[WK 14] CHAMP: 1. MetaSin 12-1 v. 2. kungfugrip 6-0 (Vote!)

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  1. Quriosity

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  3. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    ok.
    TMU is Heaven.
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  4. kungfugrip

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    i'm posting tomorrow
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  5. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    Post as Many as you wrote...


    This fag'll get a right hook that'll leave his gayness done
    so when u see K-o'd, it wont be cuz his boyfriend made him cum
    He jerks n he slobs, n has faggots workin his rod
    No wonder dudes try to score with Foos Ball's taking a turn at the knob
    He can pop off, but cheap bullets will stop this kid tonight
    Because getting gassed'll make this holo-caust a Grip… his life
    I got a solution for the win; ya rank will sink to the bottom
    Because you'll get rectify even start to think you're a problem
    riders helped u out on B-Boys; you cheat when ur winnin
    so when that supporting cast put the fix against Fracture, u aint need a physician
    Your claim to fame is beatin Resin, but I ain't fearin u, fellow
    cuz truth is Resonate you sooo bad u should be hearin an echo
    so put the riders away, food for thought got u mindless today
    cuz you're steppin up to the plate expecting second... like a buffet
    the way I'm sonnin Kung explains how I be tappin up his mom...
    fucked her once... and I re-lay her when I pass her my baton
    n not only me... I can't even count all the dudes ya mom been hittin
    her pussy's a grudge she doesn't hold, cuz she says its all forgiven
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  8. kungfugrip

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    the real champ's here, laughin at how silly u been
    Sincere now, but i'm lying if i say he ever will be again
    i don't need science to tell me what u write'll be dense
    one punch & Synapse so long, he'll wake up on my 3rd title defense
    see. nameplays aren't hard. ur whole style needs a revamp son
    i'd drop a million more. but noone wants to relive your champ run
    that shit was a crime. u ain't ready to be flexin' with mine
    & ur verse shows u ain't cut out for more than E or Exodus lines
    quit phonin' it in faggot. Metasin's such a wack learner
    i'ma fry his ass on the front since his verse took the back burner
    yeah we both rep Precision. don't be stressin' the joint
    we got a voting circle, but everyone considers you the decimal point
    i was lookin' for an easy win, and i'm gettin' it steady
    MetaSin's more like placebo. i saw u & i'm feelin' better already
    i'm smash you kid, clobber u and watch this dipshit drop
    so u can kiss the belt goodbye, & cry while i wipe the lipstick off
    you beatin' me? stop lying, beggin' & wishin' u geek
    when i T.a.C on the win, he'll prolly be ur competition next week


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  9. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    This fag'll get a right hook that'll leave his gayness done
    so when u see K-o'd, it wont be cuz his boyfriend made him cum
    (nice open)
    He jerks n he slobs, n has faggots workin his rod
    No wonder dudes try to score with Foos Ball's taking a turn at the knob
    (lol..takin a turn at the knob..lol works perfectly..nice)
    He can pop off, but cheap bullets will stop this kid tonight
    Because getting gassed'll make this holo-caust a Grip… his life
    (ehh ive used this wordplay in the past)
    I got a solution for the win; ya rank will sink to the bottom
    Because you'll get rectify even start to think you're a problem
    (niice..fresh)
    riders helped u out on B-Boys; you cheat when ur winnin
    so when that supporting cast put the fix against Fracture, u aint need a physician
    (heh)
    Your claim to fame is beatin Resin, but I ain't fearin u, fellow
    cuz truth is Resonate you sooo bad u should be hearin an echo
    (nice)
    so put the riders away, food for thought got u mindless today
    cuz you're steppin up to the plate expecting second... like a buffet
    (no)
    the way I'm sonnin Kung explains how I be tappin up his mom...
    fucked her once... and I re-lay her when I pass her my baton
    (lol)
    n not only me... I can't even count all the dudes ya mom been hittin
    her pussy's a grudge she doesn't hold, cuz she says its all forgiven
    (cool again)


