[WK 15]15. -=Kolli$ion=- 3-3 vs 16. Calibre 4-1 (Vote!)

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  1. xX_NASTY_Xx

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  2. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    The peoples champ is here.
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  3. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    extension friday, NASTY my nigga
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    extension granted
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  5. -=Kolli$ion=-

    -=Kolli$ion=- God's Favorite

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    I didn't say you could have an extention guy...
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  6. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    my bad, fell asleep on this one, gonna have to be 12.
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  7. -=Kolli$ion=-

    -=Kolli$ion=- God's Favorite

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    I knew you'd pm Nasty to try and gain extra push
    Cause it's no secret that Cal's use to 'People Punch'in their cock through his bush
    Talk about taking the easy street to champin the thrown
    I'll be on my way by takin this battle off your so called fans hate votes alone
    I mean no one in the league fears this text geek
    You leave so much duck sauce on the board one would think that you were Tekneek
    Nothing about you draws attention other than the fact that your weak
    This fag'll prolly throw match just so he doesn't have to face Def next week
    Them nameplays wont gain you a vote just some static from peeps
    You even said it yourself...your own pre-written garbage put you to sleep
    Herd 'Jaded' and laughed hard...let me give you some tips
    Loose the lisp then grip long enough to relaese Doughs dick from your lips
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  8. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    wow i fell asleep and almost forgot about this, shit. nigs gonna hate me..

    I never ever have time for this shit, anyway dont wanna dissapoint so

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    This bastards been ignored.. so guess, Its time to talk trash a litte more
    first, smack him to the floor..
    .. they'll call him amy winehouse, The way I land 'CRAK-IN' on the jaw.
    I'm matched against a prawn, & copy n pasting is known to get ya endless beats
    especially since K' like to do it n' DRAG, its one of his homosexual tendancies
    I'll beat you with a sentence b.. now ya rhyming with the beast ..
    plus my verses like alicias thickness since '06.. every week its full'er keyes.
    So laughter'll pour in.. when they read the ragged bars this bastards escorting..
    they carry more of a jagged edge than the r 'n b group bus that they tour in.
    n' I'll keep stomping this nerd, since he posting a strong bit of blurb..
    n' hit him so hard, the only thing Ko-lied-in will be ya coffin 6 feet under the earth..
    n its no suprise that you'll fall, tryna stand high but wont fly in the brawl..
    now I guess i'll refrain from punches now, since you never have none in ya verses at all.

    5-1
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  9. Eusich

    Eusich the incredible.

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    koll, blah, this was bad, i wasn't feeling anything about this verse, i feel as though i've been being harsh to verses all day but yours was the worst, the opener was terrible, the next line made me think you were gonna redeem yourself with some sick ass word play but you just really thought that throne was spelled thrown (also, loose/lose), the rest were blah as well, nothing good conceptually and nothing notable about the verse, the closer was almost semi slightly sort of kinda funny but not even because the whole dough/cal thing is played, and what's worse is that you showed your true colors with the whole tek reference, but what a terrible alias you are

    cal, too much commentary in the beginning before the verse, it was unneeded as is me commenting on it, nonetheless this was bad, maybe not quite as bad as the opposition but wtf, this entire battle was wack, your opener was just as terrible as kollisions, the drag line was wack, key's line was wack, jagged edge was simple played and only slightly above wack, coffin line was forced, closer was decent but didn't rhyme well and was very generic

    overall, both were bad, but the better of the two was calibre
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  10. DaTrusHurtz

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    I knew you'd pm Nasty to try and gain extra push
    Cause it's no secret that Cal's use to 'People Punch'in their cock through his bush
    ehhh this came off as kinda gay, sorry man
    Talk about taking the easy street to champin the thrown
    I'll be on my way by takin this battle off your so called fans hate votes alone
    pretty good, it was simple but theres some truth to it so it hit
    I mean no one in the league fears this text geek
    You leave so much duck sauce on the board one would think that you were Tekneek
    nah, the concept here is fine, but don't like the way ya used it
    Nothing about you draws attention other than the fact that your weak
    This fag'll prolly throw match just so he doesn't have to face Def next week
    coulda been a good personal cuz a lotta people were sayin' this could happen, but this woulda been far better if u'd incorporated some wit into it
    Them nameplays wont gain you a vote just some static from peeps
    You even said it yourself...your own pre-written garbage put you to sleep
    haha, pretty good personal based on what he said, nice stuff
    Herd 'Jaded' and laughed hard...let me give you some tips
    Loose the lisp then grip long enough to relaese Doughs dick from your lips
    nah, u coulda done a lot more with the dough thing

