[WK 15]19. toil 3-1 vs 20. Voodu 3-1 (Vote!)

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  1. xX_NASTY_Xx

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  2. Voodu

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    word up.. going about 20
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  3. toil

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    ^that filler is cool, too bad the punch is a shit diss
    you get a set up, then ruin it - like tennis players with no fitness
    my crew fucked ya girl shitless, she got on her knees in the club..
    then begged for attention from Cox, more than J.D in Scrubs
    I've seen you hug girls, they take one sniff and theyre panicking
    then they stay away from the Pitt more than Jennifer Aniston
    I feel like Barack in this league, not cus I'm black or devoted
    but cus I'm past the Hil, and still I'm backed by the voters
    you think youre dope on stage, well heres the news, dun..
    the crowd aren't shouting `du won, they're telling you to do one
    and now I wanna change my name, not cus this fake will beat me
    but cus Toil means hard work, and youre making this too easy
    fuck your cheesy ass style, mines fresh so I better win
    go check the dictionary, Voodu's a cheap alternative to Metasin
    still think you'll get the win? can't be the brightest of kids
    or have you just lost your Mynd quicker Braggin Writes did?
    you were signed in at 3-0, but then ya luck changed gear
    nickname you Amy Winehouse, the way Drugs fucked up your career
    its clear you're a fat guy, wearing triple X-L tanks
    spent ya whole like getting over-Fed, like Nadal in the ranks




    dayuuumn I'm on fire this week
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  4. Voodu

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    word. good shit.



    look. i’m a man of the present. so fuck your 411 history
    really. I don’t give a fuck how many d/r’s u needed for a victory
    so get to grips with reality. what am I sayin? retract that
    in reality ur wack ass ain’t getting close to a champ match
    now u shud’ve never came back. ur garbage. I honestly speak true
    shit. if sfsportsfan had fans, then their fans could probably beat you
    I seen u droppin shit punches son and I ain’t feelin’ none
    & if u ran some good lines – whats the price? and who’d u steal ‘em from?
    man, I’d trash this fags spine. but the paralysis will be deceitful
    coz u’ll see him with the broke back, mountin guys like they filmin the sequel
    i’ve peeped ur smooth talk, & u consider urself too raw to quit
    yet we ain’t never seen t bone, coz chicks are known to put a fork in it
    also, u drop all ur problems on ur mom. but I won’t be quick to diss you
    coz her voice is so hoarse, that I’d prolly saddle her with my shit to
    now i’m comin off a loss. and I admit, I got beat with true ease
    ain’t been a faster KO from drugs since u slipped ur last date the roofies
    on opposite sides of the world, but my punches’ll wreck ya face in
    when I chain ‘em thru 5 dudes, & give ya jaw six degrees of separation
    so if u really think ur winning, then kid u must be dense
    if it’s a costly journey to the top, then I’m travelling at ur expense


    yep.
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  5. Pablo BaZooka

    Pablo BaZooka Ka-BOOM Beoutchess!!

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    Damn mane, I was jus except anotha Vet gettin undeserve'd props, but shiiiiit I feelin ya son..lol, nah fa'real mane, dat verse was damn good. Alotta lines had clever humor and landed well, plus the wording kept it smooth n very readable. Overall 1 of da better posters here, no dickwranglin intended mane.

    Iono mane, da verse had much-a valley & peak. Eitha ya lines were iffy in nature or I jus didn't like 'em at all. Ya not weak mane, its jus da awkward wording & semi-forced punches isn't too appealin ta reader(or at least me), an iiight verse, but not enuff ta take a win: vote = Toil.
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  6. Played Punches

    Played Punches Punches Sooo Well Played

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    okay heres the Scoop like vanilla ice cream

    Toil, the opener wasnt that hott, but you start to pick up after that. the 'Cox' line was decent, ok ok. haha the jennifer aniston line could have been better if the wordin' was changed but still a cool concept. the 'over the hill' line was prolly the best in the battle. and towards the end you start to get a little personal which is good. but in the end it was a solid verse with creativity and a good impact.