    had the wordplay steez this week some cool shit in there overall good verse



    the real champ's here, laughin at how silly u been
    Sincere now, but i'm lying if i say he ever will be again
    (nice open)
    i don't need science to tell me what u write'll be dense
    one punch & Synapse so long, he'll wake up on my 3rd title defense
    (damn..sin naps)
    see. nameplays aren't hard. ur whole style needs a revamp son
    i'd drop a million more. but noone wants to relive your champ run
    (oh shit..truth to this as well)
    that shit was a crime. u ain't ready to be flexin' with mine
    & ur verse shows u ain't cut out for more than E or Exodus lines
    (ehhhhh)
    quit phonin' it in faggot. Metasin's such a wack learner
    i'ma fry his ass on the front since his verse took the back burner
    (ok)
    yeah we both rep Precision. don't be stressin' the joint
    we got a voting circle, but everyone considers you the decimal point
    (ok)
    i was lookin' for an easy win, and i'm gettin' it steady
    MetaSin's more like placebo. i saw u & i'm feelin' better already
    (heh)
    i'm smash you kid, clobber u and watch this dipshit drop
    so u can kiss the belt goodbye, & cry while i wipe the lipstick off
    (lol)

    you beatin' me? stop lying, beggin' & wishin' u geek
    when i T.a.C on the win, he'll prolly be ur competition next week
    (ehhh nah)









    this was fucking close to me.

    meta had the better wit/creativity

    grip had personals.. with the pointing out of the nameplays and such


    both had two couplets i didnt like.

    however grip had two couplets that were ok rather than nice or "lol" like the backburner wasnt even that creative to me..ur gonna fry him on the front? lol yknow..not much behind that


    other than the two i didnt like meta had all cool shit..not even a decent line..all were above average





    although i think this is very close...its all on opinion now..not even obvious who the winner is


    seriously


    i got meta based on the things i have said previously


    v/meta
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  10. Eusich

    Eusich the incredible.

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    okay, meta - you had some good ideas as far as wordplay goes, some real creative shit or flips from like 01 drops that never got any good recognition (which there is nothing wrong with that), nevertheless i dug it, that and it was short and sweet and to the point, opener, Grip, and fracture lines were probably my least favorite with everything else consistently good to dope, oh well now that i read i guess i wasn't too much feeling the baton and buffet lines either with the buffet probably being the worst of the bunch and 3 i first stated being closer to decent/good, the rest were nice though and i especially liked the closer, rectify, and echo with the foos ball line being pretty nice too, overall this wasn't as consistent as i originally thought but it still had its strong points and was consistently above average at least

    grip - opener was nice, followup was nice too, third bar was decent, E/Exodus lines was semi-decent, about the same as the third really, not bad but not over the top either, just quick disses with evidence to back it up, new few were pretty blah up until the belt line which was cool and the tac was a weak closer but semi-funny, overall you started well and finished in a dull fashion, seems as though you lost interest the same time as i did, overall it was still good for the most part

    close match, not what i expected either with these short verses and only a couple quoteables, i'd pull a name out the hat but let's break it up to give better reasoning

    okay, i got foos, rectify, echo, and forgiven for meta as nice/dope, then i got cum and baton as good, physician as played, holocaust as forced, and buffet as unworthy

    for grip, i got the first 2 bars and lipstick as nice/dope, third and fourth bars as good, tac as decent, decimal point, back burner, and placebo were all decent/borderline wack, i didn't like the back burner at all and i actually couldn't believe a writer of your caliber would post that especially in such an anticipated champ match, decimal point was a stretch and should have been left out, and placebo was stretching it too

    overall, i think meta's dope lines were doper in creativity than kung's while kung's were rawer, but also i think kung's weak lines were weaker

    so, meta wins it for me in a very close one
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  11. D.LOKE

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    VOTE: GRIP

    REASON: I got a quote tie here. Both had excellent wordplay within they verse(Especially Meta) but both had one or 2 lines that I think they coulda did without stuff like the buffet line and the back burner thing didn’t really seem like champ match lines. This was a really really close match to me that coulda went either way but I think Grip finished his verse a lil stronger as aposed to Meta it seem like he was running outta steam at the end and had to resort to momfuck jokes. Still I think what made me lean towards Grip is I think he executed his personals just a lil bit better. Meta’s was cool too but a lot of it was based off how Kung gets dickrode. Kung had stuff about crew history and Meta’s style and things.




