What Was They Thinking (16 wit a hook)

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  1. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Hook:
    Man, they tried to play me, what was they thinking?
    Said I wasn't cuttin' it ... what the fuck was they drinking?
    They'll never be in my league, they can keep hatin'
    But what was they thinking? (what was they thinking?)

    Verse:
    Yes, its true, there's no excuse when I turned to you and asked for help
    Too skiny to keep my jeans up and I even had a belt ...
    No dough, no cookies, I didnt even have an elf ...
    I shoulda did this, shoulda did that, but I swear I didnt have the breath
    So it was back to hell, or let them try their luck
    I wasn't getting enough covered so I got a wider brush
    They showed me they finest stuff, I showed them how to divide it up
    Worked myself into sweats a bunch and never took time to dry my nuts
    But the second that lighting struck, they came and told me it's over
    They said my world would come down on me so heavy I couldnt holt it
    on my shoulders, but i kept my cool walking out wit leavin my guns holstered
    But I walked out of there smiling like everything was fine and Kosher
    But is it over? No, sir ... not for second
    Not if I can help it, fresh blood, they shoulda never let me smell it ...
    Three weeks later, yep u guessed it, if real is how you guessed I kept it
    Still gettin mine, never stepping. More than they do too, hope they accept it
    test
  2. Ace the Prophet

    Ace the Prophet A Prophet to the Game

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    Yo!!! What up man? This piece is cool. Kinda hard to find the flow at first. Some nice rhymes in there. Loved the fine and kosher line. Thought that was a really nice, unique rhyme. Maybe just tighten up some lines and you'll be all good, man. Overall I liked it. 1
    test
  3. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    not bad not bad at all i think youve stepped it up a bit
    test
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