    overall - 3.5 fruit loops

    Voodu, decent opener... i can see where your goin with this. sportsfan line was pretty weak. broke back mountain wasnt anything special really. you were followin' toward the end with some good personals but nothin too exciting... the 'Drug's' line was hott, but after that i wasnt really satisfied... solid verse i'd have to say, but not enough hard hittin' material to over take toil... your still a really cool awesome guy tho!!

    overall - 3.26 fruit loops

    vote - Toil

    PLAYED PUNCHES FOR VOTER OF THE WEEK!!!
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  7. Aloe

    Aloe www.myspace.com/aloemusic

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    Toil:

    that filler is cool, too bad the punch is a shit diss
    you get a set up, then ruin it - like tennis players with no fitness
    eh
    my crew fucked ya girl shitless, she got on her knees in the club..
    then begged for attention from Cox, more than J.D in Scrubs
    lol- but only cus i love that show
    I've seen you hug girls, they take one sniff and theyre panicking
    then they stay away from the Pitt more than Jennifer Aniston
    ehh
    I feel like Barack in this league, not cus I'm black or devoted
    but cus I'm past the Hil, and still I'm backed by the voters
    OVER the hil
    you think youre dope on stage, well heres the news, dun..
    the crowd aren't shouting `du won, they're telling you to do one
    eh
    and now I wanna change my name, not cus this fake will beat me
    but cus Toil means hard work, and youre making this too easy
    okay
    fuck your cheesy ass style, mines fresh so I better win
    go check the dictionary, Voodu's a cheap alternative to Metasin
    haha nice
    still think you'll get the win? can't be the brightest of kids
    or have you just lost your Mynd quicker Braggin Writes did?
    stupid baron
    you were signed in at 3-0, but then ya luck changed gear
    nickname you Amy Winehouse, the way Drugs fucked up your career
    super duper played
    its clear you're a fat guy, wearing triple X-L tanks
    spent ya whole like getting over-Fed, like Nadal in the ranks
    okay


    look. i’m a man of the present. so fuck your 411 history
    really. I don’t give a fuck how many d/r’s u needed for a victory
    okay
    so get to grips with reality. what am I sayin? retract that
    in reality ur wack ass ain’t getting close to a champ match
    doesnt really hit
    now u shud’ve never came back. ur garbage. I honestly speak true
    shit. if sfsportsfan had fans, then their fans could probably beat you
    lol
    I seen u droppin shit punches son and I ain’t feelin’ none
    & if u ran some good lines – whats the price? and who’d u steal ‘em from?
    eh
    man, I’d trash this fags spine. but the paralysis will be deceitful
    coz u’ll see him with the broke back, mountin guys like they filmin the sequel
    decent
    i’ve peeped ur smooth talk, & u consider urself too raw to quit
    yet we ain’t never seen t bone, coz chicks are known to put a fork in it
    heh
    also, u drop all ur problems on ur mom. but I won’t be quick to diss you
    coz her voice is so hoarse, that I’d prolly saddle her with my shit to
    plaaaaayed
    now i’m comin off a loss. and I admit, I got beat with true ease
    ain’t been a faster KO from drugs since u slipped ur last date the roofies
    lol
    on opposite sides of the world, but my punches’ll wreck ya face in
    when I chain ‘em thru 5 dudes, & give ya jaw six degrees of separation
    eh
    so if u really think ur winning, then kid u must be dense
    if it’s a costly journey to the top, then I’m travelling at ur expense
    nice


    cool battle. honestly i was expecting a little more, but it really wasnt bad. toil, welcome back. it seemed like you were reaching a lil bit with the concepts- did you read a tv guide before writing or something? vood... pretty cool verse, had a few eh lines but overall it was pretty nice. i wish some of your other lines hit a lil harder, but they just fell short a bit.

    i guess i gotta go with vote = toil since overall i liked his verse a lil more...... i liked that metasin line a lot, but you gotta step it up man
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  8. T.a.C

    T.a.C Guest

    i liked this battle. love any battle where my name gets brought up lmfao.

    toil:

    my crew fucked ya girl shitless, she got on her knees in the club..
    then begged for attention from Cox, more than J.D in Scrubs

    I've seen you hug girls, they take one sniff and theyre panicking
    then they stay away from the Pitt more than Jennifer Aniston

