Winter GRB Rd 2: On-UrB vs World Renowned

Discussion in 'GRB Archives' started by Cire, Jan 15, 2007.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. Cire

    Cire The Peoples Champion

    Joined:
    Sep 18, 1999
    Messages:
    40,196
    [​IMG]

    - $1000.00 prize money will be donated by NDesigns Screen Printing
    - $800 additional prize money will be divided up into the final round.




    GRB - Winter Grand Royal Audio Battle 2006 Rules - First Round
    - Second Round Audios are DUE Wednesday Night Jan 17th at 11.59 pm cst. Theme: up to 2-3+ Minutes must be about your opponent(s)
    - You must mention their BOARD name(s). Must be atleast 2 minutes.
    - If audio is not two minutes, you must contest it if you want a DQ.
    - One mp3 File Must Be posted Wednesday Night Jan 17th at 11.59 pm cst.- We will not store any audio files.
    - YOU MUST post using your board name that is registered to the match. Others will be DQ'ed.
    - Voting for Semis will start once all verses are up.
    - Voting links will be posted and votes will be shown.
    - No Comments allowed on battle post until voting links are posted.
    - Can post videos

    DO NOT CHECK IN, UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES DO NOT CHECK IN
    test
  2. 'OnUrb'

    'OnUrb' The Master

    Joined:
    Oct 19, 2004
    Messages:
    282
    IIght Uploading... LINK coming in like 2 mins....

    GRB RD2.

    OnUrb VS World Renowned Critically Acclaimed
    Lyrics down there
    IIght Soundclicks Encoder @ 128k is really smashin my shit, and horribly Lispin my vocals with the compression settings.....PLS
    Use this link here instead.....
    http://www.soundclick.com/util/downloadsong.cfm?id=4896875

    (ok after hearing it at True Quality level....Give some feed)
    Truthfully all ya'll missin so much shit...out of this audio @ 128k It sounds horrid in comparison to how i recorded it

    www.soundclick.com/OnUrB


    Ok since im Exposed now ya'll can Understand my name..
    BrUnO = OnUrB "Yep me name backwards..."

    G/L To you World Renowned...Good Battle...
    u was str8 so..Respects...

    Hit me up..Enjoy
    Lyrics (for The Conceptually Challenged
    )

    You can catch a good laugh as I Slaughter This Herb
    Cause Uncle ‘TOM’ aint ‘Cruising’ By..when im at’ ‘war wit this world’ (tom cruis in war of the worlds;
    (rushin)
    Russian an Arms Race, Like The cold Wars Coming…
    Depicting History only time you’ll find World’s War WON-Bitch (WWI-bitch)

    So Its obvious ima be pissin off Christina
    Daddies Jamacian, and impregnated some Chick from Hiroshima
    Spit a punch even his Panties’ll A Twist!
    Only firm Breasts u grab are a manikins Tits…
    Tell me ….Who could blame all his Boring-shit..
    Ima Easily throw.. this Lame out the tournament..cause more or less
    Only had a bulging head in a Pussy, when he came out his moms Orafis

    I don’t give a shit if u doupt me,
    You can prolly make luv to a belly button even IF she AN OUTY!!(wow!)

    how the fuck World Renowned has critically A-cclaimed Lyrics?
    If Insurance Put A-Claim on ya Critical Condition…
    Im hearing Crickets, You’ll never be acclmaimed by a critic
    This dumb mo fucka barly takes Critism…
    Fuck it actually Aint No Critics Listen! DON’T FUCK WIT ME…
    “OnUrb Done SHAT in me Crumpet, and PISS in me Cup-a-Tea!!” – world renowned

    Whos World Renowned Beatin…? Cause Im a hard-Target
    But he catchin a WORLD RENOWNED BEATIN...ima floss off it
    you gave the Title to yaself, every battle you Lost-often…
    Cause you’ll find it “harder to EXCELL”, than a “Japanese Microsoft Office”

    Your fuckin stupid ya mind must be hollow
    Heres another ~Clutch~ Look a like…MR Mugato!
    If you up in this battle u know my Cream Swallowed
    cause you Couldnt shit on this…Chuggin Visine Bottles..

