfft, you know you lacking the stuff
    when the only reason we vote on your battles is to tell you how badly you suck
    na.
    we're at a loss of words, when bringing up the topic of serv
    .............
    ^ see that right there, thats me giving you the props you deserve
    personal.
    we'll keep you aboard for the semi-annuals, seeing you score
    congrats though, your most likely to win the best female award
    no.


    Serv
    i know you nervous right? it ain't nothing for me to carve up a win.
    nigga you ain't just growing concern, you have a whole garden of them.
    coo
    i got marksmen like saavy, plus my aim and focus better.
    so you ain't got no choice but to catch 22 like joseph heller.
    k
    ur getting gassed up, and now it gots you blowing air.
    ur running on fumes so much, that it could deplete the ozone layer.
    tying fumes into being gassed up is strechin.
    it's bout 'change', and you should give a little to show the profit.
    but you even shady with 50cent, like when interscope was poppin.
    k
    so have a saigon moment, realize you lost and then run dude.
    if i have saigon moment, it's right before my entourage jumps you.
    lol
    you holding on old victories, so i dare you to try again.
    the biggest win you have was Mag, and that was back when grimet was writing them.
    liked this one
    he be getting robbed so often, people done it to him casually.
    so if you bank'd on a win, then this is money in the bag for me.
    no, since you recycled.
    you already got KO'd, don't worry bout landing some punches.
    i'd leave it to voters, you'll still get beat at the hands of the judges.
    no, since you recycled.


    When I read over these a day ago before I voted I thought Serv won clearly.. but being original is a big hthing, recycling is weak. even if you key. so thats No's for the punches you recycled an that gave seph the edge to take this.

    v/seph,
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  15. the joker 2.0

    the joker 2.0 the clown prince of rhyme

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    WOO HA HOO RECYCLING IN A CHAMP MATCH WHERES THE DQ
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  16. Yung Money

    Yung Money New Member

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    can't say i was really feeling sephs verse... it was just decent imo... no rela firepower

    serv
    first line had more strength than anything in sephs verse... verse was on point throughout

    vote-serv
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  17. OohGots

    OohGots fuhgittabouttit

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    bitches always do you dirty, you being a champ ain't well fitting
    it's like you and cav have a prenup, how he took half the belt with him
    we're at a loss of words, when bringing up the topic of serv
    .............
    ^ see that right there, thats me giving you the props you deserve

    These are the lines I liked from Seph...nothing spectacular. That opener was pretty funny but I think it could have been flipped way better. The props line was pretty funny. OTher than that it was a bunch of weak/not clever punchlines.


    vs.


    he be getting robbed so often, people done it to him casually.
    so if you bank'd on a win, then this is money in the bag for me.
    you already got KO'd, don't worry bout landing some punches.
    i'd leave it to voters, you'll still get beat at the hands of the judges.
    you holding on old victories, so i dare you to try again.
    the biggest win you have was Mag, and that was back when grimet was writing them.so have a saigon moment, realize you lost and then run dude.
    if i have saigon moment, it's right before my entourage jumps you.

    Two of the lines I quoted from you seem to have been recycled.....which I am guessing is going to get you DQ'd. But till then I will vote like I didn't know that. Your two recycled lines were nice, hands of the judges lines was dope as hell. Good personal with the Grimet line and the Saigon line was decent as well.

    V/ Serv
    A lot more hitting lines and just creativity with his punches. Both had there fair share of filler, but Serv's punches landed much harder than Seph's/.
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  18. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    we'll let it play out, but wow serv, i'm disappointed. action will be taken.
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  19. D.LOKE

    D.LOKE New Member

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    VOTE: SEPH

    I thought it was kinda weak for a champ match. I had a couple quotes from both but none of them were what I could really call haymakers they were decent lines tho. the Change one Servical had was an ok flip on a done to death concept with the change life/ change coins thing. what made it kinda ok was the 50 cent / shady reference. N.E way I have a quote tie but I'll give it to Seph because with the Caveat1 personal and the style mimick, even without the recycling exposure(<--which trust me gets booos from me) I'm not sure seph didn't do e-nuff to pull out a close one N.E ways because Servical didn't come as tight as he did last weak at all.





    bitches always do you dirty, you being a champ ain't well fitting
    it's like you and cav have a prenup, how he took half the belt with him
    got multi's for days, your dull and just played, i'll rap like you to prove it
    ^ but whats the point of writing like that, when it's absolutely useless
    have a rep of a champion ? pfft, you know you lacking the stuff
    when the only reason we vote on your battles is to tell you how badly you suck

    VS

    i know you nervous right? it ain't nothing for me to carve up a win.
    nigga you ain't just growing concern, you have a whole garden of them.
    t's bout 'change', and you should give a little to show the profit.
    but you even shady with 50cent, like when interscope was poppin.
    you holding on old victories, so i dare you to try again.
    the biggest win you have was Mag, and that was back when grimet was writing them.
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  20. Brad Banks

    Brad Banks New Member

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    bitches always do you dirty, you being a champ ain't well fitting
    it's like you and cav have a prenup, how he took half the belt with him
    shoulda zigged before you zagged, now you claiming dudes jerked you
    you were never a real champ anyways, so your career's come full circle

    your verses lack the basics, but i'll admit it ain't the weakest though
    that textbook style of yours could teach newbs to atleast have a decent flow
    got multi's for days, your dull and just played, i'll rap like you to prove it
    ^ but whats the point of writing like that, when it's absolutely useless


    vs

    i know you nervous right? it ain't nothing for me to carve up a win.
    nigga you ain't just growing concern, you have a whole garden of them.
    i got marksmen like saavy, plus my aim and focus better.
    so you ain't got no choice but to catch 22 like joseph heller.
    ur getting gassed up, and now it gots you blowing air.
    ur running on fumes so much, that it could deplete the ozone layer.
    it's bout 'change', and you should give a little to show the profit.
    but you even shady with 50cent, like when interscope was poppin.
    you holding on old victories, so i dare you to try again.
    the biggest win you have was Mag, and that was back when grimet was writing them.

    both verses were good, but servical had a couple more lines i liked, and those lines were hitting a little harder than sephiroth

    servical was more consistant also, seph verse was nice but fell off in a a couple spots

    vote - servical
    nice battle
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