[WK/27] (CHAMP) 1. Caveat1 15-1 v. 2. Servical 5-0 (tie match)

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  1. Quriosity

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    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 10:00pm EST.


    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.


    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are TO remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties. An agreement of a line limit will thereby serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required.
    [12] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.
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  2. Caveat1

    Caveat1 New Member

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    Extension Requested
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  3. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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  4. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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    now i'm seen as calefaction, i guess thats something you prolly imagening
    kinda like writing a bunch'a personals against someone ur not even batteling
    you getting votes in the first place is something up for question
    all that terrible reign did was remind us of the 2001 elections
    you boring as fuck, hope you took advantage of that extension man
    cause your consistancy's drifting away, along with our attention span
    but ur dreamin too, even awake you got the gayest of fantasies
    cause your always away with the fairies, even when facing reality
    with that trademark style, the vets wouldn't be proud of you holmes
    you should leave their archives out of this and get a style of ur own
    i'm guessing ur demik, then that would make this #3 of our fights
    so whats the point of getting personal, when i've already beaten you twice ?
    go'head, write like you know me, i bet you stopped and took a guess
    tryina 'cover all of the bases', but you still haven't gotten pussy yet
    see i look at the bigger picture, so i really don't give a fuck
    it doesn't matter if you are who i think you are, when i think you suck
    having a vet-like pedigree, so maybe ur coming from true stock
    i guess i'll just ask oneduh, since he got 'cav' covered like tube socks
    n' having mod pull doesn't change the fact this clown is just wack
    ur verses are nothing, oneduh ain't had to edit them out to prove that
    ur unintentional comedy so you dissing me is crazy irrelevent
    this battles all jokes, n' well, you take up like 80 percent of them
    ur writing flaws outweight mine, n' steady comin up wacker on
    if my lines are stretched, yours is getting ready for a triathlon
    ain't droppin no mo, it's his last hurrah n' he up outta the throne
    think ur gonna come with the 'W', who the fuck is you, Oliver Stone ?
    i'm feeling calm, but with that terrible style i see why you shook more
    ur wordp1ay so bad, it's bout to get banned like it dissed everything Q stood for
    so enough with the wishfull thinking and praying, kid ur days is over
    the only thing clinging to hope will do for you now is get a restraining order
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  5. Caveat1

    Caveat1 New Member

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    Calefaction.. Servical.. that's a creative name that you thought up
    The question used to be "who's the Wash alias?".. now it's "how'd this alias get so Wash'd up?"
    When I saw his Superman logo, I just laughed at first
    Then realized his kryptonite must be anyone that posts an above average verse
    After seeing how he got here, how's THIS the cat you believe in?
    All he did was beat a couple wack jokes.. I guess after this battle, we're even
    It's Halloween so he thought shit was sweet.. that ploy ended badly
    I let him think he had this in the bag.. but that was after I poisoned his candy
    Tell the truth, you a bum.. I bet he'd suck cock for a quarter
    This fuckers more desperate for change than Obama supporters
    She aint loyal.. I can pull your bitch without tryin at all, geek
    That pussy gets publicly-traded so much, you can buy it on Wall Street
    Bitch got a canyon for a snatch.. the entire hood runs in that bed
    Shit.. odds makers in Vegas don't even know how to cover that spread
    While I'm out ballin, you gotta work for wack fees
    Our names reflect our roles in life.. you just Serv & Cav-eat
    Nobody knows you, another shut out since I'm battling this lame flop
    Your small time rep got my shit lookin like Flavor Flav's clock
    Closed your soundclick page soon as I heard this lame's verse
    The only booths you should be speaking in require inserting change first
    I've racked up 15 wins so far, but this is where the fun begins
    Cuz I'd GLADLY give up my 16 if you promise to never spit one again
    Gas is expensive.. so before I douse your house with it, I'll rob ya
    Then let you see the matches for free like an e-harmony trial offer
    My winning streak is 14, what the fuck could you tell the greatest?
    We both stayed grounded.. me? cuz I'm humble.. you? cuz your skills never elevated
    You a bitch.. so you don't even deserve a punch, you gettin smacked
    I'll just beat Serv with a backhand like this was a tennis match
    Went from Killa Blaze to Calefaction, now Servical.. just stop it bitch
    Next time you trying to think of an alias.. just do us all a favor & call it Quits
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  6. I'm Deon

    I'm Deon the guy who fucked ur mom

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    vote/cav

    from start to finish his verse just read smoother than serv's. both had some nice hits but i just feel like cav came with more firepower this week. his execution was unmatched really.

