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Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Blackanese, Jun 19, 2003.

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  1. Blackanese

    Blackanese BlackaneseCantRap.com

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    Why do people want to kill me?

    Is it because i am a american?

    Or is it because i live in Freedom?

    Why bin laden, why?

    I never did anything to you.

    I just want to live me life.

    Please dont take my life.

    Its the devil on earth i know it.

    If there is a God i know he is going to send jesus to help us.

    I dont want to kill anybody.

    But why so much hate towards my people.

    I would never give up my rights to freedom because of freedom i am able to this poem to you.

    Bin Laden And his evil followers
    want to take my freedoms away from me.

    He wants to take them because he is jealous, he is jealous because he has never felt real freedom.

    Living in a cave isnt freedom.

    But living life with out hate is real freedom.
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  2. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    "Living in a cave isnt freedom.

    But living life with out hate is real freedom."


    ayo those last two lines were tight i was feeling them

    ayo make sure you check out my piece titled "FREEDOM"

    MUCH LOVE TA YA STAY UP AND PEACE!
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  3. Blackanese

    Blackanese BlackaneseCantRap.com

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    ight dog thanx
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  4. skandelous_lala

    skandelous_lala back from the dead

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    i like the last to lines of this as well..probably was the best part. seems like you put a lot of heart into this. not to bad. :)
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  5. varentao

    varentao New Member

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    But he did live 'free'. His family were multi-millionaires. He himself is worth millions (or was...well still is...just in a different way now!!)..but the he chose the path he chose, of fighting a 'holy crusade' or whatever...

    But yeah, it was simple straight forward piece...which just seemed like one of those people write to get things out..and ofr that, i liked it...

    ..resp...
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