[WK 14] 11. Light Saber 5-3 v. 12. DaTrusHurtz 3-2 (Vote!)

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  1. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  2. Light Saber

    Light Saber I LoVe AsiaN ChicKs

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    i'll be goin' 16... good luck dawg

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  3. DaTrusHurtz

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  4. Light Saber

    Light Saber I LoVe AsiaN ChicKs

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    i went 14 lines... good luck

    last week I lost to KungFu Grip, a respected head pawned me
    but u couldnt handle Wash. i guess ur mom still does your laundry
    honestly, you gon' die lonely..no wedding ban's likely
    in fact the only Ban you'll get is exchangin' TorrMup's IP
    im above average, just admit it dawg, i'll leave you dead
    got you sayin' im the greatest or legendary status like a Calibre thread
    this lames such a gay fag, your career will never soar nor take flight
    your fruity when you strike a keyboard, then again you are the gay type
    i'll keep you out the top ten, you can thank me later
    or try and beat me with 'Light' lines and references to 'Saber'
    son you're losin' you a step closer? i'll limit your movements
    thinkin' you can 'Squeeze By' umm first find Room for improvement
    and i dont need a dope closer, your already owned...fag
    so i'll just mention "Quriosity" and make next weeks RBL Mag

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  5. DaTrusHurtz

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    U need work, but u get abused enough for bein' fucking gay
    I'd stroke ur ego, but I couldn't find ONE concept from u that wasn't played
    Just faced Wash, I needa face more easy guys in the long haul
    I told Q to "just give me the light", n' I wasn't talkin' about Sean Paul
    Got u scared shook, everythin' u say has been missin'
    I'll have u running back to ur crib so fast, the bears signed u to play the position
    U can bag on my accomplishments, just lemme know when ur finished
    I know I'm not doing anything good, but I'll move on from ur girl in a minute
    U got a big mouth, don't talk shit, u don't even know me
    Fuck u, Saber ain't been good since he had Dominik Hasek as his goalie
    Get in line, ur next for a beatin, this lame has been warned
    Ur on deck, but shortly I'll move ur body to its rightful place in a morgue
    Dunno where u get ur wack shit, u'll never boast as the champ
    Checked out the light source, it looked more like a ghost than a lamp
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  6. Medichi.

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    cool battle.

    last week I lost to KungFu Grip, a respected head pawned me
    but u couldnt handle Wash. i guess ur mom still does your laundry
    im above average, just admit it dawg, i'll leave you dead
    got you sayin' im the greatest or legendary status like a Calibre thread

    i thought those were tight. seen a few torrmup lines lately. urs was good, but i liked those two couplets the best. after the fruity line it looked like you just said fuck it.

    trus.. ur shit was pretty consistant. opener & closer were both strong. only line i thought that lacked was the morgue line. i think ur opener & closer were pretty tight. running back was nice as well. not doing anything good was pretty good i liked ur wording.

    i got trus here for a more consistant verse. i liked sabers opener & calibre line, but the rest wasnt as well executed as trus. vote trus
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  7. Ar$enic

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    Light Saber

    last week I lost to KungFu Grip, a respected head pawned me
    but u couldnt handle Wash. i guess ur mom still does your laundry
    Lmao sick
    this lames such a gay fag, your career will never soar nor take flight
    your fruity when you strike a keyboard, then again you are the gay type
    ^hah

    Datrushurtz

    Just faced Wash, I needa face more easy guys in the long haul
    I told Q to "just give me the light", n' I wasn't talkin' about Sean Paul
    haha
    U got a big mouth, don't talk shit, u don't even know me
    Fuck u, Saber ain't been good since he had Dominik Hasek as his goalie
    I didnt like this.. seemed force.. Its Sabers and there not a HE

    This shit was mad close.. but im going with Light Saber on this one.. he had more shit I liked.. decent battle

    Vote Light Saber
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  8. Trombley

    Trombley .Deon.

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    last week I lost to KungFu Grip, a respected head pawned me
    but u couldnt handle Wash. i guess ur mom still does your laundry

    iight

    honestly, you gon' die lonely..no wedding ban's likely
    in fact the only Ban you'll get is exchangin' TorrMup's IP

    ok

    im above average, just admit it dawg, i'll leave you dead
    got you sayin' im the greatest or legendary status like a Calibre thread

    eh, not feelin

    this lames such a gay fag, your career will never soar nor take flight
    your fruity when you strike a keyboard, then again you are the gay type

    funny, but not really that great

    i'll keep you out the top ten, you can thank me later
    or try and beat me with 'Light' lines and references to 'Saber'

    iight

    son you're losin' you a step closer? i'll limit your movements
    thinkin' you can 'Squeeze By' umm first find Room for improvement

    lol, best of the verse

    and i dont need a dope closer, your already owned...fag
    so i'll just mention "Quriosity" and make next weeks RBL Mag

