West Round 3: Mr. Skull vs Aven Brooks.

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  1. *NativeTongue*

    *NativeTongue* New Member

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    heat from skull

    I get n!ggas excited to battle me, these hard boys flop
    ..When I tell em to just curb their enthusiasm next to their cardboard box
    This fuck ain't Natureboy, shit, this n!gga's poor
    ..You won't make it past rd. 3.. so how in the fuck could you ever figure four?!
    Clearly no investigation is needed, it'll take a while
    ..Cause Aven's skills are so suspect, the fucks went straight to trial


    heat from aven


    ..sheeeiiiit.. u aint have original lines in a while
    bite so much me n Resin can prolly read our rhymes when u smile
    ..this guys in denial ..u just a whining homo..
    look at dis fool tryna pass a Kool-Aid spill as his sweaters designer logo
    ..n in this vital clash ..da bacon’s whut I bring home..
    if Dial’s a soap ur bodys in desperate need of a ring tone
    ..u been owned.. this homos gon hide now..
    McDonald’s suing u for usin their arch logo for eyebrows


    Aven Brooks
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  2. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    vote- aven

    this was a nice battle here....feelin aven a little more tho.....seemed Aven was more consistent...the arch line had me laughin it up...skull came aight just not enough tho
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  3. Keynote

    Keynote aka Jux Czar

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    It's been a while but let me drop some critiques...

    Skull:
    You're not wack so plz stop your grieving
    ..You aint losing your touch.. just gaining symptoms of a quadraplegic
    It's math, 2 negatives leaves a plus, stop your clout, son...
    ..But, me telling you you're wack and garbage won't leave a positive outcome
    Thought it was a big feat last week, cats are just fearin me
    ..People cared more about Zu lu's when it came to African history
    I get n!ggas excited to battle me, these hard boys flop
    ..When I tell em to just curb their enthusiasm next to their cardboard box
    Laying songs down.. I stay rappin I love clout
    But I ain't Roc-a-fella.. I'ma stick to Knocking Aven The Fuck Out
    I'ma end it all.. you're mind vs. mine it's intensive dawg..
    ..Really it is when the 357 is at the side of ya head you're against all odds

    Aven:
    ..sheeeiiiit.. u aint have original lines in a while
    bite so much me n Resin can prolly read our rhymes when u smile
    ..this guys in denial ..u just a whining homo..
    look at dis fool tryna pass a Kool-Aid spill as his sweaters designer logo
    ..now peep head.. u ashamed, jack ..
    hairline mustve had a childhood friend cuz they go waaay back
    ..u been owned.. this homos gon hide now..
    McDonald’s suing u for usin their arch logo for eyebrows

    10 - 8

    Vote: Skull

    I liked both verses. Both had their ups and downs. But, Num barely edged it. Also I don't like the fact that one put up and pick and the other didn't.
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  4. Homeless Kid

    Homeless Kid Hood

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    skull


    You're not wack so plz stop your grieving
    ..You aint losing your touch.. just gaining symptoms of a quadraplegic
    It's math, 2 negatives leaves a plus, stop your clout, son...
    ..But, me telling you you're wack and garbage won't leave a positive outcome
    This fuck ain't Natureboy, shit, this n!gga's poor
    ..You won't make it past rd. 3.. so how in the fuck could you ever figure four?!

    Laying songs down.. I stay rappin I love clout
    But I ain't Roc-a-fella.. I'ma stick to Knocking Aven The Fuck Out
    I'ma end it all.. you're mind vs. mine it's intensive dawg..
    ..Really it is when the 357 is at the side of ya head you're against all odds

    aven

    ..sheeeiiiit.. u aint have original lines in a while
    bite so much me n Resin can prolly read our rhymes when u smile
    ..this guys in denial ..u just a whining homo..
    look at dis fool tryna pass a Kool-Aid spill as his sweaters designer logo
    ..this guy is loco .. no one’s into ur gimmick..
    ur big forehead in bed..
    causes ur wife to be more of a Rollover than Cingular minutes

    ..ur shits null ..push rhymes n get out-shoved..
    smile n!gga.. u got a horse grill Mustang’s would be proud of

