[WK/1] T.a.C 0-0 v. .:Pain:. 0-0 (T.a.C wins)

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  1. Xquisite

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    OFFICIAL RULES & REGULATIONS​



    DEADLINES​


    The deadline for verses is Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Saturday @ 11:59pm EST.
    The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59pm EST.​


    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.​


    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 30 lines. Contender/Champion match verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - The second competitor must match or post less than the first competitor, but in no case can the second competitor exceed the first competitor.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​
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  2. T.a.C

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    haha, neoyce

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  3. T.a.C

    T.a.C Guest

    You’re why X killed the league, yes my friend its true
    You vs me in the rstl champ match,
    I don’t blame him, if I thought you had a chance of champin my league I’d end it too
    Against you in both leagues, so 2 wins I should maintain
    But if I gotta read 2 verses you write, maybe I should be the one named .:pain:.
    Dudes got a lame dame, but this’ll cause laughter within his spouse
    His nagger in a blouse named their dog Hov to have a rapper in this house
    This bastards got no doubt, you got the FLF back our guarded ember
    So trust, we ain’t lettin no motherfuckers pick on our retarded member
    No point in trippin, fag, you should be quittin rap
    But your nickname is fittin,chap because Jae Keeps spittin wack
    Listen lad, you’re legacy is broke, schmuck
    At least as long as you live, one person will think you don’t suck
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  4. T.a.C

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  5. Knowledge

    Knowledge Guest

    This will be good.
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  6. .:Pain:.

    .:Pain:. Futurely J. Keeper

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    Number 1: You live in San Francisco with rich folks,
    The gayest fuckin' city in the world, that's where he lives yo,
    Number 2: You're a virgin, at least till monday, it seems,
    Cuz this poor bastard will see he can get it in both leagues,
    Number 3: You post more than anyone here could know,
    You're fuckin' nineteen, go out, start drinkin' beers with hoes!
    But he won't, do the addition, I don't hate the peeps, but tacky,
    Just come out the closet, it's plain to see you're a faggot,
    Let's see how many name plays this dude will poorly use,
    "Keeps it wack," "I'm the one in pain,"
    That's why we stopped expecting more from you,
    FLF yep, you were brought in cuz you live life in bed with milk and tea,
    I was brought in to give this bitch some writing credibility...
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  7. Significantt

    Significantt New Member

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    Number 3: You post more than anyone here could know,
    You're fuckin' nineteen, go out, start drinkin' beers with hoes!

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    You’re why X killed the league, yes my friend its true
    You vs me in the rstl champ match,
    I don’t blame him, if I thought you had a chance of champin my league I’d end it too
    This bastards got no doubt, you got the FLF back our guarded ember
    So trust, we ain’t lettin no motherfuckers pick on our retarded member

    cool battle here, but I got tac taking this one with better material. His opener was solid & it was a personal which made it more effective, kinda fell off after that but the retard line got a chuckle out of me. Pain was ok but i wasnt feeling the 1,2,3 shit that took away from his verse. The personal I quoted was cool, but he really had no hard punches after that.

    vote:tac
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  8. Xquisite

    Xquisite Guest

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  9. Rap Antics

    Rap Antics MOB

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    This was a good battle, i got Tac winning this tho.

    Pain you came coo tho.. i personally thougth the number shit was a nice leadup with potential to make a dope punch, but the length of the setup leading to the faggot ending in line 4 didnt amaze me as much as i thought it wouldv'e, besides that, you came wit a solid finish, this was the best line:

    Let's see how many name plays this dude will poorly use,
    "Keeps it wack," "I'm the one in pain,"
    That's why we stopped expecting more from you,

    Tac came pretty nice, the only real complaint i had was that some lines were a lil wordy. but, your punches still came out efffective. i thought these lines were good:

    Against you in both leagues, so 2 wins I should maintain
    But if I gotta read 2 verses you write, maybe I should be the one named .:pain:.
    No point in trippin, fag, you should be quittin rap
    But your nickname is fittin,chap because Jae Keeps spittin wack

    ^thought those were good punches. good battle

    v/Tac
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  10. Chin Kwon

    Chin Kwon The Angkorian

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    hmm...

    tac

    cool and consistent work here. the closer was good and the retard line got a smile out of me. however the problem with your verse was that it's not "vicious", for lack of better word. u played it kind of reserve...or at least it felt that way. also, when i first read ur verse, i sorta liked that "Pain" line until....

    Pain
    (continuing from tac's verse)...this lines here, lol:
    Let's see how many name plays this dude will poorly use,
    "Keeps it wack," "I'm the one in pain,"
    but on a side note, this could easily be considered 'feeding', but i'll give pain the benefit of the doubt cause i've been around him before and he aint shady like that. But back to the point, i probably could've overlooked that but the name play, as pain predicted, really wasn't that great.

