[WK 15]39. tbone 0-1 vs 40. Area51. 0-0 (Vote!)

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  1. xX_NASTY_Xx

    xX_NASTY_Xx Guest

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  2. Area51.

    Area51. New Member

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  3. Area51.

    Area51. New Member

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    yo
    fag's better off pinkslipped with rhymes never ill
    fuck's he a threat? readin his votes hurt more than his lines ever will
    no one respects ya, so u always get smashed g
    ur opponents face scrub so much that the battles could cure acne
    saw ur battle last week n realised nothin u writin's sick
    so how can i take u serious? u -LoSe 2 GaIz- tH@t TyPe-LiKe-Dis
    u stay on newb status, u elevate? please son
    I'm facin the one tbone not even A1 could make seasoned
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  4. tbone

    tbone Well-Known Member

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    Give it up, in poker – the smart player he folds, if this wasn’t online, you wouldn’t be bold/
    You can put your rhymebook in an icebox and your punchlines still wouldn’t be cold/
    Hey rugrat, when you get over girls’ cooties, I’ll be at my prom just screwing/
    Wait till you have Health class in 2 years, you’ll know what me and your mom were doing/
    You ain't no Hiphoppa, I can tell it's just a meek kid's phrase
    You're such a punk, I bet your preppy shirt collar reads B!tch-"Made"

    Go back to chasing girls and crying over what you ain't expect to see
    Cuz my flows extend longer than even your rejection streak


    uno mofo....
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  5. Area51.

    Area51. New Member

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    u had ur verse, just cut it down to 8 and post
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  6. tbone

    tbone Well-Known Member

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    Links going hur...
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  7. Mic-illaH

    Mic-illaH aka paisano

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    fag's better off pinkslipped with rhymes never ill
    fuck's he a threat? readin his votes hurt more than his lines ever will
    lol
    no one respects ya, so u always get smashed g
    ur opponents face scrub so much that the battles could cure acne
    dope
    saw ur battle last week n realised nothin u writin's sick
    so how can i take u serious? u -LoSe 2 GaIz- tH@t TyPe-LiKe-Dis
    ok
    u stay on newb status, u elevate? please son
    I'm facin the one tbone not even A1 could make seasoned
    nice


    Give it up, in poker – the smart player he folds, if this wasn’t online, you wouldn’t be bold/
    You can put your rhymebook in an icebox and your punchlines still wouldn’t be cold/
    no
    Hey rugrat, when you get over girls’ cooties, I’ll be at my prom just screwing/
    Wait till you have Health class in 2 years, you’ll know what me and your mom were doing/
    no
    You ain't no Hiphoppa, I can tell it's just a meek kid's phrase
    You're such a punk, I bet your preppy shirt collar reads B!tch-"Made"
    no

    Go back to chasing girls and crying over what you ain't expect to see
    Cuz my flows extend longer than even your rejection streak
    no

    V/ A51
    His opener and acne line were nice. Tbone didn't have one line that was good. Not much else to say...
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  8. Aloe

    Aloe www.myspace.com/aloemusic

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    area:

    fag's better off pinkslipped with rhymes never ill
    fuck's he a threat? readin his votes hurt more than his lines ever will
    ^okay
    no one respects ya, so u always get smashed g
    ur opponents face scrub so much that the battles could cure acne
    lol nice
    saw ur battle last week n realised nothin u writin's sick
    so how can i take u serious? u -LoSe 2 GaIz- tH@t TyPe-LiKe-Dis
    cool doesnt really hit tho
    u stay on newb status, u elevate? please son
    I'm facin the one tbone not even A1 could make seasoned
    okay


    tbone

    Give it up, in poker – the smart player he folds, if this wasn’t online, you wouldn’t be bold/
    You can put your rhymebook in an icebox and your punchlines still wouldn’t be cold/
    really?
    Hey rugrat, when you get over girls’ cooties, I’ll be at my prom just screwing/
    Wait till you have Health class in 2 years, you’ll know what me and your mom were doing/
    okay
    You ain't no Hiphoppa, I can tell it's just a meek kid's phrase
    You're such a punk, I bet your preppy shirt collar reads B!tch-"Made"
    nah

    Go back to chasing girls and crying over what you ain't expect to see
    Cuz my flows extend longer than even your rejection streak
    okay


    not much to write about here.... omg@how played and poorly worded tbones first couplet was tho lol. my fav line of the battle was areas scrub line.

    vote= area
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  9. Pablo BaZooka

    Pablo BaZooka Ka-BOOM Beoutchess!!

