[WK/11] [Contender] 1. Eggo 3-0 v. 2. Rap Antics 7-3 (Vote!)

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DEADLINES​

The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
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VOTING​

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VERSES​

[11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
[12] - The second competitor must match or post less than the first competitor, but in no case can the second competitor exceed the first competitor.
[13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​

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check, 12 or 16 dude.

12 or 16 eh?




how the fuck did you make it here? last week he just claimed fibs
any bloodline you'd leave, would be faker than lil wayne's kids
and those Haiti and Brittany lines were some low blows guys
^that should be rephrased before this faggot looks for open flys
heres eggo's style here: rhyme words that sound queer, setups of bunched rhymes
then when its crunchtime... throw up an irrelevant wack ass punchline
you know i normally do 20, guess you was too scared to swing
a 'teen'll drop this egg like, "fuck this class about parenting"
a.k.a. the age his mother had the lonely, palmfucking son
call her chicken pox, it was her preference to get it young
Let's just abbreviate it, Kid your shit is easily handled
just take the first half of your name... as an example
your fucking garbage, your custom title should be "hefty, hefty"
feeling naked without a gun... watch the lefty, Leslie
cuz circle or four sided, I could care to describe...
no matter how you slice it, eggo's still a square inside

I'll laugh as I'm snubbin you, relax. ya trash n' ya rubbish too
fuck teaching me a lesson,.. faggot ya couldn pass for a substitute
reppin a duo team in ya sig, he's quick to replace you n relish it
n' ya name comes AFTER Blazyn's.. bitch that makes you irrelevant
ya bested n' ya mention me. ya worse n' neglectin my weaponry
if nothin good lasts forever,.. dog ya verse is stretchin indefinately
I'm sick of you reppin your gay clicks, at first it was a riddle
as for Beat N Werds.. motherfucker please insert With in the middle
ya girls enormous, it isnt' normal. shes the widest n' mingled
The Climb' to get on top ya bitch, inspired Miley Cyrus's hit single
you've never been good. your stuntin in' past earnings
ya poor structure's only backed by poor punches n' whack wording!
ya got all these characteristics. look. brother wait if ya looking
the eye of the tiger, heart of a lion.. n' any other trait of a pussy
it's protocol, you ain't funny. stop waitin ya known to fall
forget Dane,.. I could Cook ya verse without makin a joke at all

thanks for showing. over.

They both suck.

and those Haiti and Brittany lines were some low blows guys
^that should be rephrased before this faggot looks for open flys
you know i normally do 20, guess you was too scared to swing
a 'teen'll drop this egg like, "fuck this class about parenting"

vs

ya bested n' ya mention me. ya worse n' neglectin my weaponry
if nothin good lasts forever,.. dog ya verse is stretchin indefinately
ya got all these characteristics. look. brother wait if ya looking
the eye of the tiger, heart of a lion.. n' any other trait of a pussy

V//Eggo. But seriously this was terrible. If this is the level of intensity that you guys bring, then I could champ here in a matter of weeks. I didnt see any stand out punches what so ever. ^^Those quotables were just to be nice. But imo eggo edged it.

^_^ [kat]

^ stop posting in these threads or i will ban you

Not sure if I'm allowed to vote, but I'll drop some knowledge for you.

Antics - Not feeling much of your verse. You did have a cool concept that I would like to point out. The "e.g./example" line was clever, but could have worded it different. The closer was okay, yet expected. It's hard to go against someone personally with a name like he has, no signature, not really known on the boards, etc.

Eggo - Your flow is solid. Good use of multies as well to spice up your verse. Again, nothing really standing out. That stretch indefinitely line was a good flip. Old concept, but you flipped it nicely. I liked the Miley Cyrus line. Clever and it made me laugh.

Overall, pretty even battle.

Vote - Eggo.

This vote was based on structure, flow, and content. Both emcees came with verses where nothing really STOOD OUT like "whoa!" Even matchup, good job.

- Weez

Favoreite lines:

you know i normally do 20, guess you was too scared to swing
a 'teen'll drop this egg like, "fuck this class about parenting"
cuz circle or four sided, I could care to describe...
no matter how you slice it, eggo's still a square inside

vs

you've never been good. your stuntin in' past earnings
ya poor structure's only backed by poor punches n' whack wording!
ya got all these characteristics. look. brother wait if ya looking
the eye of the tiger, heart of a lion.. n' any other trait of a pussy
it's protocol, you ain't funny. stop waitin ya known to fall
forget Dane,.. I could Cook ya verse without makin a joke at all

If the voting is open, then, Q, I will edit my post..

Antics.. hit me up

v/tie