[WK 14] 21. Caveat1 2-1 v. 22. criticize. 2-1 (Vote!)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  2. Caveat1

    Caveat1 New Member

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  3. criticize

    criticize New Member

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    you want to post early? or are you one of the hoes who waits til the last second to post, if at all?
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  4. Caveat1

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  5. criticize

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    Steve Carell

    20 huh?

    im twice as good as you and the voters know il win believe me fuck,
    while you got nuttin 2 lose like stuffing up sealing the deal w/ a easy slut/
    you will be forced to bare the pain! this is the passion of christ,
    your writing needs a mentore or 'add-visor' like fashion advice/
    quick to ride the coat tails of a winner i bet u vote obama,
    while i bomb on cave like marines trying to flush out osama/
    no drama; im australian homie your just an uncontrolable gay,
    the top 20 is elite and you couldnt get in-mate at Guantanamo bay/
    im making my way up the rankings at no cost rob and bash,
    while your sloping out of the runnings like jamica's bob sled crash/

    beating crit dont b stupid! that dream will make ya knee's shake,
    quit joking you need to get smart like the Steve Carell remake/
    you will get killed in this match up consider it a touch of fate,
    everything i touch turns to gold..everything you touch yells rape/
    i bet this pussy is scared of the monsters under the bed,
    your set ups are the worst
    so if we say your punchline was raw we mean underprepared/
    you dont have the heart to squeeze on a trigger,
    coz when it comes to push u'l cave...man like prehistoric niggaz/
    aint pulling no shorties so its hookers or gays..if u wanna get laid,
    so either your paying for ass..or your ass'-kin for aids/
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  6. Caveat1

    Caveat1 New Member

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    I Post Just Enough Ta Win, But Im Uninspired For Lame Hobbits.
    I'd Write To His Level But The Postage Alone Would Break Pockets
    THE BATTLE HAD PREDICTIONS..FOLK VOTED..I DOUBLED YA SUM
    TILL YA GIRL HOPPED ON THE POLL..SO I GAVE HER A COUPLE OF ONES
    CRITS GOT NO COURAGE...HES WILD NERVOUS SEE..
    THIS KID GOT THE HEART OF JOHN Q BEFORE THE SURGERY
    CAVS THE FUTURE..IM INNOVATIN AND YA HAVE TA WATCH
    YOU SO FAR BEHIND THE CURVE YA STRUCK OUT IN THE BATTERS BOX
    YA RUNNIN WHEN CAV COMIN SO YA GETTIN SERVED EH...
    MAKE YA DASH LIKE WHATS BETWEEN FORCED WORDPLAY
    THAT THROWBACK STYLES WACK..GET NEW TO THE TIMES
    YOU GOT YA NAME FROM WHAT VOTERS DO TO YA RHYMES
    YA 2 NO SHOW WINS MAKE EVERYONE LIKE YA LESS
    FUCK WINS..YA GETTIN L'S OVER SQUARES LIKE KNIGHTS IN CHESS
    DO I EVEN HAVE TO TRY? IM ON TRACK..BLAME YA LOSS
    CUZ CAVS THE TERRORIST THREAT ON YA TRAIN OF THOUGHT
    HE PROLLY PARTYS HARD..TIPSY AS HE SHAKES AND BENDS
    YA DRINK LIKE A FISH..NOW I CAN DUMP YA BODY WHERE U'LL MAKE SOME FRIENDS
    i've had enough of his mind numbing chatter
    bitches are bein nice and STILL sayin cize doesn't matter
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  7. Ar$enic

    Ar$enic New Member

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    Criticize

    you will be forced to bare the pain! this is the passion of christ,
    your writing needs a mentore or 'add-visor' like fashion advice/
    Lmao that was a bad
    quick to ride the coat tails of a winner i bet u vote obama,
    while i bomb on cave like marines trying to flush out osama/
    no drama; im australian homie your just an uncontrolable gay,
    the top 20 is elite and you couldnt get in-mate at Guantanamo bay/
    Those were decent
    bet this pussy is scared of the monsters under the bed,
    your set ups are the worst
    so if we say your punchline was raw we mean underprepared/
    U forget about rhyming?
    aint pulling no shorties so its hookers or gays..if u wanna get laid,
    so either your paying for ass..or your ass'-kin for aids/
    LMAO BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooo


    Caveat

    CRITS GOT NO COURAGE...HES WILD NERVOUS SEE..
    THIS KID GOT THE HEART OF JOHN Q BEFORE THE SURGERY
    CAVS THE FUTURE..IM INNOVATIN AND YA HAVE TA WATCH
    YOU SO FAR BEHIND THE CURVE YA STRUCK OUT IN THE BATTERS BOX
    YA RUNNIN WHEN CAV COMIN SO YA GETTIN SERVED EH...
    MAKE YA DASH LIKE WHATS BETWEEN FORCED WORDPLAY
    ^haha
    THAT THROWBACK STYLES WACK..GET NEW TO THE TIMES
    YOU GOT YA NAME FROM WHAT VOTERS DO TO YA RHYMES
    DO I EVEN HAVE TO TRY? IM ON TRACK..BLAME YA LOSS
    CUZ CAVS THE TERRORIST THREAT ON YA TRAIN OF THOUGHT
    HE PROLLY PARTYS HARD..TIPSY AS HE SHAKES AND BENDS
    YA DRINK LIKE A FISH..NOW I CAN DUMP YA BODY WHERE U'LL MAKE SOME FRIENDS
    i've had enough of his mind numbing chatter
    bitches are bein nice and STILL sayin cize doesn't matter


    Murder
    Vote Caveat.. he straight styled on that dude
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  8. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    up over no-shows and extensions
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  9. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    you will get killed in this match up consider it a touch of fate,
    everything i touch turns to gold..everything you touch yells rape

    heh. coo line

    guantanamo bay was ok. most of the verse didnt really hit strong. few decent shots. quoted line was the best tho

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    CAVS THE FUTURE..IM INNOVATIN AND YA HAVE TA WATCH
    YOU SO FAR BEHIND THE CURVE YA STRUCK OUT IN THE BATTERS BOX
    YA RUNNIN WHEN CAV COMIN SO YA GETTIN SERVED EH...
    MAKE YA DASH LIKE WHATS BETWEEN FORCED WORDPLAY


    lool

    &

    THAT THROWBACK STYLES WACK..GET NEW TO THE TIMES
    YOU GOT YA NAME FROM WHAT VOTERS DO TO YA RHYMES

    HE PROLLY PARTYS HARD..TIPSY AS HE SHAKES AND BENDS
    YA DRINK LIKE A FISH..NOW I CAN DUMP YA BODY WHERE U'LL MAKE SOME FRIENDS

    coo

    overall v/cav

    his lines packed more than crits stronger lines and it didnt really have too many downfaults in the verse.
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  10. Caveat1

    Caveat1 New Member

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    Damn Only 2 Votes?
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  11. Mic-illaH

    Mic-illaH aka paisano

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    im twice as good as you and the voters know il win believe me fuck,
    while you got nuttin 2 lose like stuffing up sealing the deal w/ a easy slut/
    no
    you will be forced to bare the pain! this is the passion of christ,
    your writing needs a mentore or 'add-visor' like fashion advice/
    decent
    quick to ride the coat tails of a winner i bet u vote obama,
    while i bomb on cave like marines trying to flush out osama/
    decent
    no drama; im australian homie your just an uncontrolable gay,
    the top 20 is elite and you couldnt get in-mate at Guantanamo bay/
    stretch
    im making my way up the rankings at no cost rob and bash,
    while your sloping out of the runnings like jamica's bob sled crash/
    no


    Quote:
    Originally Posted by Caveat1
    I Am Not Anyone Special Just A Kid With A Dream But Good Battle Indeed

    beating crit dont b stupid! that dream will make ya knee's shake,
    quit joking you need to get smart like the Steve Carell remake/
    ok
    you will get killed in this match up consider it a touch of fate,
    everything i touch turns to gold..everything you touch yells rape/
    lol this was dope
    i bet this pussy is scared of the monsters under the bed,
    your set ups are the worst
    so if we say your punchline was raw we mean underprepared/
    decent
    you dont have the heart to squeeze on a trigger,
    coz when it comes to push u'l cave...man like prehistoric niggaz/
    lol nice
    aint pulling no shorties so its hookers or gays..if u wanna get laid,
    so either your paying for ass..or your ass'-kin for aids/
    ehh didn't like this...




