Wk 2 Burd. vs 4rro9ant

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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Friday @ 11:59pm PST.
    [02] - There are absolutely NO extensions under any circumstances. For this reason, It is unnecessary to request extensions. I apologize in advance.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am PST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match. If there are less than 5 battles available to vote on, you must vote on all available battles.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly. Failure to post your links will result in a DQ. It is not our responsibility to make sure you voted.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY. Specifically, vote under the name that you signed in under, please.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​
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  2. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    Based on what I have seen, I think it's best we stick to 16's!!! Burd if you want to set it off 1st, be my guest!!! I'm loading my ammo!!!
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  3. Burd.

    Burd. #1

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    gl, i'll match u
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  4. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    you'll match me, as in you want me to drop 1st, right???
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  5. Burd.

    Burd. #1

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  6. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    So now that I know you aren't an adult...here:

    Your girl??? I do suppose I'll her curl her toes, make her wear Jheri curls
    Make her rock some sexy clothes, Burd, you know you paid for those
    Bet she'll roll quicker than I could pack that pack in a bowl
    Bet she can suck a mothball through a straw-sized hole

    Imagine Raiden when I'm invading, think Cam Newton, endzone
    When I strike a Superman pose, my tip tickles the tip of her nose
    Look who entered the porno, hell-bent on damage control
    My meat cleaver says this bird ain't directing this feature, that's a no

    Steven Spielburd is a turd, but he's the only one who don't know
    He's also infactuated with that finger glow and U.F.O.'s
    Burd's stuff look like rough-draft writtens, something's clearly missing
    Either there were none to begin with or you invisible-inked them

    Don't make me place you in a vegative state, proceed to place you within a crate
    Shipped off to Latveria, you awake to Dr. Doom face-to-face
    That's the only justafiable reason for a no-show
    I'm about stacks 2 be frank because my rap's no joke
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  7. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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  8. Burd.

    Burd. #1

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    Gotta ace aim, straight flames. he's way worse w/ a lame verse
    I'm not sure what ur Expecting, but ur wife's Pregnant with twins that aint urs
    Gotta reallll strong feeling this bastard is wack, passive, and black
    Dog. The last time u had a Hunch was highschool, n' kids laughed at ur back
    Pops been harrasing me, the bastard seed.. i'm living that life
    He told me to bring home the bacon, urs did too - so u married a Pig of a wife
    U da virg type: hopelessly round, boasting real loud, n won't peter down
    Damn. He's 'kept a clean sheet long' enuff to make ANY Soccer goalkeeper proud
    Cant belieeeeve this coward is steppin, i doubt it's a blessin'..
    if you're Showing Guts. its cuz one fackin' hit will pop outchaa Intestines.
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  9. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    My wife can't have kids anymore, so I don't have to worry about it, but glad you dropped your verse...AND NOW TO THE JUDGES!!!
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  10. GWHype

    GWHype New Member

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    4rro9ant:

    Burd's stuff looks like rough-draft writtens, somethings clearly missing
    either there were none to begin with, or u invisible inked em


    Burd:

    Gotta real strong feeling this bastard is wack, passive and black



    i really didn't like the approach either of them took, i think comin at someones girl's played out and lame....but i didn't find either of them to be too creative with punches, and some of Burd's didn't make sense to me, maybe i just read it wrong idk....

    vote - 4rro9ant
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  11. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    You know, Gr8 W., I agree that the approach I took was lame. 1st and last time I'm doing it. I will be keeping bars a priority henceforth!!! Appreciate the feedback!!!
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  12. Allen Knight

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    Gotta ace aim, straight flames. he's way worse w/ a lame verse
    I'm not sure what ur Expecting, but ur wife's Pregnant with twins that aint urs
    Gotta reallll strong feeling this bastard is wack, passive, and black
    Dog. The last time u had a Hunch was highschool, n' kids laughed at ur back

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    nothing

    V/burd, this was one sided as hell, 4 had no real punches or clever shit. burd took this wit 2 solid punches an the rest hit verse was just better.
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  13. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    4rro9gant... Your verse had good structure and I liked a lot of your references (Cam Newton/Superman, Speilberg/ET, Frank Stacks, etc.) Unfortunately, you struggled to put good punches together. I think this was due to nearly all of them being monosyllabic rhymes. The "Invisible Inked" line was cool though.

    Burd... Your verse was cool- good flow, rhyme patterns, punches... but was so indirect that I question if it was recycled or not. No real weak spots though.

    This battle comes to approach vs. execution and I gotta go with who landed more punches.

    Vote: Burd.
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  14. Liquidity

    Liquidity New Member

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    Burd won.

    4rro9gant had weird wording and nothing linked together well even though he had some decent ideas I guess. I don't know, better wording could have definitely made this closer.

    Burd obviously didn't try to hard here but he did have some decent stuff. Clean sheet and what you're expecting were both really nice ideas. Ok battle really, nothin' special from either side.

    V/ Burd.
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  15. 2triple0

    2triple0 New Member

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    Vote byrd better verse more enjiyable lines
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  16. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    See now I'm confused because Byrd is my last name. CLAAAAASICK!!!
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  17. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    Honestly guys...while I appreciate and respect your opinions, let's be honest...did any of y'all expect me to take a immature no-show seriously...at least I said some bars of relevancy towards him!!! I'll make sure to give y'all more punches and variation next time, if I'm not banned by then...
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  18. GWHype

    GWHype New Member

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    i saw the battle the same way as u 4rro9ant, i didn't really like either verse, but thought urs was still the better of the two.....but from what i've seen i disagree with everyone on this board for what good punchlines are n shit.
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  19. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    I'm cool about all this as this is just something to pass the time, but it is frustrating because I thought these text battles would taken a bit more seriously, being that this is Rapmusic.com afterall. This whole experience is just sharpening the katana.
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  20. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Burd wins 3-1; DQ'ed for not posting links
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