    It's Halloween so he thought shit was sweet.. that ploy ended badly
    I let him think he had this in the bag.. but that was after I poisoned his candy
    Bitch got a canyon for a snatch.. the entire hood runs in that bed
    Shit.. odds makers in Vegas don't even know how to cover that spread
    While I'm out ballin, you gotta work for wack fees
    Our names reflect our roles in life.. you just Serv & Cav-eat
    Nobody knows you, another shut out since I'm battling this lame flop
    Your small time rep got my shit lookin like Flavor Flav's clock
    I've racked up 15 wins so far, but this is where the fun begins
    Cuz I'd GLADLY give up my 16 if you promise to never spit one again
    Gas is expensive.. so before I douse your house with it, I'll rob ya
    Then let you see the matches for free like an e-harmony trial offer
    My winning streak is 14, what the fuck could you tell the greatest?
    We both stayed grounded.. me? cuz I'm humble.. you? cuz your skills never elevated
    Went from Killa Blaze to Calefaction, now Servical.. just stop it bitch
    Next time you trying to think of an alias.. just do us all a favor & call it Quits

    fierce verse, best i've read in a cpl weeks

    serv had some nice hits also though like

    you getting votes in the first place is something up for question
    all that terrible reign did was remind us of the 2001 elections
    you boring as fuck, hope you took advantage of that extension man
    cause your consistancy's drifting away, along with our attention span
    i'm guessing ur demik, then that would make this #3 of our fights
    so whats the point of getting personal, when i've already beaten you twice ?
    go'head, write like you know me, i bet you stopped and took a guess
    tryina 'cover all of the bases', but you still haven't gotten pussy yet
    see i look at the bigger picture, so i really don't give a fuck
    it doesn't matter if you are who i think you are, when i think you suck
    having a vet-like pedigree, so maybe ur coming from true stock
    i guess i'll just ask oneduh, since he got 'cav' covered like tube socks
    ur writing flaws outweight mine, n' steady comin up wacker on
    if my lines are stretched, yours is getting ready for a triathlon


    nice ass shots..but i think cav was more prepared and nasty with his approach to the majority of his concepts in comparison.

    once again

    v/cav
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  7. PERTAiN2LiFE

    PERTAiN2LiFE sheesh the rapper

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    you boring as fuck, hope you took advantage of that extension man
    cause your consistancy's drifting away, along with our attention span
    but ur dreamin too, even awake you got the gayest of fantasies
    cause your always away with the fairies, even when facing reality
    with that trademark style, the vets wouldn't be proud of you holmes
    you should leave their archives out of this and get a style of ur own
    see i look at the bigger picture, so i really don't give a fuck
    it doesn't matter if you are who i think you are, when i think you suck
    ur writing flaws outweight mine, n' steady comin up wacker on
    if my lines are stretched, yours is getting ready for a triathlon
    ain't droppin no mo, it's his last hurrah n' he up outta the throne
    think ur gonna come with the 'W', who the fuck is you, Oliver Stone ?
    so enough with the wishfull thinking and praying, kid ur days is over
    the only thing clinging to hope will do for you now is get a restraining order

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    When I saw his Superman logo, I just laughed at first
    Then realized his kryptonite must be anyone that posts an above average verse
    After seeing how he got here, how's THIS the cat you believe in?
    All he did was beat a couple wack jokes.. I guess after this battle, we're even
    It's Halloween so he thought shit was sweet.. that ploy ended badly
    I let him think he had this in the bag.. but that was after I poisoned his candy
    Closed your soundclick page soon as I heard this lame's verse
    The only booths you should be speaking in require inserting change first
    I've racked up 15 wins so far, but this is where the fun begins
    Cuz I'd GLADLY give up my 16 if you promise to never spit one again
    My winning streak is 14, what the fuck could you tell the greatest?
    We both stayed grounded.. me? cuz I'm humble.. you? cuz your skills never elevated
    Went from Killa Blaze to Calefaction, now Servical.. just stop it bitch
    Next time you trying to think of an alias.. just do us all a favor & call it Quits

    I hate calling a tie but this is dead even.

    Vote - Caveat1

    Serv came hard, definitely a well written verse. But...
    Cav answered, coming equally as brutal and out played Serv by a hair.

    Best battle I've read here thus far. Good shit.
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  8. Gundam

    Gundam that G..

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    Servical
    now i'm seen as calefaction, i guess thats something you prolly imagening
    kinda like writing a bunch'a personals against someone ur not even batteling
    - ok
    you getting votes in the first place is something up for question
    all that terrible reign did was remind us of the 2001 elections
    - lol iite
    you boring as fuck, hope you took advantage of that extension man
    cause your consistancy's drifting away, along with our attention span
    - decent
    but ur dreamin too, even awake you got the gayest of fantasies
    cause your always away with the fairies, even when facing reality
    - another decent line
    with that trademark style, the vets wouldn't be proud of you holmes
    you should leave their archives out of this and get a style of ur own
    - cool
    i'm guessing ur demik, then that would make this #3 of our fights
    so whats the point of getting personal, when i've already beaten you twice ?
    - good
    go'head, write like you know me, i bet you stopped and took a guess
    tryina 'cover all of the bases', but you still haven't gotten pussy yet
    - lol
    see i look at the bigger picture, so i really don't give a fuck
    it doesn't matter if you are who i think you are, when i think you suck
    - haha, nice swag to this
    having a vet-like pedigree, so maybe ur coming from true stock
    i guess i'll just ask oneduh, since he got 'cav' covered like tube socks
    - damn, nice
    n' having mod pull doesn't change the fact this clown is just wack
    ur verses are nothing, oneduh ain't had to edit them out to prove that
    - cool
    ur unintentional comedy so you dissing me is crazy irrelevent
    this battles all jokes, n' well, you take up like 80 percent of them
    - good
    ur writing flaws outweight mine, n' steady comin up wacker on
    if my lines are stretched, yours is getting ready for a triathlon
    - lol iite
    ain't droppin no mo, it's his last hurrah n' he up outta the throne
    think ur gonna come with the 'W', who the fuck is you, Oliver Stone ?
    - nice
    i'm feeling calm, but with that terrible style i see why you shook more
    ur wordp1ay so bad, it's bout to get banned like it dissed everything Q stood for
    - nice
    so enough with the wishfull thinking and praying, kid ur days is over
    the only thing clinging to hope will do for you now is get a restraining order
    - iite



