[WK/15]RBL INTRO MATCH #10 LW The illiterate 3-2 Vs. Beyond..

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  1. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    RAPMUSIC BATTLE LEAGUE


    RBL WEEK 15

    RBL INTRO MATCH​



    Stipulations:
    Voters will decide what class Beyond will become






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  2. TheIlliterate

    TheIlliterate Well-Known Member

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    Check.
    Watch this faggot no show.
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  3. Beyond..

    Beyond.. New Member

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  4. TheIlliterate

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    fuck this 12 bar horseshit.




    i always bring heat, tho against small fries personals aint easy to come by
    but when this parasite meets fahrenheit, this fungi gets tongue tied

    when i'm done with this faggot, his rep will be gone quick
    buddy, not until you get a win will you be Beyond shit

    cuz you're horrible Beyond belief, you leave a soft impression
    who's word play is better? well that's Beyond question

    after reading this, he probly won't respond, B
    how did Venom even let him in this league? That one's Beyond me

    i'm the most underrated, but you don't know how much praise that i've gotten
    fuck, even Bill O'Reilly digs my bars-- and we've got nothing in Common

    you wouldn't be Beyond your time, even if the clock slow
    you're the kinda guy to suck cock for bus money and then walk home

    see i've made my own Buzz for Lightyears, it spread religiously, like God
    while this toy's story ends with you getting beat into infinity and Beyond
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  5. Beyond..

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    Dear,
    Mr. Undeserved Ego

    Not on the same level so stop actin like your tight.
    If this bitch ‘Lit a match for me’ then it’s because I asked him for a light.
    You’re nothing but a crackbaby & worthless dude.
    There’s been a Newmarket for drugs ever since ur mom gave birth to you.
    Chicks don’t like you so know that ur fate is grim.
    It’s ironic that the only bitches ever feeling Ill are out on a date with him.
    I have been #1 while you’ve been the fakest kid.
    So when I say ur 2nd, Rate - I’m not just talking about the place u’re in.
    You’ll pass in turn & be located in massive urns.
    If I’m really someone Litmus Test, then he’ll leave here with acid burns.
    Your hoe been sayin your dick is nothin blinding.
    Of course your initials are T.I. since everyone knows you’re fuckin Tiny.
    It’s not smart to step in the ring with rap’s A-list.
    Anyone coming to see Liter box will be leaving knowin this cat ain’t shit.

    Sincerely,
    Former RBL champion Beyond
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  6. niboswald

    niboswald Paradoxymoron

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    Hot damn, nice battle.

    TheIlliterate- You had a humorous drop with decent internals and multis, but it seemed like you were a cat toying with a mouse and just having a laugh with the simplistic Beyond puns over and over. Came back to bite you in the tail when your opponent turned out to be not a complete noob. Consistently solid lines throughout, you just got outshone unfortunately.

    when i'm done with this faggot, his rep will be gone quick
    buddy, not until you get a win will you be Beyond shit
    after reading this, he probly won't respond, B
    how did Venom even let him in this league? That one's Beyond me
    you wouldn't be Beyond your time, even if the clock slow
    you're the kinda guy to suck cock for bus money and then walk home
    see i've made my own Buzz for Lightyears, it spread religiously, like God
    while this toy's story ends with you getting beat into infinity and Beyond

    ***

    Beyond.. - Nice. Nice. You pulled out so many nameplays on Illiterate that I haven't seen before, mad props. Damn near every couplet was quotable, solid smackdown of puns and rhyming.

    ***

    Vote: Beyond..
    EDIT: Weightclass: Mid/Heavy
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  7. Ion Metatron

    Ion Metatron I Punch Faces 4 Fun

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    ^^You forgot to put what weightclass you thought beyond was..


    i'll edit my vote here

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  8. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    Great Battle...2nd dopest of the week besides me and gram of course :funny:

    - Opener: Ill, Beyond had a good opener but I liked Ill's creative approach and that shit flowed nice
    - Flow: Ill i think this was his best flow, but Beyond had nice multis
    - Word play/Name play: tie both had great wordplay, and funny name plays as well
    - Rhyme scheme:Tie both came solid with it
    - Punches:Beyond, I think ILL came hot too but Beyond had very creative punches
    - Personals: Tie as neither were really personal in their attacks
    - Humor:Beyond was just a bit funnier, the tiny blast was LOL
    - Vocabulary: Beyond had great word choice and structure
    - Creativity: Beyond was all over the place, so was ill but I think beyond edged him out here
    - Structure (legibility): Tie this verse was a big improvement for ILL
    - Closer:Beyond had a really funny name play/wordplay diss to finish it, i liked ILL's concept though.

    Vote -Beyond wins, but a really nice battle, Illiterate came with the force but Beyond just had a better verse this time around.

    Beyond - Middle or heavyweight

    Cassidy says..

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    Yo so Illiterate what is this like your sixth battle, and you already becomin' a legend, son?? I'm lovin that swag.
    and yo Beyond..

    How much you charge for 20 lines? I need lyrics for the next album...

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  9. Mrjdm998

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    Gonna steal IABs voting format.

