[WK 15]23. N. Sight 5-5 vs 24. DeadKing 2-0 (Vote!)

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  1. xX_NASTY_Xx

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  2. N-Sight

    N-Sight Excellence Of Execution

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  3. N-Sight

    N-Sight Excellence Of Execution

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    ::N-sight wonders if this guy is even gonna show up::
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  4. DeadKing

    DeadKing The Perfect Method

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    i need a 3 hour extension, but i will post...........

    14 sound cool?
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  5. N-Sight

    N-Sight Excellence Of Execution

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    ahhh fuck it......


    Facebooked, slappin u wit the composition, in front of ya drunken mom
    Black boy wanna be white
    Keep invading MySpace and I'll beat the black off ya ass and ya Uncle Tom
    Talking like your a killer, but there's no proof in the shit u say u do
    Cuz the only killer from N.C. anyone remembers is Ray carruth
    Eat this nigga up scrap the plate, head contusions u losing Jake the snake
    Stomping this nigga head so fast
    you wud think he had a record on his forehead the way Im trying to break his face
    I got something nyce that'll make ur brain slide of floors
    U like wearing skulls,well 1 head shot can help u show off urs
    Im going easy, not really motivated to show u how this monster be
    Cuz then I'd be killing this nigga so bad White supremacist wud wanna sponsor me
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  6. DeadKing

    DeadKing The Perfect Method

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    your style is wack, but thats not the worst thing
    most guys would rather give head than go against DeadKing
    my style is like a sick n vicious attack
    whereas your style lacks depth, its like reading a map
    you won last week by technical decision
    nah, fuck that... you won cuz an IP was forbidden
    u didnt Torr M up, u didnt beat his ass
    it took Muffy to balance your record half-n-half
    back up, step off, you aint ready for this
    only time u should be standin up is after takin a piss
    its funny how words get twisted n canted
    the only insight Nasty gives me... is in the form of a faggot

    -peace
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    DeadKing The Perfect Method

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  8. Wordz AhGod

    Wordz AhGod New Member

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    Eat this nigga up scrap the plate, head contusions u losing Jake the snake
    Stomping this nigga head so fast
    you wud think he had a record on his forehead the way Im trying to break his face
    Stretched as fuck, poor wording but a really dope concept. made me laugh a bit

    vs

    back up, step off, you aint ready for this
    only time u should be standin up is after takin a piss
    Not too good but the only line that I saw that resembled a witty punch in your verse

    I felt this battle was rushed, maybe it could have been because of you both dropping so last minute but It showed. N-sight had that line with the terrible wording and stretchy flow but it was a dope concept as to were deadking had a lot of fillers and one ok line. Other then that I didn't really see anything consistant or special.

    V/N-Sight
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  9. N-Sight

    N-Sight Excellence Of Execution

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  10. Mic-illaH

    Mic-illaH aka paisano

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    Facebooked, slappin u wit the composition, in front of ya drunken mom
    Black boy wanna be white
    Keep invading MySpace and I'll beat the black off ya ass and ya Uncle Tom
    ehh
    Talking like your a killer, but there's no proof in the shit u say u do
    Cuz the only killer from N.C. anyone remembers is Ray carruth
    ok
    Eat this nigga up scrap the plate, head contusions u losing Jake the snake
    Stomping this nigga head so fast
    you wud think he had a record on his forehead the way Im trying to break his face
    ehh
    I got something nyce that'll make ur brain slide of floors
    U like wearing skulls,well 1 head shot can help u show off urs
    decent, bad wording
    Im going easy, not really motivated to show u how this monster be
    Cuz then I'd be killing this nigga so bad White supremacist wud wanna sponsor me
    lol funny



    your style is wack, but thats not the worst thing
    most guys would rather give head than go against DeadKing
    ok
    my style is like a sick n vicious attack
    whereas your style lacks depth, its like reading a map
    funny
    you won last week by technical decision
    nah, fuck that... you won cuz an IP was forbidden
    this true?
    u didnt Torr M up, u didnt beat his ass
    it took Muffy to balance your record half-n-half
    ehh
    back up, step off, you aint ready for this
    only time u should be standin up is after takin a piss
    funny
    its funny how words get twisted n canted
    the only insight Nasty gives me... is in the form of a faggot
    lol good closer


    I got DeadKing taking this.....
    NSight - ya lines are a little too long, try to shorten em up a little bit. Not a great battle here, really only liked Nsight's closer. Deadking didn't come w/ much but had a few funny lines. The closer was funny, map line was cool, and stand up line got me to chuckle. So, my vote goes to the king.
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  11. Eusich

    Eusich the incredible.