    You wont get that broad…cause u cant spit that hard..
    But I Bet ya Gurl ‘Break me off a Piece’ Like a ‘Kit Kat Bar’
    Cause if I get a chance to punch u in the face then its all over…
    You better off French kissin ya lawn Mower…

    You aint Jamaican, you a fuckin Wigger
    Couldn’t get URB HEATED..spicing ya CRUMPET DINNER
    Ya accent sucks, But these balls REAL!!
    First off all Ya food Blows..ya’ll drink warm Beer
    Drive on the wrong side of the road, and ya all Queers
    Even MC Prince wouldn’t wanna meet this queen of Whales..Rear!
    Str8 up u wack as fuck…I wont be tryin-kindness!!
    YOU SUCK DICK like you Going for ya DEEP Sea Diving License!
    Ill leave ubleedin you harmless…im reaching for stardom
    You don’t spit fire…dog u aint even an Arsin
    Could only ‘Trash URB’ ‘throwin weed in the garbage’..
    Leavin this ‘cat Served’…like ‘Japanese Needin a Harvest’’
    U will Leave as a carcass, be reaching the cororner….
    Are you really retarded?
    Yea u got a Job, But this Nikka Works for the ‘Receiving Department’!

    Go ahead drop a verse…Just Pretend you a Rapper…
    He a sweet toppin Danish Pudding, cherry with a Hint of Mollases..
    This cat Gone be Taking more shit…Than an ENIMA-Practice..
    the same time U FULL OF MORE SHIT..than being givin an ENIMA..BACKWARDS!!

    Im makin Plainly Obviously…You the WACKest CAT
    So what you call ‘20 World Renowned in a Bundle?’
    “A FUCKING PACK OF FAGS!!!” (get it? If u don’t ur stupid…Fag=Cigs 4 the morons)

    Wit ya Shitty ass accent…Get beat by a Tanker…
    I need a better way to Rhyme Bloody Wanka..wit running Ankles..(ROFL!)

    The Outro..Is just me Fuckin around….mockin World Renowned….off the top of the dome…don’t take it too seriously…ROFL I was fuckin around….ENJOY!!!
    test
  3. Worthiest Words

    Worthiest Words New Member

    Joined:
    Feb 2, 2004
    Messages:
    2,168
    test
  4. Huey Fig Newton

    Huey Fig Newton Rebel-He-Is

    Joined:
    Oct 17, 2003
    Messages:
    14,042
    test
  5. The_K3

    The_K3 ^Secksi^

    Joined:
    Dec 30, 2005
    Messages:
    29,265
    do u gotta a bit of a lisp onurb??? just wondering didn.t notice anything last round.. ill vote on this later.. both came nice.
    test
  6. TunK

    TunK Active Member

    Joined:
    Jul 5, 2005
    Messages:
    1,755
    On-Urb - wasnt feelin the beat choice to much, flow wasnt that impressive, some lines were cool, overall didnt sound that great...maybe rushed.

    World - beat was cool, flow was on point, was consistant with your lines.
    test
  7. _RhYmEs_

    _RhYmEs_ Need Dope Beats??

    Joined:
    Dec 31, 2003
    Messages:
    2,730
    word did his thing thing, good shit, you had some dope lines in there,
    on urb, delivery needed some work, you had some lines, needed to come more polished

    v/WR aka jj

    vote on my battle and leave a mofucking feedback


    ONE
    test
  8. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

    Joined:
    Oct 17, 2000
    Messages:
    17,170
    world had a dope verse


    urb was a little bit off with his style this round, sounded a little bit more off beat, his style is still sickly....gluck to both
    test
  9. TrAdeMaRk EnoX

    TrAdeMaRk EnoX New Member

    Joined:
    Mar 24, 2000
    Messages:
    1,700
    on-urb....you just sounded like you were angry because your supposed to be angry. didnt sound genuine to me

    world renown had more fun, played shit easier.. smoother audio all the way around
    test
  10. 'OnUrb'

    'OnUrb' The Master

    Joined:
    Oct 19, 2004
    Messages:
    282
    Na i gotta figure out how to use this Hardware De-Esser better...
    In the manual it even says to watch out wit it cause may make the vocals sound lispy........forgot to turn that shit off...