    ..now peep head.. u ashamed, jack ..
    hairline mustve had a childhood friend cuz they go waaay back
    lmao
    i outta hit u.. all da stations hide ..
    ur bugged out eyes increased insect repellent sales nationwide
    ..so go commit suicide.. u aint causin no riots, fag..
    only Coast Guards care bout a hanged Skull cuz it imitates a Pirate’s flag
    ..n in this vital clash ..da bacon’s whut I bring home..
    if Dial’s a soap ur bodys in desperate need of a ring tone
    ..u been owned.. this homos gon hide now..
    McDonald’s suing u for usin their arch logo for eyebrows

    vote aven
    both were dope, aven was doper
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  5. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    eeps say.. you're nice, but we need a replacement
    ..You're style summed up is 1 good line and flips from the people you facin
    The man is savin' verses like he can't display them
    ..All his writtens are N BC like it was TV for ancient cavemen
    It's math, 2 negatives leaves a plus, stop your clout, son...
    ..But, me telling you you're wack and garbage won't leave a positive outcome
    This fuck ain't Natureboy, shit, this n!gga's poor
    ..You won't make it past rd. 3.. so how in the fuck could you ever figure four?!
    'ma end it all.. you're mind vs. mine it's intensive dawg..
    ..Really it is when the 357 is at the side of ya head you're against all odds



    vs

    ..sheeeiiiit.. u aint have original lines in a while
    bite so much me n Resin can prolly read our rhymes when u smile
    ..this guys in denial ..u just a whining homo..
    look at dis fool tryna pass a Kool-Aid spill as his sweaters designer logo
    ..ur shits null ..push rhymes n get out-shoved..
    smile n!gga.. u got a horse grill Mustang’s would be proud of
    ..ya clouts dubbed.. n eyones snubbin u
    u’ve only reached da Sweet 16 as a sugar substitute
    outta hit u.. all da stations hide ..
    ur bugged out eyes increased insect repellent sales nationwide
    ..n in this vital clash ..da bacon’s whut I bring home..
    if Dial’s a soap ur bodys in desperate need of a ring tone


    vote brooks...verse was just slightly better imo
    both came pretty solid
    but the mustang line was hard as fuck...nice battle
    zp
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  6. .Ess-Ess.

    .Ess-Ess. a lost cause

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    vote - num.

    he had a better verse..more consistant.

    and lol @ both of u calling eachother out on shit.

    booooooooo
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  7. Super.

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    Been on a streak.. but n!ggas ain't hardly froze
    ..Only dude named Ave people wanna see only comes for audio
    Thought it was a big feat last week, cats are just fearin me
    ..People cared more about Zu lu's when it came to African history
    I get n!ggas excited to battle me, these hard boys flop
    ..When I tell em to just curb their enthusiasm next to their cardboard box

    It's math, 2 negatives leaves a plus, stop your clout, son...
    ..But, me telling you you're wack and garbage won't leave a positive outcome


    that was nice shit from skull..everything else was either played or a miss in my eyes.


    look at dis fool tryna pass a Kool-Aid spill as his sweaters designer logo
    ..this guy is loco .. no one’s into ur gimmick..
    ur big forehead in bed..
    causes ur wife to be more of a Rollover than Cingular minutes

    ..ur shits null ..push rhymes n get out-shoved..
    smile n!gga.. u got a horse grill Mustang’s would be proud of

    i outta hit u.. all da stations hide ..
    ur bugged out eyes increased insect repellent sales nationwide
    ..so go commit suicide.. u aint causin no riots, fag..
    only Coast Guards care bout a hanged Skull cuz it imitates a Pirate’s flag


    that was fuckin fire from aven. he was on point on the pic diss tip. nice ass verse IMO.

    v-Aven
    i thought this was a blow out. num dropped cool and all but aven dropped fire, it would be hard to top him. the pic disses were dope. num had too many played and flip lines..
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  8. Ayem

    Ayem I Heart Myself

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    Tha Ave/Audio Line was tha clincher for me, basically when it comes down to it, everyone flips lines, so don't lay in denial, skull flips, aven flip, his momma flips, they best friend that rhymes flips, blah blah blah...

    any'who, I got Skull on this...Zulu line was dope, even though i used it before, lol, but so did Qwel...Aven's grill line was dope...but it was dope when Royce 5'9 said it in his diss to bizarre...

    in other words, once again, everyone flips, but regardless, Skull's verse left a better impression on me, dope kool aid line though i must say...