    I feel like Barack in this league, not cus I'm black or devoted
    but cus I'm past the Hil, and still I'm backed by the voters

    you think youre dope on stage, well heres the news, dun..
    the crowd aren't shouting `du won, they're telling you to do one

    fuck your cheesy ass style, mines fresh so I better win
    go check the dictionary, Voodu's a cheap alternative to Metasin

    still think you'll get the win? can't be the brightest of kids
    or have you just lost your Mynd quicker Braggin Writes did?

    you were signed in at 3-0, but then ya luck changed gear
    nickname you Amy Winehouse, the way Drugs fucked up your career

    its clear you're a fat guy, wearing triple X-L tanks
    spent ya whole like getting over-Fed, like Nadal in the ranks


    voodu:

    look. i’m a man of the present. so fuck your 411 history
    really. I don’t give a fuck how many d/r’s u needed for a victory

    now u shud’ve never came back. ur garbage. I honestly speak true
    shit. if sfsportsfan had fans, then their fans could probably beat you

    I seen u droppin shit punches son and I ain’t feelin’ none
    & if u ran some good lines – whats the price? and who’d u steal ‘em from?

    so if u really think ur winning, then kid u must be dense
    if it’s a costly journey to the top, then I’m travelling at ur expense


    voodu gets extra points for throwin my name in there but thats not enough to get him the win in this one.. good battle for both of you but my vote goes to

    vote-toil
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  9. DaTrusHurtz

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    ^that filler is cool, too bad the punch is a shit diss
    you get a set up, then ruin it - like tennis players with no fitness
    nice concept, i woulda finished it differently but good opener
    my crew fucked ya girl shitless, she got on her knees in the club..
    then begged for attention from Cox, more than J.D in Scrubs
    its alright, just not feelin' it personally that much
    I've seen you hug girls, they take one sniff and theyre panicking
    then they stay away from the Pitt more than Jennifer Aniston
    okay, not that harsh, but its decent
    I feel like Barack in this league, not cus I'm black or devoted
    but cus I'm past the Hil, and still I'm backed by the voters
    dope stuff, pretty good line here
    you think youre dope on stage, well heres the news, dun..
    the crowd aren't shouting `du won, they're telling you to do one
    nice nameplay, another hard hitter
    and now I wanna change my name, not cus this fake will beat me
    but cus Toil means hard work, and youre making this too easy
    ehh i'm not a fan of usin' nameplays on urself, always thought its kinda cheesy
    fuck your cheesy ass style, mines fresh so I better win
    go check the dictionary, Voodu's a cheap alternative to Metasin
    hahaha, ah man this was pretty good
    still think you'll get the win? can't be the brightest of kids
    or have you just lost your Mynd quicker Braggin Writes did?
    ehh, came off as kinda played
    you were signed in at 3-0, but then ya luck changed gear
    nickname you Amy Winehouse, the way Drugs fucked up your career
    decent personal on him, pretty good
    its clear you're a fat guy, wearing triple X-L tanks
    spent ya whole like getting over-Fed, like Nadal in the ranks
    its okay for a fat joke, but its just not that witty

    vs.

    look. i’m a man of the present. so fuck your 411 history
    really. I don’t give a fuck how many d/r’s u needed for a victory
    alright, but for an opener i think u coulda come a little harder
    so get to grips with reality. what am I sayin? retract that
    in reality ur wack ass ain’t getting close to a champ match
    its just kinda too simple n' is lackin' the wit
    now u shud’ve never came back. ur garbage. I honestly speak true
    shit. if sfsportsfan had fans, then their fans could probably beat you
    haha, good stuff, i'm feelin' this
    I seen u droppin shit punches son and I ain’t feelin’ none
    & if u ran some good lines – whats the price? and who’d u steal ‘em from?
    concept here is good, but i think u coulda worded it a little more effectively
    man, I’d trash this fags spine. but the paralysis will be deceitful
    coz u’ll see him with the broke back, mountin guys like they filmin the sequel
    a lotta these lines been done.. i think they were bein' done in the time u disappeared so thats why u ain't know, otherwise it'd be good
    i’ve peeped ur smooth talk, & u consider urself too raw to quit
    yet we ain’t never seen t bone, coz chicks are known to put a fork in it
    hahaha, good nameplay man, nice stuff
    also, u drop all ur problems on ur mom. but I won’t be quick to diss you
    coz her voice is so hoarse, that I’d prolly saddle her with my shit to
    nah, its kinda played, just didnt come off as real original
    now i’m comin off a loss. and I admit, I got beat with true ease
    ain’t been a faster KO from drugs since u slipped ur last date the roofies
    i see what u were goin' for, but i think u dissed urself a lil too much to get to the punchline.
    on opposite sides of the world, but my punches’ll wreck ya face in
    when I chain ‘em thru 5 dudes, & give ya jaw six degrees of separation
    haha, this was some good raw humor here, dope shit
    so if u really think ur winning, then kid u must be dense
    if it’s a costly journey to the top, then I’m travelling at ur expense
    nah, too simple of a line