    He jerks n he slobs, n has faggots workin his rod
    No wonder dudes try to score with Foos Ball's taking a turn at the knob
    riders helped u out on B-Boys; you cheat when ur winnin
    so when that supporting cast put the fix against Fracture, u aint need a physician
    Your claim to fame is beatin Resin, but I ain't fearin u, fellow
    cuz truth is Resonate you sooo bad u should be hearin an echo
    the way I'm sonnin Kung explains how I be tappin up his mom...
    fucked her once... and I re-lay her when I pass her my baton

    VS

    i don't need science to tell me what u write'll be dense
    one punch & Synapse so long, he'll wake up on my 3rd title defense
    see. nameplays aren't hard. ur whole style needs a revamp son
    i'd drop a million more. but noone wants to relive your champ run
    i'm smash you kid, clobber u and watch this dipshit drop
    so u can kiss the belt goodbye, & cry while i wipe the lipstick off
    you beatin' me? stop lying, beggin' & wishin' u geek
    when i T.a.C on the win, he'll prolly be ur competition next week
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  12. Ar$enic

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    Metasin

    riders helped u out on B-Boys; you cheat when ur winnin
    so when that supporting cast put the fix against Fracture, u aint need a physician
    n not only me... I can't even count all the dudes ya mom been hittin
    her pussy's a grudge she doesn't hold, cuz she says its all forgiven

    Kungfugrip

    the real champ's here, laughin at how silly u been
    Sincere now, but i'm lying if i say he ever will be again
    see. nameplays aren't hard. ur whole style needs a revamp son
    i'd drop a million more. but noone wants to relive your champ run
    yeah we both rep Precision. don't be stressin' the joint
    we got a voting circle, but everyone considers you the decimal point
    i was lookin' for an easy win, and i'm gettin' it steady
    MetaSin's more like placebo. i saw u & i'm feelin' better already
    i'm smash you kid, clobber u and watch this dipshit drop
    so u can kiss the belt goodbye, & cry while i wipe the lipstick off
    you beatin' me? stop lying, beggin' & wishin' u geek
    when i T.a.C on the win, he'll prolly be ur competition next week



    Vote Kungfugrip

    I felt he took this rather easily.. metasin only had those bars I liked and I wasn't really feeling them alot.. I know both of yall can drop better but kung took it

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  13. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    This fag'll get a right hook that'll leave his gayness done
    so when u see K-o'd, it wont be cuz his boyfriend made him cum

    no

    He jerks n he slobs, n has faggots workin his rod
    No wonder dudes try to score with Foos Ball's taking a turn at the knob

    lool. this was crazy

    He can pop off, but cheap bullets will stop this kid tonight
    Because getting gassed'll make this holo-caust a Grip… his life

    nah, not feeling this the way its worded..decent concept though

    I got a solution for the win; ya rank will sink to the bottom
    Because you'll get rectify even start to think you're a problem

    seen rectify/justify/ this straight tho

    riders helped u out on B-Boys; you cheat when ur winnin
    so when that supporting cast put the fix against Fracture, u aint need a physician

    hah

    Your claim to fame is beatin Resin, but I ain't fearin u, fellow
    cuz truth is Resonate you sooo bad u should be hearin an echo

    lol. whats wit all the word n' nameplay? thats like 8 outta 10 lines so far..


    so put the riders away, food for thought got u mindless today
    cuz you're steppin up to the plate expecting second... like a buffet

    eh, nah

    the way I'm sonnin Kung explains how I be tappin up his mom...
    fucked her once... and I re-lay her when I pass her my baton

    not feelin

    n not only me... I can't even count all the dudes ya mom been hittin
    her pussy's a grudge she doesn't hold, cuz she says its all forgiven

    loool, nice

    overall, this verse had its ups and downs from start to finish. i can say this one of ya least consistent verses..very wordplay/nameflip based. not bad, but it got repetitive and boring. ida liked to see u have some diff concepts with this verse.. still some bangers in there tho

    vs

    the real champ's here, laughin at how silly u been
    Sincere now, but i'm lying if i say he ever will be again