    I Post Just Enough Ta Win, But Im Uninspired For Lame Hobbits.
    I'd Write To His Level But The Postage Alone Would Break Pockets
    lol nice
    THE BATTLE HAD PREDICTIONS..FOLK VOTED..I DOUBLED YA SUM
    TILL YA GIRL HOPPED ON THE POLL..SO I GAVE HER A COUPLE OF ONES
    lol nice
    CRITS GOT NO COURAGE...HES WILD NERVOUS SEE..
    THIS KID GOT THE HEART OF JOHN Q BEFORE THE SURGERY
    ok
    CAVS THE FUTURE..IM INNOVATIN AND YA HAVE TA WATCH
    YOU SO FAR BEHIND THE CURVE YA STRUCK OUT IN THE BATTERS BOX
    ok
    YA RUNNIN WHEN CAV COMIN SO YA GETTIN SERVED EH...
    MAKE YA DASH LIKE WHATS BETWEEN FORCED WORDPLAY
    aren't dashes between the multi's?
    THAT THROWBACK STYLES WACK..GET NEW TO THE TIMES
    YOU GOT YA NAME FROM WHAT VOTERS DO TO YA RHYMES
    ha nice
    YA 2 NO SHOW WINS MAKE EVERYONE LIKE YA LESS
    FUCK WINS..YA GETTIN L'S OVER SQUARES LIKE KNIGHTS IN CHESS
    ehhh
    DO I EVEN HAVE TO TRY? IM ON TRACK..BLAME YA LOSS
    CUZ CAVS THE TERRORIST THREAT ON YA TRAIN OF THOUGHT
    ok
    HE PROLLY PARTYS HARD..TIPSY AS HE SHAKES AND BENDS
    YA DRINK LIKE A FISH..NOW I CAN DUMP YA BODY WHERE U'LL MAKE SOME FRIENDS
    ok
    i've had enough of his mind numbing chatter
    bitches are bein nice and STILL sayin cize doesn't matter
    lol dope closer


    V/ Caveat1
    Critcize, although outclassed in this match, had some decent ideas. The rape line and cave man line were pretty nice. My vote goes to Cav though, for just being way more consistent in his verse and he had some pretty creative lines. The closer was nice and his first two punches were sick.
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  12. DaTrusHurtz

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    im twice as good as you and the voters know il win believe me fuck,
    while you got nuttin 2 lose like stuffing up sealing the deal w/ a easy slut/
    nuttin 2 lose, i suppose that concept coulda been good, but not like that
    you will be forced to bare the pain! this is the passion of christ,
    your writing needs a mentore or 'add-visor' like fashion advice/
    nah it came off as kinda corny
    quick to ride the coat tails of a winner i bet u vote obama,
    while i bomb on cave like marines trying to flush out osama/
    alright, not bad
    no drama; im australian homie your just an uncontrolable gay,
    the top 20 is elite and you couldnt get in-mate at Guantanamo bay/
    nice line, good shit
    im making my way up the rankings at no cost rob and bash,
    while your sloping out of the runnings like jamica's bob sled crash/
    concept was good, but not the execution
    beating crit dont b stupid! that dream will make ya knee's shake,
    quit joking you need to get smart like the Steve Carell remake/
    nah just wasn't that witty
    you will get killed in this match up consider it a touch of fate,
    everything i touch turns to gold..everything you touch yells rape/
    haha, pretty good man. u coulda made this better with a better setup related to the concept tho, but i still liked it
    i bet this pussy is scared of the monsters under the bed,
    your set ups are the worst
    so if we say your punchline was raw we mean underprepared/
    good concept but wasn't feelin' the execution of it
    you dont have the heart to squeeze on a trigger,
    coz when it comes to push u'l cave...man like prehistoric niggaz/
    kinda simple but alright
    aint pulling no shorties so its hookers or gays..if u wanna get laid,
    so either your paying for ass..or your ass'-kin for aids/
    ehhh nah

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    I Post Just Enough Ta Win, But Im Uninspired For Lame Hobbits.
    I'd Write To His Level But The Postage Alone Would Break Pockets
    nah, its kinda played
    THE BATTLE HAD PREDICTIONS..FOLK VOTED..I DOUBLED YA SUM
    TILL YA GIRL HOPPED ON THE POLL..SO I GAVE HER A COUPLE OF ONES
    ehh nah same as above
    CRITS GOT NO COURAGE...HES WILD NERVOUS SEE..
    THIS KID GOT THE HEART OF JOHN Q BEFORE THE SURGERY
    alright, not bad
    CAVS THE FUTURE..IM INNOVATIN AND YA HAVE TA WATCH
    YOU SO FAR BEHIND THE CURVE YA STRUCK OUT IN THE BATTERS BOX
    decent, tho u coulda done more with it
    YA RUNNIN WHEN CAV COMIN SO YA GETTIN SERVED EH...
    MAKE YA DASH LIKE WHATS BETWEEN FORCED WORDPLAY
    nah this is really played.. i know he did this on a few of his lines so it seems personal, but its been done on a lotta newbs that do that
    THAT THROWBACK STYLES WACK..GET NEW TO THE TIMES
    YOU GOT YA NAME FROM WHAT VOTERS DO TO YA RHYMES
    kinda simple but aight
    YA 2 NO SHOW WINS MAKE EVERYONE LIKE YA LESS
    FUCK WINS..YA GETTIN L'S OVER SQUARES LIKE KNIGHTS IN CHESS
    personal is good but i think u coulda used it better
    DO I EVEN HAVE TO TRY? IM ON TRACK..BLAME YA LOSS
    CUZ CAVS THE TERRORIST THREAT ON YA TRAIN OF THOUGHT
    nah train of thought lines are played
    HE PROLLY PARTYS HARD..TIPSY AS HE SHAKES AND BENDS
    YA DRINK LIKE A FISH..NOW I CAN DUMP YA BODY WHERE U'LL MAKE SOME FRIENDS
    i used a line like this awhile ago n' prolly did it better.. its kinda played
    i've had enough of his mind numbing chatter
    bitches are bein nice and STILL sayin cize doesn't matter
    good closer