    - Opener: Beyonds didn't hit very hard, Ills didn't have his best line here but it was good
    - Flow: Beyond had a slightly better flow
    - Word play/Name play: Although Ill kept doing the Beyond puns, they didn't actually hit very hard, while Beyonds did
    - Rhyme scheme: Illiterate rhymed more, while Beyond had AABBCC etc
    - Punches: Beyond was stronger
    - Personals: The only personal was "NEwmarket for drugs" by Beyond, which is location based. Not amazing and kind of harsh as Ill has nothing to go on, but it was the only personal style line
    - Humor: Although Ill had the bus money line which was great, Beyond took it
    - Vocabulary: Litmus test yo
    - Creativity: Beyond
    - Structure (legibility): Tie, neither had anything wrong with it
    - Closer: Not a fan of either TBH, edge it to Ill

    Vote - Beyond, Ill seemed to not care thinking Beyond wouldn't be good

    Beyond - Middle
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  10. BronzeAtlas

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    i'm the most underrated, but you don't know how much praise that i've gotten
    fuck, even Bill O'Reilly digs my bars-- and we've got nothing in Common
    you wouldn't be Beyond your time, even if the clock slow
    you're the kinda guy to suck cock for bus money and then walk home


    vs.


    You’re nothing but a crackbaby & worthless dude.
    There’s been a Newmarket for drugs ever since ur mom gave birth to you.
    Chicks don’t like you so know that ur fate is grim.
    It’s ironic that the only bitches ever feeling Ill are out on a date with him.
    It’s not smart to step in the ring with rap’s A-list.
    Anyone coming to see Liter box will be leaving knowin this cat ain’t shit.


    Vote. Beyond.

    Just more hard hitting verse. Obviously in my opinion had more qouteable lines from Beyond. Half of TI's verse were kinda wack nameplays on Beyond. Plus, Beyonds verse had more qouteables than the ones I did. Shit was just more polished.

    And Beyonds a Heavyweight in this league, easy.
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  11. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Illiterate:

    when i'm done with this faggot, his rep will be gone quick
    buddy, not until you get a win will you be Beyond shit

    i'm the most underrated, but you don't know how much praise that i've gotten
    fuck, even Bill O'Reilly digs my bars-- and we've got nothing in Common

    vs

    Beyond:

    You’re nothing but a crackbaby & worthless dude.
    There’s been a Newmarket for drugs ever since ur mom gave birth to you.

    Chicks don’t like you so know that ur fate is grim.
    It’s ironic that the only bitches ever feeling Ill are out on a date with him.

    Your hoe been sayin your dick is nothin blinding.
    Of course your initials are T.I. since everyone knows you’re fuckin Tiny.

    It’s not smart to step in the ring with rap’s A-list.
    Anyone coming to see Liter box will be leaving knowin this cat ain’t shit.

    vote- beyond. heavy
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  12. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    I'm voteing in the Metatron's place..



    TheIlliterate



    i always bring heat, tho against small fries personals aint easy to come by
    but when this parasite meets fahrenheit, this fungi gets tongue tied
    :dunno:

    when i'm done with this faggot, his rep will be gone quick
    buddy, not until you get a win will you be Beyond shit
    Ehh.. better..

    cuz you're horrible Beyond belief, you leave a soft impression
    who's word play is better? well that's Beyond question
    Good..

    after reading this, he probly won't respond, B
    how did Venom even let him in this league? That one's Beyond me
    lol, good..

    i'm the most underrated, but you don't know how much praise that i've gotten
    fuck, even Bill O'Reilly digs my bars-- and we've got nothing in Common
    Ehh.. try to refrain from stuff like this unless its mindbendingly funny or somthing.. this wasn't.. I get it.. but no no...

    you wouldn't be Beyond your time, even if the clock slow
    you're the kinda guy to suck cock for bus money and then walk home
    Running out of Ideas here.. this was filler... if your doing 30 lines, then filler is fine.. but not for verses under 20...


    see i've made my own Buzz for Lightyears, it spread religiously, like God
    while this toy's story ends with you getting beat into infinity and Beyond
    I'm a fan of using old concepts but only if its some well thought out stuff.. even a well though out simie that noone has though of.. I mean good concept but you gotta think outside the box when reusing old concepts like 911, the holocuast, Buzzlight year.. lol that stuff is from the 90's so you know people have thrown punhes like that..go where they didn't.




    Beyond

    Dear,
    Mr. Undeserved Ego

    Not on the same level so stop actin like your tight.
    If this bitch ‘Lit a match for me’ then it’s because I asked him for a light.
    ok opener..

    You’re nothing but a crackbaby & worthless dude.
    There’s been a Newmarket for drugs ever since ur mom gave birth to you.
    lol good..

    Chicks don’t like you so know that ur fate is grim.
    It’s ironic that the only bitches ever feeling Ill are out on a date with him.
    good punch but quite generic, could throw anyones name in that.. good tho..

    I have been #1 while you’ve been the fakest kid.
    So when I say ur 2nd, Rate - I’m not just talking about the place u’re in.
    ok..

    You’ll pass in turn & be located in massive urns.
    If I’m really someone Litmus Test, then he’ll leave here with acid burns.
    good multi ryming punch.. skillfull...

    Your hoe been sayin your dick is nothin blinding.
    Of course your initials are T.I. since everyone knows you’re fuckin Tiny.
    Ouch.. Right on the button.. might be line of the week there...


    It’s not smart to step in the ring with rap’s A-list.
    Anyone coming to see Liter box will be leaving knowin this cat ain’t shit.
    good closer





    This battle was better then most expected.. I think this is a battle where I seen Ill take it to a level I didn't think he could reach like he had the glow & shit.. then it fell off right where he needed it to take him home... On the other hand beyond came out like a seasoned vet throwing some quick jabs then letting out a Powerpunch & continuing to throw strong punches till the match was done.


    Vote= Beyond

    Class= HW


    . Good battle..
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  13. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    Beyond Wins..

    Classed: Heavyweight
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