[WK 15 CONTENDERSHIP MATCH]3. Trombley 4-0 vs 4. BronzeAtlas 8-2 (Vote!)

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  1. xX_NASTY_Xx

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  2. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    20-30

    g'luck
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  3. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    we should post by tues-wed.
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  4. BronzeAtlas

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    20ish sounds good.
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  5. BronzeAtlas

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    I need an extension. I have been on some uberbullshit this week and I really don't want to no show. Thanks in advance.
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  6. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    yeah thats cool.
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  7. BronzeAtlas

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    Here!


    This kids at his end, I can't pretend.
    I smashed nobodys on my way here, so I'll continue the trend.
    I'm respected promtly, expect this probably.
    Med in the champ match gave wack cats hope, except for Trombley.
    This is a easy win, ya chances are dim.
    When last week I smashed KDP, and you're a lot worse than him.
    Have Dohpe write ya shit, this kids bad.
    Verse is still trash with 4 people working on it, like the RBL Mag.
    You a vet? I don't think that you are guy.
    You've never beaten a single vet, and have nothing in archives.
    I'm a pro, so what are you flexing for.
    My verse will have punch of the week, Hens will have the best in yours.
    I wanna save the RBL, I run with a cause.
    While you'll never see 5-0, like you're on the run from the laws.
    Tromb's from the hood, he swears he is.
    Gutter is not just his style, but it's also where this kid lives.
    I've seen ya disses, half of them failed.
    While I wreck your train of thought so much, it crashed and derailed.
    I beat bitches, smash you into submission.
    I'm into wishin on a star, while you just have womens intuition.
    I heard you're nice, they must be bent.
    Deons the only dude with 10 alias', and not have one of them decent.
    Heard Tromb's a fag, steady givin dudes head.
    Dope Chris got the pink slip, while you just where yours to bed.


    24.
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  9. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    ' in current news '


    u in the title match is stupid, so i'm spittin bombs
    infact champs wear gold so we wont see ANY grip n' bronze
    plus u come off played & generic, so quit please
    them points already been stressed n' used all available sick leave
    we got here on easy routes. mines wont stray til next week
    but the pinch YOU just hit'll revolutionize potty training techniques
    this maggots flow failed, we know bronze dont battle so well
    ur a lightweight we'd only grade with big numbers on the calibre scale
    i'm pulling hoes left n' right. while his best effort'd make a man cry
    every girl bronze metal say my dicks winning gold by a landslide
    and when i had his chick, she called me the best to come get it
    but said the sex was 2 overbearing...now that she's pregnant with triplets
    and the bets were submitted. they said trom's gon wreck on this midget
    + voting here's required, but liking a BronzeAtlas verse sure as hell isnt
    cuz I can quote ya steeze, see its 'bullshit disguised like dope as can be'
    cats like TorrMup gave u a run. I havent had a SINGLE vote against me
    been up n' down in the ranks. this is close as uve come to the top
    the way you straddle the fence, crooks no longer jump'em running from cops
    frontin just stop, i seen ya pad n' to pull ya card
    'Las Place sits on the corner of I Suck Road n' Loser Boulevard

    20 g'luck
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  10. Mic-illaH

    Mic-illaH aka paisano

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    This kids at his end, I can't pretend.
    I smashed nobodys on my way here, so I'll continue the trend.
    ok
    I'm respected promtly, expect this probably.
    Med in the champ match gave wack cats hope, except for Trombley.
    ok
    This is a easy win, ya chances are dim.
    When last week I smashed KDP, and you're a lot worse than him.
    ok
    Have Dohpe write ya shit, this kids bad.
    Verse is still trash with 4 people working on it, like the RBL Mag.
    played concept
    You a vet? I don't think that you are guy.
    You've never beaten a single vet, and have nothing in archives.
    ok
    I'm a pro, so what are you flexing for.
    My verse will have punch of the week, Hens will have the best in yours.
    lol nice
    I wanna save the RBL, I run with a cause.
    While you'll never see 5-0, like you're on the run from the laws.
    real played concept
    Tromb's from the hood, he swears he is.
    Gutter is not just his style, but it's also where this kid lives.
    ehh
    I've seen ya disses, half of them failed.
    While I wreck your train of thought so much, it crashed and derailed.
    played concept
    I beat bitches, smash you into submission.
    I'm into wishin on a star, while you just have womens intuition.
    ehh
    I heard you're nice, they must be bent.
    Deons the only dude with 10 alias', and not have one of them decent.
    decent personal
    Heard Tromb's a fag, steady givin dudes head.
    Dope Chris got the pink slip, while you just where yours to bed.
    spelled WEAR, and decent...


