Wk 2 RaZpUTIN 1-0 vs SonnyDaze 1-0

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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    [01] - The deadline for verses is Friday @ 11:59pm PST.
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    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
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  2. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    16 sounds good.

    Let's kill it.
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  3. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    check that

    I'll be here around Thursday
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  4. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    I'm 'gun take what's in my gun safe...then put an end to Sun Daze like 12:00 am Monday
    Shells hittin pavement like Raphael breakin', make this Sun Dance after bandanas covers up face
    I'm the modern day Butch Cassidy, take my WORD for it ,I got GUN PLAY
    I call my gats potassium, these clips are bananas so believe that I got more than one K
    You had a two month run...beating a bunch of nobodys and created somewhat of following
    But really only left one long, lasting impression......you were only nice periodically
    I got more bars if you wanna show up
    If brown Jesus let's this verse be a no show verse then that's cool too
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  5. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    Ay Brown Jesus, did you forget to tell this faggot that I don’t go first?
    Save yourself the shame Raz and keep the no-show verse.
    Your life’s a bitch, and only lames pursue her
    You spit game but you don’t who you talkin’ to- I’m Lennay Kekua
    I’ll get Raz-buried like a bitch blew on my skin
    Then put two on her chin, and let you watch the encore when I do it again.
    What Daze lines you gon’ tell again, in 99 you were relevant
    This dude lost his buzz like New Orleans, and went from a Hornet to a Pelican
    Text battlin’ for a decade, blame it on your bomb placement
    You never blew up because your rap career never left your mom’s basement
    You’re a has-been, you’ve wasted 13 years here if that shit isn’t clear
    Razputin was a healer, but you’ve failed in trying to fix your career
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  6. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    Here's my breakdown:

    1. RaZpUTIN - 1 point(s)

    Good bars: + 3

    - then put an end to Sun Daze like 12:00 am Monday
    - You had a two month run...beating a bunch of nobodys and created somewhat of following
    - But really only left one long, lasting impression......you were only nice periodically

    Wack bars: - 2

    - I call my gats potassium, these clips are bananas so believe that I got more than one K: If the bolded wasn't there this would've been a good bar
    - I'm 'gun take what's in my gun safe: too basic of a line for a battle IMO (I know, we all have them from time to time)

    2. SonnyDaze - 1 point(s).

    Good bars: + 4 (due to only half of two particular bars mentioned below being to my liking)

    - What Daze lines you gon’ tell again, in 99 you were relevant: The bolded portion is part I liked
    - This dude lost his buzz like New Orleans, and went from a Hornet to a Pelican
    - Text battlin’ for a decade, blame it on your bomb placement
    - You never blew up because your rap career never left your mom’s basement
    - You’re a has-been, you’ve wasted 13 years here if that shit isn’t clear
    - Razputin was a healer, but you’ve failed in trying to fix your career: I like the play on the opponent's name here

    Wack bars: - 3

    - Save yourself the shame Raz and keep the no-show verse.
    - Your life’s a bitch, and only lames pursue her
    - Then put two on her chin, and let you watch the encore when I do it again. (this bar didn't fit based on the bar just before it therefore it really didn't make sense)

    Vote: SonnyDaze

    - He had more bars and substance directed at his opponent
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  7. GWHype

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    RaZpUTIN:

    "put an end to sonny daze like 12am monday"

    "you only left one long, lasting impression...you were only nice periodically"



    Sonny Daze:

    "Save yourself the shame Raz and keep the no-show verse"

    "in 99 you were relevant"

    "lost his buzz like new orleans, went from a hornet to a pelican"

    "he never blew cuz his rap career never left his moms basement"





    overall, i thought SonnyDaze had better punchlines and a better flow....a lot of Raz's lines would have been better if they actually rhymed, it took away from the overall flow by not having more words rhyming together....

    Vote - SonnyDaze
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  8. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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