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    yeah mane Area took dis one pretty easily, tbone had terrible structure, unoriginal centent & very bad wording; it was jus an overall lackluster verse. Area was decent enuff tho, had-a line or two dat made my laugh, especially the acne scrub line & the play he made off Xtremist..lol. But yeah mane, Area wasn't too amazing, but still much better than the other kid: vote = Area51.
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  10. Played Punches

    Played Punches Punches Sooo Well Played

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    heres the Scoop like vanilla ice cream

    this battle was kinda weak, Area51... the opener was okay' at best, acne line wasnt to impressive, the "type like this" line was good cuz it had some comedy appeal to it... prolly best line you had, mainly cuz i thought it was funny. and the seasoned line was a decent closer with an attempt at the creativity.. it could use improvment

    overall - 1.9 snickers bars

    tbone, i wasnt really feelin' the ice box line. and the health class wasnt that great either. your lines are pretty stretched. bitch made shit was nothin' special... BUT you do have some type of multi' flow in your verse. closer really didnt do it for me... straight none the less.

    overall - 1.7 snickers bars

    WELL this battle wasnt really impressive but it got the job done... area 51 took this cuz his verse had more of a battle appeal to it, and hit more direct

    vote - Area51

    PLAYED PUNCHES VOTER OF THE WEEK!!
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  11. DaTrusHurtz

    DaTrusHurtz Member

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    fag's better off pinkslipped with rhymes never ill
    fuck's he a threat? readin his votes hurt more than his lines ever will
    alright decent opener
    no one respects ya, so u always get smashed g
    ur opponents face scrub so much that the battles could cure acne
    cool line, i liked this
    saw ur battle last week n realised nothin u writin's sick
    so how can i take u serious? u -LoSe 2 GaIz- tH@t TyPe-LiKe-Dis
    kinda simplistic but aight cuz its true
    u stay on newb status, u elevate? please son
    I'm facin the one tbone not even A1 could make seasoned
    decent nameplay

    vs.

    Give it up, in poker – the smart player he folds, if this wasn’t online, you wouldn’t be bold/
    You can put your rhymebook in an icebox and your punchlines still wouldn’t be cold/
    nah its kinda played
    Hey rugrat, when you get over girls’ cooties, I’ll be at my prom just screwing/
    Wait till you have Health class in 2 years, you’ll know what me and your mom were doing/
    nahh jokes like this been done for awhile
    You ain't no Hiphoppa, I can tell it's just a meek kid's phrase
    You're such a punk, I bet your preppy shirt collar reads B!tch-"Made"
    better than the other lines, alright, just not that creative tho
    Go back to chasing girls and crying over what you ain't expect to see
    Cuz my flows extend longer than even your rejection streak
    ya want to focus more on him than yaself, so ya never want to start a punchline like "cuz my flows", focus on his flows

    Well, Area got this pretty easy with a simple, short, and effective verse. tbone didn't really have much here, I suggest ya read battles of the top battlers in the league n' try to pick up on some of things they do to win. What ya gotta work on most is just concepts, text battling has been going on for years so a lotta things have been said, be creative with ur approach and think of things that no one else likely thought of. If it seems obvious (like the icebox/cold thing) then its no good. Just work on that n' try again next week.

    Vote - Area51
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  12. DeadKing

    DeadKing The Perfect Method

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    area 51 -

    fag's better off pinkslipped with rhymes never ill
    fuck's he a threat? readin his votes hurt more than his lines ever will
    COOL
    no one respects ya, so u always get smashed g
    ur opponents face scrub so much that the battles could cure acne
    COOL
    saw ur battle last week n realised nothin u writin's sick
    so how can i take u serious? u -LoSe 2 GaIz- tH@t TyPe-LiKe-Dis
    DECENT
    u stay on newb status, u elevate? please son
    I'm facin the one tbone not even A1 could make seasoned
    COOL


    TBONE -
    Give it up, in poker – the smart player he folds, if this wasn’t online, you wouldn’t be bold/
    You can put your rhymebook in an icebox and your punchlines still wouldn’t be cold/
    NO
    Hey rugrat, when you get over girls’ cooties, I’ll be at my prom just screwing/
    Wait till you have Health class in 2 years, you’ll know what me and your mom were doing/
    NO
    You ain't no Hiphoppa, I can tell it's just a meek kid's phrase
    You're such a punk, I bet your preppy shirt collar reads B!tch-"Made"
    NO

    Go back to chasing girls and crying over what you ain't expect to see
    Cuz my flows extend longer than even your rejection streak
    NO



    vote - area easily, tbone's verse was garbage
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  13. Wordz AhGod