    lol. coo open

    i don't need science to tell me what u write'll be dense
    one punch & Synapse so long, he'll wake up on my 3rd title defense

    damn

    see. nameplays aren't hard. ur whole style needs a revamp son
    i'd drop a million more. but noone wants to relive your champ run

    lol damn

    that shit was a crime. u ain't ready to be flexin' with mine
    & ur verse shows u ain't cut out for more than E or Exodus lines

    eh, this iigh

    quit phonin' it in faggot. Metasin's such a wack learner
    i'ma fry his ass on the front since his verse took the back burner

    decent, a diff twist woulda made this dope tho

    yeah we both rep Precision. don't be stressin' the joint
    we got a voting circle, but everyone considers you the decimal point

    nah

    i was lookin' for an easy win, and i'm gettin' it steady
    MetaSin's more like placebo. i saw u & i'm feelin' better already

    seems like its been done, but i never seen it so its ok

    i'm smash you kid, clobber u and watch this dipshit drop
    so u can kiss the belt goodbye, & cry while i wipe the lipstick off

    nah

    you beatin' me? stop lying, beggin' & wishin' u geek
    when i T.a.C on the win, he'll prolly be ur competition next week

    lol..


    overall, some pretty solid shit, started hella strong and then slid towards the end. cpl lines just seemed bland..like the decimal joint and the kiss the belt line..didnt really like those at all.


    this a close ass battle.i'ma re-read this shit.


    He jerks n he slobs, n has faggots workin his rod
    No wonder dudes try to score with Foos Ball's taking a turn at the knob
    riders helped u out on B-Boys; you cheat when ur winnin
    so when that supporting cast put the fix against Fracture, u aint need a physician
    Your claim to fame is beatin Resin, but I ain't fearin u, fellow
    cuz truth is Resonate you sooo bad u should be hearin an echo
    n not only me... I can't even count all the dudes ya mom been hittin
    her pussy's a grudge she doesn't hold, cuz she says its all forgiven

    vs

    the real champ's here, laughin at how silly u been
    Sincere now, but i'm lying if i say he ever will be again
    i don't need science to tell me what u write'll be dense
    one punch & Synapse so long, he'll wake up on my 3rd title defense
    see. nameplays aren't hard. ur whole style needs a revamp son
    i'd drop a million more. but noone wants to relive your champ run
    you beatin' me? stop lying, beggin' & wishin' u geek
    when i T.a.C on the win, he'll prolly be ur competition next week

    hella close...

    i look at the 8 n' 8 i felt were the strongest from both. meta's was more name n' wordplay based. which were cool and grips were more like attacking at the champ..that just goes to show meta been holding that spot a mightly long time. two diff approaches. but i feel like meta had 1 or two more misses that struck me as nah the champ shouldnt be saying that. ie opener, relay n' buffet concepts, but grip had the same with the decimal and kiss thebelt lines. just 1 line less that wasnt as bad.

    so on consistency. i got grip by a that margin. could go either way. i never spent like 30 mins on a vote.
    v.kung
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  14. Mic-illaH

    Mic-illaH aka paisano

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    This fag'll get a right hook that'll leave his gayness done
    so when u see K-o'd, it wont be cuz his boyfriend made him cum
    decent
    He jerks n he slobs, n has faggots workin his rod
    No wonder dudes try to score with Foos Ball's taking a turn at the knob
    lol dope
    He can pop off, but cheap bullets will stop this kid tonight
    Because getting gassed'll make this holo-caust a Grip… his life
    decent...think it could be worded better...
    I got a solution for the win; ya rank will sink to the bottom
    Because you'll get rectify even start to think you're a problem
    ok
    riders helped u out on B-Boys; you cheat when ur winnin
    so when that supporting cast put the fix against Fracture, u aint need a physician
    decent personal
    Your claim to fame is beatin Resin, but I ain't fearin u, fellow
    cuz truth is Resonate you sooo bad u should be hearin an echo
    loldope
    so put the riders away, food for thought got u mindless today
    cuz you're steppin up to the plate expecting second... like a buffet
    lol nice
    the way I'm sonnin Kung explains how I be tappin up his mom...
    fucked her once... and I re-lay her when I pass her my baton
    lol nice
    n not only me... I can't even count all the dudes ya mom been hittin
    her pussy's a grudge she doesn't hold, cuz she says its all forgiven
    ok