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    sight, this was poorly done, a lot of forced word plays and just bad concepts, the last line was the funniest and even that concept is played, though i've never heard it like that before and even the way you did it was hardly effective and only funny, the rest were blah leaving you wide open for a loss

    deadking, i wasn't feeling this either though your flow was better and overall structure was easier to side with, some slight humor in the lines about his record but other than this this was poor conceptually as well, although it was somewhat obvious that you hardly tried i still wanted to see more

    honestly, this was a wack battle and a hard decision, but i think sight put a little more into his punches and though his approach is not rewarded his effort is, deadking was just as bad with a better or more voter friendly structure but he really didn't say much of anything and what he did say was very simplistic and hardly funny, his one semi-decent hit was stretched out for about 2 bars

    vote - n. sight
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  12. DaTrusHurtz

    DaTrusHurtz Member

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    Facebooked, slappin u wit the composition, in front of ya drunken mom
    Black boy wanna be white
    Keep invading MySpace and I'll beat the black off ya ass and ya Uncle Tom
    i used a myspace line a lil while ago and i seen others do it.. the flip on its okay, but its just not original
    Talking like your a killer, but there's no proof in the shit u say u do
    Cuz the only killer from N.C. anyone remembers is Ray carruth
    decent, tho its Rae, not Ray, and it'd hit harder if this were more recent, that was a long time ago
    Eat this nigga up scrap the plate, head contusions u losing Jake the snake
    Stomping this nigga head so fast
    you wud think he had a record on his forehead the way Im trying to break his face
    not bad, it lacks that "ouch effect" because i think it was too stretched, but its not bad
    I got something nyce that'll make ur brain slide of floors
    U like wearing skulls,well 1 head shot can help u show off urs
    alright, but its a little too simple to hit harder
    Im going easy, not really motivated to show u how this monster be
    Cuz then I'd be killing this nigga so bad White supremacist wud wanna sponsor me
    nah, just isn't hard

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    your style is wack, but thats not the worst thing
    most guys would rather give head than go against DeadKing
    nah, the self-glory is kinda wack
    my style is like a sick n vicious attack
    whereas your style lacks depth, its like reading a map
    just too simple of a diss to do much
    you won last week by technical decision
    nah, fuck that... you won cuz an IP was forbidden
    true, but the wording wasn't complex on it, u needed to develop this concept more
    u didnt Torr M up, u didnt beat his ass
    it took Muffy to balance your record half-n-half
    again, the personal is there, but u just didn't do enough with it
    back up, step off, you aint ready for this
    only time u should be standin up is after takin a piss
    nahhh too simple
    its funny how words get twisted n canted
    the only insight Nasty gives me... is in the form of a faggot
    ehhh maybe if u'd done this differently it'd be good, but not like this

    N Sight, u came fairly consistent, nothing in ur verse was bad or anything, but not much stood out. Best thing u had was the Rae Carruth line and the world record line was decent too. DeadKing, u just came wayyy too simple in this. U had a few personals which coulda been alright, but u didn't develop them enough. I got N. Sight here for the consistency.

