[WK 14] 47. tbone 0-0 v. 48. -X-TrEmMiZt S!n!zTaR- 0-0 (Vote!)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  2. tbone

    tbone Well-Known Member

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    if sex didn't sell this pussy would be irrelevant
    match gone be hell "him think'n he heaven sent"
    ya couldn't run shyt if ur asshole was ya lips
    u wouldn't un shyt you straight up bitch
    see either, so is he mean mugging or is u just ugly
    our battle campared to nas&jayz not even possibly
    for all that weak shyt ya spit....i'm its eclipse
    laugh cause after this....ya rank wont exist
    he RBL stunt dummy......punches like hits from a glass dick
    he fiening to win...... so who shyt ya gone joc like you aint flip
    Y rush to show muscle, when u a newb thats being nested
    i'm sick i'll make ya feel like ya verse, played and stretched
    take the lost like a boot on a car, cause ya rank aint cranking
    no sir not off of me, that'll be the day voters vote for prank-sters
    so don't worry bout making the mag
    straighten up quit being a fag
    at least ya wont have a dumb bell next week
    just hope my next opponent don't come off as weak......







    g/l
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  3. Lil*DePs*c.M.p

    Lil*DePs*c.M.p Tha Illest Emcee In Maine

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    here it goes...fuck it...

    you ain't hip-hop and you miss spots playin hop-scotch
    rollin on soft rock, even viagra won't get ya a hard-cock
    throwin ya lines in a ring, gettin nowhere - im punchin you out
    your styles so cold, ill give ya hot-ness move ya down-south
    only you would go the gay-route, cummin here sayin hey-dude
    hey, i hate-you, ima erase-you when i alt-control-delete-you
    IT specialist trained in battle-raps, i'll pop you like i do bottle-caps
    im gangsta you ain't you show up tryin shoot off unloaded-gats
    strangle you with a star spangled - after this battle your mangled
    typin writtens on a 45 degree keyboard - im killin you with an-angle
    when you were writtin that shit - ya shoulda hit backspace -
    before you posted that horrible verse - now that's a diss-Grace-
    you shittin on the Bible leave ya karma so fucked ya already dead T
    Bones been rattled by my uppercut punches - thats the lines you see
    A, Be now you start to C how my punchlines connect like letters G
    skip over the D like LBJ and send the E to ya brain without X to C
    now you know you're fucked, - send drugs to get ya high on my spit
    koz the only way that verse getting you to the hospital is if ya SICK...



    ~PeaCe
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  4. Lil*DePs*c.M.p

    Lil*DePs*c.M.p Tha Illest Emcee In Maine

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  5. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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    ya couldn't run shyt if ur asshole was ya lips
    u wouldn't un shyt you straight up bitch
    see either, so is he mean mugging or is u just ugly
    our battle campared to nas&jayz not even possibly
    for all that weak shyt ya spit....i'm its eclipse
    ^too simple,
    there's no real disses more swagger.

    vs.

    you ain't hip-hop and you miss spots playin hop-scotch
    ^ i don't know why but I found
    this funny

    A, Be now you start to C how my punchlines connect like letters G
    skip over the D like LBJ and send the E to ya brain without X to C
    ^
    WTF, LOL

    while I wasn't feeling xtremist sinisters style, I think tbone was way
    to simple and didn't bring anything new to the table that I haven't
    seen before. i felt sin had more punches. i think the dashes make his
    verse look worse.

    vote- xtremist sinister.
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  6. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    if sex didn't sell this pussy would be irrelevant
    match gone be hell "him think'n he heaven sent"
    (not much a punch)
    ya couldn't run shyt if ur asshole was ya lips
    u wouldn't un shyt you straight up bitch
    (lol no punch..the run shyt part was played)
    see either, so is he mean mugging or is u just ugly
    our battle campared to nas&jayz not even possibly
    (no)
    for all that weak shyt ya spit....i'm its eclipse
    laugh cause after this....ya rank wont exist
    (ok)
    he RBL stunt dummy......punches like hits from a glass dick
    he fiening to win...... so who shyt ya gone joc like you aint flip
    (no)
    Y rush to show muscle, when u a newb thats being nested
    i'm sick i'll make ya feel like ya verse, played and stretched
    (nah)
    take the lost like a boot on a car, cause ya rank aint cranking
    no sir not off of me, that'll be the day voters vote for prank-sters
    (cranking and pranksters dont rhyme)
    so don't worry bout making the mag
    straighten up quit being a fag
    (ok saying stop being a fag isnt a punch lol)
    at least ya wont have a dumb bell next week
    just hope my next opponent don't come off as weak......
    (eh close)


    you ain't hip-hop and you miss spots playin hop-scotch
    rollin on soft rock, even viagra won't get ya a hard-cock
    (wow a viagra hard cock line? Omg no)
    throwin ya lines in a ring, gettin nowhere - im punchin you out
    your styles so cold, ill give ya hot-ness move ya down-south
    (no)
    only you would go the gay-route, cummin here sayin hey-dude
    hey, i hate-you, ima erase-you when i alt-control-delete-you
    (no)
    IT specialist trained in battle-raps, i'll pop you like i do bottle-caps
    im gangsta you ain't you show up tryin shoot off unloaded-gats
    (not effective)
    strangle you with a star spangled - after this battle your mangled
    typin writtens on a 45 degree keyboard - im killin you with an-angle
    (weak reference)
    when you were writtin that shit - ya shoulda hit backspace -
    before you posted that horrible verse - now that's a diss-Grace-
    (eh)
    you shittin on the Bible leave ya karma so fucked ya already dead T
    Bones been rattled by my uppercut punches - thats the lines you see
    (no)
    A, Be now you start to C how my punchlines connect like letters G
    skip over the D like LBJ and send the E to ya brain without X to C
    (oh hell no)
    now you know you're fucked, - send drugs to get ya high on my spit
    koz the only way that verse getting you to the hospital is if ya SICK...
    (sick/hospital lines..hell no)



    wow this is the worst battle of etenity..there wasnt a single line in it that was cool.

