Wk 2 HNIC 1-0 vs Gr8 Whyte Hype 1-0

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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Friday @ 11:59pm PST.
    [02] - There are absolutely NO extensions under any circumstances. For this reason, It is unnecessary to request extensions. I apologize in advance.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am PST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match. If there are less than 5 battles available to vote on, you must vote on all available battles.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly. Failure to post your links will result in a DQ. It is not our responsibility to make sure you voted.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY. Specifically, vote under the name that you signed in under, please.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​
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  2. H N I C

    H N I C Member

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    Checking in.

    12 lines seems reasonable enough.
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  3. GWHype

    GWHype New Member

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    this isn't no ski-mask, i'ma actually show my face
    show my power n devour any flows you make
    as i expose this fake, H.N.I.C. fuck outta here thats Prodigy
    your screen-name should be Faggot, cuz honesty's the best policy
    checked u last week, couldn't even read that wack ass shit
    u just that weak, call u Kriss Kross, cuz u swallow when u try n spit
    league championship, i'm eyeing it, feed off my verse theres cyanide in it
    battlin me? that's how emcees commit suicide, simply get brutalized
    12 lines? i'm not even followin ur guidelines....i'm givin u 4 days to survive mine




    get it.
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  4. H N I C

    H N I C Member

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    Is this it? Where are the true emcees? I want a real fight.
    This nigga Jaws will be jaw'd since he calls himself Great White.

    You've been on this site for almost ten years and got no rep for what you type?
    Got dayum, I guess I wasn't the only one who didn't buy into the Hype.

    Try to act tough I'll go Mike Tyson on you lil partna
    You're all talk, you wouldn't even swing if you were dancin with Sinatra.

    I'll shut your whole block down with shots larger than raspberries.
    When the bullets blow by your corners you'd think I called a Hail Mary.

    Now that you know the price of fuckin with me - I'm gonna just kill you with keys.

    watch where you Enter, with just a Shift of my Caps I can Control your fate.
    perpetrate, and I'll Delete you on site to give me BackSpace.

    but you can bring bitches over, i wouldn't mind having fun - but dis nigga only know ugly chicks so I'd never F1.

    #Dafukwrongwitdisnigga
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  5. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    Here's my breakdown:

    1. Gr8 Whyte Hype - 0 points

    Good bars: +2

    - as i expose this fake, H.N.I.C. fuck outta here thats Prodigy
    - 12 lines? i'm not even followin ur guidelines....i'm givin u 4 days to survive mine

    Wack bars: -2

    - your screen-name should be Faggot, cuz honesty's the best policy
    - u just that weak, call u Kriss Kross, cuz u swallow when u try n spit


    2. H N I C - 0 points.

    Good bars: +3

    - You've been on this site for almost ten years and got no rep for what you type?
    - Got dayum, I guess I wasn't the only one who didn't buy into the Hype.
    - watch where you Enter, with just a Shift of my Caps I can Control your fate.

    Wack bars: -3

    - This nigga Jaws will be jaw'd since he calls himself Great White.
    - perpetrate, and I'll Delete you on site to give me BackSpace.
    - but you can bring bitches over, i wouldn't mind having fun - but dis nigga only know ugly chicks so I'd never F1.

    I vote H N I C
    - he one more good bar than Gr8 Whyte Hype in an otherwise fairly even battle IMO
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  6. GWHype

    GWHype New Member

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    lets get some more votes

    1-0 HNIC leads
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  7. 2triple0

    2triple0 New Member

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    vote hnic better set ups better harder hitting punches other dude was alright but at times u could tell he was lacking
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  8. GWHype

    GWHype New Member

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    voted on Burd vs. 4rro9ant



    2-0, we need some more votes.
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  9. GWHype

    GWHype New Member

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    voted on SonnyDaze vs. Raz
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  10. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    GWH... You came direct and took some good angles but your punches lacked creativity- your first few set-ups actually hit harder than your punches imo. Your last line would've been decent but the way you changed your rhyming the line before kinda threw everything off.

    HNIC... Well-rounded verse. Saw a lot of my own style incorporated in your verse with the wordplay and punches then switching it up in the end with some creative shit. The Hail Mary punch was probably my favorite. Keep it up.

    This battle wasn't close at all, but I saw potential even from the losing side.

    Vote: HNIC
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  11. GWHype

    GWHype New Member

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    thanks for the feedback SonnyDaze, 3-0, HNIC wins.
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  12. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    HNIC wins; DQ'ed for no links
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