Wez Nilez - The Inoculation (Beat by Wez Nilez)

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  1. mocha_licious

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  2. SKAVENJAH

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    what up dun........ im feelin this.... im high and yup.. haha its dope
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    that intro was real dope. Very ill. Beat is coming in nice. I don't like how you have a silent space between lines. Like you cut out the part where there is no vocals. You should keep that space but just do a vocal cut instead of cutting it out. The emceeing here is dope...could work on your punches a little but the flow and ish is nice. I like your tracks a lot better though.

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    i honestly see no difference between this and any other track youve done...the same mundane delivery and rhyme schemes,the unrecycled punches are barely mediocre,and the recycled lines were better worded the first time around.i think you need to show some versatility,change up the pace,try using a different bpm,do something to make each track different...cause it seems you have a collection of different songs all with a similar sound.quality is good as usual,but quality doesn't make up for lack of content.i think you need to stop trying so hard to think about writing,and just let it flow naturally.
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    tight intro.... wez nilez... good shit.... beat is decent.... flow is ok, lyriks are cool, voice is ok, i do like the idea for the song.... its a pretty cool track fo sho, i like that thurston howl line, i had one similar way back in the day... haha, tight track yallz




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    wez shit is lyrical crack,
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