    Criticize, u had a few lines which were cool like the inmates and touch rape thing was kinda funny. Nameplays were aight but kinda simple. The rest was bad tho, u had some really corny stuff in there. Cav, ur biggest problem was playedness. Like most of ur bars were played so u gotta work on gettin' some better concepts. Also don't cap all ur stuff, its kinda newbish. I thought this was closer than some, but Cav was slightly more consistent, and I think the closer and behind the curve lines were decent and enough to take this.

    Vote - Cav
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  13. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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    you will get killed in this match up consider it a touch of fate,
    everything i touch turns to gold..everything you touch yells rape
    ^LOL
    no drama; im australian homie your just an uncontrolable gay,
    the top 20 is elite and you couldnt get in-mate at Guantanamo bay/
    ^cool

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    THAT THROWBACK STYLES WACK..GET NEW TO THE TIMES
    YOU GOT YA NAME FROM WHAT VOTERS DO TO YA RHYMES
    ^clever
    i've had enough of his mind numbing chatter
    bitches are bein nice and STILL sayin cize doesn't matter
    ^funny

    It's wierd voting for Cav because of the way he designs his verses.
    with the caps and the wording at times. but he had a better verse
    here, it was more entertaining. Crit had lines that were good but
    he had lines that I completely wasn't feeeling and brought the
    overall quality of his verse down.

    vote- cav
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  14. criticize

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  15. JAIBE

    JAIBE Simply Amazing.

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    you will get killed in this match up consider it a touch of fate,
    everything i touch turns to gold..everything you touch yells rape
    This Was Funny/Nice
    no drama; im australian homie your just an uncontrolable gay,
    the top 20 is elite and you couldnt get in-mate at Guantanamo bay/
    Very nice


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    THAT THROWBACK STYLES WACK..GET NEW TO THE TIMES
    YOU GOT YA NAME FROM WHAT VOTERS DO TO YA RHYMES
    lol
    i've had enough of his mind numbing chatter
    bitches are bein nice and STILL sayin cize doesn't matter
    Nice
    YA RUNNIN WHEN CAV COMIN SO YA GETTIN SERVED EH...
    MAKE YA DASH LIKE WHATS BETWEEN FORCED WORDPLAY
    probly played... but i liked it.


    TAKE THE CAPS OFF ... i didnt enjoy readin the verse like that. but to each there own.
    both came decent. no complaints. but ima have to give it to Cav. he had more consistancy in his rhymes. even if they were played.

    Vote - Cav
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  16. Aloe

    Aloe www.myspace.com/aloemusic

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    Cav:
    yo that was a sick ass verse. i dont know why most of it was in CAPS, but not all of it. but it was fire. that closer was the highlight of the verse to me though if i had to pick one stand out line.. with the dump ya body line a close second.

    crit:
    looks like you still gotta lil work to do, but this wasnt a terrible drop. i cant really pick out one line that really stood out to me, but none were so bad i stopped reading. keep workin at it.

    vote - cav pretty easily
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  17. magus.

    magus. 'Pistol' Pete Magus'vich

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    criticize was terrible, i was hoping to come in and see something. but instead i was morbidly depressed


    m twice as good as you and the voters know il win believe me fuck,
    while you got nuttin 2 lose like stuffing up sealing the deal w/ a easy slut/
    you will be forced to bare the pain! this is the passion of christ,
    your writing needs a mentore or 'add-visor' like fashion advice/


    lines like that. were terrible. nothing really stood out. cav had a decent verse.

    nothing too strong. but i'd probably insult him for going strong against that brand of opposition.
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    caveat1 wins
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