    Caveat1
    Calefaction.. Servical.. that's a creative name that you thought up
    The question used to be "who's the Wash alias?".. now it's "how'd this alias get so Wash'd up?"
    - eh, a lil stretched but not bad
    When I saw his Superman logo, I just laughed at first
    Then realized his kryptonite must be anyone that posts an above average verse
    - good
    After seeing how he got here, how's THIS the cat you believe in?
    All he did was beat a couple wack jokes.. I guess after this battle, we're even
    - good
    It's Halloween so he thought shit was sweet.. that ploy ended badly
    I let him think he had this in the bag.. but that was after I poisoned his candy
    - ohh, nice stinger
    Tell the truth, you a bum.. I bet he'd suck cock for a quarter
    This fuckers more desperate for change than Obama supporters
    - iite
    She aint loyal.. I can pull your bitch without tryin at all, geek
    That pussy gets publicly-traded so much, you can buy it on Wall Street
    - lol funny
    Bitch got a canyon for a snatch.. the entire hood runs in that bed
    Shit.. odds makers in Vegas don't even know how to cover that spread
    - eh, lil played
    While I'm out ballin, you gotta work for wack fees
    Our names reflect our roles in life.. you just Serv & Cav-eat
    - effective nameplay
    Nobody knows you, another shut out since I'm battling this lame flop
    Your small time rep got my shit lookin like Flavor Flav's clock
    - iite
    Closed your soundclick page soon as I heard this lame's verse
    The only booths you should be speaking in require inserting change first
    - eh
    I've racked up 15 wins so far, but this is where the fun begins
    Cuz I'd GLADLY give up my 16 if you promise to never spit one again
    - nice
    Gas is expensive.. so before I douse your house with it, I'll rob ya
    Then let you see the matches for free like an e-harmony trial offer
    - good
    My winning streak is 14, what the fuck could you tell the greatest?
    We both stayed grounded.. me? cuz I'm humble.. you? cuz your skills never elevated
    - good one
    You a bitch.. so you don't even deserve a punch, you gettin smacked
    I'll just beat Serv with a backhand like this was a tennis match
    - lil played
    Went from Killa Blaze to Calefaction, now Servical.. just stop it bitch
    Next time you trying to think of an alias.. just do us all a favor & call it Quits
    - i get it, but still coulda closed better


    damn, this was a real dope battle and pretty close too. both brought some heat and made it a worth reading champ match lol. i got serv taking it, just a tad bit more consistant and clever, cav came nice too no doubt but didn't come as fresh as he did previous weeks, plus i enjoyed servicals verse from top to bottom so i go with him.

    VOTE - SERVICAL


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  9. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    SERVICAL

    now i'm seen as calefaction, i guess thats something you prolly imagening
    kinda like writing a bunch'a personals against someone ur not even batteling
    ^this works well if you're really not cale. i think it would've worked even better and solidifed your win had you provided us with more evidence or clues as to who you really are. still, it works seeing as how your identity has never been confirmed, only speculated, and cav did base a few punches off the assumption of you being calefaction.

    you getting votes in the first place is something up for question
    all that terrible reign did was remind us of the 2001 elections
    ^i can't relate. must be international. US didn't have a major election in 2001.

    you boring as fuck, hope you took advantage of that extension man
    cause your consistancy's drifting away, along with our attention span
    ^nice. direct, swaggerific type shit.

    but ur dreamin too, even awake you got the gayest of fantasies
    cause your always away with the fairies, even when facing reality
    ^lol, i can't dig it.

    with that trademark style, the vets wouldn't be proud of you holmes
    you should leave their archives out of this and get a style of ur own
    ^nice again, on some direct, swaggerific type shit.

    i'm guessing ur demik, then that would make this #3 of our fights
    so whats the point of getting personal, when i've already beaten you twice ?
    ^nice, if indeed he is demik. also gives a clue as to who you are, but i have no idea about the history of demik and don't know much about cale other than he's dope, his name is tom, and he's my nigga. i also don't care to investigate. but if we are to appreciate cav's unsolidified claims at you being cale, then we must appreciate this as well and it was well-played imo.