    Good looks on the feedback...
    But im skeptacle to what some of you are judgin on....
    flow delievery Punches disses...mets and all that shit...iight but...My Geniun Anger?? my PolishedNess......come on now..


    but...good looks on all the feedback anyways...just too short for me to get where some were going wit that ,

    But...world...I wanted to give u a heads up on Everything u said that was..Just TOTALLY without Grounds..BOGUS INFO.(didnt make sense,)
    -Im Catholic...like 90% of brazil is Catholic wtf?
    -I never posted up a 'myspace stat' i dont get hits on Myspace...wtf?
    -lol The name Bruno...is Associated wit Some HUGE Italian Bouncer type Guy who fucks ya day up when dude says."Get him Bruno" ..lol..wtf
    -i aint never hit u up in an email..lmao i dunno ya aim or email wtf!?
    -My album aint Free....I dont have a MIX tape on the Net....I dont have my album on the net....NO track on my page is On my Album..WTF? The name there for the 'cheap copy write' lol...But Twisted Vision prolly droppin late this year...COP THAT SHIT!!
    -Brazil aint known for Playin wit Bulls....(thas Cowboys and texas..mexico..hispanic countries ect. WTF!!???)

    Careful where you do your research World...thas all some bogus "facts"

    Good battle regardless though...Lets get some more votes up in this shit. wit some break downs...on the content and shit..
    Good looks all on the feed..wunn
    test
  11. Messiah

    Messiah Guest

    On-Urb


    ur voice isn't as deep as the last one...but i'm still a little frightened.
    likin it though. disses is pretty good. lol @ makin luv to a belly button
    even if it is an outtie. good world/name flips. nice excel/microsoft
    office punch. feelin it dukes.



    World

    lol @ the gay intro. wooooo...like that delivery/mic presence. feelin
    the flow. disses is nice. good name flip/suburban line. uh, u fell
    off at the end...badly. u made me hear the UK accent and the disses
    got weak. u shoulda kept up wit what u had goin in the beginning.




    v/Urb..he stayed persistant wit it. came harder. but good battle
    test
  12. 'OnUrb'

    'OnUrb' The Master

    Joined:
    Oct 19, 2004
    Messages:
    282
    Messiah....You forgot to drop ya vote in the Link fam....
    test
  13. comPleXNY

    comPleXNY Illest Alive

    Joined:
    Nov 22, 2004
    Messages:
    3,410
    on urb before i begin let me say that u have to go back to my battle and actually go to the voting link and place your vote for me in there since u voted for me or else they wont count that vote...

    now

    on urb u got a dope voice i feel if u got grimier and more gritty son ya voice alone would take this battle.. ya punchlines was nice but i could hear better... ya have a nice flow though i like it alot u came real dope in this i give u ya credit good shyt homie.. .

    world renowned i aint gonna lie usually uk dudes they accent pisses me off but yo ya shyt is real tyte u got a unique style ya punchlines were real hard hittin and u got a dope ass flow for real...

    overall though i would have to give this one to world renowned it just kept my attention more and made me wanna listen more threw out the whole thing but im not taking anything away from on urb... good shyt to both of yall

    may the best man win yall both doing ya thing

    please hit up my battle and vote fairly like i did with yalls

    on urb i hope this doesnt affect ya vote for me and shyt...

    but yea dope battle yall


    heres my shyt

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1029690
    test
  14. King Doza

    King Doza New Member

    Joined:
    Jul 2, 2006
    Messages:
    1,344
    World Renownd- I like your flow but I aignt hear that many significant lines. Seemed like alotta filler. But you went on the joint I overall like your style though.