    the real champ's here, laughin at how silly u been
    Sincere now, but i'm lying if i say he ever will be again
    decent
    i don't need science to tell me what u write'll be dense
    one punch & Synapse so long, he'll wake up on my 3rd title defense
    lol nice
    see. nameplays aren't hard. ur whole style needs a revamp son
    i'd drop a million more. but noone wants to relive your champ run
    nice
    that shit was a crime. u ain't ready to be flexin' with mine
    & ur verse shows u ain't cut out for more than E or Exodus lines
    ok
    quit phonin' it in faggot. Metasin's such a wack learner
    i'ma fry his ass on the front since his verse took the back burner
    lol nice
    yeah we both rep Precision. don't be stressin' the joint
    we got a voting circle, but everyone considers you the decimal point
    ehhh
    i was lookin' for an easy win, and i'm gettin' it steady
    MetaSin's more like placebo. i saw u & i'm feelin' better already
    nice
    i'm smash you kid, clobber u and watch this dipshit drop
    so u can kiss the belt goodbye, & cry while i wipe the lipstick off
    lol nice
    you beatin' me? stop lying, beggin' & wishin' u geek
    when i T.a.C on the win, he'll prolly be ur competition next week
    lol good closer...


    man this is close...real close..
    Re read it and I gotta go with
    V/ Metasin
    For me, They were about equal with the amount of nice punches in the verse. I just felt that Met's were way more creative and witty. That foos balls and buffet line were dope. Kung came nice, and lost by a hair
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  15. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    I got a solution for the win; ya rank will sink to the bottom
    Because you'll get rectify even start to think you're a problem

    Your claim to fame is beatin Resin, but I ain't fearin u, fellow
    cuz truth is Resonate you sooo bad u should be hearin an echo

    the way I'm sonnin Kung explains how I be tappin up his mom...
    fucked her once... and I re-lay her when I pass her my baton


    vs

    i don't need science to tell me what u write'll be dense
    one punch & Synapse so long, he'll wake up on my 3rd title defense

    see. nameplays aren't hard. ur whole style needs a revamp son
    i'd drop a million more. but noone wants to relive your champ run


    i'm smash you kid, clobber u and watch this dipshit drop
    so u can kiss the belt goodbye, & cry while i wipe the lipstick off

    you beatin' me? stop lying, beggin' & wishin' u geek
    when i T.a.C on the win, he'll prolly be ur competition next week


    Both of you guys came nice, and it really came down to a one punch difference. I enjoyed more of Kungs verse really by a couple lines. It's tough when it comes that close Meta did his thing but at the end of the day.

    V/Kung
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  16. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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    This fag'll get a right hook that'll leave his gayness done
    so when u see K-o'd, it wont be cuz his boyfriend made him cum
    ^eh
    He jerks n he slobs, n has faggots workin his rod
    No wonder dudes try to score with Foos Ball's taking a turn at the knob
    ^decent
    He can pop off, but cheap bullets will stop this kid tonight
    Because getting gassed'll make this holo-caust a Grip… his life
    ^i wasn't impressed,
    I got a solution for the win; ya rank will sink to the bottom
    Because you'll get rectify even start to think you're a problem
    ^ok
    riders helped u out on B-Boys; you cheat when ur winnin
    so when that supporting cast put the fix against Fracture, u aint need a physician
    ^cool-ish i mean it's a frac line that's been
    done, but you worded it perfect and made it hit.
    Your claim to fame is beatin Resin, but I ain't fearin u, fellow
    cuz truth is Resonate you sooo bad u should be hearin an echo
    ^LOVED THIS, best line i've read all week
    so put the riders away, food for thought got u mindless today
    cuz you're steppin up to the plate expecting second... like a buffet
    ^clever
    the way I'm sonnin Kung explains how I be tappin up his mom...
    fucked her once... and I re-lay her when I pass her my baton
    ^another witty line
    n not only me... I can't even count all the dudes ya mom been hittin
    her pussy's a grudge she doesn't hold, cuz she says its all forgiven
    ^two mom lines as a closer
    not the best idea for a couplet.
    but this again was really creative.