    Wordz AhGod New Member

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    yo
    fag's better off pinkslipped with rhymes never ill
    fuck's he a threat? readin his votes hurt more than his lines ever will
    too basic
    no one respects ya, so u always get smashed g
    ur opponents face scrub so much that the battles could cure acne
    decent
    saw ur battle last week n realised nothin u writin's sick
    so how can i take u serious? u -LoSe 2 GaIz- tH@t TyPe-LiKe-Dis
    lol, not hard but funny
    u stay on newb status, u elevate? please son
    I'm facin the one tbone not even A1 could make seasoned
    like'd the nameplay but the wording was a bit off

    vs

    Give it up, in poker – the smart player he folds, if this wasn’t online, you wouldn’t be bold/
    You can put your rhymebook in an icebox and your punchlines still wouldn’t be cold/
    wow, thats stretched...my eyes hurt just tracing the line all the way to the end of the screen lol. plus it was lame too..that could have had a roll in the hurting eyes thing
    Hey rugrat, when you get over girls’ cooties, I’ll be at my prom just screwing/
    Wait till you have Health class in 2 years, you’ll know what me and your mom were doing/
    waaaay to elementary... didn't like it plus the /'s looks really noobish
    You ain't no Hiphoppa, I can tell it's just a meek kid's phrase
    You're such a punk, I bet your preppy shirt collar reads B!tch-"Made"
    good attemp but bad execution, better then your otherlines and it looked like some one else wrote if for you.

    Go back to chasing girls and crying over what you ain't expect to see
    Cuz my flows extend longer than even your rejection streak
    way better, wording and flow is off but better

    This battle was okish at most, I know area51 can do way better coz I seen it but he put down enough shit to take it by consistancy. Tbone was off for the entire verse and started picking up on his last 2 bars. If he would have dropped more like those last 2 then he probably could have taken this.

    V/Area51
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  14. T.a.C

    T.a.C Guest

    wow one sided battle in my opinion.

    im not gonna quote area 51 cuz id jus be copying his entire verse. they were all hot. good job bro.

    tbone the health class line was the closest you had to a good diss. my advice is to take a little more time. i know you dropped monday. maybe take a couple days fuck with some punches and take the cream of the crop. nice try bro


    vote-area51
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  15. xX_NASTY_Xx

    xX_NASTY_Xx Guest

    up over no-shows
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  16. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    v=Area

    his verse was pretty much consistent with no stretches just good ole fashion dissin..I was feeling pretty much the whole verse..no arguments
    Tbone came into his verse with a stretch.. he had a couple punches that were aight and a couple that were premature and played..area 51 took this one without a doubt in my opinion.....
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  17. magus.

    magus. 'Pistol' Pete Magus'vich

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    area 51 waxed that ass. easily.


    tbone had nothing, freezer/wouldn't be cold? lmaoroflmao.
    tbone was writing like people who mock rappers, it was terrible. area51 had some funny lines, like the character map.


    it was just all over better with more developed concepts and wit.

    tbone was noobish and terrible.
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  18. toil

    toil New Member

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    Area 51: Nice style, clearly done this before/alias. Rhyme scheme and bar length both on point. Vote line got a chuckle. TyPe-LiKe-Dis line was dope, best punch in this battle. Other two couplets were cool aswell.

    TBone: Bars are too long man. Nice internal rhymes on a few, which made it bearable, but you'd do better to cut down the length. Your first few lines barely constituted a punch. However, I quite liked the Bitch-made concept.

    Overall: Area 51 takes this. More refined punches. Actually more punches full stop.

    Vote=Area51
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  19. criticize

    criticize New Member

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    no one respects ya, so u always get smashed g
    ur opponents face scrub so much that the battles could cure acne



    ...........

    vote area.

    i thought area took this battle pretty easily, and did enough to win easily. some ok lines i guess. nothing really good, but then again you didnt need it.
    tbone your obv new but your concepts are old and you need to get more creative with them with your mets and wordplay try a personal or 2 keep working on it.

    vote- area.
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  20. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    Area51


    fag's better off pinkslipped with rhymes never ill
    fuck's he a threat? readin his votes hurt more than his lines ever will
    LOL
    no one respects ya, so u always get smashed g
    ur opponents face scrub so much that the battles could cure acne
    ok
    saw ur battle last week n realised nothin u writin's sick
    so how can i take u serious? u -LoSe 2 GaIz- tH@t TyPe-LiKe-Dis
    okay
    u stay on newb status, u elevate? please son
    I'm facin the one tbone not even A1 could make seasoned
    hahhaa

    tbone

    Give it up, in poker – the smart player he folds, if this wasn’t online, you wouldn’t be bold/
    You can put your rhymebook in an icebox and your punchlines still wouldn’t be cold/
    no
    Hey rugrat, when you get over girls’ cooties, I’ll be at my prom just screwing/
    Wait till you have Health class in 2 years, you’ll know what me and your mom were doing/
    hahhahaha
    You ain't no Hiphoppa, I can tell it's just a meek kid's phrase
    You're such a punk, I bet your preppy shirt collar reads B!tch-"Made"
    noo
    Go back to chasing girls and crying over what you ain't expect to see
    Cuz my flows extend longer than even your rejection streak
    no

    v - Area

    Better verse overall, hard hitting punches.
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