    go'head, write like you know me, i bet you stopped and took a guess
    tryina 'cover all of the bases', but you still haven't gotten pussy yet
    ^nice diss, also set-up was effective again at predicting his approach and further discrediting it.

    see i look at the bigger picture, so i really don't give a fuck
    it doesn't matter if you are who i think you are, when i think you suck
    ^lol, this was dope. simple, effective and yet creative at the same time.

    having a vet-like pedigree, so maybe ur coming from true stock
    i guess i'll just ask oneduh, since he got 'cav' covered like tube socks
    ^lol, dope again, and a good personal. true as well, one is always online and whatnot when cav's name arises. neither are online much. he also looks out heavily for cav. i still think they're one in the same or at least aim buddies to the death. its a much closer fit in style than demik too. either way, there is truth behind this and the wordplay was better than most other CAV lines. you also pronounced it correctly.

    n' having mod pull doesn't change the fact this clown is just wack
    ur verses are nothing, oneduh ain't had to edit them out to prove that
    ^nice.

    ur unintentional comedy so you dissing me is crazy irrelevent
    this battles all jokes, n' well, you take up like 80 percent of them
    ^decent.

    ur writing flaws outweight mine, n' steady comin up wacker on
    if my lines are stretched, yours is getting ready for a triathlon
    ^the whole "wacker on" was somewhat forced. punch was nice though and also an effective personal. cav is somewhat inconsistent in style throughout one verse, but a lot is usually stretched (though the punch usually still connects), so this worked for me.

    ain't droppin no mo, it's his last hurrah n' he up outta the throne
    think ur gonna come with the 'W', who the fuck is you, Oliver Stone ?
    ^nice.

    i'm feeling calm, but with that terrible style i see why you shook more
    ur wordp1ay so bad, it's bout to get banned like it dissed everything Q stood for
    ^dope.

    so enough with the wishfull thinking and praying, kid ur days is over
    the only thing clinging to hope will do for you now is get a restraining order
    ^decent.
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  10. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    CAVEAT1

    Calefaction.. Servical.. that's a creative name that you thought up
    The question used to be "who's the Wash alias?".. now it's "how'd this alias get so Wash'd up?"
    ^nice, though it gives fuel to serv's stretched reference. also to the fact that you'd assume he was cale. still, the actual punch was well done.

    When I saw his Superman logo, I just laughed at first
    Then realized his kryptonite must be anyone that posts an above average verse
    ^nice.

    After seeing how he got here, how's THIS the cat you believe in?
    All he did was beat a couple wack jokes.. I guess after this battle, we're even
    ^nice, seemed more like a punch cale would've dropped back in the day. ironic. still nice.

    It's Halloween so he thought shit was sweet.. that ploy ended badly
    I let him think he had this in the bag.. but that was after I poisoned his candy
    ^stretched again, but punch was current and nicely done.

    Tell the truth, you a bum.. I bet he'd suck cock for a quarter
    This fuckers more desperate for change than Obama supporters
    ^obama/election/palin/mccain/biden lines are all played out already. this worked well, but i'm pretty sure i've seen some variation of it recently. bad choice of concept from a veteran standpoint.

    She aint loyal.. I can pull your bitch without tryin at all, geek
    That pussy gets publicly-traded so much, you can buy it on Wall Street
    ^i didn't dig it. i always say that i don't favor the fictitious girl lines, but this also wasn't too creative. seemed like some nice newbie wordplay to me.

    Bitch got a canyon for a snatch.. the entire hood runs in that bed
    Shit.. odds makers in Vegas don't even know how to cover that spread
    ^wordplay here was better than the last bar, but you're spending too much time on a fictitious girl. only way this would be worth the effort were if we knew of his girlfriend or if there was a picture of the two in the match. here, its just laying claims to nothing and its reverts the focus from the person you're actually battling. almost like cop out lines. i'd say stick to the script and diss serv, not people we don't even know of.

    While I'm out ballin, you gotta work for wack fees
    Our names reflect our roles in life.. you just Serv & Cav-eat
    ^eh, too mean CAV EAT lines. i've noticed you drop a played CAV line in your verse each week. seems you of all people should know not to use them. you've done a few cleveland lines and now this. i also don't like it because its not even how you pronounce your name, and again, i'd expect you to know that being that its your name. maybe you made it though with the mindset that you were really saying CAV EAT ONE. if so, it's bad wordplay on your part for even picking the name. CAV-EEE-OT is how i naturally pronounce it. and i know, i dropped a CAV-EAT line against you too, because it was popular. but i knew it was dumb and that was damn near 10 weeks ago and each week there's been a new CAV EAT line. if this were one of the first times i'd seen it though, then it'd be nice because it fits the bill better than more than half of the other lines.