    u in the title match is stupid, so i'm spittin bombs
    infact champs wear gold so we wont see ANY grip n' bronze
    lol dope
    plus u come off played & generic, so quit please
    them points already been stressed n' used all available sick leave
    lol nice
    we got here on easy routes. mines wont stray til next week
    but the pinch YOU just hit'll revolutionize potty training techniques
    funny
    this maggots flow failed, we know bronze dont battle so well
    ur a lightweight we'd only grade with big numbers on the calibre scale
    hahaha 8.5 calibres
    i'm pulling hoes left n' right. while his best effort'd make a man cry
    every girl bronze metal say my dicks winning gold by a landslide
    lol nice
    and when i had his chick, she called me the best to come get it
    but said the sex was 2 overbearing...now that she's pregnant with triplets
    ehh
    and the bets were submitted. they said trom's gon wreck on this midget
    + voting here's required, but liking a BronzeAtlas verse sure as hell isnt
    decent
    cuz I can quote ya steeze, see its 'bullshit disguised like dope as can be'
    cats like TorrMup gave u a run. I havent had a SINGLE vote against me
    ok
    been up n' down in the ranks. this is close as uve come to the top
    the way you straddle the fence, crooks no longer jump'em running from cops
    funny
    frontin just stop, i seen ya pad n' to pull ya card
    'Las Place sits on the corner of I Suck Road n' Loser Boulevard
    ok


    V/ Trombley
    This was a lopsided match....Trom had some fire - his first 6 lines were nice. The sick leave line was funny and the opener was funny...good nameplay with grip and bronze. Bronze came played as fuck...train of thought line and 5-0/police line....damn.....Trom stomped him....
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  11. DaTrusHurtz

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    This kids at his end, I can't pretend.
    I smashed nobodys on my way here, so I'll continue the trend.
    hits a little bit cuz its kinda true that u did, but its too simple
    I'm respected promtly, expect this probably.
    Med in the champ match gave wack cats hope, except for Trombley.
    haha, hit pretty well, good shit
    This is a easy win, ya chances are dim.
    When last week I smashed KDP, and you're a lot worse than him.
    ehhh i mean he's way better than KDP, its not even close, so this came off as kinda fake
    Have Dohpe write ya shit, this kids bad.
    Verse is still trash with 4 people working on it, like the RBL Mag.
    this woulda been good a few weeks ago, but a few guys have done lines like this so now its old
    You a vet? I don't think that you are guy.
    You've never beaten a single vet, and have nothing in archives.
    kinda the same as the kdp line. if it were true it'd hit, but he's beaten plenty of vets
    I'm a pro, so what are you flexing for.
    My verse will have punch of the week, Hens will have the best in yours.
    haha, nice smooth execution that hit well
    I wanna save the RBL, I run with a cause.
    While you'll never see 5-0, like you're on the run from the laws.
    its alright, it hit, just coulda hit harder
    Tromb's from the hood, he swears he is.
    Gutter is not just his style, but it's also where this kid lives.
    eh i did a gutta line about a year ago so cuz i've used a line like this, doesn't hit as much to me
    I've seen ya disses, half of them failed.
    While I wreck your train of thought so much, it crashed and derailed.
    nahh train of thought lines are played
    I beat bitches, smash you into submission.
    I'm into wishin on a star, while you just have womens intuition.
    concept is alright, just wasn't feelin' it really
    I heard you're nice, they must be bent.
    Deons the only dude with 10 alias', and not have one of them decent.
    if u'd incorporated some wit in this, this coulda hit pretty hard, but the way ya did it just came off as too simple
    Heard Tromb's a fag, steady givin dudes head.
    Dope Chris got the pink slip, while you just where yours to bed.
    cool concept, wordin' mighta been off a bit tho

    vs.