    nah, n ot feelin

    overall a pretty consistent solid verse. no maaajor standouts but some coo hits in there.
    closer was prolly the weakest imo

    vs

    U need work, but u get abused enough for bein' fucking gay
    I'd stroke ur ego, but I couldn't find ONE concept from u that wasn't played

    straight open

    Just faced Wash, I needa face more easy guys in the long haul
    I told Q to "just give me the light", n' I wasn't talkin' about Sean Paul

    heh. coo flip

    Got u scared shook, everythin' u say has been missin'
    I'll have u running back to ur crib so fast, the bears signed u to play the position

    naaah

    U can bag on my accomplishments, just lemme know when ur finished
    I know I'm not doing anything good, but I'll move on from ur girl in a minute

    haha

    U got a big mouth, don't talk shit, u don't even know me
    Fuck u, Saber ain't been good since he had Dominik Hasek as his goalie

    decent

    Get in line, ur next for a beatin, this lame has been warned
    Ur on deck, but shortly I'll move ur body to its rightful place in a morgue

    didnt really think this connected right. woulda been ok, but naah

    Dunno where u get ur wack shit, u'll never boast as the champ
    Checked out the light source, it looked more like a ghost than a lamp

    eh, ok

    overall some cool hits in the verse i think u coulda develpd the last 2 lines for more effect.

    close battle..had to re-read it a few times. i think trus came a lil more comedic wit his approach. i think saber came with some aggression, his light n' saber line kinda held true though. trus almost fed into that. but im sure his verse was already written.

    anyways. i got trus being a bit more consistent here.

    vtrus
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  9. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    last week I lost to KungFu Grip, a respected head pawned me
    but u couldnt handle Wash. i guess ur mom still does your laundry
    (played..im tired of wash laundry lines)
    honestly, you gon' die lonely..no wedding ban's likely
    in fact the only Ban you'll get is exchangin' TorrMup's IP
    (eh ok)
    im above average, just admit it dawg, i'll leave you dead
    got you sayin' im the greatest or legendary status like a Calibre thread
    (eh)
    this lames such a gay fag, your career will never soar nor take flight
    your fruity when you strike a keyboard, then again you are the gay type
    (ok worded pretty well..nice)
    i'll keep you out the top ten, you can thank me later
    or try and beat me with 'Light' lines and references to 'Saber'
    (ehh ineffective)
    son you're losin' you a step closer? i'll limit your movements
    thinkin' you can 'Squeeze By' umm first find Room for improvement
    (nice)
    and i dont need a dope closer, your already owned...fag
    so i'll just mention "Quriosity" and make next weeks RBL Mag
    (nah)


    U need work, but u get abused enough for bein' fucking gay
    I'd stroke ur ego, but I couldn't find ONE concept from u that wasn't played
    (ok)
    Just faced Wash, I needa face more easy guys in the long haul
    I told Q to "just give me the light", n' I wasn't talkin' about Sean Paul
    (shudda put it like Just gimme da liiiight it wuda been funnier but it still worked..coz i ended up singin like sean paul did..just gimmme da light n pass the doooooooooooeeee or suttin lol..good shit here)
    Got u scared shook, everythin' u say has been missin'
    I'll have u running back to ur crib so fast, the bears signed u to play the position
    (ok)
    U can bag on my accomplishments, just lemme know when ur finished
    I know I'm not doing anything good, but I'll move on from ur girl in a minute
    (ok)
    U got a big mouth, don't talk shit, u don't even know me
    Fuck u, Saber ain't been good since he had Dominik Hasek as his goalie
    (nice)
    Get in line, ur next for a beatin, this lame has been warned
    Ur on deck, but shortly I'll move ur body to its rightful place in a morgue
    (eh ok)
    Dunno where u get ur wack shit, u'll never boast as the champ
    Checked out the light source, it looked more like a ghost than a lamp
    (eh ok close)




    v/trus on consistency and that gimme da ligt shit lol
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  10. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    up over no-shows and extensions
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  11. D.LOKE

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    VOTE: DATRUSHURTZ

    REASON: Even tho I have it tied in quotes (which 2 out of the 3 from each I think trus had the stronger) I think the stuff I didn't quote from each battler still had better stuff coming from Trus as apose to just missing with the punches. Saber had the Tormup and the Quriosity lines that I just wasn't really feelin but Trus didn't have stuff I wasn't feeling completly except maybe the morgue line I thought it was a lil simple,just stuff That wasn't quite strong enuff for quoting. the bears line, move on from your girl and the closer was all atleast alright. Only thing is because Saber predicted he'd get a Saber and Light line it almost look like Trus Fed when It came to the nameplay but he still had a stronger verse.