    Nobody knows you, another shut out since I'm battling this lame flop
    Your small time rep got my shit lookin like Flavor Flav's clock
    ^pretty good. "lame flop" felt forced. still, this has comedic value.

    Closed your soundclick page soon as I heard this lame's verse
    The only booths you should be speaking in require inserting change first
    ^eh, decent. what types of booths are there to speak in that require change first though? like, i almost feel dumb if there are many. i can tie the reference together with the booth and inserting change, but the way its worded seems as though there are quarter-machine booths to actually speak in... lol, okay, i'm officially an idiot. TELEPHONE BOOTHS. of course, well in that case, this was pretty good. still not a game-changer though.

    I've racked up 15 wins so far, but this is where the fun begins
    Cuz I'd GLADLY give up my 16 if you promise to never spit one again
    ^i get it, but i don't. i think the execution is misleading. either that or the wordplay is just bad. are you saying he should never spit one win again?... because that's how it reads. if it were 16 lines then i could see the connection. if you mean something else, then i feel dumb again for not getting it.

    Gas is expensive.. so before I douse your house with it, I'll rob ya
    Then let you see the matches for free like an e-harmony trial offer
    ^eh, this was good but it wasn't. not worthy of this match. just a blank statement of an act of violence. nice wordplay though.

    My winning streak is 14, what the fuck could you tell the greatest?
    We both stayed grounded.. me? cuz I'm humble.. you? cuz your skills never elevated
    ^nice.

    You a bitch.. so you don't even deserve a punch, you gettin smacked
    I'll just beat Serv with a backhand like this was a tennis match
    ^very simple. decent flip on the serv though.

    Went from Killa Blaze to Calefaction, now Servical.. just stop it bitch
    Next time you trying to think of an alias.. just do us all a favor & call it Quits
    ^nice, again, assuming he is calefaction. the punch itself is simple and to the point. almost funny too.
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  11. Quriosity

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    overall, i think serv took this rather handily. i don't think he's getting the credit he deserves here. i think cav had a lot of material that i had heard before and a few lines i didn't feel like were worth hearing. serv also had dry spots but he attacked better and countered often. he had some witty stuff too and i think his style/approach was more effective. good clear disses, a good mixture of personals, and effective wording/execution and whatnot throughout the entire verse. cav had some standout raw disses but a lot of stuff i couldn't even believe he'd use. a few lines were just simple similes that may have been good ideas or even decent punches but not up to his standards and didn't hit serv effectively. stuff that would've shut out some other characters in the league, but weren't really strong disses. i also think serv was more consistent. his entire verse was nearly consistently above average whereas i think cav had more failures throughout, or more patches of failure. he was consistently average i'd say with lines like his closer or other stuff like the gas line and flava flav. nice hits that don't really win matches. all in all, i think it was a great bout and a close match, but serv took this for me.

    VOTE - SERVICAL
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  12. D.LOKE

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    this was the best champ match in a while. Cav you should Give Serv some props for a good battle cause this guy hit you with some shit man. I feel like he was your tuffest challenge yet.You came with some really good punches tho like the halloween candy thing which I almost use a concept like that, good current event punch, and the telephone booth and closer were also standouts.

    Servical you came tight too man, the attention span, beat you twice and the tube socks thing were your standout lines. I like your style man cause your shit even when I read you against MuFF have an ouch factor to it. I love the personals approach so keep doin what you doing



    you boring as fuck, hope you took advantage of that extension man
    cause your consistancy's drifting away, along with our attention span
    with that trademark style, the vets wouldn't be proud of you holmes
    you should leave their archives out of this and get a style of ur own
    i'm guessing ur demik, then that would make this #3 of our fights
    so whats the point of getting personal, when i've already beaten you twice ?
    ^ ^WOW THAT'S A KICK TO HIS NUTS lol
    see i look at the bigger picture, so i really don't give a fuck
    it doesn't matter if you are who i think you are, when i think you suck
    having a vet-like pedigree, so maybe ur coming from true stock
    i guess i'll just ask oneduh, since he got 'cav' covered like tube socks
    ur writing flaws outweight mine, n' steady comin up wacker on
    if my lines are stretched, yours is getting ready for a triathlon


    VS


    Calefaction.. Servical.. that's a creative name that you thought up
    The question used to be "who's the Wash alias?".. now it's "how'd this alias get so Wash'd up?"
    After seeing how he got here, how's THIS the cat you believe in?
    All he did was beat a couple wack jokes.. I guess after this battle, we're even
    It's Halloween so he thought shit was sweet.. that ploy ended badly
    I let him think he had this in the bag.. but that was after I poisoned his candy
    Closed your soundclick page soon as I heard this lame's verse
    The only booths you should be speaking in require inserting change first
    I've racked up 15 wins so far, but this is where the fun begins
    Cuz I'd GLADLY give up my 16 if you promise to never spit one again
    Went from Killa Blaze to Calefaction, now Servical.. just stop it bitch
    Next time you trying to think of an alias.. just do us all a favor & call it Quits






    After reading this battle like 4 or 5 times


    VOTE: SERVICAL (by a very narrow margin)
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  13. Ren.