    Vote: Skull...
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  9. Con God

    Con God New Member

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    Num

    Peeps say.. you're nice, but we need a replacement
    ..You're style summed up is 1 good line and flips from the people you facin
    lol.. coo
    You're not wack so plz stop your grieving
    ..You aint losing your touch.. just gaining symptoms of a quadraplegic
    lol.. coo
    Been on a streak.. but n!ggas ain't hardly froze
    ..Only dude named Ave people wanna see only comes for audio
    ehh.. aint get this one
    The man is savin' verses like he can't display them
    ..All his writtens are N BC like it was TV for ancient cavemen
    lol... i had a line like this before. coo shits tho
    You're feeble to greatness, I love animals, 'n truthfully
    ..All it takes is to rip out your stomach to bring the Zu to me
    lol... Zuch, good personal here
    It's math, 2 negatives leaves a plus, stop your clout, son...
    ..But, me telling you you're wack and garbage won't leave a positive outcome
    lol.. nice
    Thought it was a big feat last week, cats are just fearin me
    ..People cared more about Zu lu's when it came to African history
    lol.. coo
    I get n!ggas excited to battle me, these hard boys flop
    ..When I tell em to just curb their enthusiasm next to their cardboard box
    ehh
    This fuck ain't Natureboy, shit, this n!gga's poor
    ..You won't make it past rd. 3.. so how in the fuck could you ever figure four?!
    now this was dope... nice
    Clearly no investigation is needed, it'll take a while
    ..Cause Aven's skills are so suspect, the fucks went straight to trial
    lol.. coo
    See, I like you.. nah I'll lying it's my cynnical intentions
    ..You're mind will take after ya body when thinkin of critical conditions
    ehh
    Now I'm charging in.. I see you're verses
    ..And think, "Aww, another fuck with Resin's style writing in 2 bars again"
    lol.. coo
    Laying songs down.. I stay rappin I love clout
    But I ain't Roc-a-fella.. I'ma stick to Knocking Aven The Fuck Out
    lol.. coo
    I'ma end it all.. you're mind vs. mine it's intensive dawg..
    ..Really it is when the 357 is at the side of ya head you're against all odds
    damn that was dope


    Aven

    ..sheeeiiiit.. u aint have original lines in a while
    bite so much me n Resin can prolly read our rhymes when u smile
    lol.. coo
    ..this guys in denial ..u just a whining homo..
    look at dis fool tryna pass a Kool-Aid spill as his sweaters designer logo
    ehh
    ..this guy is loco .. no one’s into ur gimmick..
    ur big forehead in bed..
    causes ur wife to be more of a Rollover than Cingular minutes
    ehhh
    ..face it .. ur dismal n hit dull..
    eyo, someone shoot da archeologist that discovered THIS skull
    ehh.. skull flips are out and this ones bad
    ..ur shits null ..push rhymes n get out-shoved..
    smile n!gga.. u got a horse grill Mustang’s would be proud of
    lol... nice
    ..ya clouts dubbed.. n eyones snubbin u
    u’ve only reached da Sweet 16 as a sugar substitute
    ehh
    ..now peep head.. u ashamed, jack ..
    hairline mustve had a childhood friend cuz they go waaay back
    lmao... nice shit here
    ..i lay tracks.. then swiftly slaughter issues..
    maan.. ur Gun Muzik has da melody of a water pistol
    ehh
    i outta hit u.. all da stations hide ..
    ur bugged out eyes increased insect repellent sales nationwide
    ehh
    ..so go commit suicide.. u aint causin no riots, fag..
    only Coast Guards care bout a hanged Skull cuz it imitates a Pirate’s flag
    another skull line but this ones better than the first one
    ..n in this vital clash ..da bacon’s whut I bring home..
    if Dial’s a soap ur bodys in desperate need of a ring tone
    lol... coo
    ..u been owned.. this homos gon hide now..
    McDonald’s suing u for usin their arch logo for eyebrows
    lol... that was funny
    ..i‘m proud ..ur low on stocks
    he did 24 thinkin he'd get notoriety for da hit show on FOX
    our fox channel is 7 but if it was 24 this would still be ehh

    all in all, i think Num edged this win out with a more consistant verse. I'll say Aven had some good pic diss's but i Num had a few puns that took it home for him. The figure 4 and his closer was breathtaking to me. Dope shit

    vote- Num
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  10. stickman

    stickman music entrepreneur

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    vs

    I'm sayin Aven got this by a little, good read though all the way through

    and that hairline line shoulda been worded better, it woulda been dope



    vote - Aven
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  11. TRAP.

    TRAP. i'm soo old school.

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    8-8 tie.

    but it shows that skull voted on 5 battles.

    so aven wins. 8-7
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