    u in the title match is stupid, so i'm spittin bombs
    infact champs wear gold so we wont see ANY grip n' bronze
    decent opener
    plus u come off played & generic, so quit please
    them points already been stressed n' used all available sick leave
    pretty fresh, dope shit
    we got here on easy routes. mines wont stray til next week
    but the pinch YOU just hit'll revolutionize potty training techniques
    its alright, just didn't feel it hit that hard tho
    this maggots flow failed, we know bronze dont battle so well
    ur a lightweight we'd only grade with big numbers on the calibre scale
    nah, for a calibre line it just doesnt seem that witty
    i'm pulling hoes left n' right. while his best effort'd make a man cry
    every girl bronze metal say my dicks winning gold by a landslide
    haha, dope nameplay
    and when i had his chick, she called me the best to come get it
    but said the sex was 2 overbearing...now that she's pregnant with triplets
    pretty fresh, good shit once again
    and the bets were submitted. they said trom's gon wreck on this midget
    + voting here's required, but liking a BronzeAtlas verse sure as hell isnt
    kinda simple, but not bad
    cuz I can quote ya steeze, see its 'bullshit disguised like dope as can be'
    cats like TorrMup gave u a run. I havent had a SINGLE vote against me
    its alright, hits a little cuz its true just i'm not into bringin' yaself into a punchline
    been up n' down in the ranks. this is close as uve come to the top
    the way you straddle the fence, crooks no longer jump'em running from cops
    haha, its true he's been up and down a lot. nice personal
    frontin just stop, i seen ya pad n' to pull ya card
    'Las Place sits on the corner of I Suck Road n' Loser Boulevard
    lol funny nameplay

    Bronze, this verse was kinda like most of yours, lots of good personals, fairly consistent, but just too simple. U really gotta work on wittiness into ur personals. Sometimes u can just state the truth and it'll come off real hard, but that doesn't always work. U had some good lines in there like the hens and med in the champ match, but the rest just felt kinda average. Trombley came hard in this one, opener, sick leave, bronze metal, overbearing, straddle the fence, and close rwere all pretty nice. Even the lines which weren't as good were still not bad. I think he got this pretty easy with far more consistency, quotables, and wittiness.

    Vote - Trombley
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  12. Caveat1

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    I WAS SURPRISED AT BRONZE THIS WEEK, HE NORMALLY GOT MUCH MORE FIREPOWER.

    Tromb's from the hood, he swears he is.
    Gutter is not just his style, but it's also where this kid lives.
    I've seen ya disses, half of them failed.
    While I wreck your train of thought so much, it crashed and derailed.
    REALLY LIKE ALL OF THAT

    IT TOOK ME HALF THE VERSE TO GET INTO IT THOUGH. SOME OF YA CONCEPTS HAD POTENTIAL LIKE THE WOMENS INTUITION AND YA CLOSER WAS OK
    TROMB