    Toil, pretty solid verse, i'd say the opener, hill, du won, cheap alternative to metasin, and amy winehouse lines were all quotable so thats a lot of hitters. Voodu, u had some dope shit too with the sportsfan, t bone, and six degrees of separation. Thing is, u had some lines which were either played or a little too simple, i seen u come so much better so i was a bit disappointed. I think Toil got this with more quotables and more consistency.

    Vote - Toil
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  10. xX_NASTY_Xx

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  11. The Old Man

    The Old Man ★★★★★★★★★★★

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    Toil took it basically... Just a lot more hitters and a lot more consistency here, I mean, Voodu isnt bad. He could do with shaving off a couple syllables to his lines to shorter them up and make 'em more snappy, but he isnt bad at all. Toil just trounced him this week, word to whoever asked if he red a TV mag before posting cos a lot of them seemed celebrity or TV related but w/e this was a good battle between you both, Toil was just the more dominant force here.

    He gets my vote.
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  12. Yung Troy

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    vote=Toil

    came pretty decent, didn't have any extraordinary punches but they were pretty okay though..I liked this line
    I've seen you hug girls, they take one sniff and theyre panicking
    then they stay away from the Pitt more than Jennifer Aniston
    it was coo..

    Voodu came at it aight too but just not hard enough although I was feeling this line

    I seen u droppin shit punches son and I ain’t feelin’ none
    & if u ran some good lines – whats the price? and who’d u steal ‘em from?
    this was aight..most of your punches were just aight or weak

    so vote=Toil
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  13. Trombley

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    v/ Toil

    he had maybe a concept or 2 i felt was better this week.


    ^that filler is cool, too bad the punch is a shit diss
    you get a set up, then ruin it - like tennis players with no fitness
    I feel like Barack in this league, not cus I'm black or devoted
    but cus I'm past the Hil, and still I'm backed by the voters
    fuck your cheesy ass style, mines fresh so I better win
    go check the dictionary, Voodu's a cheap alternative to Metasin


    scrubs line was kinda cool

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    I seen u droppin shit punches son and I ain’t feelin’ none
    & if u ran some good lines – whats the price? and who’d u steal ‘em from?

    u coulda worded this to be super ill..

    on opposite sides of the world, but my punches’ll wreck ya face in
    when I chain ‘em thru 5 dudes, & give ya jaw six degrees of separation


    this was weird funny, i just read some shit on the 6 degrees last night

    anyways. a solid battle. neither came too great, seen tons better from both.
    close, but i felt a lil more of toils content


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  15. criticize

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    ^that filler is cool, too bad the punch is a shit diss
    you get a set up, then ruin it - like tennis players with no fitness

    I've seen you hug girls, they take one sniff and theyre panicking
    then they stay away from the Pitt more than Jennifer Aniston

    you were signed in at 3-0, but then ya luck changed gear
    nickname you Amy Winehouse, the way Drugs fucked up your career
    ___________________________

    ok the t bone line was your best vu, i duno it seeemed you didnt really try the whole half of your verse was pretty crap it got better slightly but no real good lines or quotables iv seen you do better than this, this was dissapoining.
    toil you had a cool verse. the set up line was cool. definatly my fav of the battle, then you had alot of ok lines not spectacular but solid hits that were more than enough to win this shit with ease.

    v-toil.
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  16. Constrikta of CVI

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    Hah.. wadup Toil. This battle seemed one sided. Toil came with some heat, voodu responded in a tired fashion. Anyways.. I'ma break down both verses.

