when I load the pen and shoot, I don't miss much.

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  1. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    I'ma sit back with this rap, a diss track to git back
    at all those hatin on my flows like whip lash.

    I'm droppin it hot - and its off of the top,
    with a flow so smoothe you'd think the faucet was locked.

    you askin for trouble like you was talkin to cops..
    I'm spittin liquid so fast that now you watcin the clock.

    or chronograph to know-how-fast these syllables flip,
    should I draw a diagram to show how ill I can get?

    I'm at it again, with a pad and a pen.
    damaging men, women, children: it aint a fad or a trend.

    I've manifested in the form of a beast,
    I was meant for this - like I was... born in a beat.

    it aint abnormal to me - or maybe it is..
    to be so grown when most of y'all got the brains of a kid.

    Most of you who know me, know I don't diss much,
    But when I load the pen and shoot, I don't miss much.
    test
  2. Murder Ink

    Murder Ink Jigsaw

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    That's pretty tiight man. It kinda had an Eminem type flow to me for some reason..
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  3. Out Write

    Out Write New Member

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    I've manifested in the form of a beast,
    I was meant for this - like I was... born in a beat.

    sick
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  4. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Real nice ... especially for off the top ... some people just don't even try anymore ...
    Posted via Mobile Device
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  5. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    thanks for the feedback fellas. I"m about to drop a couple nice collabs soon.


    be on the lookout!

    pce
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  6. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    shits fire right here son
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  7. Carter Cruz

    Carter Cruz New Member

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    Damn right.
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  8. acekilla

    acekilla Pulse Venom Entertainment

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    very nice

    oh yeah what happened to shotty fullclip
    i remember him from when i was first on this site
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  9. INKrypt

    INKrypt New Member

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    this is damn nice for something off the top. actually, it's nice even if it wasn't
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  10. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    thx I appreciate the feedback
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