    only just one ok


    and thats t-bone

    WOW i cant believe im votin fot him but

    wow xtreme sinistar had played lines and lines that didnt do shit but rhyme lol

    man this was bad


    v/t-bone
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  7. Ar$enic

    Ar$enic New Member

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    Tbone

    ya couldn't run shyt if ur asshole was ya lips
    u wouldn't un shyt you straight up bitch
    LOL
    so don't worry bout making the mag
    straighten up quit being a fag
    Lmao dope shit bro

    Xtremizt Siniztar

    fuck.. both of u suck

    Vote Tbone.. cuz he called u a fag
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  8. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    up over no-shows and extensions
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  9. criticize

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    i think termits wins.
    this was a really weak battle. tbone you didnt have any good lines, i thought you could try to spell a bit better. and focus on throwing actual disses in your battles rather than whatever it is atm. try wordplay mets personals nameplays whatever you can to throw a good punch.

    termit i didnt like any of your lines either, your lines were concepts used back in 01 but worder worse than they were back then, like tbone you need to work on creativity mets wordplay personals etc to make harder punchs.

    i vote for the 2nd guy terminzt or whatever because he at least formed punchlines.
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  10. Chrit

    Chrit The Prodigy

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    Horrible battle.

    Neither really had any sort of wit or decent concepts.

    Tbone had nothing quotable but atleast talked shit about his opponent.
    Xtreme had punches about giving the other dude a hard cock... thats incredibly homo.

    v/tbone for not being gay
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  11. BronzeAtlas

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    Vote. -X-TrEmMiZt S!n!zTaR.


    First Tbone.
    if sex didn't sell this pussy would be irrelevant
    match gone be hell "him think'n he heaven sent"
    No Dice.
    ya couldn't run shyt if ur asshole was ya lips
    u wouldn't un shyt you straight up bitch
    Nope.
    see either, so is he mean mugging or is u just ugly
    our battle campared to nas&jayz not even possibly
    Nope.
    for all that weak shyt ya spit....i'm its eclipse
    laugh cause after this....ya rank wont exist
    Could have been better with some rewording but No.
    he RBL stunt dummy......punches like hits from a glass dick
    he fiening to win...... so who shyt ya gone joc like you aint flip
    No.
    Y rush to show muscle, when u a newb thats being nested
    i'm sick i'll make ya feel like ya verse, played and stretched
    Uhh. I am not sure about this one.
    take the lost like a boot on a car, cause ya rank aint cranking
    no sir not off of me, that'll be the day voters vote for prank-sters
    Wack. The bars didn't rhyme at all.
    so don't worry bout making the mag
    straighten up quit being a fag
    Not Good.
    at least ya wont have a dumb bell next week
    just hope my next opponent don't come off as weak......
    Weak Closer.


    Vs.


    you ain't hip-hop and you miss spots playin hop-scotch
    rollin on soft rock, even viagra won't get ya a hard-cock
    Ehh.
    throwin ya lines in a ring, gettin nowhere - im punchin you out
    your styles so cold, ill give ya hot-ness move ya down-south
    Nah.
    only you would go the gay-route, cummin here sayin hey-dude
    hey, i hate-you, ima erase-you when i alt-control-delete-you
    Decent Set up but bad punchline.
    IT specialist trained in battle-raps, i'll pop you like i do bottle-caps
    im gangsta you ain't you show up tryin shoot off unloaded-gats
    Gun talk but not good.
    strangle you with a star spangled - after this battle your mangled
    typin writtens on a 45 degree keyboard - im killin you with an-angle
    Decent.
    when you were writtin that shit - ya shoulda hit backspace -
    before you posted that horrible verse - now that's a diss-Grace-
    Nope.
    you shittin on the Bible leave ya karma so fucked ya already dead T
    Bones been rattled by my uppercut punches - thats the lines you see
    Ehh.
    A, Be now you start to C how my punchlines connect like letters G
    skip over the D like LBJ and send the E to ya brain without X to C
    Not tight.
    now you know you're fucked, - send drugs to get ya high on my spit
    koz the only way that verse getting you to the hospital is if ya SICK...
    Best line but not good.


    This was a pretty poor battle. Tbone didn't have one single bar that I liked in the slightest. Shit came off as pretty wack the whole way through. No wordplay and no nameplays. Punches were non existant and the verse wasn't put together well. -X-'s verse wasn't much better but I thought that it could have been better with some better wording and put together thoughts. Overall both competitors had weak verses but Sinstar took it with less wack shit.
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  12. xX_NASTY_Xx

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    Tie.... tbone had no links X wins
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