[WK 14] 17. Strikta 4-2 v. 18. Allegory 3-1 (Vote!)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  2. Constrikta of CVI

    Constrikta of CVI Member

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  3. Allegory

    Allegory Grimy.

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  4. Constrikta of CVI

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    He blows a fat one in this league... just to state raw facts
    That's because A's always on the head like Oakland baseball caps
    You're like another homo I know.. both just dick lickin lames
    Fag can't keep it out of his mouth for too long like Eusich with my name
    You won't gain another win.. especially agianst Strik, I'd dare
    Cuz we wouldn't see All 4-1 unless this weak fuck was singing, I swear
    I'm ending the tirade of this foul mouth.. I didn't fucking stutter
    Eat your moms pussy.. guess 2 sets of loose lips CAN touch eachother
    She's pink in the middle, like you... now thank me for your great loss
    Oh A won? Please.... I'm just asking my waitress for the steak sauce
    You're a dead faggot.. and it's like I'm dumping with the shotty
    Wanted a hearty meal.. but two other things was pumping in his body
    He's like a bud of dirt weed.. no question I'll stomp you down
    Who'd break it up? Noone wants to pick up 18 seeds off the ground
    Gay ass.. faggot.. homo.. I bet you hate them words dawg
    Allegory's a plumber.. the guy who'd take a snake where turds are
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  5. Allegory

    Allegory Grimy.

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    get ur creativity up suckkkasss...

    No credibility.u actually speak alot.
    So if your at the top tear..
    ...imma act as the kleenex box.
    Ur sig sums it up, i cudnt leave it alone.
    "You ain't got nothin' on me..."HAHA.
    ...then his husband got home.
    As far as winning something.Strikts worthless.
    Im Curt Henning wit the Punches..
    .....yours Miss.Perfect.
    Complanin like a bitch,swayin hopin for guidance
    Ull make Top 10....
    If Nasty fucks up n does ranks from lowest to highest!
    Resime', hella played,ur living in pure denial
    Better off calling it quits..
    ...it shud be on yur speedial.
    Rapmusic doesnt like you..THIS IS A PROMISE.
    Plus,LBC shot em down......
    ...Call em Christopher Wallace.!!!
    Nigga im Honest.u keep trying to stall me
    but the closest u got to Gory was studying Saw 3..
    U'll get it by all means.its gon be a long day.
    Put ur Dukes Up and get floored..
    ...Im feelin like Coach K.


    FLYYYYY.OUTTA HERE.
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  6. Eusich

    Eusich the incredible.

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    okay,

    strik, the opening concept was a bit played and/or simplistic but nevertheless it worked here as a minimal impact punch, the follow up is a bit ineffective here because its hardly a diss against Al and the wording is off, i dug the All 4-1 shit though however its a bit forced because All when referring to Allegory would be Al according to my accent, nevertheless the concept was clever and the wording was pretty good, pussy line was lame, A one was decent for a nameplay i suppose, the rest were iffy, like the 18 seed line was hardly effective being that you're only the 17th seed, maybe in a tournament where the 18th would be against a higher seed or something but here you're both virtually the same rank, the turds was lame and the pumping body didn't hit to me, overall your wording was better than usual and you had a few decent nameplays but the rest were 'eh' lines

    al, some of your concepts were creative in idea but not so much in presentation, such as the opener which could have been doper but here it was just good, follow up didn't hit though, miss perfect was decent but somewhat forced or maybe i just don't like your structure and how you're wording these, lowest to highest was a decent quick jab, the rest were iffy, i didnt like the saw 3 line, the coach k was better in its original format (i think you editted the wording), the speed dial was wack and so was the biggie reference

    close call really, but honestly i think strikta had the better stuff here, plus his structure/wording was more tolerable, both only had about 3 lines that i could fuck with but of those 3 i think strikt's were the best of the 2, plus the bad lines in strikt's verse were more or less ineffective as opposed to wack whereas there were at least 2 or 3 in Al's that i thought were wack

    not a great battle, but strikta wins
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  7. Dope Chris

    Dope Chris Blunt Slide 5-0

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    I aint tryin ta get all techinal like that Eusich cat. BUt I think Strikta pulled it off