    Vote - N Sight
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  13. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    okay, N

    Facebooked, slappin u wit the composition, in front of ya drunken mom
    Black boy wanna be white
    Keep invading MySpace and I'll beat the black off ya ass and ya Uncle Tom
    ehh..not too good
    Talking like your a killer, but there's no proof in the shit u say u do
    Cuz the only killer from N.C. anyone remembers is Ray carruth
    aight although simple
    Eat this nigga up scrap the plate, head contusions u losing Jake the snake
    Stomping this nigga head so fast
    you wud think he had a record on his forehead the way Im trying to break his face
    its okay
    I got something nyce that'll make ur brain slide of floors
    U like wearing skulls,well 1 head shot can help u show off urs
    u a gangster huh..this okay
    I got something nyce that'll make ur brain slide of floors
    U like wearing skulls,well 1 head shot can help u show off urs
    nah..

    DK

    your style is wack, but thats not the worst thing
    most guys would rather give head than go against DeadKing
    coo..biggg ego, ha
    my style is like a sick n vicious attack
    whereas your style lacks depth, its like reading a map
    pretty simple..but aight I guess
    you won last week by technical decision
    nah, fuck that... you won cuz an IP was forbidden
    I'm diggin
    u didnt Torr M up, u didnt beat his ass
    it took Muffy to balance your record half-n-half
    ehh.
    back up, step off, you aint ready for this
    only time u should be standin up is after takin a piss
    too simple..
    its funny how words get twisted n canted
    the only insight Nasty gives me... is in the form of a faggot
    I liked this one

    N sight came wit a few good lines that i liked but it felt more street cypherish..if this was a street battle, I'd give it ta N sight but this is text and I feel your punches woulda hit harder in a street battle..you good though
    Deadking didn't come as hard as I think he coulda, he had a few ok lines and in my opinion the best line of the battle wit the closer he gave..

    so vote=DK
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  14. magus.

    magus. 'Pistol' Pete Magus'vich

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    maybe it's because i know a little something. Deadking isn't black.

    so half of the jokes went out the window for me, and a couple of the lines hit the other end of the page for nsight, his concepts mightve been more developed but he had 4x as much space to do it, it's kinda like posting a longer verse. anyways.

    i've got deadking taking this, because he his concepts were just a little more sucessful in their attempts at humor, than nsight was at his "raw battle lines" and he didn't go across 4 pages to do it.


    v/deadking.
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  15. N-Sight

    N-Sight Excellence Of Execution

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  16. Constrikta of CVI

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    Ok battle I guess. Let me break both verses down.

    N. Sight...

    Facebooked, slappin u wit the composition, in front of ya drunken mom
    Black boy wanna be white
    Keep invading MySpace and I'll beat the black off ya ass and ya Uncle Tom
    ...lol
    Talking like your a killer, but there's no proof in the shit u say u do
    Cuz the only killer from N.C. anyone remembers is Ray carruth
    ...this was ok
    Eat this nigga up scrap the plate, head contusions u losing Jake the snake
    Stomping this nigga head so fast
    you wud think he had a record on his forehead the way Im trying to break his face
    ...the concept was nice, executed kinda poor though.
    I got something nyce that'll make ur brain slide of floors
    U like wearing skulls,well 1 head shot can help u show off urs
    ...agian nice concept
    Im going easy, not really motivated to show u how this monster be
    Cuz then I'd be killing this nigga so bad White supremacist wud wanna sponsor me
    ...coulda had a better closer

    DeadKing...

    your style is wack, but thats not the worst thing
    most guys would rather give head than go against DeadKing
    ...no, wtf man?
    my style is like a sick n vicious attack
    whereas your style lacks depth, its like reading a map
    ...didn't do anything for me
    you won last week by technical decision
    nah, fuck that... you won cuz an IP was forbidden
    ...this really isn't a diss
    u didnt Torr M up, u didnt beat his ass
    it took Muffy to balance your record half-n-half
    ...eh
    back up, step off, you aint ready for this
    only time u should be standin up is after takin a piss
    ...lol
    its funny how words get twisted n canted
    the only insight Nasty gives me... is in the form of a faggot
    ...no, poor closer

    Sight takes this. He atleast attempted to DISS his opponent, where DeadKing had short meaningless bars. This wasn't the greatest battle here, and I've seen Sight come better. I don't know a whole lot bout DeadKing, but this was a poor performance from him. Hopefully he can show me something more in weeks to come.