    Overall I think your verse was night and day, like the whole
    first half-> I was thinking "oh god, Metasins going to think I'm being a
    dick for not feeling these lines" but then you picked it up and
    the second half had some heavy hitters. but closing on two momma
    lines no matter how good they are is a mistake.

    vs.

    the real champ's here, laughin at how silly u been
    Sincere now, but i'm lying if i say he ever will be again
    ^eh
    i don't need science to tell me what u write'll be dense
    one punch & Synapse so long, he'll wake up on my 3rd title defense
    ^decent
    see. nameplays aren't hard. ur whole style needs a revamp son
    i'd drop a million more. but noone wants to relive your champ run
    ^LOL, ouch
    that shit was a crime. u ain't ready to be flexin' with mine
    & ur verse shows u ain't cut out for more than E or Exodus lines
    ^a waste of a line,
    quit phonin' it in faggot. Metasin's such a wack learner
    i'ma fry his ass on the front since his verse took the back burner
    ^this isn't a miss but it
    isn't necessarily a hit for me.
    yeah we both rep Precision. don't be stressin' the joint
    we got a voting circle, but everyone considers you the decimal point
    ^ grimey shit, i dig it.
    i was lookin' for an easy win, and i'm gettin' it steady
    MetaSin's more like placebo. i saw u & i'm feelin' better already
    ^i don't care for this,
    made me giggle tho...
    i'm smash you kid, clobber u and watch this dipshit drop
    so u can kiss the belt goodbye, & cry while i wipe the lipstick off
    ^ comedy,
    you beatin' me? stop lying, beggin' & wishin' u geek
    when i T.a.C on the win, he'll prolly be ur competition next week
    ^ FUNNY line

    Overall a more appealing verse in the sense it didn't have the effect
    Metasins did starting off slow then coming out with punches. You had
    lines here and there that I didn't like scattered through out. this was a
    close match in my eyes, but what put kungfu over the top was a more
    entertaining verse, direct disses i.e. not closing on his meta's momma.
    good stuff though gentlemen.

    vote- kungfugrip
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  17. The Purifier

    The Purifier cleansin text of wackness

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    only girls giggle man
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  18. criticize

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    e jerks n he slobs, n has faggots workin his rod
    No wonder dudes try to score with Foos Ball's taking a turn at the knob
    He can pop off, but cheap bullets will stop this kid tonight
    Because getting gassed'll make this holo-caust a Grip… his life
    I got a solution for the win; ya rank will sink to the bottom
    Because you'll get rectify even start to think you're a problem

    Your claim to fame is beatin Resin, but I ain't fearin u, fellow
    cuz truth is Resonate you sooo bad u should be hearin an echo ??he lost to reason, if so good. ?

    the way I'm sonnin Kung explains how I be tappin up his mom...
    fucked her once... and I re-lay her when I pass her my baton
    ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

    i
    see. nameplays aren't hard. ur whole style needs a revamp son
    i'd drop a million more. but noone wants to relive your champ run
    quit phonin' it in faggot. Metasin's such a wack learner
    i'ma fry his ass on the front since his verse took the back burner
    yeah we both rep Precision. don't be stressin' the joint
    we got a voting circle, but everyone considers you the decimal point
    ______________________________________________
    good battle.

    kung i thought your verse was much better last week, but thats just my opinion. you had some nice lines i quoted but you had a few eh punches that werent good and were just way to simple, and i dont mean funny simple, just bad. your good lines were nice though and it was a solid verse.

    meta pretty good verse seen you come alot better in the last 4 or so weeks. i thought you had the best lines of the battle, wrecked if i. was pretty nice. a couple of the lines i quoted were just ok such as relay etc. but i thought you did enough to win..JUST..

    close battle. meta wins. more good punchlines and consistency.
    test
  19. Chrit