    Toil...

    ^that filler is cool, too bad the punch is a shit diss
    you get a set up, then ruin it - like tennis players with no fitness
    ...good open
    my crew fucked ya girl shitless, she got on her knees in the club..
    then begged for attention from Cox, more than J.D in Scrubs
    ...lol
    I've seen you hug girls, they take one sniff and theyre panicking
    then they stay away from the Pitt more than Jennifer Aniston
    ...ok
    I feel like Barack in this league, not cus I'm black or devoted
    but cus I'm past the Hil, and still I'm backed by the voters
    ...should be over the hil.. but still ok
    you think youre dope on stage, well heres the news, dun..
    the crowd aren't shouting `du won, they're telling you to do one
    ..lol
    and now I wanna change my name, not cus this fake will beat me
    but cus Toil means hard work, and youre making this too easy
    ...self nameplays are iffy, iono bout this
    fuck your cheesy ass style, mines fresh so I better win
    go check the dictionary, Voodu's a cheap alternative to Metasin
    ...sickness
    still think you'll get the win? can't be the brightest of kids
    or have you just lost your Mynd quicker Braggin Writes did?
    ...lol
    you were signed in at 3-0, but then ya luck changed gear
    nickname you Amy Winehouse, the way Drugs fucked up your career
    ...good
    its clear you're a fat guy, wearing triple X-L tanks
    spent ya whole like getting over-Fed, like Nadal in the ranks
    ...ok close

    Voodu...


    look. i’m a man of the present. so fuck your 411 history
    really. I don’t give a fuck how many d/r’s u needed for a victory
    ...ehh
    so get to grips with reality. what am I sayin? retract that
    in reality ur wack ass ain’t getting close to a champ match
    ...nah man
    now u shud’ve never came back. ur garbage. I honestly speak true
    shit. if sfsportsfan had fans, then their fans could probably beat you
    ...lol
    I seen u droppin shit punches son and I ain’t feelin’ none
    & if u ran some good lines – whats the price? and who’d u steal ‘em from?
    ...nah
    man, I’d trash this fags spine. but the paralysis will be deceitful
    coz u’ll see him with the broke back, mountin guys like they filmin the sequel
    ...this was decent
    i’ve peeped ur smooth talk, & u consider urself too raw to quit
    yet we ain’t never seen t bone, coz chicks are known to put a fork in it
    ...nah, can't say I want to SEE toil bone.. a lil gay
    also, u drop all ur problems on ur mom. but I won’t be quick to diss you
    coz her voice is so hoarse, that I’d prolly saddle her with my shit to
    ...ok
    now i’m comin off a loss. and I admit, I got beat with true ease
    ain’t been a faster KO from drugs since u slipped ur last date the roofies
    ...ok
    on opposite sides of the world, but my punches’ll wreck ya face in
    when I chain ‘em thru 5 dudes, & give ya jaw six degrees of separation
    ...I ain't get it
    so if u really think ur winning, then kid u must be dense
    if it’s a costly journey to the top, then I’m travelling at ur expense
    ...not the best closer

    Voodu you need to take the concepts you have and put more thought into them. You had some good shit brewing, it's just that your execution wasn't that great. Toil brought straight forward hard hitting punches to this battle, and your defense agianst it was mediocre punches with a weaker execution. Voodu your flow was a lil off too, while Toil's was more fluid.

    Vote- Toil
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  17. magus.

    magus. 'Pistol' Pete Magus'vich

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    v/toil

    my crew fucked ya girl shitless, she got on her knees in the club..
    then begged for attention from Cox, more than J.D in Scrubs

    fuck your cheesy ass style, mines fresh so I better win
    go check the dictionary, Voodu's a cheap alternative to Metasin

    vs.

    now u shud’ve never came back. ur garbage. I honestly speak true
    shit. if sfsportsfan had fans, then their fans could probably beat you
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