    Both verse had some decent lines for example

    Strikta
    He blows a fat one in this league... just to state raw facts
    That's because A's always on the head like Oakland baseball caps <-----Not bad
    You won't gain another win.. especially agianst Strik, I'd dare
    Cuz we wouldn't see All 4-1 unless this weak fuck was singing, I swear <----ehhh
    I'm ending the tirade of this foul mouth.. I didn't fucking stutter
    Eat your moms pussy.. guess 2 sets of loose lips CAN touch eachother
    She's pink in the middle, like you... now thank me for your great loss
    Oh A won? Please.... I'm just asking my waitress for the steak sauce <---Best in tha verse

    2 many gay references for me. I thought you was talkin bout Mufffy for a second

    and then we got Eusich

    Complanin like a bitch,swayin hopin for guidance
    Ull make Top 10....
    If Nasty fucks up n does ranks from lowest to highest! <---ehhh
    Resime', hella played,ur living in pure denial
    Better off calling it quits..
    ...it shud be on yur speedial.<----Best in verse

    Anyways

    Vote: Strikta
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  8. Klobb

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    Wasnt really feeling this battle.. Strikta came pretty good, seemed like he didn't try but that steak sauce line was pretty sick.. the line of the battle.. I didnt like allegory's verse..

    Complanin like a bitch,swayin hopin for guidance
    Ull make Top 10....
    If Nasty fucks up n does ranks from lowest to highest!
    Resime', hella played,ur living in pure denial
    Better off calling it quits..
    ...it shud be on yur speedial.

    That part was really played and u lost it with those..

    Vote= Strikta
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  9. Saga

    Saga All Eyes On Me

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    strikta the first ten or so lines i thought were nice..the all for one line i liked most just cuz i havent thought of that song for awhile...the last section of your verse kinda fell off to me though, and the flow could be better but the content was creative in places..

    allegory - the opener was cool, followed by a not so good one, the flow was cool though for the most part... the callin it quits line was probably one of the one i liked most out of your verse.. but strikta's content was a bit stronger more creative

    vote strikta
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  10. Lil*DePs*c.M.p

    Lil*DePs*c.M.p Tha Illest Emcee In Maine

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    Vote - Strikta

    Strikta - solid verse, good punchlines throughout...i liked the first four lines and the A1 steak sauce line - although you played off his name throughout that was the only thing i saw bad about the verse get more versatile with the punches and such but overall it was a more solid verse than Allegory

    Allegory - you had a decent verse, thought it had a couple good punches and the rest was kind of filler - not much going on, good flow and such but lacked a lot of quality disses - but it ended well i felt it was less solid than striktas and he just kept bringin the punches



    ~PeaCe
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  11. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    v/strika


    he had the a won lines.. and tghat all 4-1 line was FUNNIES I FUCK.. i started sigin the song n shit.. N i sweaaaaaaaaaaaaaar by the moon and the staaaaaaaars in the skyyyyyyyyyyyy

    allegory came played as fuck

    with the speedial..the nasty rank reference is old ...dukes up was weak.
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  12. Medichi.

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    haha.. good battle. i liked a few lines from each. but i think strikta was more consistant. i got into his whole approach which made his disses appeal to me alot more. ur wording was alot better in this shit too. the all for one line was killer. everything was pretty nice. 18 seeds line was tight as fuck too. all that opener was nice as fuck. alot of kids will shrug it off & not even reread it to try & get it, but foreal it was nice. the rest of ur verse just came off as basic. not really witty or hard hitting. miss perfect, top ten & call it quits were all pretty simple. looked like u were just fucking around with ideas. imo. i think u should work on ur execution. shit will make ur punches come off alot better. vote strikta pz
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  13. Quriosity

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    up over no-shows and extensions
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  14. Chrit

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    You won't gain another win.. especially agianst Strik, I'd dare
    Cuz we wouldn't see All 4-1 unless this weak fuck was singing, I swear

    that was the line of the battle

    Allegory came pretty played. Nothing really stood out as great.
    Strikta came decently... a few iffy lines here and there. Overall a decent verse though... a few witty concepts saved him and got the battle.

    v/Strikta
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    strikta wins
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