    u in the title match is stupid, so i'm spittin bombs
    infact champs wear gold so we wont see ANY grip n' bronze
    GOOD START
    plus u come off played & generic, so quit please
    them points already been stressed n' used all available sick leave
    ILLNESS
    we got here on easy routes. mines wont stray til next week
    but the pinch YOU just hit'll revolutionize potty training techniques
    OK
    this maggots flow failed, we know bronze dont battle so well
    ur a lightweight we'd only grade with big numbers on the calibre scale
    ESOTERIC
    i'm pulling hoes left n' right. while his best effort'd make a man cry
    every girl bronze metal say my dicks winning gold by a landslide
    ILLNESS
    and when i had his chick, she called me the best to come get it
    but said the sex was 2 overbearing...now that she's pregnant with triplets
    VERY NICE
    and the bets were submitted. they said trom's gon wreck on this midget
    + voting here's required, but liking a BronzeAtlas verse sure as hell isnt
    OK
    cuz I can quote ya steeze, see its 'bullshit disguised like dope as can be'
    cats like TorrMup gave u a run. I havent had a SINGLE vote against me
    NICE
    been up n' down in the ranks. this is close as uve come to the top
    the way you straddle the fence, crooks no longer jump'em running from cops
    LOL
    frontin just stop, i seen ya pad n' to pull ya card
    'Las Place sits on the corner of I Suck Road n' Loser Boulevard
    EHHH

    V-TROMB AS THE CLEAR WINNER IN THIS
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  13. Eusich

    Eusich the incredible.

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    bronze, i didn't like any of this, period.

    trom, the first 2 were more than enough for the win, metal line was decent and so was the closer, overall the entire verse was consistently better than BA's, surprisingly enough he never hit you once in my opinion, i expected more of a match but as is this was cake while your verse was very beatable from any good opponent, the rest other than the 4 i mentioned were either decent, forced, or played, understandable though given the circumstances and the fact that you threw this together at the last minute (allegedly) and plus im sure you took into account what it would take to win the match

    trom wins in a terrible contender match
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  14. toil

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    Bronze: I'm not a fan of the short bar, long bar style - but you pull it off pretty well. Especially because you maintain an impressive rhyme scheme, which is cool. The first few punches of your verse were all ok, but nothing particularly hitting for me. However, I liked the RBL Mag/4 people working on it line - that was dope. The punch about not being a vet or in the archives wasn't really a punch at all for me - thats just talking to the guy really. But then the 5-0 concept was cool, but not worded too well. Gutter line was cool, train of thought line very played.

    Trombley: Nice opener, followed with the stressed points punch which was worded nicely. Not feeling the 'potty training' or 'calibre scales' lines particularly though. Middle to end of your verse picked up well though. Bronze medal line was clever, and the 2 overbearing was dope. The straddle the fence line was the best punch in the battle for me.

    Overall: Trombley takes this. His verse got steadily better. Bronze's verse was really up and down - some nice concepts and rhyming scheme but not enough hitting punches to compete in this one. Not a bad battle overall though.

    Voete = Trombley
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  15. criticize

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    his kids at his end, I can't pretend.
    I smashed nobodys on my way here, so I'll continue the trend.
    I'm respected promtly, expect this probably.
    Med in the champ match gave wack cats hope, except for Trombley.
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    u in the title match is stupid, so i'm spittin bombs
    infact champs wear gold so we wont see ANY grip n' bronze

    i'm pulling hoes left n' right. while his best effort'd make a man cry
    every girl bronze metal say my dicks winning gold by a landslide

    cuz I can quote ya steeze, see its 'bullshit disguised like dope as can be'
    cats like TorrMup gave u a run. I havent had a SINGLE vote against me
    been up n' down in the ranks. this is close as uve come to the top
    the way you straddle the fence, crooks no longer jump'em running from cops
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    vote- tom.

    bronze you started cool, but i feel your lines fell off after that and didnt have much hard hitting in the end half of your verse. it was an ok verse but not good enough for this match.
    trom had a pretty cool verse, a cpl of lines were no good. a cpl of lines were good like the overbearing line, but basicaly irrelevant in a battle should have posted them in an open mic as they have no punch and are basicaly just brag lines. but you had enough good lines to win this.
    not a bad battle.

    vote- trom.
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  16. J o o k

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    Bronze didn't agree to let Trom post. Thus this battle is over.

    Sorry Trom, Bronze cried. We have rules to enforce.
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