    Chrit The Prodigy

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    He jerks n he slobs, n has faggots workin his rod
    No wonder dudes try to score with Foos Ball's taking a turn at the knob
    Your claim to fame is beatin Resin, but I ain't fearin u, fellow
    cuz truth is Resonate you sooo bad u should be hearin an echo
    n not only me... I can't even count all the dudes ya mom been hittin
    her pussy's a grudge she doesn't hold, cuz she says its all forgiven

    vs

    i don't need science to tell me what u write'll be dense
    one punch & Synapse so long, he'll wake up on my 3rd title defense
    quit phonin' it in faggot. Metasin's such a wack learner
    i'ma fry his ass on the front since his verse took the back burner
    i was lookin' for an easy win, and i'm gettin' it steady
    MetaSin's more like placebo. i saw u & i'm feelin' better already

    I have it tied on quotables.
    Meta- your verse was hurt by the sheer number of sex lines that you used. You seemed much more one dimensional than usual this week.
    Kung- you had some misses but almost everything was relatively fresh. Nothing glaringly bad.

    v/Kung for consistency
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  20. DaTrusHurtz

    DaTrusHurtz Member

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    This fag'll get a right hook that'll leave his gayness done
    so when u see K-o'd, it wont be cuz his boyfriend made him cum
    nahh this came off as kinda gay
    He jerks n he slobs, n has faggots workin his rod
    No wonder dudes try to score with Foos Ball's taking a turn at the knob
    haha pretty dope nameplay
    He can pop off, but cheap bullets will stop this kid tonight
    Because getting gassed'll make this holo-caust a Grip… his life
    holocaust wp's been done n' it sounded a bit awkward anyway
    I got a solution for the win; ya rank will sink to the bottom
    Because you'll get rectify even start to think you're a problem
    rectify's also been done, but nice wording to this
    riders helped u out on B-Boys; you cheat when ur winnin
    so when that supporting cast put the fix against Fracture, u aint need a physician
    pretty good personal here
    Your claim to fame is beatin Resin, but I ain't fearin u, fellow
    cuz truth is Resonate you sooo bad u should be hearin an echo
    another decent personal
    so put the riders away, food for thought got u mindless today
    cuz you're steppin up to the plate expecting second... like a buffet
    nah just the diss didn't seem harsh
    the way I'm sonnin Kung explains how I be tappin up his mom...
    fucked her once... and I re-lay her when I pass her my baton
    haha, i liked this a lot, funny stuff
    n not only me... I can't even count all the dudes ya mom been hittin
    her pussy's a grudge she doesn't hold, cuz she says its all forgiven
    its not bad, but didn't stand out to me

    vs.

    the real champ's here, laughin at how silly u been
    Sincere now, but i'm lying if i say he ever will be again
    ouch, pretty hard hitting opener
    i don't need science to tell me what u write'll be dense
    one punch & Synapse so long, he'll wake up on my 3rd title defense
    haha, another good nameplay
    see. nameplays aren't hard. ur whole style needs a revamp son
    i'd drop a million more. but noone wants to relive your champ run
    its good, it mighta hit harder on a guy like oneduh tho
    that shit was a crime. u ain't ready to be flexin' with mine
    & ur verse shows u ain't cut out for more than E or Exodus lines
    nah, wasn't feelin' this
    quit phonin' it in faggot. Metasin's such a wack learner
    i'ma fry his ass on the front since his verse took the back burner
    not bad i guess
    yeah we both rep Precision. don't be stressin' the joint
    we got a voting circle, but everyone considers you the decimal point
    alright personal, but i've seen lines pretty similar to this
    i was lookin' for an easy win, and i'm gettin' it steady
    MetaSin's more like placebo. i saw u & i'm feelin' better already
    haha, pretty funny and well worded
    i'm smash you kid, clobber u and watch this dipshit drop
    so u can kiss the belt goodbye, & cry while i wipe the lipstick off
    pretty decent again
    you beatin' me? stop lying, beggin' & wishin' u geek
    when i T.a.C on the win, he'll prolly be ur competition next week
    alright closer, wasn't that hard a diss tho

    Good battle here, and it was pretty close. Metasin had the foosball, supporting cast, Resonate, and re-la lines. Grip had the opener, synapse, placebo, and lipstick things. Based on the strength of quotables and overall consistency, I think Grip barely got it.

    Vote - Grip
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