    Ren. elite.

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    It's Halloween so he thought shit was sweet.. that ploy ended badly
    I let him think he had this in the bag.. but that was after I poisoned his candy
    haha
    Bitch got a canyon for a snatch.. the entire hood runs in that bed
    Shit.. odds makers in Vegas don't even know how to cover that spread
    While I'm out ballin, you gotta work for wack fees
    Our names reflect our roles in life.. you just Serv & Cav-eat
    Nobody knows you, another shut out since I'm battling this lame flop
    Your small time rep got my shit lookin like Flavor Flav's clock
    I've racked up 15 wins so far, but this is where the fun begins
    Cuz I'd GLADLY give up my 16 if you promise to never spit one again
    Gas is expensive.. so before I douse your house with it, I'll rob ya
    Then let you see the matches for free like an e-harmony trial offer
    lol coo
    My winning streak is 14, what the fuck could you tell the greatest?
    We both stayed grounded.. me? cuz I'm humble.. you? cuz your skills never elevated
    Went from Killa Blaze to Calefaction, now Servical.. just stop it bitch
    Next time you trying to think of an alias.. just do us all a favor & call it Quits
    didn't like your closer that much.

    alot of nice lines in here, set up well and executed nicely.



    you getting votes in the first place is something up for question
    all that terrible reign did was remind us of the 2001 elections
    you boring as fuck, hope you took advantage of that extension man
    cause your consistancy's drifting away, along with our attention span
    i'm guessing ur demik, then that would make this #3 of our fights
    so whats the point of getting personal, when i've already beaten you twice ?
    ^woulda been good if you weren' the only one thats claimed he's demik or had proof.. I've seen a few amount of people say serv was cale so thats not really cav coming up with his own opinion of who you are.. so this was a missed personal imo.
    go'head, write like you know me, i bet you stopped and took a guess
    tryina 'cover all of the bases', but you still haven't gotten pussy yet
    see i look at the bigger picture, so i really don't give a fuck
    it doesn't matter if you are who i think you are, when i think you suck.
    seen something real similiar few weeks ago.
    having a vet-like pedigree, so maybe ur coming from true stock
    i guess i'll just ask oneduh, since he got 'cav' covered like tube socks
    fresh nameplay
    ur writing flaws outweight mine, n' steady comin up wacker on
    if my lines are stretched, yours is getting ready for a triathlon
    this was coo



    this was one of the best champ match reads in awhile, both had some haymakers in there I just think cav had the more polished verse, more creative by a little bit.

    v/cav
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  14. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    vote= Cav


    now i'm seen as calefaction, i guess thats something you prolly imagening
    kinda like writing a bunch'a personals against someone ur not even batteling
    iight
    you getting votes in the first place is something up for question
    all that terrible reign did was remind us of the 2001 elections
    good
    you boring as fuck, hope you took advantage of that extension man
    cause your consistancy's drifting away, along with our attention span
    nice
    but ur dreamin too, even awake you got the gayest of fantasies
    cause your always away with the fairies, even when facing reality
    ok
    with that trademark style, the vets wouldn't be proud of you holmes
    you should leave their archives out of this and get a style of ur own
    good
    i'm guessing ur demik, then that would make this #3 of our fights
    so whats the point of getting personal, when i've already beaten you twice ?
    sallright except hes not demik
    go'head, write like you know me, i bet you stopped and took a guess
    tryina 'cover all of the bases', but you still haven't gotten pussy yet
    good
    see i look at the bigger picture, so i really don't give a fuck
    it doesn't matter if you are who i think you are, when i think you suck
    good
    having a vet-like pedigree, so maybe ur coming from true stock
    i guess i'll just ask oneduh, since he got 'cav' covered like tube socks
    nice
    n' having mod pull doesn't change the fact this clown is just wack
    ur verses are nothing, oneduh ain't had to edit them out to prove that
    coo
    ur unintentional comedy so you dissing me is crazy irrelevent
    this battles all jokes, n' well, you take up like 80 percent of them
    iight
    ur writing flaws outweight mine, n' steady comin up wacker on
    if my lines are stretched, yours is getting ready for a triathlon
    good liked this one
    ain't droppin no mo, it's his last hurrah n' he up outta the throne
    think ur gonna come with the 'W', who the fuck is you, Oliver Stone ?
    nother nice one
    i'm feeling calm, but with that terrible style i see why you shook more
    ur wordp1ay so bad, it's bout to get banned like it dissed everything Q stood for
    funny fuckin line here nice
    so enough with the wishfull thinking and praying, kid ur days is over
    the only thing clinging to hope will do for you now is get a restraining order
    iight





