Winter GRB Rd 2: youngster vs Wird of Pley

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  1. King Doza

    King Doza New Member

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    wow Wird your delivery was very onpoint. So much so that no offense but if any other rapper would have rapped that things wouldnt as been as dope. Your delivery made things much better in my opinion.



    Youngster I think you should keep at it. I see potential in you, but everything is not as on point as it coulda been. you gotta work on how your overall delivery. My bad homie but what do i know it may not have been your day. But keep me posted on your music if you can



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    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1029686
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  2. Oblivion

    Oblivion ^^ Eeek oook

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    wird of pley-i didn't understand that joke lol no trivia master award for me.. lol isn't this tha theme music to some show? random lol first time hearing you.. not a huge fan of your voice but your flow is straight and it suits your style.. not a lot of stand out lines in tha first minute or so.. moneyshot was okay tho.. haha your impression of him was funny.. dunno if its true or not 'cos i haven't listened to his yet but if it is, nice diss.. i liked tha beat but this was soooo short.. not really any standout lines imho, good track tho, felt you're more of tha diss-them battler than tha wordplay rapper

    youngster-nice dre beat, not sure about its suitability for a battle tho, will be good to hear what you do.. voice is cool as is your flow.. your overdubs make it sound a little sloppy at times tho.. but not a big deal.. some good disses in your track but again no standout lines to me personally.. at times when you tried to speed up your flow it didn't sound quite right.. it was a little sloppy.. your rode tha beat nicely most tha time tho.. good track, again it seems your more of a diss-them battler than wordplay rapper like wird of pley.. prolly why this is so close for me to decide

    not a great battle, but close.. i get ta feeling if youngsters verse was longer and had a few more punches i woulda given it to him.. but as it is i think word just took it

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  3. Wird of Pley

    Wird of Pley I Slice My Own Ham

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    Nah your right. This was the epitome of me shitting something out last minute to try to get to the next round.

    Just stay tuned for round 3, if I get someone whos raw I'll try to bring glorious thunder for yall.
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  4. TraGiC

    TraGiC Recognize Real

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    dont make wird get hype...i burnt one of his battles and start bumping it real loud and blew all 6 door speakers and both my subs and then called my insurance and they had a wird clause and covered all that shit

    Geah!
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  5. youngster

    youngster New Member

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    Ayo much respect on the feedback. Love to see real criticism and not people just saying "You suck". Ima vote on all the battles this weekend. still uppin tho
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  6. Wird of Pley

    Wird of Pley I Slice My Own Ham

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    Yo where u from in worcester? I'm tryna move back soon.
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  7. Wird of Pley

    Wird of Pley I Slice My Own Ham

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    Uppin for the gangsties.
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  8. youngster

    youngster New Member

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    GBV...Come back through tryna see hip hop music grow out here
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  9. Wird of Pley

    Wird of Pley I Slice My Own Ham

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    lol my dads from GBV, can u escort me when I come through with armed guards?
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  10. Punches

    Punches a.k.a UH OH

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    worcester? goddamn thats close to me, and i think kingauthor is close by too...
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  11. 5 Starre

    5 Starre Big Jaw Entertainemnt

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    You know how we do reppin GBV. Holla
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  12. Wird of Pley

    Wird of Pley I Slice My Own Ham

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    Yo, everyone from Worcester or around worcester hit me on aim - wirdofpley.
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  13. The_K3

    The_K3 ^Secksi^

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    domt do it unless u like male on male cyber 53x
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  14. enef

    enef voting against DZK in every round.

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    *ims wird*
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  15. youngster

    youngster New Member

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    lol Auight I def. know now that you know bout the Valley.
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