    Vote- N. Sight
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  17. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    N.Sight

    Facebooked, slappin u wit the composition, in front of ya drunken mom
    Black boy wanna be white
    Keep invading MySpace and I'll beat the black off ya ass and ya Uncle Tom
    hahahaha
    Talking like your a killer, but there's no proof in the shit u say u do
    Cuz the only killer from N.C. anyone remembers is Ray carruth
    okay
    Eat this nigga up scrap the plate, head contusions u losing Jake the snake
    Stomping this nigga head so fast
    you wud think he had a record on his forehead the way Im trying to break his face
    nice
    I got something nyce that'll make ur brain slide of floors
    U like wearing skulls,well 1 head shot can help u show off urs
    braaaaaaaps nice
    Im going easy, not really motivated to show u how this monster be
    Cuz then I'd be killing this nigga so bad White supremacist wud wanna sponsor me
    okay

    DeadKing

    your style is wack, but thats not the worst thing
    most guys would rather give head than go against DeadKing
    HAHAH
    my style is like a sick n vicious attack
    whereas your style lacks depth, its like reading a map
    okay
    you won last week by technical decision
    nah, fuck that... you won cuz an IP was forbidden
    hahaha
    u didnt Torr M up, u didnt beat his ass
    it took Muffy to balance your record half-n-half
    okay
    back up, step off, you aint ready for this
    only time u should be standin up is after takin a piss
    okay
    its funny how words get twisted n canted
    the only insight Nasty gives me... is in the form of a faggot
    nice

    Not too great of a battle here but i got N.Sight taking this, harder hitting punches and funnier.

    v - N.Sight
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  18. xX_NASTY_Xx

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    N.SIGHT
    Facebooked, slappin u wit the composition, in front of ya drunken mom
    Black boy wanna be white
    Keep invading MySpace and I'll beat the black off ya ass and ya Uncle Tom
    DEADKING IS WHITE I BELIEVE.... BOOOOO FAKE PERSONAL
    Talking like your a killer, but there's no proof in the shit u say u do
    Cuz the only killer from N.C. anyone remembers is Ray carruth
    HAHA
    Eat this nigga up scrap the plate, head contusions u losing Jake the snake
    Stomping this nigga head so fast
    you wud think he had a record on his forehead the way Im trying to break his face
    NAH.... AND WAY TOO STRETCHED
    I got something nyce that'll make ur brain slide of floors
    U like wearing skulls,well 1 head shot can help u show off urs
    NICE
    Im going easy, not really motivated to show u how this monster be
    Cuz then I'd be killing this nigga so bad White supremacist wud wanna sponsor me
    HES WHITE.... BOOOOOO


    DEADKING
    your style is wack, but thats not the worst thing
    most guys would rather give head than go against DeadKing
    LOL
    my style is like a sick n vicious attack
    whereas your style lacks depth, its like reading a map
    HAHA
    you won last week by technical decision
    nah, fuck that... you won cuz an IP was forbidden
    YUP
    u didnt Torr M up, u didnt beat his ass
    it took Muffy to balance your record half-n-half
    LOL.... VOTE-MUFFFFY
    back up, step off, you aint ready for this
    only time u should be standin up is after takin a piss
    LOL
    its funny how words get twisted n canted
    the only insight Nasty gives me... is in the form of a faggot
    HAHA



    VOTE-DEADKING.... N. Sight came decent like usual but the fake personals ruined it for me.... DK's disses were witty and his personals were real
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  19. Lay Fear

    Lay Fear don't try.

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    its funny how words get twisted n canted
    the only insight Nasty gives me... is in the form of a faggot

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    I got something nyce that'll make ur brain slide of floors
    U like wearing skulls,well 1 head shot can help u show off urs


    aside from quotables..DK had that one decent line..n the rest of his verse was worded wayy to shortly to create a decent punch with..didn't have anythinggg..an N. Sight had that one decent one..that hit less harder than dead's..but he had an overall okay verse..that was better than D's..

    v/N sight.
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  20. xX_NASTY_Xx

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    N. Sight wins
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