    U need work, but u get abused enough for bein' fucking gay
    I'd stroke ur ego, but I couldn't find ONE concept from u that wasn't played
    Just faced Wash, I needa face more easy guys in the long haul
    I told Q to "just give me the light", n' I wasn't talkin' about Sean Paul
    U got a big mouth, don't talk shit, u don't even know me
    Fuck u, Saber ain't been good since he had Dominik Hasek as his goalie

    VS

    last week I lost to KungFu Grip, a respected head pawned me
    but u couldnt handle Wash. i guess ur mom still does your laundry
    i'll keep you out the top ten, you can thank me later
    or try and beat me with 'Light' lines and references to 'Saber'
    son you're losin' you a step closer? i'll limit your movements
    thinkin' you can 'Squeeze By' umm first find Room for improvement
    ^ ^LIKE THE MULTI RIGHT THERE
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  12. Chrit

    Chrit The Prodigy

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    last week I lost to KungFu Grip, a respected head pawned me
    but u couldnt handle Wash. i guess ur mom still does your laundry

    vs

    U need work, but u get abused enough for bein' fucking gay
    I'd stroke ur ego, but I couldn't find ONE concept from u that wasn't played
    Just faced Wash, I needa face more easy guys in the long haul
    I told Q to "just give me the light", n' I wasn't talkin' about Sean Paul

    Light came pretty weak in all honesty. He had a couple decent concepts that werent worded the best. Everything else was either too simple or played.

    Trus came weaker than normal. He had the two quotables and 1 or 2 decent lines. Everything else was pretty shaky concept wise.

    v/Trus
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  13. Aloe

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    Saber

    last week I lost to KungFu Grip, a respected head pawned me
    but u couldnt handle Wash. i guess ur mom still does your laundry
    ^ lol okay start
    honestly, you gon' die lonely..no wedding ban's likely
    in fact the only Ban you'll get is exchangin' TorrMup's IP
    ^ good idea, but poor execution
    im above average, just admit it dawg, i'll leave you dead
    got you sayin' im the greatest or legendary status like a Calibre thread
    ^ eh
    this lames such a gay fag, your career will never soar nor take flight
    your fruity when you strike a keyboard, then again you are the gay type
    ^ ok, not hard hitting though
    i'll keep you out the top ten, you can thank me later
    or try and beat me with 'Light' lines and references to 'Saber'
    ^ eh
    son you're losin' you a step closer? i'll limit your movements
    thinkin' you can 'Squeeze By' umm first find Room for improvement
    ^ decent
    and i dont need a dope closer, your already owned...fag
    so i'll just mention "Quriosity" and make next weeks RBL Mag
    ^ yo wtf you bit my shit lol

    pretty average verse right here light. there werent any lines that were terrible, but there were that many that were great.

    DaTrus

    U need work, but u get abused enough for bein' fucking gay
    I'd stroke ur ego, but I couldn't find ONE concept from u that wasn't played
    ^ pretty good
    Just faced Wash, I needa face more easy guys in the long haul
    I told Q to "just give me the light", n' I wasn't talkin' about Sean Paul
    ^ played
    Got u scared shook, everythin' u say has been missin'
    I'll have u running back to ur crib so fast, the bears signed u to play the position
    ^ lol cool
    U can bag on my accomplishments, just lemme know when ur finished
    I know I'm not doing anything good, but I'll move on from ur girl in a minute
    ^ haha this made me chuckle
    U got a big mouth, don't talk shit, u don't even know me
    Fuck u, Saber ain't been good since he had Dominik Hasek as his goalie
    ^ this had potential, but wasnt executed in the best way
    Get in line, ur next for a beatin, this lame has been warned
    Ur on deck, but shortly I'll move ur body to its rightful place in a morgue
    ^ eh
    Dunno where u get ur wack shit, u'll never boast as the champ
    Checked out the light source, it looked more like a ghost than a lamp
    ^ okay

    nice verse, had a lot of misses, but the lines that were on were good. and some of them really cracked me up.

    very close battle, altho both verses were kind of average. both had hits and misses, but DaTrus's hits were more impactful and some of his lines made me laugh. vote = Da Trus
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  14. Light Saber

    Light Saber I LoVe AsiaN ChicKs

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    Lmao... i went to go read your verse after you posted this... kinda similar i guess
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  15. Eusich

    Eusich the incredible.

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    saber, this was dull, very melodramatic and boring altogether, there was no energy or momentum, the pace was slow and the concepts were drab, i wasn't feeling this, your best line was the opener but the rest were either played concepts or came off as fillerish, overall this was your match to win but you failed

    dth, off top the energy was higher than saber's which was a good point, you had some commentary here and there and overall your concepts were all at least slightly above decent, i liked the sean paul line, the goalie, girl, morgue, and position lines were all decent too although some were played like the position in particular, the whole running back/football position has been flipped in almost every possible way, nevertheless the rest were consistently at least decent and overall you just had the better verse

    dth wins it
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  16. Aloe

    Aloe www.myspace.com/aloemusic

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    haha dead similar. dont worry tho i didnt mean to imply u bit it from me haha i kno it was coincidence
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