    OnUrb- Seems like more punches. I dont like your voice as much as Worlds though. But you ridin the beat. THAT INTRO HAD ME ROLLIN. I laughed more on your track though so thats how i usually vote by who i laughed at more.


    I dont know but I just feel the funnier more entertaining battles usually. And Im not just talkin bout OnUrbs long outro but I just felt his punchlines more

    vote-OnUrb



    but World I hope its no hard feelings I do like your style and would enjoy hearing your music. If you got a CD I'll cop
    test
  15. 'OnUrb'

    'OnUrb' The Master

    Joined:
    Oct 19, 2004
    Messages:
    282
    Up Up....

    Come on i do believe i voted on EVERY battle in this rd.....
    lets get all the rest of the voters in here..
    Keep it coming
    test
  16. SALVDOR

    SALVDOR Delyreeuz Owns Me

    Joined:
    Nov 11, 2000
    Messages:
    32,346
    peepin on urb first



    - flow is.. ehh.. could be a lot more fluid.... delivery.. lacks a lot.. wish ya cadence woulda been more fluid... when your delivery ya lines... BUT the lines... lack a lot... i mean you dissin.. but its not punchin u know.. tha enima.. repeat bars... wuz a big mistake..... to do a punch once..than follow wit pretty much the same punch different


    i mean.. wit practice your shit could be mad straight... u almost have the basics.... just workin on ya scheme and fluidness of ya flow to make ya delivery stand out would help a lot



    that and your lines... but its wuteva wuteva u know.. props for doin ya thang




    ight here's world's shit


    wordl renowned



    ight shit started... can't understand the intro really.. cuz i cant' make out wut u sayin really


    the quality and accent of this intro.. is losin me... but wuteva ... im waitin for the verse


    ooo... im diggin the energy..... delivery.. is straight on this.. flow is solid..... some parts are wuteva.. but mostly good.... content is ehh so far... not too many lines standin out.. cuz the mix is bad.... vocalz too low.. .so its hard to pick up lines (specially cuz im fucked up).... but ya flow and delivery is obviously more fluid


    beat is ehh....


    ight beat switch... not diggin this one at all


    flow isn't as good as the first verse... i am catchin more accent in this one
    so its makin it hard to get the lines


    the twisted visions.. line is straight


    the last line didn't stick wit me.. it wuz ... decent



    overall tho


    im goin off flow, delivery.. .presence....

    cuz lyrikz didn't connect wit me on either side


    vote - world
    test
  17. Punches

    Punches a.k.a UH OH

    Joined:
    Oct 21, 2005
    Messages:
    8,059
    Aight Urb guilted me into voting on this one, so lemme do this ...

    Urb - you got a crazy ass voice...flow is aiiightt....punches were aiiighttt...yeah it does sound like you got a lisp, must be that shit.....cat served haha...outro is a tad long....overall pretty good though, the flow is straight, i just feel like something is missing, maybe its cadence...

    World - cassidy beat is sick, always liked this one...wtf @ intro lol...flow is smooth, pressence is nice too....some nice punches right off the bat...adlibs are a tad off in spots, but you sound more polished...your voice sounds a lil different than usual too, I like it....2nd beat is handsome...

    overall World just came with it

    vote - W/R
    test
  18. iLLy

    iLLy will fuck you up.

    Joined:
    Nov 7, 2005
    Messages:
    484
    On-urb your lisp is retarded son, but u got some decent lines, flow was pretty shakey

    World is a beast, flow is nice, lyrics is nice.

    Vote - World
    test
  19. 'OnUrb'

    'OnUrb' The Master

    Joined:
    Oct 19, 2004
    Messages:
    282
    LMAO @ Lisp..... i really dont have a lisp...i fucked up on the equipment...Fuckin DeEsser and compression settings on my DBX really fucked it up...ESpecially Runnin @ the 128 K....Download the track, may Fix those issues a lil more .
    up up
    test
  20. LaWlEssMc

    LaWlEssMc ......

    Joined:
    Feb 1, 2004
    Messages:
    6,246
    world took this easy
    test
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.

Share This Page

Users Viewing Thread (Users: 0, Guests: 0)