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    This bastards been ignored.. so guess, Its time to talk trash a litte more
    first, smack him to the floor..
    .. they'll call him amy winehouse, The way I land 'CRAK-IN' on the jaw.
    nahh this came off as really newbish, just didn't work
    I'm matched against a prawn, & copy n pasting is known to get ya endless beats
    especially since K' like to do it n' DRAG, its one of his homosexual tendancies
    if u could drag things on this site maybe this would work, but u can't so it came off as ineffective
    I'll beat you with a sentence b.. now ya rhyming with the beast ..
    plus my verses like alicias thickness since '06.. every week its full'er keyes.
    would be good, but alicia keys stuff is played
    So laughter'll pour in.. when they read the ragged bars this bastards escorting..
    they carry more of a jagged edge than the r 'n b group bus that they tour in.
    alright, its not bad, but doesn't really stand out
    n' I'll keep stomping this nerd, since he posting a strong bit of blurb..
    n' hit him so hard, the only thing Ko-lied-in will be ya coffin 6 feet under the earth..
    nice nameplay, i was feelin' this
    n its no suprise that you'll fall, tryna stand high but wont fly in the brawl..
    now I guess i'll refrain from punches now, since you never have none in ya verses at all.
    its okay, kinda simple for a closer, but alright

    Kollision, u had this easy and u gave him a chance. I respect ur whole verse was personals with the peoples champ, hate voting, ducking, defcon, and john dough, but all of them I felt u didn't execute that well. The sleep line was really nice though. Calibre's concepts weren't as good and not nearly as personal as all he had was a nameplay, tho it was a decent one. The wording and execution was okay, just too many simple or played ideas.

    Tough call here in that Calibre's verse was written better, but Kollison had the concepts and came more personal. I want to give it to Kollision just for that, but he just didn't capitalize on his advantage of having a lotta easy things he could diss calibre on.

    Vote - Calibre
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  11. Caveat1

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    I knew you'd pm Nasty to try and gain extra push
    Cause it's no secret that Cal's use to 'People Punch'in their cock through his bush
    GOOD
    Talk about taking the easy street to champin the thrown
    I'll be on my way by takin this battle off your so called fans hate votes alone
    OK
    I mean no one in the league fears this text geek
    You leave so much duck sauce on the board one would think that you were Tekneek
    OK
    Nothing about you draws attention other than the fact that your weak
    This fag'll prolly throw match just so he doesn't have to face Def next week
    NICE PERSONAL
    Them nameplays wont gain you a vote just some static from peeps
    You even said it yourself...your own pre-written garbage put you to sleep
    EHHH
    Herd 'Jaded' and laughed hard...let me give you some tips
    Loose the lisp then grip long enough to relaese Doughs dick from your lips
    OK

    This bastards been ignored.. so guess, Its time to talk trash a litte more
    first, smack him to the floor..
    .. they'll call him amy winehouse, The way I land 'CRAK-IN' on the jaw.
    OK
    I'm matched against a prawn, & copy n pasting is known to get ya endless beats
    especially since K' like to do it n' DRAG, its one of his homosexual tendancies
    NICE
    I'll beat you with a sentence b.. now ya rhyming with the beast ..
    plus my verses like alicias thickness since '06.. every week its full'er keyes.
    HAHA GOOD
    So laughter'll pour in.. when they read the ragged bars this bastards escorting..
    they carry more of a jagged edge than the r 'n b group bus that they tour in.
    OK
    n' I'll keep stomping this nerd, since he posting a strong bit of blurb..
    n' hit him so hard, the only thing Ko-lied-in will be ya coffin 6 feet under the earth..
    GOOD WORDPLAY
    n its no suprise that you'll fall, tryna stand high but wont fly in the brawl..
    now I guess i'll refrain from punches now, since you never have none in ya verses at all.
    COULDVE USED THIS CONCEPT BETTER


    DECENT BATTLE, WASNT REAL IMPRESSED BUT I SEE EVERYTHING WAS ALLEGEDLY KEYED. CALIBRE HAD MORE QUOTABLES AND A BETTER SELECTION OF DISSES. KOLL HAD MORE PERSONALS BUT DIDNT DEVELOP THEM WELL ENOUGH
    V-CALIBRE
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  12. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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  13. Agnindra

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    Honestly, neither verse had much in the way of punches, but Kollision came with some OK personals, and I'll take personals over bad punches any day. But to expand, Cal's verse was jus littered with bland and played concepts. The Alicia Keys, Jagged Edge, and drag lines were all pretty blah IMO. Better wording would have definitely helped these lines out, as those lines were just insanely long, causing your verse to drag. Try getting to the point of it all.

    v/Kollision
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  14. L. Kross

    L. Kross His Highness

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    Ugh, not a good battle, Kollision didn't have the well structured rhyme schemes, Cal didn't have the english wit, Kollision had a couple alright punches. Duck sauce line was probably the best line in the battle. Cal's shit was hurried and rushed and it shows in the content. I think he tried to do just enough to win the battle, failed and fell just short.

    Vote - Koll
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  15. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    ^ ha, if ur countin that vote then im going to str8 vote against this kid on every battle
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  16. xX_NASTY_Xx

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    calibre wins
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