    Calefaction.. Servical.. that's a creative name that you thought up
    The question used to be "who's the Wash alias?".. now it's "how'd this alias get so Wash'd up?"
    nice
    When I saw his Superman logo, I just laughed at first
    Then realized his kryptonite must be anyone that posts an above average verse
    nice
    After seeing how he got here, how's THIS the cat you believe in?
    All he did was beat a couple wack jokes.. I guess after this battle, we're even
    nice
    It's Halloween so he thought shit was sweet.. that ploy ended badly
    I let him think he had this in the bag.. but that was after I poisoned his candy
    nice
    Tell the truth, you a bum.. I bet he'd suck cock for a quarter
    This fuckers more desperate for change than Obama supporters
    iight
    She aint loyal.. I can pull your bitch without tryin at all, geek
    That pussy gets publicly-traded so much, you can buy it on Wall Street
    coo
    Bitch got a canyon for a snatch.. the entire hood runs in that bed
    Shit.. odds makers in Vegas don't even know how to cover that spread
    coo
    While I'm out ballin, you gotta work for wack fees
    Our names reflect our roles in life.. you just Serv & Cav-eat
    nice
    Nobody knows you, another shut out since I'm battling this lame flop
    Your small time rep got my shit lookin like Flavor Flav's clock
    coo
    Closed your soundclick page soon as I heard this lame's verse
    The only booths you should be speaking in require inserting change first
    nice
    I've racked up 15 wins so far, but this is where the fun begins
    Cuz I'd GLADLY give up my 16 if you promise to never spit one again
    nice
    Gas is expensive.. so before I douse your house with it, I'll rob ya
    Then let you see the matches for free like an e-harmony trial offer
    coo
    My winning streak is 14, what the fuck could you tell the greatest?
    We both stayed grounded.. me? cuz I'm humble.. you? cuz your skills never elevated
    nice
    You a bitch.. so you don't even deserve a punch, you gettin smacked
    I'll just beat Serv with a backhand like this was a tennis match
    coo
    Went from Killa Blaze to Calefaction, now Servical.. just stop it bitch
    Next time you trying to think of an alias.. just do us all a favor & call it Quits
    nice closer

    Giving this one to Cav, I thought he was more solid in his approach, better personals
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  15. Area51.

    Area51. New Member

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    you boring as fuck, hope you took advantage of that extension man
    cause your consistancy's drifting away, along with our attention span
    go'head, write like you know me, i bet you stopped and took a guess
    tryina 'cover all of the bases', but you still haven't gotten pussy yet
    see i look at the bigger picture, so i really don't give a fuck
    it doesn't matter if you are who i think you are, when i think you suck
    n' having mod pull doesn't change the fact this clown is just wack
    ur verses are nothing, oneduh ain't had to edit them out to prove that
    i'm feeling calm, but with that terrible style i see why you shook more
    ur wordp1ay so bad, it's bout to get banned like it dissed everything Q stood for
    so enough with the wishfull thinking and praying, kid ur days is over
    the only thing clinging to hope will do for you now is get a restraining order


    vs

    When I saw his Superman logo, I just laughed at first
    Then realized his kryptonite must be anyone that posts an above average verse
    After seeing how he got here, how's THIS the cat you believe in?
    All he did was beat a couple wack jokes.. I guess after this battle, we're even
    It's Halloween so he thought shit was sweet.. that ploy ended badly
    I let him think he had this in the bag.. but that was after I poisoned his candy
    She aint loyal.. I can pull your bitch without tryin at all, geek
    That pussy gets publicly-traded so much, you can buy it on Wall Street
    I've racked up 15 wins so far, but this is where the fun begins
    Cuz I'd GLADLY give up my 16 if you promise to never spit one again
    You a bitch.. so you don't even deserve a punch, you gettin smacked
    I'll just beat Serv with a backhand like this was a tennis match
    Went from Killa Blaze to Calefaction, now Servical.. just stop it bitch
    Next time you trying to think of an alias.. just do us all a favor & call it Quits

    both verses were good but i thought cav's was a step above, the way he worded his lines just hit way harder IMO. both were about as consistant as eachother but i felt cavs quotes more. nice match

    v/ Cav
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  16. -Sephiroth-

    -Sephiroth- Geostigmatic

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    good match, nice showing from both, i pretty much agree with q, serv predicted and negated almost all of cav's personals, had some swag in almost every line too. cav was choppy at times, the creativity was somewhat on and off at times, plus last week i had a obama/change line as well lol

    ^ me last week, yours was better though lol, but still it kinda took away from the freshness factor plus some other stuff seemed familar was well, not bad though still a decent drop. overall i was feeling serv's delivery and concepts more, but it bascially depended on what cav was going to bring to the table and he just didn't like i thought he could to win so Vote - Serv
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  17. Windsprizzle

    Windsprizzle Sickness

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    serv - a very nice showing here...the lines were really thought out and it seemed like you thru your best punch at the champ here...some of the lines seemed extranneous but in all, it seemed like you had a really good run and a chance at beating him...

    cav - just as i thought someone might beat you...you pull this verse out...very nicely done...the flow was better...the content was stronger...the feel was more of a championship verse than servs...nice job sir...

    vote - cav
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  18. Tristan.