    So with that said...i gotta go against the grain and vote Pain. His personals were harder, despite the lack of creativity, lol. But above all, he had the most important factor which was entertainment. i enjoyed Pain's verse more, simple as that. e z.
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  11. Gopher D'Gusto

    Gopher D'Gusto Well-Known Member

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  12. Xquisite

    Xquisite Guest

    up 2-1...Gopher your vote doesnt count, you need an explanation
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  13. _KDP_

    _KDP_ Active Member

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    TAC
    You’re why X killed the league, yes my friend its true
    You vs me in the rstl champ match,
    I don’t blame him, if I thought you had a chance of champin my league I’d end it too
    ok opener

    Against you in both leagues, so 2 wins I should maintain
    But if I gotta read 2 verses you write, maybe I should be the one named .:pain:.
    nah

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    Originally Posted by .:pain:. View Post
    Find a cuter guy/dog combination than me and dog Jigga (HOV!).
    Dudes got a lame dame, but this’ll cause laughter within his spouse
    His nagger in a blouse named their dog Hov to have a rapper in this house
    rhyme scheme cool, content blah

    This bastards got no doubt, you got the FLF back our guarded ember
    So trust, we ain’t lettin no motherfuckers pick on our retarded member
    this bastards got no doubt? ok, it rhymes...

    No point in trippin, fag, you should be quittin rap
    But your nickname is fittin,chap because Jae Keeps spittin wack
    nah

    Listen lad, you’re legacy is broke, schmuck
    At least as long as you live, one person will think you don’t suck
    what?

    Pain
    Number 1: You live in San Francisco with rich folks,
    The gayest fuckin' city in the world, that's where he lives yo,
    ehh

    Number 2: You're a virgin, at least till monday, it seems,
    Cuz this poor bastard will see he can get it in both leagues,
    thorough

    Number 3: You post more than anyone here could know,
    You're fuckin' nineteen, go out, start drinkin' beers with hoes!
    lol

    But he won't, do the addition, I don't hate the peeps, but tacky,
    Just come out the closet, it's plain to see you're a faggot,
    ehh

    Let's see how many name plays this dude will poorly use,
    "Keeps it wack," "I'm the one in pain,"
    That's why we stopped expecting more from you,
    lol

    FLF yep, you were brought in cuz you live life in bed with milk and tea,
    I was brought in to give this bitch some writing credibility...
    ok close


    overall, was feeling pain's verse more here. they both had some throwaway lines, but there was nothing from TaC that even resembled anything interesting.


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  14. Gopher D'Gusto

    Gopher D'Gusto Well-Known Member

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    Ah, my bad.

    I think Tac's "if you were champin my league, I'd end it too" was the nail in the coffin, and was a very good strategy to start out a verse with. Kind of hard to be personal in a text league, so props to Tac on that. On top of that, I didn't particularly care for Pain labeling his punches Numbers 1, 2, and 3.
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  15. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    lmfao. botw. pain had a few dope lines, getting specific about his opponents and whatnot.
    holy shit, tac just comitted homi !


    Number 3: You post more than anyone here could know,
    You're fuckin' nineteen, go out, start drinkin' beers with hoes!
    FLF yep, you were brought in cuz you live life in bed with milk and tea,
    I was brought in to give this bitch some writing credibility...

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    tac's entire verse.

    vote - tac
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  16. Gramur

    Gramur Yung Troy

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    You’re why X killed the league, yes my friend its true
    You vs me in the rstl champ match,
    I don’t blame him, if I thought you had a chance of champin my league I’d end it too
    This bastards got no doubt, you got the FLF back our guarded ember
    So trust, we ain’t lettin no motherfuckers pick on our retarded member

    These were the only two worth quoting, everything else was pretty blah..that opener was pretty good. And that Retarded member line was jokes, lol...

    Pain,
    you really didn't have anything really worth quoting...the only one close was

    Let's see how many name plays this dude will poorly use,
    "Keeps it wack," "I'm the one in pain,"
    That's why we stopped expecting more from you,

    and it was kind of a feed off his verse...I've seen you come wayyyy harder than this Pain..step it back up sir

    v-T.a.C
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  17. BronzeAtlas

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    Vote- TaC

    I just liked his verse much better. With Pains verse I just didnt think that it was tight. Probably could have done it without the whoe "number one" thing. I didnt really think that there was anything quotable from either verse, but I did like the pick on the retarted member line. I thought that was the best line of both verses. Pretty decent battle but Tacky took this one.
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