Wk 1 Sonny Daze vs 9VoLT

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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Friday @ 11:59pm PST.
    [02] - There are absolutely NO extensions under any circumstances. For this reason, It is unnecessary to request extensions. I apologize in advance.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am PST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match. If there are less than 5 battles available to vote on, you must vote on all available battles.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly. Failure to post your links will result in a DQ. It is not our responsibility to make sure you voted.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY. Specifically, vote under the name that you signed in under, please.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​
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  2. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    The rules have changed slightly from last season. It is probably a good idea to scan them quickly.
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  3. 9VoLt

    9VoLt New Member

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    checking in. I will also post my voting links on this post.

    I'm not writing anymore than 16 lines. I'm sure you will match whatever I do and visa versa. good luck
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  4. 9VoLt

    9VoLt New Member

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    Yup.
    Forecasting thunderstorms, it's the end of sunny days..
    Change my name to right arrow cuz you gon end up gettin played..
    Lets be downright honest with no context to the battle..
    People don't feel sonny daze at all, I guess you hail from Seattle..
    I'm a mountain you can't climb, a saddle you can't straddle..
    Bouta be a inhumane massacre, treat em like angus cut cattle..
    Okay.
    You really ain't bouta find no one as bad as me..
    I'ma show up at your door, assault you with a bag of batteries..
    9 be electric, make you lose all of your calories..
    Sweatin my punches worse than liston in the rematch with ali..
    Yeah I went overboard I guess I can give him a break..
    Son you like Randy Marsh the way you just let me piss all in your face..

    Randy Marsh takes one (bananna) for the team

    Good luck.
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  5. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    Battery life’s dwelled, you’ve spent too much time on the shelf.
    You've been on this site for 12 years, and still rhyme like you’re twelve
    I revitalized your health, caught me at a sober hour
    Took you light cuz there’s better ways to spend my solar power
    Since I’ve been getting so much shine, my eyesight ain’t the same
    But you’ve been taking big “L’s”, it’s become a highlight of your name.
    Becoming slowly obese, every battle’s like holding a feast.
    Don’t be surprised if you get “ate”, and see your voltage increase
    I’m on some Queens shit- a story of how I beat your ass.
    NAW…
    I’m on some Queens shit- Astoria ‘n Howard Beach’d your ass.
    Same Sonny, new city, still a Rap Music heavyweight.
    Don’t let these Queens lines go over your head like the 7 train.

    One.
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  6. Venamis

    Venamis Moderator

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    9VoLt didn't necessarily land many punches. The concepts and ideas were there, but there wasn't much else to take away from his verse. The line about Seattle was a great concept. I just felt that it could have been flipped better.

    SonnyDaze had a few really good punches. I loved the opener. It was strong, although similiar concepts have been used in this league before. The big L's punch made me chuckle aloud. I'd stay away from those Queens lines that are too specific to a casual audience.

    Vote: SonnyDaze
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  7. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Up over no shows.
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  8. GWHype

    GWHype New Member

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    9Volt:

    "Forecasting Thunderstorms, it's the end of Sonny Daze
    change my name to right arrow cuz u gonna end up gettin played
    lets be straight up honest with no context to battle
    people don't feel Sonny Daze at all, guess he hail from Seattle"


    Sonny Daze:

    "Battery Lifes dwelled, you spent too much time on the shelf
    you've been on this site for 12 years, and still rhyme like ur twelve
    i revitalized your health, caught me at a sober hour
    took you light cuz theres better ways to utilize my solar power"



    this was a real close battle the way i saw it....each of you had some real tight lines....i'm gonna give this one to 9Volt though, i thought his wordplay was just a little bit better.

    Vote - 9VoLT
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  9. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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  10. 9VoLt

    9VoLt New Member

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  11. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    I got Sonny taking this one. I couldn't really get into 9volts verse; I did like the Seattle line, though. Sonny had a solid verse.

    Vote Sonny
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  12. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Sonny Daze wins 2-1
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