    Tristan. took your girl.

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    serv
    that middle section towards the end was solid as fuck. seemed personal, lotta original stuff too that attacked from all angles.


    cav
    verse was tough minus some generic disses. it was straight but didn't really go as hard as servs verse. you had some nice lines sprinkled in there, just wasn't as consistant as your opponent.

    vote-servical
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  19. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    6-5 in votes thus far.
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  20. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    now i'm seen as calefaction, i guess thats something you prolly imagening
    kinda like writing a bunch'a personals against someone ur not even batteling
    (ok)
    you getting votes in the first place is something up for question
    all that terrible reign did was remind us of the 2001 elections
    (ehh ok)
    you boring as fuck, hope you took advantage of that extension man
    cause your consistancy's drifting away, along with our attention span
    (ehh ok)
    but ur dreamin too, even awake you got the gayest of fantasies
    cause your always away with the fairies, even when facing reality
    (heh)
    with that trademark style, the vets wouldn't be proud of you holmes
    you should leave their archives out of this and get a style of ur own
    (hah)
    i'm guessing ur demik, then that would make this #3 of our fights
    so whats the point of getting personal, when i've already beaten you twice ?
    (ok)
    go'head, write like you know me, i bet you stopped and took a guess
    tryina 'cover all of the bases', but you still haven't gotten pussy yet
    (na)
    see i look at the bigger picture, so i really don't give a fuck
    it doesn't matter if you are who i think you are, when i think you suck
    (LOL)
    having a vet-like pedigree, so maybe ur coming from true stock
    i guess i'll just ask oneduh, since he got 'cav' covered like tube socks
    (seen)
    n' having mod pull doesn't change the fact this clown is just wack
    ur verses are nothing, oneduh ain't had to edit them out to prove that
    (ok)
    ur unintentional comedy so you dissing me is crazy irrelevent
    this battles all jokes, n' well, you take up like 80 percent of them
    (seen similar concept_
    ur writing flaws outweight mine, n' steady comin up wacker on
    if my lines are stretched, yours is getting ready for a triathlon
    (rofl fresh flip)
    ain't droppin no mo, it's his last hurrah n' he up outta the throne
    think ur gonna come with the 'W', who the fuck is you, Oliver Stone ?
    (LOl dope)
    i'm feeling calm, but with that terrible style i see why you shook more
    ur wordp1ay so bad, it's bout to get banned like it dissed everything Q stood for
    (ehh)
    so enough with the wishfull thinking and praying, kid ur days is over
    the only thing clinging to hope will do for you now is get a restraining order
    (ok)

    lol some good shit in there..had alot of just ok lines tho


    Calefaction.. Servical.. that's a creative name that you thought up
    The question used to be "who's the Wash alias?".. now it's "how'd this alias get so Wash'd up?"
    (ok)
    When I saw his Superman logo, I just laughed at first
    Then realized his kryptonite must be anyone that posts an above average verse
    (Oh shit lol)
    After seeing how he got here, how's THIS the cat you believe in?
    All he did was beat a couple wack jokes.. I guess after this battle, we're even
    (ok)
    It's Halloween so he thought shit was sweet.. that ploy ended badly
    I let him think he had this in the bag.. but that was after I poisoned his candy
    (kinda lame)
    Tell the truth, you a bum.. I bet he'd suck cock for a quarter
    This fuckers more desperate for change than Obama supporters
    (wow played)
    She aint loyal.. I can pull your bitch without tryin at all, geek
    That pussy gets publicly-traded so much, you can buy it on Wall Street
    (ok)
    Bitch got a canyon for a snatch.. the entire hood runs in that bed
    Shit.. odds makers in Vegas don't even know how to cover that spread
    (hahah)
    While I'm out ballin, you gotta work for wack fees
    Our names reflect our roles in life.. you just Serv & Cav-eat
    (LOL)
    Nobody knows you, another shut out since I'm battling this lame flop
    Your small time rep got my shit lookin like Flavor Flav's clock
    (haha)
    Closed your soundclick page soon as I heard this lame's verse
    The only booths you should be speaking in require inserting change first
    (haha)
    I've racked up 15 wins so far, but this is where the fun begins
    Cuz I'd GLADLY give up my 16 if you promise to never spit one again
    (hah)
    Gas is expensive.. so before I douse your house with it, I'll rob ya
    Then let you see the matches for free like an e-harmony trial offer
    (niiiice)
    My winning streak is 14, what the fuck could you tell the greatest?
    We both stayed grounded.. me? cuz I'm humble.. you? cuz your skills never elevated
    (ooo shit)
    You a bitch.. so you don't even deserve a punch, you gettin smacked
    I'll just beat Serv with a backhand like this was a tennis match
    (nah)
    Went from Killa Blaze to Calefaction, now Servical.. just stop it bitch
    Next time you trying to think of an alias.. just do us all a favor & call it Quits
    (hah coo close)


    i got cav here..at first he was kinda slippin but towards the end he was hella consistant

    v/cav
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